Thank you all for the reviews, and I still need a title, if any of you have
an idea plz let me know. And Ideas for the story would be great to; I am
kind of running out of my own.
Disclaimer: I only own Takara.
Chapter dedication: nybaddblonde666, Robot In Disguise, Ponys-girl3
Story dedication: Jade Cade, who gave me my very first review.
An apology Takara's pov
Dallas's hand quickly made contact with my face, I stood there looking dumb founded. He hit me, I know I deserved but I wasn't excepting it. I turned and ran from the house. I was going to run home but I didn't know my way, this was my first time at their house and the second day in Tulsa, so I just ran the way I thought was correct. I could hear the guys yelling for me to come back, but why would I do that? I made a fool of myself and Dallas hit me, talk about embarrassment. I just kept running and I could here the guys following behind me, I didn't know were I was going but I just kept running. I tended to do that a lot, run I mean. I always seemed to run away from my problems, they would temporarily leave, but as soon as I stopped they were sure to come back, they always did.
Staves pov
Man that girl sure can run, I can't believe Dallas hit her. I have never seen any of us hit a girl before, she was bitching and all but I have to admit that me and Dallas were not being all that nice to her I don't think she quite deserved that. And now that I think of it I would also like to know why she does dress like a soc even though she isn't one, I am kind of curious. Well Soda, Pony, and Two-bit were all running after her so I guess I'll go and apologize it's the lest I can do. But they had better get to her before some dumbass socs does, she may look like a soc but she doesn't act like one and soc are stupid but they'll know she isn't a soc, no soc girl hangs out on this side of town unless there wanting some if you know what I mean.
Takara's pov
I stopped running a few blocks down and sat on the curb kicking the stray rocks around on the ground, I saw the guys running towards me, Pony in the front, that didn't surprise me though he was on the track team. What did surprise me though was the fact that Steve was with them, running in step with the guys, not behind them just coming along to see what happens but actually with them, like he cared. "Hey Takara" I herd two-bit yell. "Why did you run?" was he really that daft? No I know he isn't, he just likes to break the silences and ask questions. " Why, because I felt out of place, I don't think we get along all that well. I mean Steve, Dallas and I, we clash so I left. Why did you came after me?" " We came after you because we care, we can't let you be out here on your own, if some socs come by you're screwed, no pun intended." Wow Steve, that's the nicest thing he has ever said to, well anyone I think, I'll have to write that down on a calendar because I don't think we will ever hear anything like that come out of his moth again, especially to me.
" And don't feel out place, I'm an ass and I know it, but that's just me and well Dallas he, well he is just like that. He isn't use to people back talking him, especially girls." Well I never thought Steve would admit he was an ass, I wonder if he is feeling well. "Come on now guys we still have some chocolate cake back at home we can eat and get sentimental over." Soda said well laughing, with that grin of his. I'm not that type of girl to go all mushy inside but man when he smiles I feel like melting. We all walked home, it was pretty quite no one really said much. But out of the blue Steve looks at me and in a quite voice, which I could hardly here he mumbled " I'm sorry." I just looked at him and nodded and we continued to walk home in odd but comfortable silence.
Hey I know this chapter was short but I didn't know what to write and I wanted to post something up for you guys. Hope you liked it, I know it wasn't all that great but I tried, and you guys must tell me should Takara go with Steve or Soda and a good reason why or why not, this way it can help me decided.
nybaddblonde666: thanks for the review and I am glad that you thought it was good.
Robot In Disguise: I'm glad that it was easier to read, and thanks for reviewing. I don't know why I made Takara mad at the fact that she was called a chick, but I thought it just sort of fit, and it is in the older days and people thought differently then we do now, like there opinion on bad language is way different then ours. But I hope that you liked this chapter.
Ponys-girl3: hey you're a new reviewer that great. And I'm sorry the third chapter ended kind of suddenly, this one did to but I am trying to figure out were to go with the story still. And I am still not quite sure who she will end up with, but if it is Steve (not saying it is going to be) but if it is will you still like the story?
Disclaimer: I only own Takara.
Chapter dedication: nybaddblonde666, Robot In Disguise, Ponys-girl3
Story dedication: Jade Cade, who gave me my very first review.
An apology Takara's pov
Dallas's hand quickly made contact with my face, I stood there looking dumb founded. He hit me, I know I deserved but I wasn't excepting it. I turned and ran from the house. I was going to run home but I didn't know my way, this was my first time at their house and the second day in Tulsa, so I just ran the way I thought was correct. I could hear the guys yelling for me to come back, but why would I do that? I made a fool of myself and Dallas hit me, talk about embarrassment. I just kept running and I could here the guys following behind me, I didn't know were I was going but I just kept running. I tended to do that a lot, run I mean. I always seemed to run away from my problems, they would temporarily leave, but as soon as I stopped they were sure to come back, they always did.
Staves pov
Man that girl sure can run, I can't believe Dallas hit her. I have never seen any of us hit a girl before, she was bitching and all but I have to admit that me and Dallas were not being all that nice to her I don't think she quite deserved that. And now that I think of it I would also like to know why she does dress like a soc even though she isn't one, I am kind of curious. Well Soda, Pony, and Two-bit were all running after her so I guess I'll go and apologize it's the lest I can do. But they had better get to her before some dumbass socs does, she may look like a soc but she doesn't act like one and soc are stupid but they'll know she isn't a soc, no soc girl hangs out on this side of town unless there wanting some if you know what I mean.
Takara's pov
I stopped running a few blocks down and sat on the curb kicking the stray rocks around on the ground, I saw the guys running towards me, Pony in the front, that didn't surprise me though he was on the track team. What did surprise me though was the fact that Steve was with them, running in step with the guys, not behind them just coming along to see what happens but actually with them, like he cared. "Hey Takara" I herd two-bit yell. "Why did you run?" was he really that daft? No I know he isn't, he just likes to break the silences and ask questions. " Why, because I felt out of place, I don't think we get along all that well. I mean Steve, Dallas and I, we clash so I left. Why did you came after me?" " We came after you because we care, we can't let you be out here on your own, if some socs come by you're screwed, no pun intended." Wow Steve, that's the nicest thing he has ever said to, well anyone I think, I'll have to write that down on a calendar because I don't think we will ever hear anything like that come out of his moth again, especially to me.
" And don't feel out place, I'm an ass and I know it, but that's just me and well Dallas he, well he is just like that. He isn't use to people back talking him, especially girls." Well I never thought Steve would admit he was an ass, I wonder if he is feeling well. "Come on now guys we still have some chocolate cake back at home we can eat and get sentimental over." Soda said well laughing, with that grin of his. I'm not that type of girl to go all mushy inside but man when he smiles I feel like melting. We all walked home, it was pretty quite no one really said much. But out of the blue Steve looks at me and in a quite voice, which I could hardly here he mumbled " I'm sorry." I just looked at him and nodded and we continued to walk home in odd but comfortable silence.
Hey I know this chapter was short but I didn't know what to write and I wanted to post something up for you guys. Hope you liked it, I know it wasn't all that great but I tried, and you guys must tell me should Takara go with Steve or Soda and a good reason why or why not, this way it can help me decided.
nybaddblonde666: thanks for the review and I am glad that you thought it was good.
Robot In Disguise: I'm glad that it was easier to read, and thanks for reviewing. I don't know why I made Takara mad at the fact that she was called a chick, but I thought it just sort of fit, and it is in the older days and people thought differently then we do now, like there opinion on bad language is way different then ours. But I hope that you liked this chapter.
Ponys-girl3: hey you're a new reviewer that great. And I'm sorry the third chapter ended kind of suddenly, this one did to but I am trying to figure out were to go with the story still. And I am still not quite sure who she will end up with, but if it is Steve (not saying it is going to be) but if it is will you still like the story?