Well I got one review, I guess I'm doing alright. Any way here's chapter 2 which is a lot better now that Satine is now coming into the story. But please enjoy and then write a review!
O and I don't own any one here and don't want to get people to sue me and stuff...yeah so...ON with the Show!!!
Christina and all those other people are now arriving at the Moulin Rouge, where Christina will first meet Satine. And Shorty will give his boyfriends the Marc Jacob shoes he stole. And action!!!!
Christina talking to himself: We had gone to the Moulin Rouge, were I was supposed to convince Satine that not only was I not Julie Andrews, but I should write stuff for "Expensive, Expensive".
Harry Zidler: I own the Moulin Rouge... And I gay! Any takers???
Christina: Harry Zidler and his sisters, he call them...Money.
Money sing:
Come on will you sleep with me
I've got some fine wine ant tea
Cause we are the Money–
Harry:
You can, can, can
Give into your desires
If you don't your hired
pay a little bit
get a little bit
You can, can, can
Crowd of old men dancing funny: We can, can, can
Harry:
You can!! I think?
Old men:
Here we are now
Our wives hate us
Will pay you
If you pay us
Shorty: Hey we got a table...Oh look it's Expensive!
Satine/ Expensive sing:
You French aren't glad to pay
For plays
Christina interrupting the song: But someone else had paid to see Satine that night...
Satine:
But they prefer..
Christina: Harry's rich Uncle
Satine:
To get laid!
Christina: The Mouse
Satine:
To show every man may be quite low and resentful
but I just want to put on play
To show ain't that grand
but it pays the rental
on this pitiful flat
And it's owned by one of you rats
Men are old
And I'm real bold
but we all lose our bod in the end
But big bust or pancakes
I haven't lost my shape
Expensive is a guys best friend!
Shorty: Ironic isn't it?
Satine:
TIFFANY!
Mouse: So when do I get cheese?
Harry: After she gets her close back on I've arranged for you to too meet...She might have cheese in her room.
Satine:
CARTIER!!
Shorty: After she gets her close back on I've arranged for you to too meet totally alone!
Christina smiling : Alone?
Shorty: A.... yeah I just said that. Oh and remember, talk about Sex and the City and don't look like Julie Andrews– which means you can't were your nun outfit.
Christina: Darn!
Satine back to sing:
Cause we are living in an unmoral world
And I had morals as a girl!
Old men: Gasp!
Satine:
....Black Starts??
Mouse called..
Talk to me Harry Zidler tell me what he said
There may come a time when a girl needs a change
Zidler:
But gentlemen prefer a G string–
Satine no longer sing and confused: Harry, that the Producers— this is Moulin Rough you idiot.
Satine:...
There may come a time when Harry
forgets his
Harry:
Lines
Satine:
So make sur the Producers don't fine
Meanwhile Shorty Spills wine on Mouse Man and tries to clean him up...
Shorty: Don't worry love I've got Windex! Here hold my napkin.
Then we go back to Satine whom is with Zidler.
Satine: Is the Mouse here yet?
Harry: Yes!
Satine: And what about the exterminator?
Harry:... He's right over there.
Satine: What?
Harry: You know, the guy holding th napkin. (pointing to Christina who just blew his nose)
Satine: Are you sure? He doesn't even look like a mouse... In fact he looks like Julie Andrew's brother.
Satine: Will he by me some actually clothes and/or invest?
Harry: How could he not after tonight, besides I've got a hit man on call.
Satine: We'll what's his type???
Harry: Well, he likes cheese an awful lot. You better not screw up— remember the cheese, and you'll be..
Satine: Able to leave and get a real job.
Satine singing:
Cause I'm sick of louses
So I've moved on to mouses
Expensive is a guy's best friend!
Satine is carried over to Christina who is trying to hide his nun–ish voice.
Satine: Let's get this over with. Ok so what do you wan to do to night, and remember your paying by the hour. We don't except credit cards or debt cards, we do except cash and checks. Or you can open an account for $100 dollars a month, with this you'll have add bonuses. You can also rack up frequent kinky miles. So what will it be?
Christina: Actually I was hoping I didn't have to pay for anything. It won't take long I promise.
Satine: You mean for free?
Christina: Yes, if that's alright.
Satine: Oh I feel sick. (Satine faits and is carried away)
So what do you think? It's not all that good but please write a review!! I'll I've gotten was one review.
I don't mean to afend anyone I'm just trying to write a story and I don't own any of these people and don't want Hbo, Baz, Julie Andrews, or gay people to get mad at me. So don't get me in any sort of bad thing..ish.
Please write a review!!
O and I don't own any one here and don't want to get people to sue me and stuff...yeah so...ON with the Show!!!
Christina and all those other people are now arriving at the Moulin Rouge, where Christina will first meet Satine. And Shorty will give his boyfriends the Marc Jacob shoes he stole. And action!!!!
Christina talking to himself: We had gone to the Moulin Rouge, were I was supposed to convince Satine that not only was I not Julie Andrews, but I should write stuff for "Expensive, Expensive".
Harry Zidler: I own the Moulin Rouge... And I gay! Any takers???
Christina: Harry Zidler and his sisters, he call them...Money.
Money sing:
Come on will you sleep with me
I've got some fine wine ant tea
Cause we are the Money–
Harry:
You can, can, can
Give into your desires
If you don't your hired
pay a little bit
get a little bit
You can, can, can
Crowd of old men dancing funny: We can, can, can
Harry:
You can!! I think?
Old men:
Here we are now
Our wives hate us
Will pay you
If you pay us
Shorty: Hey we got a table...Oh look it's Expensive!
Satine/ Expensive sing:
You French aren't glad to pay
For plays
Christina interrupting the song: But someone else had paid to see Satine that night...
Satine:
But they prefer..
Christina: Harry's rich Uncle
Satine:
To get laid!
Christina: The Mouse
Satine:
To show every man may be quite low and resentful
but I just want to put on play
To show ain't that grand
but it pays the rental
on this pitiful flat
And it's owned by one of you rats
Men are old
And I'm real bold
but we all lose our bod in the end
But big bust or pancakes
I haven't lost my shape
Expensive is a guys best friend!
Shorty: Ironic isn't it?
Satine:
TIFFANY!
Mouse: So when do I get cheese?
Harry: After she gets her close back on I've arranged for you to too meet...She might have cheese in her room.
Satine:
CARTIER!!
Shorty: After she gets her close back on I've arranged for you to too meet totally alone!
Christina smiling : Alone?
Shorty: A.... yeah I just said that. Oh and remember, talk about Sex and the City and don't look like Julie Andrews– which means you can't were your nun outfit.
Christina: Darn!
Satine back to sing:
Cause we are living in an unmoral world
And I had morals as a girl!
Old men: Gasp!
Satine:
....Black Starts??
Mouse called..
Talk to me Harry Zidler tell me what he said
There may come a time when a girl needs a change
Zidler:
But gentlemen prefer a G string–
Satine no longer sing and confused: Harry, that the Producers— this is Moulin Rough you idiot.
Satine:...
There may come a time when Harry
forgets his
Harry:
Lines
Satine:
So make sur the Producers don't fine
Meanwhile Shorty Spills wine on Mouse Man and tries to clean him up...
Shorty: Don't worry love I've got Windex! Here hold my napkin.
Then we go back to Satine whom is with Zidler.
Satine: Is the Mouse here yet?
Harry: Yes!
Satine: And what about the exterminator?
Harry:... He's right over there.
Satine: What?
Harry: You know, the guy holding th napkin. (pointing to Christina who just blew his nose)
Satine: Are you sure? He doesn't even look like a mouse... In fact he looks like Julie Andrew's brother.
Satine: Will he by me some actually clothes and/or invest?
Harry: How could he not after tonight, besides I've got a hit man on call.
Satine: We'll what's his type???
Harry: Well, he likes cheese an awful lot. You better not screw up— remember the cheese, and you'll be..
Satine: Able to leave and get a real job.
Satine singing:
Cause I'm sick of louses
So I've moved on to mouses
Expensive is a guy's best friend!
Satine is carried over to Christina who is trying to hide his nun–ish voice.
Satine: Let's get this over with. Ok so what do you wan to do to night, and remember your paying by the hour. We don't except credit cards or debt cards, we do except cash and checks. Or you can open an account for $100 dollars a month, with this you'll have add bonuses. You can also rack up frequent kinky miles. So what will it be?
Christina: Actually I was hoping I didn't have to pay for anything. It won't take long I promise.
Satine: You mean for free?
Christina: Yes, if that's alright.
Satine: Oh I feel sick. (Satine faits and is carried away)
So what do you think? It's not all that good but please write a review!! I'll I've gotten was one review.
I don't mean to afend anyone I'm just trying to write a story and I don't own any of these people and don't want Hbo, Baz, Julie Andrews, or gay people to get mad at me. So don't get me in any sort of bad thing..ish.
Please write a review!!