Sorry for placing it here but I don't know where to place it where people could read it. If it's any problem, I'll take it down after I've received a couple of replies.
Hi Guys! Remember this story? Well, as I was saying I want to redo this story. I'll place it in the web page I'm making. (which I'm still fixing) As of now, I've only revised a couple of chapters. I need serious critic of this story so I know what I'm fixing! One or two would be nice. You can send your critic to my email: nightdreamer2688@yahoo.com or leave a review.