Yin-Yang
Sorry about the huge gap in updates but I just went before my EAGLE SCOUT BOARD
OF REVIEW!!!!!! This is very hard to do and is a very high honor to earn. Thankfully I passed
without a problem.
Now originally, Lizzie had never met Gordo in this story but I changed it for the better I
hope. Also the movie does not take place as I haven't seen it and I probably wont see it until it comes
on the disney channel.
I came up with an idea the other day. During certain parts in the story you will see the name of a
song and the band that played it and what album its on. When you see this play the song on your
cd player or on an online radio. This will up the feeling of the story and sound really cool. It will be
mostly rock for Eric, but some pop will be thrown in there too. If you see a ?, than I don't know the
name of the album.
One last thing, somebody tell me how to review stories. I can't seem to figure it out. I accept
e-mails. Oh, and I do not own lizzie mcguire.
Let's GET IT ON!!!!
Out of control
Hobastank
?
Eric Mckader was surprised though it didn't show. Having never emit any emotion other
than anger, it was kind of hard to go past a raised eyebrow. He knew automatically that it was the
girl from next door. She was also at the restaurant... she bumped into him as he went back to get his
drinks. But that didn't mean he was going to befriend her right then and there.
"And this is my son Eric. Eric, this is the McGuires, Sam, Jo, and their kids, Lizzie, and
Matt." He was analyzing each one in the only way he could and Spencer (Eric's dad) knew that.
'This could be trouble. I hope he doesn't screw this up.' But he merely turned his head to face the
opposite wall. 'Good, he won't say anything the whole night.' Boy, was he wrong.
Lizzie wanted to say she had already met him, but when he turned his head away from them,
something inside her told her to shut up. He seemed so mad or something, like he didn't care if he
lived or not. He looked even more like a gang member when he looked like that.
Lizzie didn't know it, but her parents both thought he was bad news, and were already
contemplating forbidding Lizzie and Matt from ever speaking to the boy. Been than they thought
that he deserved a better chance. He may look bad, but he could just be shy. Yeah, right.
Billy Talent
Try honesty
?
Eric was still studying them through the reflection of the window he was sitting near, but
they couldn't tell. He was skilled at looking at things and seeing stuff that people with binoculars
from three feet away could miss by a mile. The dad looked like he had a painting hobby as he had
paint on his hands. He also carried himself in a way that said "Man of the house." Or he was trying
to impress his dad. The mom looked like a stay at home mom just like his used to be. At this
thought, he winced and moved on. The boy, Matt 'I think' looked like the typical annoying little
sibling. At that thought, Eric's worth of him went up a notch, though it was still pretty low
nonetheless. The girl however...
She was blonde and about 2 inches shorter than him. She had hazel eyes like him and
dressed like one of the popular kids. 'Probably a cheerleader.' Yet when the conversation started and
everyone loosened up a little, (except Eric, of course.) she started talking more and he could finally
hear her voice. 'Yep, she's a popular kid. A snotty brat.' But if that was true than why did she keep
staring at him? As though she saw someone she liked?
Sorry about cutting it right there but I didn't want the chapter to be drawn out. Next chapter things
will really heat up. Until next update...kikiki mamama kikiki mamama.
Sorry about the huge gap in updates but I just went before my EAGLE SCOUT BOARD
OF REVIEW!!!!!! This is very hard to do and is a very high honor to earn. Thankfully I passed
without a problem.
Now originally, Lizzie had never met Gordo in this story but I changed it for the better I
hope. Also the movie does not take place as I haven't seen it and I probably wont see it until it comes
on the disney channel.
I came up with an idea the other day. During certain parts in the story you will see the name of a
song and the band that played it and what album its on. When you see this play the song on your
cd player or on an online radio. This will up the feeling of the story and sound really cool. It will be
mostly rock for Eric, but some pop will be thrown in there too. If you see a ?, than I don't know the
name of the album.
One last thing, somebody tell me how to review stories. I can't seem to figure it out. I accept
e-mails. Oh, and I do not own lizzie mcguire.
Let's GET IT ON!!!!
Out of control
Hobastank
?
Eric Mckader was surprised though it didn't show. Having never emit any emotion other
than anger, it was kind of hard to go past a raised eyebrow. He knew automatically that it was the
girl from next door. She was also at the restaurant... she bumped into him as he went back to get his
drinks. But that didn't mean he was going to befriend her right then and there.
"And this is my son Eric. Eric, this is the McGuires, Sam, Jo, and their kids, Lizzie, and
Matt." He was analyzing each one in the only way he could and Spencer (Eric's dad) knew that.
'This could be trouble. I hope he doesn't screw this up.' But he merely turned his head to face the
opposite wall. 'Good, he won't say anything the whole night.' Boy, was he wrong.
Lizzie wanted to say she had already met him, but when he turned his head away from them,
something inside her told her to shut up. He seemed so mad or something, like he didn't care if he
lived or not. He looked even more like a gang member when he looked like that.
Lizzie didn't know it, but her parents both thought he was bad news, and were already
contemplating forbidding Lizzie and Matt from ever speaking to the boy. Been than they thought
that he deserved a better chance. He may look bad, but he could just be shy. Yeah, right.
Billy Talent
Try honesty
?
Eric was still studying them through the reflection of the window he was sitting near, but
they couldn't tell. He was skilled at looking at things and seeing stuff that people with binoculars
from three feet away could miss by a mile. The dad looked like he had a painting hobby as he had
paint on his hands. He also carried himself in a way that said "Man of the house." Or he was trying
to impress his dad. The mom looked like a stay at home mom just like his used to be. At this
thought, he winced and moved on. The boy, Matt 'I think' looked like the typical annoying little
sibling. At that thought, Eric's worth of him went up a notch, though it was still pretty low
nonetheless. The girl however...
She was blonde and about 2 inches shorter than him. She had hazel eyes like him and
dressed like one of the popular kids. 'Probably a cheerleader.' Yet when the conversation started and
everyone loosened up a little, (except Eric, of course.) she started talking more and he could finally
hear her voice. 'Yep, she's a popular kid. A snotty brat.' But if that was true than why did she keep
staring at him? As though she saw someone she liked?
Sorry about cutting it right there but I didn't want the chapter to be drawn out. Next chapter things
will really heat up. Until next update...kikiki mamama kikiki mamama.