Sorry for the delay, I haven't had the internet in a very long time.
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This chapter has now been re-written, thanks for the input from:
Aquarius - I agree, I was making Andrew and Darien way to passive during the fighting. Hope you like the re-write ;)
I wanted to make there characteristics seem wavy because she's trying to fit in to her new life. But her old one always comes threw. It's the same way with Andrew, he has memories of this life as well, of which has changed him. He's still mature when it calls for it.
Pyre - I know that I messed the yoga thing up, in chapter 1. I don't know what it was called ^_^; you know when ppl go out in the morning and all slowly move their arms and what not? I guess kind of like tai chi or tae kwon do...except in slow mo. She calls Kang 'master' because he
use to be her teacher back on the moon and calls him that out of respect. I agree with the spell checking as well...but have you ever come a cross a fan fiction story with no errors??? Because I haven't. We are all just humans, with a common interest in wanting to share
their stories. ;)
Thanks for your guy's input, I hope to hear more from ya ^_^
Big thanks to those of you whom reviewed my story:
mae-e, Usagie-ran, Aquarius,Galactic Crystal,Pyre
mae,Lilykins17,angel313, Sabriel, Guardian Dimension, Syble and diane.
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The next morning was met with a vigorous, seemingly young woman, as she raced down
the street to the crown arcade. Where her newly found brother awaited for her
arrival.
She was positively radiant, as she burst threw the automatic doors and strait
into an awaiting bear hug from Andrew. Off to the side Serena heard muffling
from a certain raven haired man as he sipped at his black coffee.
"I do not care what you say Darien Shields, nothing could put a damper on my good
mood." Serena retorted, giving Darien a raspberry.
"You ready for your first lesson Drew?" Serena asked.
"What are you going to teach him? 10 ways how to fall on your face ungracefully?"
Darien snorted.
Raising and eye brow Serena places her hands on her hips.
"Not like you really need no know Shields…"
"Andrew, Darien….DOWN!!!" Serena yelled.
Using all of her power she manages to push both of the taller men down to the
floor, with her own body. Just in time to watch several glowing orbs of energy
fly over their heads and smash into one of the racing arcade games, making it
explode into little peaces.
Growling deep in her throat, Serena flips back up on her feet. The arcade was
completely empty except for Darien and Andrew.
"Show Yourself NOW!!!" Serena demanded, as she scans the empty arcade.
"What's going on Serena?" Darien asked, as he and Andrew picked them selves off
the floor.
"Both of you get behind the counter!" Serena commands.
"Aww come on Princess, We're just having a little fun!" A feminine voice spoke
from the entrance of the Crown arcade.
In stead of listening to her Darien takes on fighting stances. And Andrew pushes
a growling Serena behind him.
"Zoisite."
Grinning insanely, Zoisite begins to toss a flame back and forth in her hands.
"Should we finish them off now my love?" Zoisite asked.
"Now, what would the fun in that? Besides, the Queen wants her alive." Malakite
responded as he steps out of the shadows.
"Although, I do not see why we could not have a little fun with them, first."
Zoisite smirked, throwing a large ball of swirling flames at Darien and Andrew.
Serena side glances at Darien. She would have to transform while he was here,
she didn't have a choice. She couldn't risk her brothers or Darien's life's, just
because Zoisite didn't know what he was doing, or who he really was for that
mater.
Closing her eyes her clothing changes to a silver tight sleeveless turtleneck
with a golden crescent moon just above her chest and slightly tight black pants.
A black mask appears over her silver blue eye's, her hair twists up in a long
silver braid and her legacy, burns brightly on her forehead.
"Zoi, I do not know if this Queen of yours is doing this to you, out of pure
spite or she just found it incredibly funny. But you should not be a Woman, nor
should your own brother be your lover." Serenity spat as she placed herself in
front of the two men.
"Crystal fortification!" Serenity commanded.
A Bright crystalline protective dome forms around the three of them, deflecting
the ball of flames harmlessly into the ground.
"What ever you two do, do not leave this dome. It will protect you." Serenity
commented as she side steps both of them and exits the dome.
(Mean while in the Shield)
Darien watched dumbfounded as she fell into a fighting pose. Who knew Meatball
head was really the super heroine that the entire Jubban district was talking
about, and the one he saw in action in the bank.
Andrew jumps up from his spot regardless of his sister's orders and attempts to
leave the shield. Only to collide with a hard, molten looking, surface.
"Serenity…" Andrew growls at her. He should have known she would pull a stunt
like this.
Closing his eye's he calls on his subspace pocket, and pulls out his sword from
the Silver Millennium.
Andrew looks to his left to find Darien also trying to get out by ramming his
shoulder into the shield.
"Stand back Darien, This usually always works." Andrew spoke, as he brought back
his sword. (Serenity use to do this to him all the time back on the moon when
she wanted to loose him.)
In one long smooth movement Andrew brings the sword down on the shield. Only
for it to protest loudly with a clang, as if it was a stone wall.
Andrew stares at the wall and his sword in astonishment. It had to be the
crystal that was enhancing her powers. He would really have to train hard in
order to be strong enough to protect her.
(Back in the Arcade)
Grinning Serenity crosses her arms over her chest.
"So you want to play with fire do you Zoi…"
"Solar Flare!"
The arcade is filled with a brilliant explosion of light, momentarily blinding
the two generals.
"Mercury's Sojourn Tides!"
Both Zoisite and Malachite stop dead in their tracts, unable to move as the
freezing tides from Mercury washes over them.
"Now let's see if we can refresh your memories shall we?"
"Silver Crystal Healing!"
The ice shatters from around the two generals, but a little late for the glowing
healing power had already started to purify them.
"Malakite, Zoisite! Return immediately!!!" An elusion of a fire red haired woman
commanded.
With the last of there strength both generals return to the Negaverse.
Balling her fists, Serenity punches the first thing beside her, making it sway
back and forth, before it settled back on the floor.
"Ahhhhh Rena….Do you think that you could let us out of this thing now?" Andrew
asked annoyance lacing his voice, still being trapped in her protective shield.
Serenity sighs, and with out looking at them she waves her hand and the shield
disappears, along with her black and silver clothing.
'I will set you free one day…my friends.' Serenity thought, as she stares
blankly at the spot where the two had been standing moments before.
"Serena are you alright? What in the Goddess's name were you thinking to trap us
like that!" Andrew asked as he turned her to face him.
"What would have happened if they managed to get a good shot in? And we were
still trapped behind your shield?"
Serena looks up into Andrew's apprehensive eye's and smiles softly at him.
"I am fine Drew. Besides, if I was hurt, it doesn't mean I'd loose my hold on my
shield."
Serena looks over at the still thunderstruck Darien.
"I have to erase your memories of the past few minuets Darien. I can not allow
you to go on knowing my secret…that could put you in grate danger."
Serena places her hand on her lips and kisses her fingers, creating a small red
heart in the palm of her hand.
"Rena wait…It couldn't be that bad if he knew, I mean, he would stop teasing you
and we would have a confidant." Andrew suggested, placing his hand on her
shoulder.
"I have lost too many people who I entrusted my secret to Solus…I will not allow
that to happen ever again…" Serena answered, fisting her free hand into a tight
ball.
"Then do it for me Sis, Darien will be my responsibility." Andrew insisted.
Sighing Serena smothers the heart, still hovering in her hand, by closing her
fingers over top of it.
"Very well, Darien is your responsibility. But you may want to brush up on your
powers and fighting skills in order to protect him sufficiently." Serena responded.
"Thanks Rena! I knew you would see it my way!" Andrew spoke happily, giving her
a big bear hug.
"Uhhhhhhh….I'm kind of lost here…what just happened?" Darien asked, beyond perplexed.
"Come on Darien, I'll explain it to ya over a cup of coffee, k?"
Serena Sighs as she watches Darien walk over to a booth while Andrew grabs a pot
of coffee and two cups, and joins him. She hated when Andrew suckered her into
doing things his way. Although it was nice to have him back in her life, Serena
smiles softly as she exits the arcade.
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There ya go chapter 10 alllll finished....once again sorry about the wait. ;) Don't you just hate computer/internet problems????? I know i do!!!!!!!
Please R/R!!!!!! For next chapter to be put up!
CrimsonDraggon
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This chapter has now been re-written, thanks for the input from:
Aquarius - I agree, I was making Andrew and Darien way to passive during the fighting. Hope you like the re-write ;)
I wanted to make there characteristics seem wavy because she's trying to fit in to her new life. But her old one always comes threw. It's the same way with Andrew, he has memories of this life as well, of which has changed him. He's still mature when it calls for it.
Pyre - I know that I messed the yoga thing up, in chapter 1. I don't know what it was called ^_^; you know when ppl go out in the morning and all slowly move their arms and what not? I guess kind of like tai chi or tae kwon do...except in slow mo. She calls Kang 'master' because he
use to be her teacher back on the moon and calls him that out of respect. I agree with the spell checking as well...but have you ever come a cross a fan fiction story with no errors??? Because I haven't. We are all just humans, with a common interest in wanting to share
their stories. ;)
Thanks for your guy's input, I hope to hear more from ya ^_^
Big thanks to those of you whom reviewed my story:
mae-e, Usagie-ran, Aquarius,Galactic Crystal,Pyre
mae,Lilykins17,angel313, Sabriel, Guardian Dimension, Syble and diane.
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The next morning was met with a vigorous, seemingly young woman, as she raced down
the street to the crown arcade. Where her newly found brother awaited for her
arrival.
She was positively radiant, as she burst threw the automatic doors and strait
into an awaiting bear hug from Andrew. Off to the side Serena heard muffling
from a certain raven haired man as he sipped at his black coffee.
"I do not care what you say Darien Shields, nothing could put a damper on my good
mood." Serena retorted, giving Darien a raspberry.
"You ready for your first lesson Drew?" Serena asked.
"What are you going to teach him? 10 ways how to fall on your face ungracefully?"
Darien snorted.
Raising and eye brow Serena places her hands on her hips.
"Not like you really need no know Shields…"
"Andrew, Darien….DOWN!!!" Serena yelled.
Using all of her power she manages to push both of the taller men down to the
floor, with her own body. Just in time to watch several glowing orbs of energy
fly over their heads and smash into one of the racing arcade games, making it
explode into little peaces.
Growling deep in her throat, Serena flips back up on her feet. The arcade was
completely empty except for Darien and Andrew.
"Show Yourself NOW!!!" Serena demanded, as she scans the empty arcade.
"What's going on Serena?" Darien asked, as he and Andrew picked them selves off
the floor.
"Both of you get behind the counter!" Serena commands.
"Aww come on Princess, We're just having a little fun!" A feminine voice spoke
from the entrance of the Crown arcade.
In stead of listening to her Darien takes on fighting stances. And Andrew pushes
a growling Serena behind him.
"Zoisite."
Grinning insanely, Zoisite begins to toss a flame back and forth in her hands.
"Should we finish them off now my love?" Zoisite asked.
"Now, what would the fun in that? Besides, the Queen wants her alive." Malakite
responded as he steps out of the shadows.
"Although, I do not see why we could not have a little fun with them, first."
Zoisite smirked, throwing a large ball of swirling flames at Darien and Andrew.
Serena side glances at Darien. She would have to transform while he was here,
she didn't have a choice. She couldn't risk her brothers or Darien's life's, just
because Zoisite didn't know what he was doing, or who he really was for that
mater.
Closing her eyes her clothing changes to a silver tight sleeveless turtleneck
with a golden crescent moon just above her chest and slightly tight black pants.
A black mask appears over her silver blue eye's, her hair twists up in a long
silver braid and her legacy, burns brightly on her forehead.
"Zoi, I do not know if this Queen of yours is doing this to you, out of pure
spite or she just found it incredibly funny. But you should not be a Woman, nor
should your own brother be your lover." Serenity spat as she placed herself in
front of the two men.
"Crystal fortification!" Serenity commanded.
A Bright crystalline protective dome forms around the three of them, deflecting
the ball of flames harmlessly into the ground.
"What ever you two do, do not leave this dome. It will protect you." Serenity
commented as she side steps both of them and exits the dome.
(Mean while in the Shield)
Darien watched dumbfounded as she fell into a fighting pose. Who knew Meatball
head was really the super heroine that the entire Jubban district was talking
about, and the one he saw in action in the bank.
Andrew jumps up from his spot regardless of his sister's orders and attempts to
leave the shield. Only to collide with a hard, molten looking, surface.
"Serenity…" Andrew growls at her. He should have known she would pull a stunt
like this.
Closing his eye's he calls on his subspace pocket, and pulls out his sword from
the Silver Millennium.
Andrew looks to his left to find Darien also trying to get out by ramming his
shoulder into the shield.
"Stand back Darien, This usually always works." Andrew spoke, as he brought back
his sword. (Serenity use to do this to him all the time back on the moon when
she wanted to loose him.)
In one long smooth movement Andrew brings the sword down on the shield. Only
for it to protest loudly with a clang, as if it was a stone wall.
Andrew stares at the wall and his sword in astonishment. It had to be the
crystal that was enhancing her powers. He would really have to train hard in
order to be strong enough to protect her.
(Back in the Arcade)
Grinning Serenity crosses her arms over her chest.
"So you want to play with fire do you Zoi…"
"Solar Flare!"
The arcade is filled with a brilliant explosion of light, momentarily blinding
the two generals.
"Mercury's Sojourn Tides!"
Both Zoisite and Malachite stop dead in their tracts, unable to move as the
freezing tides from Mercury washes over them.
"Now let's see if we can refresh your memories shall we?"
"Silver Crystal Healing!"
The ice shatters from around the two generals, but a little late for the glowing
healing power had already started to purify them.
"Malakite, Zoisite! Return immediately!!!" An elusion of a fire red haired woman
commanded.
With the last of there strength both generals return to the Negaverse.
Balling her fists, Serenity punches the first thing beside her, making it sway
back and forth, before it settled back on the floor.
"Ahhhhh Rena….Do you think that you could let us out of this thing now?" Andrew
asked annoyance lacing his voice, still being trapped in her protective shield.
Serenity sighs, and with out looking at them she waves her hand and the shield
disappears, along with her black and silver clothing.
'I will set you free one day…my friends.' Serenity thought, as she stares
blankly at the spot where the two had been standing moments before.
"Serena are you alright? What in the Goddess's name were you thinking to trap us
like that!" Andrew asked as he turned her to face him.
"What would have happened if they managed to get a good shot in? And we were
still trapped behind your shield?"
Serena looks up into Andrew's apprehensive eye's and smiles softly at him.
"I am fine Drew. Besides, if I was hurt, it doesn't mean I'd loose my hold on my
shield."
Serena looks over at the still thunderstruck Darien.
"I have to erase your memories of the past few minuets Darien. I can not allow
you to go on knowing my secret…that could put you in grate danger."
Serena places her hand on her lips and kisses her fingers, creating a small red
heart in the palm of her hand.
"Rena wait…It couldn't be that bad if he knew, I mean, he would stop teasing you
and we would have a confidant." Andrew suggested, placing his hand on her
shoulder.
"I have lost too many people who I entrusted my secret to Solus…I will not allow
that to happen ever again…" Serena answered, fisting her free hand into a tight
ball.
"Then do it for me Sis, Darien will be my responsibility." Andrew insisted.
Sighing Serena smothers the heart, still hovering in her hand, by closing her
fingers over top of it.
"Very well, Darien is your responsibility. But you may want to brush up on your
powers and fighting skills in order to protect him sufficiently." Serena responded.
"Thanks Rena! I knew you would see it my way!" Andrew spoke happily, giving her
a big bear hug.
"Uhhhhhhh….I'm kind of lost here…what just happened?" Darien asked, beyond perplexed.
"Come on Darien, I'll explain it to ya over a cup of coffee, k?"
Serena Sighs as she watches Darien walk over to a booth while Andrew grabs a pot
of coffee and two cups, and joins him. She hated when Andrew suckered her into
doing things his way. Although it was nice to have him back in her life, Serena
smiles softly as she exits the arcade.
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There ya go chapter 10 alllll finished....once again sorry about the wait. ;) Don't you just hate computer/internet problems????? I know i do!!!!!!!
Please R/R!!!!!! For next chapter to be put up!
CrimsonDraggon