Shattered thoughts!

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From The moment I met you
I knew it was true
That I never met anyone quite like you,
Golden orbs you call eyes
Allways melt my heart to my surprise!
Rude,arrogant,kind and caring too,
Your personality was just ment for you!
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I have loved every moment we spent together,
When you care.....
But at times I wonder if your really there!
I know that she means a lot to you
But is there any room in your heart to spare?
I pour out feelings out to you ,
But yet it feels like you don't even care!
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Do you not like it when you hold me close!
I ask this because you still chase after a ghost
You will allways care deeply for each other
That I can understand.
But man why must it be so hard at times?
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But yet there is still something you need to know
I will allways love you, cant you see?
But you must love me for only me!
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This poem was about kagome expressing her feelings toward inuyasha !

this is my first poem and I want to know what you guys think about it .
so please send me reviews!
Also I want to know if I should continue writing pomes. So send me a review
to tell me what you think.