What a friend should be
by:starblaze
chapter five:everything to make you guilty
Disclaimer:I ownly own Melanie and the plot.
Lily ran back to her compartment. She slammed the door shut and dropped on the ground next to it. She closed her eyes and thought to herself, "HOW could I have. How could I have fallen for him? His eyes, his adorably messy hair, the way his glasses si on the edge of his nose like that, his arms, that I'd just love to be in... LILY! stop it! You know what you have to do and falling for him WILL NOT help you to suceed."
She opened her eyes to see Melanie giving her a weird look. Lily burst out laughing.Melanie raised an eyebrow.
"It was so funny! His face looked hilarious!!" Lily giggled.Lily told Mel about the incident. Melanie laughed so hard she fell off the seat and onto the floor where she landed on her butt.For some starnge reason this amused them so much, the burst into another bunch of giggles. The door suddenly opened and Remus walked in.Taking a look at the girls, he started to walk back out but Lily grabbed him and pulled him into the compartment.
Remus gave her an amused look and went to the door and pulled a much embarrased Sirius Black in. Lily and Melanie gave Remus a cold look.Remus ignored it and sat down. The girls, who were still shooting Remus glares, sat down too.
Remus looked at Lily and started to say, "Guys, I wanted you to meet..."
"Sirius Balck." Lily interupted. "We know."
Sirius was staring at the ground and looked up. "H-how did you know m-my name?" He stuttered.
Lily laughed coldly. "Why shouldn't I?"
Sirius muttered something incohrently and just then the door banged open and James Potterwalked in. He flashed his I'm-the-most-gorgeous-creature-on- this-earth-and-I've-won-three-awards-for-this-smile smile. Lily scowled. James loked at Remus who shrugged.
James decided to use some of his Potter charm on the redhead. "Hi beautiful! Haven't I seen you somewhere? A dance club maybe?"
"No, darling of course not, I know for a fact your mother dearest wouldn't let you near there." Lily said pouring on the sarcasm. James looked suprised.
Sirius ( finally getting his Siriusness back) hollored, "ooooooo!Shot down by an anonymous girl. James meh boy, WHAT will we do with you??"
James glared at Sirius( who, by the way, was grinning like an idiot) and tried again to flirt with Lily. "You don't know my mother. She adores me too much. I have seen you somewhere, I just wonder where I did.........."
Lily looked disgustedly at James, "James darling, the only thing YOUR mother adores is your puppy Alexander."
James was taken back. First of all, No girl had ever talked to him like that. Secondly, How did this no named girl, know his puppy's name was Alexander??Not even Sirius remembered that.
Lily shot Remus a look which clearly said, "Why the heck did you bring these buffoons here?" Remus shrugged and went back to talking with Melanie.Sirius decided he was hungry and went off after the lady with the fod cart.
Lily glanced over at James who was leaning against the door looking right at her. She felt her cheecks colour, but stated, " You know Jamesiepoo, you shouldn't try so hard to flirt with me. The only thing you'd get from me would be a slap."
James raised an eyebrow, "So now its Jamesiepoo huh? You know you love me." He walked right next to her and whispered in her ear, "I know a slap isn't what you *want* to give me is it?"
Lily looked at him furiously. Remus and Melanie( who had stopped staring at each other) feared for his life. Lily's temper was not something to mess with (she rarely got angry, but when she did, you didn't want to be within twelve feet of her). James grinned at her, making her more angry. Before anyone could say another word, Lily turned around and walked out the door. Melanie gave Remus an apologetic look and ran after Lily.
James looked at his friend and asked, "Who was she? I didn't even get a name! But you Moony seemed pretty happy with that brunette. Got a name by any chance????"
Remus smiled. "Prongs my buddy I'm surprised. For once I actually out did you.I don't about the other one but the one I was talking to's name is Melanie."
James stared at the door, wondering that girl was.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ (at hogwarts feast)
James looked down the table to see the redhead laughing with her friend, Melanie, and Remus. He turned to the girl next to him. She was a tall girl, almost 5'8 with long blonde hair and violet eyes. Her name was Hope. For some strange reason James felt like getting up and moving down the table to sit with the redhead. Sirius, who was gulping down food across from him, had about three girls almost on top of him. James looked at his friend with sympathey. How could he eat with all those girls? Hope was bad enough.
Just then Dumbledore stood up and anounced, "Now that our dinner is done. I'd like to present our prefects. For Gryffindor: fifth year prefects are Hope Sanders and Rob Cacklenut. Sixth year prefects are James Potter and Lily Evans............"
James turned to see the redhead stand up. His jaw dropped, and he tuned out Dumbledore." That was Lily? his Lily? the one he'd spent his entire childhood with?" he thought. Then his happiness dropped as he thought on, "That was the Lily that's friendship he'd given up for popularity. That was the Lily who had agreed to pretend that they were still friends during the summer for the sake of their parents. That was the Lily who knew practically Everything about him. Even the name of his dog..................." James menally smacked himself. Of course Lily remembered Alexander. She'd been there when the Potters had picked him out right after first year. He and her had spent the entire summer training Alex. James cleared his head and realised that everyone had sat down. He glance around embarrasedly to see that the hall was looking at him.
Professor Dumbledore stood up and asked him, "James, would you mind sitting down?"
James mummbled yes and sat down, his cheecks red. He looked down the table to see Lily giggling with Melanie. He looked at Sirius who was giving him a questioning look. James whispered to him, "I'll tell you later. In our dorm." Sirius nodded and went back to eating.
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People who reviewed: lutra: sorry! I just have this thing of ending with a cliffy!
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DAELILy: Thanks so much!
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Rosa: three?Three? well It's better than twenty five! It was YOUR fault not mine. I just had the hardest first week at school! One of my best friends was sick for three days, I had about two hours of homework a day, and I have a really hectic weekend!lol. nevermind, I updated!
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jencdancer:Thank you!She'll crush the ego until it's flatter than a pancake!
Moonlight Lily:YAY! I can kill Peter!!!!!!!!!! *throws sharp objects at Peter* DIEDIEDIE! Crap, he won't die!
Rosa: I updated! Happy now? School is so crazy. I had the most hectic week ever!
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by:starblaze
chapter five:everything to make you guilty
Disclaimer:I ownly own Melanie and the plot.
Lily ran back to her compartment. She slammed the door shut and dropped on the ground next to it. She closed her eyes and thought to herself, "HOW could I have. How could I have fallen for him? His eyes, his adorably messy hair, the way his glasses si on the edge of his nose like that, his arms, that I'd just love to be in... LILY! stop it! You know what you have to do and falling for him WILL NOT help you to suceed."
She opened her eyes to see Melanie giving her a weird look. Lily burst out laughing.Melanie raised an eyebrow.
"It was so funny! His face looked hilarious!!" Lily giggled.Lily told Mel about the incident. Melanie laughed so hard she fell off the seat and onto the floor where she landed on her butt.For some starnge reason this amused them so much, the burst into another bunch of giggles. The door suddenly opened and Remus walked in.Taking a look at the girls, he started to walk back out but Lily grabbed him and pulled him into the compartment.
Remus gave her an amused look and went to the door and pulled a much embarrased Sirius Black in. Lily and Melanie gave Remus a cold look.Remus ignored it and sat down. The girls, who were still shooting Remus glares, sat down too.
Remus looked at Lily and started to say, "Guys, I wanted you to meet..."
"Sirius Balck." Lily interupted. "We know."
Sirius was staring at the ground and looked up. "H-how did you know m-my name?" He stuttered.
Lily laughed coldly. "Why shouldn't I?"
Sirius muttered something incohrently and just then the door banged open and James Potterwalked in. He flashed his I'm-the-most-gorgeous-creature-on- this-earth-and-I've-won-three-awards-for-this-smile smile. Lily scowled. James loked at Remus who shrugged.
James decided to use some of his Potter charm on the redhead. "Hi beautiful! Haven't I seen you somewhere? A dance club maybe?"
"No, darling of course not, I know for a fact your mother dearest wouldn't let you near there." Lily said pouring on the sarcasm. James looked suprised.
Sirius ( finally getting his Siriusness back) hollored, "ooooooo!Shot down by an anonymous girl. James meh boy, WHAT will we do with you??"
James glared at Sirius( who, by the way, was grinning like an idiot) and tried again to flirt with Lily. "You don't know my mother. She adores me too much. I have seen you somewhere, I just wonder where I did.........."
Lily looked disgustedly at James, "James darling, the only thing YOUR mother adores is your puppy Alexander."
James was taken back. First of all, No girl had ever talked to him like that. Secondly, How did this no named girl, know his puppy's name was Alexander??Not even Sirius remembered that.
Lily shot Remus a look which clearly said, "Why the heck did you bring these buffoons here?" Remus shrugged and went back to talking with Melanie.Sirius decided he was hungry and went off after the lady with the fod cart.
Lily glanced over at James who was leaning against the door looking right at her. She felt her cheecks colour, but stated, " You know Jamesiepoo, you shouldn't try so hard to flirt with me. The only thing you'd get from me would be a slap."
James raised an eyebrow, "So now its Jamesiepoo huh? You know you love me." He walked right next to her and whispered in her ear, "I know a slap isn't what you *want* to give me is it?"
Lily looked at him furiously. Remus and Melanie( who had stopped staring at each other) feared for his life. Lily's temper was not something to mess with (she rarely got angry, but when she did, you didn't want to be within twelve feet of her). James grinned at her, making her more angry. Before anyone could say another word, Lily turned around and walked out the door. Melanie gave Remus an apologetic look and ran after Lily.
James looked at his friend and asked, "Who was she? I didn't even get a name! But you Moony seemed pretty happy with that brunette. Got a name by any chance????"
Remus smiled. "Prongs my buddy I'm surprised. For once I actually out did you.I don't about the other one but the one I was talking to's name is Melanie."
James stared at the door, wondering that girl was.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ (at hogwarts feast)
James looked down the table to see the redhead laughing with her friend, Melanie, and Remus. He turned to the girl next to him. She was a tall girl, almost 5'8 with long blonde hair and violet eyes. Her name was Hope. For some strange reason James felt like getting up and moving down the table to sit with the redhead. Sirius, who was gulping down food across from him, had about three girls almost on top of him. James looked at his friend with sympathey. How could he eat with all those girls? Hope was bad enough.
Just then Dumbledore stood up and anounced, "Now that our dinner is done. I'd like to present our prefects. For Gryffindor: fifth year prefects are Hope Sanders and Rob Cacklenut. Sixth year prefects are James Potter and Lily Evans............"
James turned to see the redhead stand up. His jaw dropped, and he tuned out Dumbledore." That was Lily? his Lily? the one he'd spent his entire childhood with?" he thought. Then his happiness dropped as he thought on, "That was the Lily that's friendship he'd given up for popularity. That was the Lily who had agreed to pretend that they were still friends during the summer for the sake of their parents. That was the Lily who knew practically Everything about him. Even the name of his dog..................." James menally smacked himself. Of course Lily remembered Alexander. She'd been there when the Potters had picked him out right after first year. He and her had spent the entire summer training Alex. James cleared his head and realised that everyone had sat down. He glance around embarrasedly to see that the hall was looking at him.
Professor Dumbledore stood up and asked him, "James, would you mind sitting down?"
James mummbled yes and sat down, his cheecks red. He looked down the table to see Lily giggling with Melanie. He looked at Sirius who was giving him a questioning look. James whispered to him, "I'll tell you later. In our dorm." Sirius nodded and went back to eating.
REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A/n: I loooooooooooooooooooooooooove you people! I got over SIXTY reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *showers everyone with brownies*
People who reviewed: lutra: sorry! I just have this thing of ending with a cliffy!
Mage of Fire:he's mean to those he wants to be mean to. What happens next is never predicitble.
Anonymous: hahaha, I loved your review! Thnkers!
DAELILy: Thanks so much!
Riauna:THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~*Darling Lily Evans*~: I hate Peter too! I'm going to make an I hate Peter club!lol. Wanna join? Anyone can join if the wanna!
Charmer: *throws charmer a brownie* here ya go! They have extra gooey choclate chips!
Rosa: three?Three? well It's better than twenty five! It was YOUR fault not mine. I just had the hardest first week at school! One of my best friends was sick for three days, I had about two hours of homework a day, and I have a really hectic weekend!lol. nevermind, I updated!
nike1000:Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jitterbelle: Trust me I'll make it go s.................l..................o..................w.................l. ...............y! lol. Thank you oh so oh so much!
Oliver's gurl: He is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you!
Harmonys Angel:don't wory, I'm pretty sure Mel will be a good friend. and I'm glad you liked the fourth chap! Hope you like this one as well!
jencdancer:Thank you!She'll crush the ego until it's flatter than a pancake!
Moonlight Lily:YAY! I can kill Peter!!!!!!!!!! *throws sharp objects at Peter* DIEDIEDIE! Crap, he won't die!
Rosa: I updated! Happy now? School is so crazy. I had the most hectic week ever!
Anonymous: lol. I totally loved your review! I'm guessing you love brownies. Am I right? Thanks for your review and *throws you big bag of brownies*
Sarahpeach:Thank you. I try to update asap, but like this last week, it takes me a while sometimes. ( but not too long I assure you)
Unicorn777: Thankerz!!!!!!!!!!!
rushiel:Thankerz a bunch!
Fantasia: oooooooo! Thanks!I read your stories and they are awesome!
Suruchi: EEEEK! you finally read my story! Don't worry I'm gonna update Secrets soon too! See ya in S.S.!
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