Ok I had some lucky charms and Im ready to finish this sucker!
Thanks for all the reviews, I hope you all don't mind that Im posting so many so quickly . . . oh who am I kidding I know you love it. I just got a really good Idea for a nice melodramatic story, I enjoy them so much. So Im kinda tryin to just spit this one out real quick . . . or at least get to the good part
So here's where I left you
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Nothing could ruin this night...
Tyler looked over at Mary and smiled wide. The little car flew around the curves of the road. Mary heard something in the distance so she quickly switched off the radio.
Sirens.
They looked into the rearview mirrors. And the blue and red lights were approaching them quickly.
Tyler muttered a few curse words and pulled over to the shoulder.
Mary wasn't scared, the only thing he had done wrong was speed maybe. But he wasn't going very fast, so she figured it wouldn't be too bad.
All of the sudden two more police cars came towards them from the front. Tyler turned to Mary, "you wearing running shoes?"
"No, should I be?" Mary asked, now she was frightened. She cowered into the seat.
All of the police cars swarmed around them and cops started jumping out and surrounding them. They all drew their guns.
"Step out of the car with you hands in the air!" the one with the megaphone called.
Mary recognized the amplified voice, Kevin. She quickly lunged at the door handle. Tyler grabbed her wrist, "what do you think you're doing?"
"Um, getting out" Mary said as she broke free of him and sprung out of the car. She started to run towards the group of cops. She heard the guns click, and one of them yell, "freeze!" and Mary did just that. They shined flashlights on her. She just stood there, shaking.
"Mary?" Kevin said, from behind his squad car.
"What are you doing here?" Roxanne asked
Mary didn't move, "I was on a date, I promise I wasn't doing anything."
"You know her Kinkirk?" an officer asked
"She's my sister-in-law "Kevin said, "Im positive she didn't know"
A few of the officers past Mary and went to the car. Kevin walked up to Mary who was still stationary. "You can move now," he said.
Mary relaxed and latched onto Kevin. "Oh my gosh, that was so scary!" she let go of him, "so what was that all about?"
"That car is stolen," Kevin told her, "we've been looking for it for a week."
Mary shivered, it was starting to rain. Kevin gave her his jacket, she smiled. Lucy was really lucky to have found such a great guy. Although she would never admit it, she desperately wanted Lucy's perfect life.
"Kevin" Mary said sweetly, "can you take me home?" she looked at him with puppy-dog eyes.
"Do I have a choice?" Kevin asked with a smile.
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On the way home Kevin noticed Mary crying in the backseat.
"Hey what's wrong?" he said knocking on the cage, "first time in the back of a cop car?"
"No, unfortunately not" Mary laughed, "but that's not it"
"Is it that guy? Were you two like serious?" Kevin asked
"No, it was our first date"
"Then what was the problem?"
"I just thought things were finally getting better"
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review, that is all
Thanks for all the reviews, I hope you all don't mind that Im posting so many so quickly . . . oh who am I kidding I know you love it. I just got a really good Idea for a nice melodramatic story, I enjoy them so much. So Im kinda tryin to just spit this one out real quick . . . or at least get to the good part
So here's where I left you
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Nothing could ruin this night...
Tyler looked over at Mary and smiled wide. The little car flew around the curves of the road. Mary heard something in the distance so she quickly switched off the radio.
Sirens.
They looked into the rearview mirrors. And the blue and red lights were approaching them quickly.
Tyler muttered a few curse words and pulled over to the shoulder.
Mary wasn't scared, the only thing he had done wrong was speed maybe. But he wasn't going very fast, so she figured it wouldn't be too bad.
All of the sudden two more police cars came towards them from the front. Tyler turned to Mary, "you wearing running shoes?"
"No, should I be?" Mary asked, now she was frightened. She cowered into the seat.
All of the police cars swarmed around them and cops started jumping out and surrounding them. They all drew their guns.
"Step out of the car with you hands in the air!" the one with the megaphone called.
Mary recognized the amplified voice, Kevin. She quickly lunged at the door handle. Tyler grabbed her wrist, "what do you think you're doing?"
"Um, getting out" Mary said as she broke free of him and sprung out of the car. She started to run towards the group of cops. She heard the guns click, and one of them yell, "freeze!" and Mary did just that. They shined flashlights on her. She just stood there, shaking.
"Mary?" Kevin said, from behind his squad car.
"What are you doing here?" Roxanne asked
Mary didn't move, "I was on a date, I promise I wasn't doing anything."
"You know her Kinkirk?" an officer asked
"She's my sister-in-law "Kevin said, "Im positive she didn't know"
A few of the officers past Mary and went to the car. Kevin walked up to Mary who was still stationary. "You can move now," he said.
Mary relaxed and latched onto Kevin. "Oh my gosh, that was so scary!" she let go of him, "so what was that all about?"
"That car is stolen," Kevin told her, "we've been looking for it for a week."
Mary shivered, it was starting to rain. Kevin gave her his jacket, she smiled. Lucy was really lucky to have found such a great guy. Although she would never admit it, she desperately wanted Lucy's perfect life.
"Kevin" Mary said sweetly, "can you take me home?" she looked at him with puppy-dog eyes.
"Do I have a choice?" Kevin asked with a smile.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
On the way home Kevin noticed Mary crying in the backseat.
"Hey what's wrong?" he said knocking on the cage, "first time in the back of a cop car?"
"No, unfortunately not" Mary laughed, "but that's not it"
"Is it that guy? Were you two like serious?" Kevin asked
"No, it was our first date"
"Then what was the problem?"
"I just thought things were finally getting better"
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review, that is all