yay! im back and better than well not ever but im good!!
shout-ins...
Dreamer Conlon- yay! another reviewer!! im happy with this story so far and im glad u r too! yeah!
Queenie-well..sure i guess ya could have skittery but i wont be able ta put ya in till maybe tha next chapter srry....but yes if maybe ypu could send me a little more detailed profile that would be great!
Petals-GREAT! im glad u like it! wow sum 1 actually wants me ta finish my other story! wow okey well..i might get around to it! i completely forgot what that story was about! heh but ahey ya never know!
Angelfish- HEY GURL! aww its no problem! i do that sumtimes! lol yay lol im glad u liek what ive done w/ yer character lol.
Morning Dew-YAY! im so glad ur readin my story and no sweat if ya can finish it any time soon! i really like reading yer story and hope u like mine as well!
Klover- hehe! HEY! how ya been?! havemt hear frum u in a while. again no prob about tha missin chapters!
hehe o0oo idk i think i got klover w/ a lil help fruma friend and my hed im glad u liked it!!
welp...here we go...
Meryns dream...
::He grabbed me from behind and pushed me head first into the alley way. I landed hard on my behind. I didn't know what to do. he Stammered over and kicked me powerfully in the middle of my stomach. I fell over but got up with little strength and tried to dun away.
My stomach was almost completely numb, but yet it hurt with a pain I could not imagine would ever come to me again. It felt like someone had ripped open my stomach and pulled out everything inside of me.
I was almost to safety when I felt a sharp jolt in my right shoulder, and went tumbling to the ground in even more pain and misery.
He stepped on my back and I winced as I felt the sharp metal razors on the bottom of his boot cut into my skin.::
POV-racetrack
I walked by Meryn's room and heard faint crying and sniffling. Walking into the room I saw her tossing and turning, Mumbling words like; "help me!" and "no! please don't!" . I shook her a few times and she woke up and looked at me with fear and terror in her eyes. I had never noticed how beautiful she was before. I had always thought of her as a friend and never anything else...."Race? is that you?" she whispered, sounding helpless and vulnerable. Even with her strong Scottish accent.
POV: Meryn
"Race? is that you?" I whispered. I was hoping someone would wake me from that awful dream.
I looked at him. His dark brown eyes, always glittering with happiness, now shown with concern and wonder. His face was in a frown and his hand still lay on my quivering shoulder.
"Are you'se alright? I walked by ya room and heard ya cryin'. is Everythin' alright wit you?" I looked up at him again and sighed has i went into full detail telling my dream. It hurt just talking about it.
::AHHH! wow that was a doosey(?) ta type! lol okey!! RR!!!!!! i nee reviewers!! PLEEZ!!!!
shout-ins...
Dreamer Conlon- yay! another reviewer!! im happy with this story so far and im glad u r too! yeah!
Queenie-well..sure i guess ya could have skittery but i wont be able ta put ya in till maybe tha next chapter srry....but yes if maybe ypu could send me a little more detailed profile that would be great!
Petals-GREAT! im glad u like it! wow sum 1 actually wants me ta finish my other story! wow okey well..i might get around to it! i completely forgot what that story was about! heh but ahey ya never know!
Angelfish- HEY GURL! aww its no problem! i do that sumtimes! lol yay lol im glad u liek what ive done w/ yer character lol.
Morning Dew-YAY! im so glad ur readin my story and no sweat if ya can finish it any time soon! i really like reading yer story and hope u like mine as well!
Klover- hehe! HEY! how ya been?! havemt hear frum u in a while. again no prob about tha missin chapters!
hehe o0oo idk i think i got klover w/ a lil help fruma friend and my hed im glad u liked it!!
welp...here we go...
Meryns dream...
::He grabbed me from behind and pushed me head first into the alley way. I landed hard on my behind. I didn't know what to do. he Stammered over and kicked me powerfully in the middle of my stomach. I fell over but got up with little strength and tried to dun away.
My stomach was almost completely numb, but yet it hurt with a pain I could not imagine would ever come to me again. It felt like someone had ripped open my stomach and pulled out everything inside of me.
I was almost to safety when I felt a sharp jolt in my right shoulder, and went tumbling to the ground in even more pain and misery.
He stepped on my back and I winced as I felt the sharp metal razors on the bottom of his boot cut into my skin.::
POV-racetrack
I walked by Meryn's room and heard faint crying and sniffling. Walking into the room I saw her tossing and turning, Mumbling words like; "help me!" and "no! please don't!" . I shook her a few times and she woke up and looked at me with fear and terror in her eyes. I had never noticed how beautiful she was before. I had always thought of her as a friend and never anything else...."Race? is that you?" she whispered, sounding helpless and vulnerable. Even with her strong Scottish accent.
POV: Meryn
"Race? is that you?" I whispered. I was hoping someone would wake me from that awful dream.
I looked at him. His dark brown eyes, always glittering with happiness, now shown with concern and wonder. His face was in a frown and his hand still lay on my quivering shoulder.
"Are you'se alright? I walked by ya room and heard ya cryin'. is Everythin' alright wit you?" I looked up at him again and sighed has i went into full detail telling my dream. It hurt just talking about it.
::AHHH! wow that was a doosey(?) ta type! lol okey!! RR!!!!!! i nee reviewers!! PLEEZ!!!!