Hey everyone this is my new story about two girls who go to Disney world and ride the Pirates of the Caribbean ride and get transported to the time of pirates. I hope you like this story so please read and review!
Disclaimer.. I don't own anything but Mara and Jen and the story.
Here is a little info on the two girls....
Mara Aiken (No I didn't take the name from Clay Aiken it just so happens my mother's family name is Aiken) ~ she is short a little taller than 5'1. she has dark brown hair with brown eyes and tan skin. She is shy but very loud and weird with her friends. She likes to sing. she is 18 years old.
Jen Ryland ~ she is very tall. She has brown that can sometimes look red in light. She has blue eyes. she has pale skin. she is very outgoing likes to fight with people. she is also 18 years old.
ok now here is the first chapter......
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Mara and Jen were at Disney world. They had just graduated from high school and were on a vacation in Florida. It was their first day and they were spending it at the Magic Kingdom.
"Are you telling me you really have never been here before?" asked Mara.
"Nope, Never. I always wanted to but my family was more of a Universal Studios family."
"Well, you don't know what you've been missing!" The two girls started off with space mountain and alien encounter. They made their way to the haunted mansion, splash mountain, and big thunder railroad. They headed toward the tiki room, the jungle cruse, and pirates of the Caribbean.
"So what one do you want to go on first?" asked Mara.
"What one is more fun? And don't make me ride pirates only because you love the movie!" said Jen.
"Jen, even if the movie sucked the ride is still one of the best rides in this park!"
"Pirates it is." They walked into the line for pirates of the Caribbean to find there was no line at all. They got a boat to themselves.
"Wow, we're lucky!" said Mara. As the ride went on the girls sang along with the song.
"Wouldn't it be great if we could really go back in time to see real pirates?" asked Mara. Jen just rolled her eyes at her.
"Mara, you are stuck in a dream world!" The ride was getting close to the end and Mara noticed somethings that look different.
"Um.. Jen.. this doesn't look right." Their boat seemed to be on a different track and was heading in a different direction then the other boats.
"Mara, whats going on? This is part of the ride right? Please tell me this is part of the ride!" Their boat was now out of view of the others and they were in complete darkness.
"I wish I could!" said Mara with fear in her voice. The boat started moving really fast and was going in all directions as if it was in a storm. The girls were being splashed by what seemed to be salty sea water. Without warning the boat flipped and the girls were tossed into the surprisingly warm waters swimming for their lives. The storm seemed to be stopping and there was light coming. The girls looked around and were surprised to see an island near them.
"Look and island," yelled Jen. "Swim to it." They swam to the island and collapsed on its shores. Both girls blacked out.
The next day Mara woke up remembering everything that happened.
"Jen? Jen? Where are you?" She looked around and found Jen on the ground just a little way from her. Mara got up and ran to her. "Jen wake up."
"What? Whats going on?" Jen got up and looked around. "So it wasn't a dream?"
"Nope." They got up and started walking the island. They found out it was very small. It was soon growing dark and the girls had no idea what to do.
"Can you build a fire?" asked Jen.
"With a match. Have you got any?"
"Sorry must be in my other pair of pants."
"Great."
"Well, lets sleep on the shore, there is no way we are sleeping in those trees!" said Jen looking at the forest that was on the island. They settled down and soon fell into a deep sleep. The next morning Mara felt someone poking her. This time when she opened her eyes she was met by two beautiful brown eyes.
"I see ye finally woke up lass." Mara just looked at the man looking at her as if he was crazy. She didn't say anything. She looked and saw that Jen was still sleeping. Mara backed away from the man, who was at the moment giving her body a looking at, and went over to Jen.
"Jen, Jen I think you better get up now."
"What? You know I sleep late, not everyone can be like you and wake up early!"
"JEN!"
"What?'
"We have company." Just then a bunch of men who looked just like pirates surrounded them. The one who woke Mara up walked up to them.
"Morinin' lasses. The names Captain Jack Sparrow and who might you two be?" Both the girls looked at him then eachother and started laughing.
"What be so funny?" asked "Jack".
"Well, you just said your name is Captain Jack Sparrow." said Jen.
"You look the part but we all know that Jack Sparrow isn't real unless..wait.. oh my god are you Johnny Depp?" asked or more like screamed Mara.
"Johnny who?" asked Jack.
"This must be where Disney is filming the second Pirates of the Caribbean." said Mara.
"Listen loves, I'm Captain Jack Sparrow no lies savvy?"
"You're crazy!" said Jen but really saying it as if she was coughing. Mara started to laugh.
"Mates take them aboard the Pearl then put them in the brig (a/n did I spell that right?)." said Jack.
Mara and Jen were sitting in one cell together and were left alone. They started to get bored.
"Well..hmm.. this is fun!" said Jen.
"Hey look at it this way we traveled back in time. Maybe we'll finally have a real adventure!" said Mara as if this was the best thing ever to happen to them.
"Shut up!"
"Why don't you make me!"
"Bring it bitch!" They both started laughing.
"Fake fighting sure makes time go faster!" said Jen.
"It has been like two minutes."
"You're shitting me?" asked Jen.
"Hello? Virgin ears here!"
"Mara you are anything but a virgin!" said Jen with a laugh.
"Hey I thought we agreed that I was a tease because I am a virgin!"
"You can't if you're a whore!"
"I am not!" yelled Mara.
"As much as I'm enjoying this conversation I'm afraid I have ta be interrupting." said Jack coming out of nowhere.
"Ah Captain Sparro you finally decided to grace us with your presence," said Jen.
"Aye I've come ta ask ye two lasses some questions."
"Well go ahead."
"Fist your names."
"I'm Mara Aiken and she is Jen Ryland." "Where about ye lasses live?"
"You see," started Jen. "We are from the future or maybe a different world if you really think about it."
"Now who are the crazy ones?" asked Jack.
"No it's the truth." said Mara.
"Love did you have to much ta drink?"
"No" said Mara. "I can prove it! We know everything about you and the Black Pearl and Barbossa. We know about Will Turner and Elizabeth Swan as well." The girls started going over the whole movie and along the way telling Jack about what a movie was and how he was played by an actor and other stuff like that.
"I guess I believe you two and because I'm so nice I'll let ye stay aboard the Pearl until we find away ta get ya back ta your own time." said Jack. "Until then you two will work on the Pearl."
"Like we know how to work on a boat!" said Jen.
"Can ye clean?" asked Jack.
"Yes," said Jen.
"Then you two will start by swabbing' the deck."
"Aye Captain!" said Mara.
"Shut up!" said Jen. They started washing the deck. Jen was so mad! This was no way to spend a vacation! She was pulled out of her thoughts when she heard Mara singing.
"It's a hard knock life for us, it's a hard knock life for us stead of treated we get tricked stead of kisses we get kicked it's a hard knock life!"
Jen was getting madder and madder! Mara was actually having fun cleaning a deck on a pirate ship! Plus she was singing an Annie song. What made it worse was the next line to the song Mara changed the words to fit what they were doing.
"have no idea how we got here, but for some reason we don't care. Scrubbing' decks can be real fun when you start to sing a song. It's a hard knock life!"
"Shut Up!" yelled Jen.
"No you shut up!"
"Ahh thats from Labyrinth! I love that movie!" said Jen.
"You have no power over me!"
"That movie is so good. Well except for the whole David Bowie's crotch thing!" They both started to laugh.
"Ok Mara if you are going to sing please make it a good song!"
"Alright how about this.... I'll tell you a tale of a bottom less blue and it's hey to the starboard heave ho! Look out lad a mermaid be waiting for you in mysterious fathoms below!" "Stop, Stop, Stop!" said Jen. "I hate that song too!"
"Well there is just no pleasing you is there?" Both girls just went back to cleaning wondering if they would ever get home and when that Captain would come over and let them stop cleaning.
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Ok thats the end of chapter one.... Please review..
Disclaimer.. I don't own anything but Mara and Jen and the story.
Here is a little info on the two girls....
Mara Aiken (No I didn't take the name from Clay Aiken it just so happens my mother's family name is Aiken) ~ she is short a little taller than 5'1. she has dark brown hair with brown eyes and tan skin. She is shy but very loud and weird with her friends. She likes to sing. she is 18 years old.
Jen Ryland ~ she is very tall. She has brown that can sometimes look red in light. She has blue eyes. she has pale skin. she is very outgoing likes to fight with people. she is also 18 years old.
ok now here is the first chapter......
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Mara and Jen were at Disney world. They had just graduated from high school and were on a vacation in Florida. It was their first day and they were spending it at the Magic Kingdom.
"Are you telling me you really have never been here before?" asked Mara.
"Nope, Never. I always wanted to but my family was more of a Universal Studios family."
"Well, you don't know what you've been missing!" The two girls started off with space mountain and alien encounter. They made their way to the haunted mansion, splash mountain, and big thunder railroad. They headed toward the tiki room, the jungle cruse, and pirates of the Caribbean.
"So what one do you want to go on first?" asked Mara.
"What one is more fun? And don't make me ride pirates only because you love the movie!" said Jen.
"Jen, even if the movie sucked the ride is still one of the best rides in this park!"
"Pirates it is." They walked into the line for pirates of the Caribbean to find there was no line at all. They got a boat to themselves.
"Wow, we're lucky!" said Mara. As the ride went on the girls sang along with the song.
"Wouldn't it be great if we could really go back in time to see real pirates?" asked Mara. Jen just rolled her eyes at her.
"Mara, you are stuck in a dream world!" The ride was getting close to the end and Mara noticed somethings that look different.
"Um.. Jen.. this doesn't look right." Their boat seemed to be on a different track and was heading in a different direction then the other boats.
"Mara, whats going on? This is part of the ride right? Please tell me this is part of the ride!" Their boat was now out of view of the others and they were in complete darkness.
"I wish I could!" said Mara with fear in her voice. The boat started moving really fast and was going in all directions as if it was in a storm. The girls were being splashed by what seemed to be salty sea water. Without warning the boat flipped and the girls were tossed into the surprisingly warm waters swimming for their lives. The storm seemed to be stopping and there was light coming. The girls looked around and were surprised to see an island near them.
"Look and island," yelled Jen. "Swim to it." They swam to the island and collapsed on its shores. Both girls blacked out.
The next day Mara woke up remembering everything that happened.
"Jen? Jen? Where are you?" She looked around and found Jen on the ground just a little way from her. Mara got up and ran to her. "Jen wake up."
"What? Whats going on?" Jen got up and looked around. "So it wasn't a dream?"
"Nope." They got up and started walking the island. They found out it was very small. It was soon growing dark and the girls had no idea what to do.
"Can you build a fire?" asked Jen.
"With a match. Have you got any?"
"Sorry must be in my other pair of pants."
"Great."
"Well, lets sleep on the shore, there is no way we are sleeping in those trees!" said Jen looking at the forest that was on the island. They settled down and soon fell into a deep sleep. The next morning Mara felt someone poking her. This time when she opened her eyes she was met by two beautiful brown eyes.
"I see ye finally woke up lass." Mara just looked at the man looking at her as if he was crazy. She didn't say anything. She looked and saw that Jen was still sleeping. Mara backed away from the man, who was at the moment giving her body a looking at, and went over to Jen.
"Jen, Jen I think you better get up now."
"What? You know I sleep late, not everyone can be like you and wake up early!"
"JEN!"
"What?'
"We have company." Just then a bunch of men who looked just like pirates surrounded them. The one who woke Mara up walked up to them.
"Morinin' lasses. The names Captain Jack Sparrow and who might you two be?" Both the girls looked at him then eachother and started laughing.
"What be so funny?" asked "Jack".
"Well, you just said your name is Captain Jack Sparrow." said Jen.
"You look the part but we all know that Jack Sparrow isn't real unless..wait.. oh my god are you Johnny Depp?" asked or more like screamed Mara.
"Johnny who?" asked Jack.
"This must be where Disney is filming the second Pirates of the Caribbean." said Mara.
"Listen loves, I'm Captain Jack Sparrow no lies savvy?"
"You're crazy!" said Jen but really saying it as if she was coughing. Mara started to laugh.
"Mates take them aboard the Pearl then put them in the brig (a/n did I spell that right?)." said Jack.
Mara and Jen were sitting in one cell together and were left alone. They started to get bored.
"Well..hmm.. this is fun!" said Jen.
"Hey look at it this way we traveled back in time. Maybe we'll finally have a real adventure!" said Mara as if this was the best thing ever to happen to them.
"Shut up!"
"Why don't you make me!"
"Bring it bitch!" They both started laughing.
"Fake fighting sure makes time go faster!" said Jen.
"It has been like two minutes."
"You're shitting me?" asked Jen.
"Hello? Virgin ears here!"
"Mara you are anything but a virgin!" said Jen with a laugh.
"Hey I thought we agreed that I was a tease because I am a virgin!"
"You can't if you're a whore!"
"I am not!" yelled Mara.
"As much as I'm enjoying this conversation I'm afraid I have ta be interrupting." said Jack coming out of nowhere.
"Ah Captain Sparro you finally decided to grace us with your presence," said Jen.
"Aye I've come ta ask ye two lasses some questions."
"Well go ahead."
"Fist your names."
"I'm Mara Aiken and she is Jen Ryland." "Where about ye lasses live?"
"You see," started Jen. "We are from the future or maybe a different world if you really think about it."
"Now who are the crazy ones?" asked Jack.
"No it's the truth." said Mara.
"Love did you have to much ta drink?"
"No" said Mara. "I can prove it! We know everything about you and the Black Pearl and Barbossa. We know about Will Turner and Elizabeth Swan as well." The girls started going over the whole movie and along the way telling Jack about what a movie was and how he was played by an actor and other stuff like that.
"I guess I believe you two and because I'm so nice I'll let ye stay aboard the Pearl until we find away ta get ya back ta your own time." said Jack. "Until then you two will work on the Pearl."
"Like we know how to work on a boat!" said Jen.
"Can ye clean?" asked Jack.
"Yes," said Jen.
"Then you two will start by swabbing' the deck."
"Aye Captain!" said Mara.
"Shut up!" said Jen. They started washing the deck. Jen was so mad! This was no way to spend a vacation! She was pulled out of her thoughts when she heard Mara singing.
"It's a hard knock life for us, it's a hard knock life for us stead of treated we get tricked stead of kisses we get kicked it's a hard knock life!"
Jen was getting madder and madder! Mara was actually having fun cleaning a deck on a pirate ship! Plus she was singing an Annie song. What made it worse was the next line to the song Mara changed the words to fit what they were doing.
"have no idea how we got here, but for some reason we don't care. Scrubbing' decks can be real fun when you start to sing a song. It's a hard knock life!"
"Shut Up!" yelled Jen.
"No you shut up!"
"Ahh thats from Labyrinth! I love that movie!" said Jen.
"You have no power over me!"
"That movie is so good. Well except for the whole David Bowie's crotch thing!" They both started to laugh.
"Ok Mara if you are going to sing please make it a good song!"
"Alright how about this.... I'll tell you a tale of a bottom less blue and it's hey to the starboard heave ho! Look out lad a mermaid be waiting for you in mysterious fathoms below!" "Stop, Stop, Stop!" said Jen. "I hate that song too!"
"Well there is just no pleasing you is there?" Both girls just went back to cleaning wondering if they would ever get home and when that Captain would come over and let them stop cleaning.
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Ok thats the end of chapter one.... Please review..