Disclaimers I don't own DBZ or any of its characters, why? Because I have my own! Yakusoku, Ore, San, Bruno, Daikon are mine!!!!!
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About the author: I have to tell you that my English is less than perfect because my first language isn't English, I make a lot of mistakes but I'll do my best to keep them at a minimum, so don't review to remind me of that I know. If you want to bring my attention to something just write me at laguerm79@yahoo.com. Most of my characters have been drawn by friends of mine if you want to see at what they look like visit my homepage and my DBZ and other Anime group.
About the story: I like to write fan fiction about DBZ and this is my eighteenth story. Unforgivable is dedicated to my friend Maria S who's a big fan of Raditz. Yes we are fan of is, so what? Yes they will be some B/V but this story won't revolve about them only. I promise you one thing this story will blow you away and if I am wrong just review and tell me so ^__^
Unforgivable
By Maxcrazy7
Prologue
The Red Ribbon army was the most powerful and fearsome troop on Earth, just its name struck fear in the heart of the one who heard it! It had HQs all over the world, and its soldiers spread havoc everywhere they went; no one messed with these guys, not even the authorities in place could put a stop at their crimes as their search for dragon balls! But a courageous young boy named Gokou took them on. Colonel Silver was the first one to fall followed by General White and his major Metallitron and ninja Murasaki, General Blue, took on the infamous mercenary Tao! Now he was boldly headed for the Red Ribbon Army general HQ.
"So that little boy is the one who have been meddling in our affairs! I told you that these men where worthless, we should have build an entire army made of androids" Mrs. Gero said to her husband standing in the shadow while watching Gokou on the monitor making short work of the remaining soldiers of the platoon. Angry Dr Gero replied "I don't think an army of androids like the one we made so far could stop that kid!"
"These models are so outdated you should have use my new nanotechnology to build them"
"Maybe I will"
"What? It's too late now old fool!"
"I don't have time to listen to your critic woman!" the doctor said while leaving the compound and Mrs. Gero to sit down in front of the lab pc and began to download and save files on her laptop cursing out at the machines saying they didn't work fast enough.
"Damn it! Come on! I want to get out of here!"
By that time Gokou had made it to Commander Red quarters and began battling with staff officer Black after this one killed commander Red. Using his head as a torpedo he passed through the robot staff officer Black was controlling, and this last one exploded and the debris fell upon the compound where Mrs. Gero was still working destroying it. Gokou called out his flying nimbus and left the area after finding his dragon ball.
"Damn that kid!" Dr Gero said when he saw his lab in flame but the expression of his face changed from anger to terror when he remembered that his wife was still in there. He made a mad dash toward the raging flame ignoring his own safety and began to search for his wife.
"Natasha! Natasha!" he called out desperately, soon he saw a hand out of the rubble as the roof had caved in on the woman. Frantically he began to lift off the wreckage to free her even though deep down inside of him he knew it was already too late.
"Natasha my darling" he said softly while holding her in his arms while around them the fire was still raging on. He lift her up and slowly walked outside like he was in a dream disregarding the furnace that the lab at became.
It was only once outside that the gravity of the situation came to his knowledge, his wife was dead, and his entire plan of world domination had failed and all this was because of one kid…Gokou. He put her down and stood up looking at the sky than shouted:
"I won't rest until I get my revenge! You'll pay for what you did today! Yurusenai[1]!"
Yurusenai, Yurusenai, Yurusenai!!!
[1] I can't forgive this