Summary & Disclaimer: Read the chapters before this. I own the people I make-up. NO ONE ELSE!
Nat: Can I have $100?
She-Boz: Why?
Nat: I was wanting to get this sweet outfit. It is a tight black shirt, leather pants, and army boots with flames all over them.
She-Boz: Ok but show me where you can get these.
Nat: Ok. Lets go
AN/: I saw the outfit on HotTopic.com around 2:30 A.M. I was really.
THE COUPLES IN THE RUNNING ARE:
Kur/Kag: 5
Leg/Kag: 3
Inu/Kag: 1
Gimli/Kag: 0
Sango/Miroku: 2
Sango/Leg: 0
Sango/Gimli: 0
Sango/Inu: 0
Inu/Arwen: 0
Leg/Kur: 1
WHO SHOULD I KILL:
Kikyo: 0
Inu: 0
Kag: 0
Maroku: 0
Sango: 0
Shippo: 0
Legolas: 1
Aragorn: 0
Frodo: 1
Sam: 0
Merry: 0
Pippin: 0
Gimli: 0
Yusuke: 1
Kuwabara: 2
Kurama: 3
Hiei: 1
AN/: On to the story.
Writing style
*Actions/describing* "Speaking" person talking/thinking
'Thinking/telepathy'
~*~*Scene Change*~*~ ~*~*~Change POV~*~*~ /Sound/
(Name: person talking to readers)
AN/: Author Notes (Author talking to readers)
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~Chapter 7~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~Author's POV~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~Hiei's rooms~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
"Ok. Ok. The DVD's but..."Kurama
"But what?" Nat
*Kurama turns in to Yoko*
"But I get a kiss from you." Yoko
"Ok as long as I can look human again." Nat
*Nat closes her eyes and Yoko leans in. He brushes her lips and then stands straight as if nothing has happened*
"Just imagine what you look like now turning into what you look like when you're a human. That is all" Yoko
*Nat turns into her human form again. She then jumps for joy*
"Thank you." Nat
'I wonder where Joy is?' Nat
*Just at that moment Joy falls from the "sky". Hiei cuts her as he steps aside so he won't be flattened*
"Happy car!" Nat
(Joy's last name is Mercedes. Joy and Nat are best friends. Joy really really likes Jin.)
*Hiei puts away his katana. Nat runs and hugs Joy*
"I thought I was all alone here." Nat
"Where is here?" Joy
"Um... I think it's Lord of the rings time. You know The Fellowship of the Ring. The Two Towers, and Return of the King. Like in the movies." Nat
*Idea dawn's on Joy's face*
"You mean there are orcs, wizard's, kings, and the lord of the ring?" Joy
"Yes Joy. It's a Mary-Sue. We were reading a fic on fanfiction.net and we saw a flash of light. Then I fell through the sky. Now I'm here." Nat
"I've been falling through the sky and being caught by flashes of light all day." Joy
"Sucks to be you." Nat
"What do you mean?" Joy
"I fell once. It was into Hiei's arms too." Nat
"Have you..." Joy
*Jin falls from the sky. He lands in joy's arms*
(I wonder how that happened? Kill Kuwabara! That is a suggested vote.)
"Who are you?" Jin
"Hn." Hiei
*Kurama leaves. Joy jumps for joy*
"Natsuki Sasahara." Nat
"J... Joy Mercedes." Joy
"Who are you?" Hiei
"Oh. Hello Hiei. Don't you remember me? Jin I fought Yusuke in the Dark Tournament." Jin
"Hn." Hiei
"Jin!" Joy
"Dreams do come true." Nat
*Joy runs and hugs Jin. Jin looks shocked and tries to gently push joy off. Kurama reenters*
"Jin... It won't work. You're her dream man." Nat
" I'm her what." Jin
*Nat smiles*
"You're her dream man. I mean she likes you a lot." Nat
*Jin falls over anime style*
(So Jin's really wants to get it on. Jin's cool though.)
"Jin. Jin?" Joy
*Jin stands up*
"Yes?" Joy
"I'm kinda shy but... Willyougooutwithme?" Joy
"What? I barely` know you." Jin
"But I know you really good." Joy
"What!?" Jin
*Natsuki puts the 2nd DVD in the laptop*
"Just watch this." Nat
*Nat pushes play*
AFTER 2ND DVD
"Put in the next one." She-Boz
"Who are you?" Kurama
"She-Boz. I'm a friend of Joy and Natsuki. We live in the same town." She-Boz
"When did you get here?" Joy
"Just after you started the 2nd DVD. How are you brother?" She-Boz
*Everyone gets a dumbfounded look on their faces*
"Who is your brother?" Kurama
*She-Boz laughs. : D*
"Brother. Brother. Brother Yoko. Has living with nigen's made you forget. The day I was born was the day you left home. Silverfox." She-Boz
*Kurama looks shocked. Hiei looks out the window. Nat, Joy, and Jin look surprised. She-Boz laughs really hard*
(Powers of the writer.)
"Your the sister I never met." Kurama
"And you are the brother that is almost impossible to track." She-Boz
*She-Boz walks out of the door and across the hall. Kurama follows. She-Boz sits on the bed and looks through her backpack*
"She-Boz." Kurama
"Yes." She-Boz
*More rummaging*
"How do you know about me?" Kurama
*More rummaging and then no sound and no movement. She-Boz looks up from her bag and then goes back to rummaging. She pulls out her folder and she hands it to Kurama*
"Read it and you'll know as much as I." She-Boz
"What..?" Kurama
"Don't say anything just read." She-Boz
*Kurama opens the folder and finds a yellowed piece of parchment. He starts to read it but looks up. He looks back down and starts to read*
The note reads:
Dear Daughter,
You're father and i have something to important to tell you. You have an older brother. He is a silver kitsune. His names is Yoko. Being his sister you are in danger. He has made enemies over the years. He only knows that he has a sibling. he left the day you were born. Daughter you need to find your brother. You also need to learn how to protect yourself better. Yoko also goes by Kurama. His enemies will be after you. You are a danger to him and yourself by just living. In finding your brother you could have a few problems with a feisty fire demon. Daughter you
*The note ended there. The whole piece of parchment is splattered with blood*
"What happened to them?" Kurama
*Kurama looks at She-Boz*
"I have no idea. I came home from weapons and combat practice. When I got back from practice I went inside and the house was a mess. Father was under a bed and mother was in my room. The note was in a journal that they had just gotten m. She had the... She had the journal clutched in her hand. She was holding the journal close to her chest. One of the murders had stayed behind. When I knelt by mom he jumped out at me. I still had the katana; mom and dad had gotten me for my birthday, in my hand. I fought him and I won. After I grabbed weapons, clothes, food, and the journal I went in search of the murders." She-Boz
*She-Boz stands up, grabs her stuff and walks out of the room. Kurama follows. She-Boz puts on her katana, daggers, and her other various weapons. Kurama puts a hand on her shoulder. She-Boz spins around and faces him*
"Where do you think you're going?" Kurama
"To fight a war." She-Boz
*Kurama grabs her arm*
"No way in hell your not!" Kurama
*She-Boz turns into demon form. It's a female Yoko but black. Her eyes turn red and she gives a Hiei death glare*
"Let me go." She-Boz
"No." Kurama
*Kurama turns into one pissed off Yoko. Yusuke, Hiei, Kuwabara, Natsuki, Joy, Jin, Kagome, Inu Yasha, and pretty much everyone not in the original fellowship turn up*
"Let go!" She-Boz
"No." Yoko
*She-Boz slashes out at Yoko. Yoko barely dodges. She-Boz Grabs Yusuke and puts the katana to his neck. She backs away from everyone and then lets go of Yusuke. Making sure not to cut him and then running off into the distance*
(Psycho ain't I. : ).)
"Yoko... Kurama what was that all about?" Yusuke
*Kurama glares at Yusuke*
"Nothing." Kurama
"Shit. It was something. That hot bitch was mad at you for something." Yusuke
*Kurama runs and grabs Yusuke by the neck and slams him against the wall*
"Never insult my sister again." Kurama
*Everyone looks surprised. Hiei runs off. Kurama drops Yusuke and then walks to his rooms*
(His rooms are the ones that She-Boz (A.K.A.: Maddie) And him talked in. Kill Kurama & Kuwabara. They're mean to Yusuke.)
"Where did half pint go?" Kuwabara
*Everyone looks around*
"He's right here." Inu Yasha
*Inu Yasha picks up Shippo by the tail*
"Inu Yasha! Put Shippo down or I'll say the "s" word!" Kagome
*Inu Yasha glares at Kagome then all of the sudden drops Shippo. Kagome glares at Inu Yasha. Everyone heads off to their rooms. Joy and Nat share rooms. There are like two separate bedrooms in there*
"SIT! SIT! SIT! SIT! SIT!" Kagome
*Inu Crashes into the floor and keeps going. Kagome stalks off to her rooms with Shippo following. Joy and Natsuki laugh as they head off to their rooms. Jin follows. Ok the there are really 5 or 6 separate bedrooms that are all connected by one sitting room*
"Do you wanna watch Yu Yu Hakusho or Inu Yasha?" Nat
"Yu Yu Hakusho. What else?" Joy
(I think I'm gonna end the chapter right here because of al the "action."
*Mob of angry reviewers/readers get out pitchforks*
On second thought I'll continue.)
AFTER 3rd DVD
"Tha' wa' goo'." Jin
*Joy smiles and hugs Jin. Jin looks confused*
"Whatdoyouwantlase?" Jin
*Nat laughs*
"Whatareyulaughingat?" Jin
"The look on your face." Nat
"Be nice to the cute one." Joy
"Time for the next DVD." Nat
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~END~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
PLEASE REVIEW
She-Boz: How about I find some way to put flames around the bottom.
Natsuki: That would be cool.
She-Boz: Do you think it was mean?
Nat: About the chapter. No I think it was funny. They probably thought that you were gonna write a whole lot more.
She-Boz: Ya you're right.
Edowain (A.K.A.: PIH): Elizabeth.
Elizabeth (A.K.A.: Nat's PIH: Ya
Edowain: What's ya doin'.
Elizabeth: Eatin' chocolate.
She-Boz: Hey that's a joke.
Nat: It is?
She-Boz: Ya the chocolate is really dog crap.
AN/: How'd ya like the shocker? I came up with that one randomly. I don't know why. My editor is Natsuki Sasahara but I haven't been havin' her edit my chapters.
I am gonna cancel this fic if I don't get reviews on my other fic's. Don't know what else to say so Bye!
Nat: Can I have $100?
She-Boz: Why?
Nat: I was wanting to get this sweet outfit. It is a tight black shirt, leather pants, and army boots with flames all over them.
She-Boz: Ok but show me where you can get these.
Nat: Ok. Lets go
AN/: I saw the outfit on HotTopic.com around 2:30 A.M. I was really.
THE COUPLES IN THE RUNNING ARE:
Kur/Kag: 5
Leg/Kag: 3
Inu/Kag: 1
Gimli/Kag: 0
Sango/Miroku: 2
Sango/Leg: 0
Sango/Gimli: 0
Sango/Inu: 0
Inu/Arwen: 0
Leg/Kur: 1
WHO SHOULD I KILL:
Kikyo: 0
Inu: 0
Kag: 0
Maroku: 0
Sango: 0
Shippo: 0
Legolas: 1
Aragorn: 0
Frodo: 1
Sam: 0
Merry: 0
Pippin: 0
Gimli: 0
Yusuke: 1
Kuwabara: 2
Kurama: 3
Hiei: 1
AN/: On to the story.
Writing style
*Actions/describing* "Speaking" person talking/thinking
'Thinking/telepathy'
~*~*Scene Change*~*~ ~*~*~Change POV~*~*~ /Sound/
(Name: person talking to readers)
AN/: Author Notes (Author talking to readers)
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~Chapter 7~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~Author's POV~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~Hiei's rooms~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
"Ok. Ok. The DVD's but..."Kurama
"But what?" Nat
*Kurama turns in to Yoko*
"But I get a kiss from you." Yoko
"Ok as long as I can look human again." Nat
*Nat closes her eyes and Yoko leans in. He brushes her lips and then stands straight as if nothing has happened*
"Just imagine what you look like now turning into what you look like when you're a human. That is all" Yoko
*Nat turns into her human form again. She then jumps for joy*
"Thank you." Nat
'I wonder where Joy is?' Nat
*Just at that moment Joy falls from the "sky". Hiei cuts her as he steps aside so he won't be flattened*
"Happy car!" Nat
(Joy's last name is Mercedes. Joy and Nat are best friends. Joy really really likes Jin.)
*Hiei puts away his katana. Nat runs and hugs Joy*
"I thought I was all alone here." Nat
"Where is here?" Joy
"Um... I think it's Lord of the rings time. You know The Fellowship of the Ring. The Two Towers, and Return of the King. Like in the movies." Nat
*Idea dawn's on Joy's face*
"You mean there are orcs, wizard's, kings, and the lord of the ring?" Joy
"Yes Joy. It's a Mary-Sue. We were reading a fic on fanfiction.net and we saw a flash of light. Then I fell through the sky. Now I'm here." Nat
"I've been falling through the sky and being caught by flashes of light all day." Joy
"Sucks to be you." Nat
"What do you mean?" Joy
"I fell once. It was into Hiei's arms too." Nat
"Have you..." Joy
*Jin falls from the sky. He lands in joy's arms*
(I wonder how that happened? Kill Kuwabara! That is a suggested vote.)
"Who are you?" Jin
"Hn." Hiei
*Kurama leaves. Joy jumps for joy*
"Natsuki Sasahara." Nat
"J... Joy Mercedes." Joy
"Who are you?" Hiei
"Oh. Hello Hiei. Don't you remember me? Jin I fought Yusuke in the Dark Tournament." Jin
"Hn." Hiei
"Jin!" Joy
"Dreams do come true." Nat
*Joy runs and hugs Jin. Jin looks shocked and tries to gently push joy off. Kurama reenters*
"Jin... It won't work. You're her dream man." Nat
" I'm her what." Jin
*Nat smiles*
"You're her dream man. I mean she likes you a lot." Nat
*Jin falls over anime style*
(So Jin's really wants to get it on. Jin's cool though.)
"Jin. Jin?" Joy
*Jin stands up*
"Yes?" Joy
"I'm kinda shy but... Willyougooutwithme?" Joy
"What? I barely` know you." Jin
"But I know you really good." Joy
"What!?" Jin
*Natsuki puts the 2nd DVD in the laptop*
"Just watch this." Nat
*Nat pushes play*
AFTER 2ND DVD
"Put in the next one." She-Boz
"Who are you?" Kurama
"She-Boz. I'm a friend of Joy and Natsuki. We live in the same town." She-Boz
"When did you get here?" Joy
"Just after you started the 2nd DVD. How are you brother?" She-Boz
*Everyone gets a dumbfounded look on their faces*
"Who is your brother?" Kurama
*She-Boz laughs. : D*
"Brother. Brother. Brother Yoko. Has living with nigen's made you forget. The day I was born was the day you left home. Silverfox." She-Boz
*Kurama looks shocked. Hiei looks out the window. Nat, Joy, and Jin look surprised. She-Boz laughs really hard*
(Powers of the writer.)
"Your the sister I never met." Kurama
"And you are the brother that is almost impossible to track." She-Boz
*She-Boz walks out of the door and across the hall. Kurama follows. She-Boz sits on the bed and looks through her backpack*
"She-Boz." Kurama
"Yes." She-Boz
*More rummaging*
"How do you know about me?" Kurama
*More rummaging and then no sound and no movement. She-Boz looks up from her bag and then goes back to rummaging. She pulls out her folder and she hands it to Kurama*
"Read it and you'll know as much as I." She-Boz
"What..?" Kurama
"Don't say anything just read." She-Boz
*Kurama opens the folder and finds a yellowed piece of parchment. He starts to read it but looks up. He looks back down and starts to read*
The note reads:
Dear Daughter,
You're father and i have something to important to tell you. You have an older brother. He is a silver kitsune. His names is Yoko. Being his sister you are in danger. He has made enemies over the years. He only knows that he has a sibling. he left the day you were born. Daughter you need to find your brother. You also need to learn how to protect yourself better. Yoko also goes by Kurama. His enemies will be after you. You are a danger to him and yourself by just living. In finding your brother you could have a few problems with a feisty fire demon. Daughter you
*The note ended there. The whole piece of parchment is splattered with blood*
"What happened to them?" Kurama
*Kurama looks at She-Boz*
"I have no idea. I came home from weapons and combat practice. When I got back from practice I went inside and the house was a mess. Father was under a bed and mother was in my room. The note was in a journal that they had just gotten m. She had the... She had the journal clutched in her hand. She was holding the journal close to her chest. One of the murders had stayed behind. When I knelt by mom he jumped out at me. I still had the katana; mom and dad had gotten me for my birthday, in my hand. I fought him and I won. After I grabbed weapons, clothes, food, and the journal I went in search of the murders." She-Boz
*She-Boz stands up, grabs her stuff and walks out of the room. Kurama follows. She-Boz puts on her katana, daggers, and her other various weapons. Kurama puts a hand on her shoulder. She-Boz spins around and faces him*
"Where do you think you're going?" Kurama
"To fight a war." She-Boz
*Kurama grabs her arm*
"No way in hell your not!" Kurama
*She-Boz turns into demon form. It's a female Yoko but black. Her eyes turn red and she gives a Hiei death glare*
"Let me go." She-Boz
"No." Kurama
*Kurama turns into one pissed off Yoko. Yusuke, Hiei, Kuwabara, Natsuki, Joy, Jin, Kagome, Inu Yasha, and pretty much everyone not in the original fellowship turn up*
"Let go!" She-Boz
"No." Yoko
*She-Boz slashes out at Yoko. Yoko barely dodges. She-Boz Grabs Yusuke and puts the katana to his neck. She backs away from everyone and then lets go of Yusuke. Making sure not to cut him and then running off into the distance*
(Psycho ain't I. : ).)
"Yoko... Kurama what was that all about?" Yusuke
*Kurama glares at Yusuke*
"Nothing." Kurama
"Shit. It was something. That hot bitch was mad at you for something." Yusuke
*Kurama runs and grabs Yusuke by the neck and slams him against the wall*
"Never insult my sister again." Kurama
*Everyone looks surprised. Hiei runs off. Kurama drops Yusuke and then walks to his rooms*
(His rooms are the ones that She-Boz (A.K.A.: Maddie) And him talked in. Kill Kurama & Kuwabara. They're mean to Yusuke.)
"Where did half pint go?" Kuwabara
*Everyone looks around*
"He's right here." Inu Yasha
*Inu Yasha picks up Shippo by the tail*
"Inu Yasha! Put Shippo down or I'll say the "s" word!" Kagome
*Inu Yasha glares at Kagome then all of the sudden drops Shippo. Kagome glares at Inu Yasha. Everyone heads off to their rooms. Joy and Nat share rooms. There are like two separate bedrooms in there*
"SIT! SIT! SIT! SIT! SIT!" Kagome
*Inu Crashes into the floor and keeps going. Kagome stalks off to her rooms with Shippo following. Joy and Natsuki laugh as they head off to their rooms. Jin follows. Ok the there are really 5 or 6 separate bedrooms that are all connected by one sitting room*
"Do you wanna watch Yu Yu Hakusho or Inu Yasha?" Nat
"Yu Yu Hakusho. What else?" Joy
(I think I'm gonna end the chapter right here because of al the "action."
*Mob of angry reviewers/readers get out pitchforks*
On second thought I'll continue.)
AFTER 3rd DVD
"Tha' wa' goo'." Jin
*Joy smiles and hugs Jin. Jin looks confused*
"Whatdoyouwantlase?" Jin
*Nat laughs*
"Whatareyulaughingat?" Jin
"The look on your face." Nat
"Be nice to the cute one." Joy
"Time for the next DVD." Nat
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~END~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
PLEASE REVIEW
She-Boz: How about I find some way to put flames around the bottom.
Natsuki: That would be cool.
She-Boz: Do you think it was mean?
Nat: About the chapter. No I think it was funny. They probably thought that you were gonna write a whole lot more.
She-Boz: Ya you're right.
Edowain (A.K.A.: PIH): Elizabeth.
Elizabeth (A.K.A.: Nat's PIH: Ya
Edowain: What's ya doin'.
Elizabeth: Eatin' chocolate.
She-Boz: Hey that's a joke.
Nat: It is?
She-Boz: Ya the chocolate is really dog crap.
AN/: How'd ya like the shocker? I came up with that one randomly. I don't know why. My editor is Natsuki Sasahara but I haven't been havin' her edit my chapters.
I am gonna cancel this fic if I don't get reviews on my other fic's. Don't know what else to say so Bye!