Disclaimer: As always I don't own dbz! As much as I'd like to!
AN: I'd like to say a special thanks to Derek429 & Bra-Chan2 who reviewed my story, you guys made my day!!!
If it's not too much trouble I would like at least 3 reviews of I might just burn my story!!!
Also if you love my story u should read my best friend Vincent Van Chows story it is Fantastic!!! Also our word for lemon is kiwi!! There should be some kiwi later on.
Luv Fo xxx
Chapter 3: Were did that come from!!?
"Talking" *Thinking* ~Dreaming~ xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Scene Change
The next day was really sunny, the heat was almost unbearable, but even so the gang found themselves being dragged down town, by Goten.
They walked past many shops until they came across a little shop with a black door with stained glass panels. The shop had three huge windows each seeming to have different types of jewellery.
Goten look them over to one of the windows and pointed at a selection of beautiful gold rings, which had big beautiful prices.
"Wow, these are nice. Who are you buying a ring for?" Trunks questioned
"Yeah the rings are nice, and I'm buying a ring for Paris, an engagement ring, that one." Goten pointed to a gorgeous ring as he answered.
"En....en....engagement ring?" Bra stuttered out
"Yeah that's right, I've been with Paris for five years and I've never been happier or more in love so I want to marry her."
Those few words were enough for Bra, she looked down at the floor as she felt her heart breaking and the tears welling up in her eyes, and she had to get away from them she couldn't let them see her cry.
"I'm feeling ill, I'm gonna go to the toilet" Bra muttered out
Marron noticed Bra's slightly red and puffy eyes and decided to go with her.
"I'll go with her, to make sure she's ok."
"Ok." The boys said together as Goten pointed back too the ring
*Oh why is she coming, FUCK!!* Bra thought angrily
Bra decided to let Marron follow her, she didn't have the effort to stop her and presides she knew she was gonna burst into tears any moment.
Bra raced to the toilets down the street with Marron following her. Bra was glad when she reached the toilets, thinking she could hide in one of the cubicles, but she found they were all occupied.
*Oh SHIT!!*
"Hay B, you okay?" Marron asked
Bra couldn't bear to let Marron see her with tears steaming down her face, so she stood facing the occupied cubicles.
Marron could tell Bra was upset, she could hear her crying. Marron knew Bra's feelings for Goten and even if Bra didn't know that Marron knew about her love for Goten, Marron was going to take care of her, and make her feel a lot better, hopefully.
Marron lightly grabbed Bra's hand and spun her around into a comforting hug. Bra couldn't understand why Marron was hugging her or why she hadn't asked what was wrong. After a few moments Marron spoke to Bra calmly.
"It's okay to cry Bra, especially since the love of your life, Goten, is getting married."
*How the hell does she know!!* "How'd you know?"
"For a start I didn't believe the facial hair story, secondly, and finally Michael is not boring and dull!"
"Huh.....Okay, Hay wait you read my diary....That's invasion of privacy, and Michael is boring and dull and he dresses like an old man."
"Look I'm sorry I didn't mean to...well I did but I only done it for yours and mine own good, and okay Michael is dull. But B aren't you kind of glad I know, I mean it must have been hard keeping that to yourself."
"Yeah you're right I'm glad you know, as long as you don't tell Goten, Trunks, My Dad, or anyone else for that matter, then I don't mind." "I understand completely, and never dream of telling your Dad he might kill Goten and you, and then who would I hang out with."
"Thanks; look could we not go back to Goten and Trunks I don't think I can look at him without bursting into tears at the moment."
"Sure thing."
The girl's decided to do what they did best, go shopping, buy lots, and spend loads.
Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Bra and Marron returned to C.C, Bra was feeling a whole lot better. They went into the living room were they where hoping to have a sit down and put there feet up, but instead they walked in the living room to see Goten trying to persuade Trunks into doing something.
"Oh come on Trunks?" Goten pleaded
"No way!!!"
"Hay what's going on?" Bra cut in
"Well...I'm really nervous about proposing to Paris and I was trying to get Trunks to practise with me, but he's being a stubborn OLD MULE!!!!!!!! And won't help me."
"Whoa Whoa Whoa, I am not OLD!!"
"Yeah well you're still a mule!"
At this particular moment in time Bra had a brain wave, if she was ever gonna get a chance to show Goten that she loved him and wanted to be with him, then maybe this was her chance.
"Hay Goten, I don't have anything better to do, I'll help you." Bra offered
"Thanks Bra, you're a star, I owe you one." Goten said as he wrapped his arms around her waist and hugged her tightly.
Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
It was Saturday night, Bra and Goten had been practising for a few days, and tonight was the final night.
Bra had even planned to kiss him, but had chickened out every time. For the final practise Goten had invited Bra around for a candle lit dinner. He had made it as romantic as possible and tried to make every thing perfect.
After eating Goten got down one knee and practised proposing, everything went fine and he and Bra stood up, and he gently placed the ring on her finger.
Bra hugged Goten in a tight embrace; she got so caught up in the moment that she grabbed his face gently between her hands and caught his lips with a passionate kiss. Goten was kissing her back just as passionately.
She used her hands and began unbuttoning his shirt, Goten didn't try and stop her as he was too caught up in the kiss, she gently slid his shirt off and she began undoing his trousers, she unzipped the zipper and they fell to the ground. Goten pulled away from the kiss and lifted her shirt over her head, as he did so she could see his erect manhood straining against his snoopy boxers. He began kissing her neck as she ran her hands through his hair.
Only then did it occur to Bra what they were doing, she wasn't sure if it had registered to Goten yet, but no way was she gonna stop.
Goten was unbuttoning the button on Bra's jeans when the phone rang. Goten shot back away from Bra, and just stared at her, Bra looked back at him and then at the phone. Goten saw Bra's gesture and picked up the phone.
Bra quickly grabbed her top, and shoes and left, slowly closing the door behind her.
Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
The next day Bra was lying on her bed watching TV, when she saw her window open and Goten flying into her room.
"Hay Goten."
"Hay B."
"Look last night, at the practise, I......."
"Look Bra I know what you mean we just got carried away, I just wanted to say I'm sorry."
"Me too."
"I'm kinda glad the phone rang.....I don't know if I would have been able to stop."
"I was thinking about taking your boxers off before the phone rang."
"Oh well, saved by the stupid company selling windows."
"Did you need anything else?"
"Oh yeah that reminds me, you still have my engagement ring on"
"Yeah sorry, here ya go."
"See ya later sweetie." Goten said as he kissed her cheek
"Yeah see ya."
AN: Hello children!! Here's shit chapter 3 which had lots of improvement which I hope will be worth it (3 more reviews or like I sed I'll burn my story!!)
Luv Fo xxx
AN: I'd like to say a special thanks to Derek429 & Bra-Chan2 who reviewed my story, you guys made my day!!!
If it's not too much trouble I would like at least 3 reviews of I might just burn my story!!!
Also if you love my story u should read my best friend Vincent Van Chows story it is Fantastic!!! Also our word for lemon is kiwi!! There should be some kiwi later on.
Luv Fo xxx
Chapter 3: Were did that come from!!?
"Talking" *Thinking* ~Dreaming~ xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Scene Change
The next day was really sunny, the heat was almost unbearable, but even so the gang found themselves being dragged down town, by Goten.
They walked past many shops until they came across a little shop with a black door with stained glass panels. The shop had three huge windows each seeming to have different types of jewellery.
Goten look them over to one of the windows and pointed at a selection of beautiful gold rings, which had big beautiful prices.
"Wow, these are nice. Who are you buying a ring for?" Trunks questioned
"Yeah the rings are nice, and I'm buying a ring for Paris, an engagement ring, that one." Goten pointed to a gorgeous ring as he answered.
"En....en....engagement ring?" Bra stuttered out
"Yeah that's right, I've been with Paris for five years and I've never been happier or more in love so I want to marry her."
Those few words were enough for Bra, she looked down at the floor as she felt her heart breaking and the tears welling up in her eyes, and she had to get away from them she couldn't let them see her cry.
"I'm feeling ill, I'm gonna go to the toilet" Bra muttered out
Marron noticed Bra's slightly red and puffy eyes and decided to go with her.
"I'll go with her, to make sure she's ok."
"Ok." The boys said together as Goten pointed back too the ring
*Oh why is she coming, FUCK!!* Bra thought angrily
Bra decided to let Marron follow her, she didn't have the effort to stop her and presides she knew she was gonna burst into tears any moment.
Bra raced to the toilets down the street with Marron following her. Bra was glad when she reached the toilets, thinking she could hide in one of the cubicles, but she found they were all occupied.
*Oh SHIT!!*
"Hay B, you okay?" Marron asked
Bra couldn't bear to let Marron see her with tears steaming down her face, so she stood facing the occupied cubicles.
Marron could tell Bra was upset, she could hear her crying. Marron knew Bra's feelings for Goten and even if Bra didn't know that Marron knew about her love for Goten, Marron was going to take care of her, and make her feel a lot better, hopefully.
Marron lightly grabbed Bra's hand and spun her around into a comforting hug. Bra couldn't understand why Marron was hugging her or why she hadn't asked what was wrong. After a few moments Marron spoke to Bra calmly.
"It's okay to cry Bra, especially since the love of your life, Goten, is getting married."
*How the hell does she know!!* "How'd you know?"
"For a start I didn't believe the facial hair story, secondly, and finally Michael is not boring and dull!"
"Huh.....Okay, Hay wait you read my diary....That's invasion of privacy, and Michael is boring and dull and he dresses like an old man."
"Look I'm sorry I didn't mean to...well I did but I only done it for yours and mine own good, and okay Michael is dull. But B aren't you kind of glad I know, I mean it must have been hard keeping that to yourself."
"Yeah you're right I'm glad you know, as long as you don't tell Goten, Trunks, My Dad, or anyone else for that matter, then I don't mind." "I understand completely, and never dream of telling your Dad he might kill Goten and you, and then who would I hang out with."
"Thanks; look could we not go back to Goten and Trunks I don't think I can look at him without bursting into tears at the moment."
"Sure thing."
The girl's decided to do what they did best, go shopping, buy lots, and spend loads.
Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Bra and Marron returned to C.C, Bra was feeling a whole lot better. They went into the living room were they where hoping to have a sit down and put there feet up, but instead they walked in the living room to see Goten trying to persuade Trunks into doing something.
"Oh come on Trunks?" Goten pleaded
"No way!!!"
"Hay what's going on?" Bra cut in
"Well...I'm really nervous about proposing to Paris and I was trying to get Trunks to practise with me, but he's being a stubborn OLD MULE!!!!!!!! And won't help me."
"Whoa Whoa Whoa, I am not OLD!!"
"Yeah well you're still a mule!"
At this particular moment in time Bra had a brain wave, if she was ever gonna get a chance to show Goten that she loved him and wanted to be with him, then maybe this was her chance.
"Hay Goten, I don't have anything better to do, I'll help you." Bra offered
"Thanks Bra, you're a star, I owe you one." Goten said as he wrapped his arms around her waist and hugged her tightly.
Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
It was Saturday night, Bra and Goten had been practising for a few days, and tonight was the final night.
Bra had even planned to kiss him, but had chickened out every time. For the final practise Goten had invited Bra around for a candle lit dinner. He had made it as romantic as possible and tried to make every thing perfect.
After eating Goten got down one knee and practised proposing, everything went fine and he and Bra stood up, and he gently placed the ring on her finger.
Bra hugged Goten in a tight embrace; she got so caught up in the moment that she grabbed his face gently between her hands and caught his lips with a passionate kiss. Goten was kissing her back just as passionately.
She used her hands and began unbuttoning his shirt, Goten didn't try and stop her as he was too caught up in the kiss, she gently slid his shirt off and she began undoing his trousers, she unzipped the zipper and they fell to the ground. Goten pulled away from the kiss and lifted her shirt over her head, as he did so she could see his erect manhood straining against his snoopy boxers. He began kissing her neck as she ran her hands through his hair.
Only then did it occur to Bra what they were doing, she wasn't sure if it had registered to Goten yet, but no way was she gonna stop.
Goten was unbuttoning the button on Bra's jeans when the phone rang. Goten shot back away from Bra, and just stared at her, Bra looked back at him and then at the phone. Goten saw Bra's gesture and picked up the phone.
Bra quickly grabbed her top, and shoes and left, slowly closing the door behind her.
Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
The next day Bra was lying on her bed watching TV, when she saw her window open and Goten flying into her room.
"Hay Goten."
"Hay B."
"Look last night, at the practise, I......."
"Look Bra I know what you mean we just got carried away, I just wanted to say I'm sorry."
"Me too."
"I'm kinda glad the phone rang.....I don't know if I would have been able to stop."
"I was thinking about taking your boxers off before the phone rang."
"Oh well, saved by the stupid company selling windows."
"Did you need anything else?"
"Oh yeah that reminds me, you still have my engagement ring on"
"Yeah sorry, here ya go."
"See ya later sweetie." Goten said as he kissed her cheek
"Yeah see ya."
AN: Hello children!! Here's shit chapter 3 which had lots of improvement which I hope will be worth it (3 more reviews or like I sed I'll burn my story!!)
Luv Fo xxx