See people I have updated, as promised. But last chapter, I forgot the footnotes so I'll put them here:
{1} can't curse because of rating, so be creative
{2} she set the book down but not where Tara could get it
Anyway for anyone who is still reading, onward, to chapter 5!
In the field where the fight took place
The two fighting teenagers turned to the small fire demon still sprawled on the ground. Kurama checked his friend's pulse, only to find it slowing. "The poison has gotten into his bloodstream, so his body was using his spirit energy to keep him alive. But the spirit power ran out, so it's been eating at his life energy," he informed the group grimly. "Unless someone gives him some power, he'll die." The group was devastated at the terrible news. Each member of the group tried to give some spirit energy, but apparently the after effects of the spell kept them from using their energy. Mitsu was the only one hadn't tried to help Hiei yet, but this wasn't because she didn't /want/ to help rather, because she was still weary from the battle.
She didn't want her favorite character to die, so she placed her hands over Hiei's well-muscled chest and allowed her spirit power to flow into his body. After a moment or two of this, some color returned to the fire demon's face and his breathing was slowly returning to normal. Mitsu smiled knowing he was going to be ok, before she fainted from exhaustion due to the rough fight and helping Hiei. She fell forward, her head landing gently on Hiei's chest. Kuwabara suddenly started snickering and then said, "I wonder what Shorty's gonna do when he wakes up." The other two laughed at the prospect of Hiei waking up finding an eighth-grader's head resting on his chest.
Kurama and Yusuke were having a staring contest, while Kuwabara refereed, having already lost against both of them when Hiei stirred. He slowly opened his eyes, and found himself staring at the starry night sky. The jaganshi began to sit up but felt an unnatural weight on his upper body. From his halfway sitting position he looked down to find Mitsu's head resting comfortably on his chest. Not wanting to wake her, he gently set her head on the ground beside him.
"What is the meaning of this? I wake up and find her asleep using me as a pillow!" he shouted irritably. The other three boys at first they laughed, but then Kurama explained, "Mitsu passed out while giving you her energy to keep you alive." Hiei was at a loss for words at first but then asked, "Why didn't you help me? You three are much more powerful than she is." Yusuke answered, "We couldn't. It must've been a side effect of the spell." Hiei's only reply was "Hn"
"Let's get going," Hiei said standing up, brushing himself off. "Hiei, what about Mitsu?" Kurama inquired, gesturing to the unconscious girl. "Let me guess, you want me to carry her?" Hiei replied. "Well yea, since you move the fastest and won't be slowed down by her, and 'cause it's your fault she's knocked out." Yusuke responded. "Hn, fine." Was all Hiei said as he walked over to the knocked out girl. And Kurama went to go get the spell book, which was near Tara's corpse.
As the group was about to leave Kuwabara asked, "Wait, do you guys even know where we are. Or where we're going?" Kurama said, "Of course we're in the demon world. And a portal to the spirit world isn't too far away." "Oh" was Kuwabara's reply. Hiei sped ahead with the unconscious Mitsu in his arms as the other three tried to keep up with his incredible pace.
Soon the group reached the swirling vortex of the portal that would take them to spirit world. The group hopped into the portal and reappeared in Koenma's office.
In the Reikai
"Great job guys!" Koenma congratulated as Hiei set Mitsu down carefully against a wall. He then sat next to her. Koenma was talking but Hiei wasn't listening, he was trying to figure out how Mitsu, a normal human girl, had defeated Tara. 'That doesn't make sense, if Tara imprisoned us, how did Mitsu win? All she had was a dagger?' Hiei thought confusedly. Then Koenma called ogre over to put the book back in the vault. Yusuke who was also perplexed at how Mitsu had defeated Tara asked, "Hey pacifier-breath how'd Mitsu win? I mean, all she had was a dagger." At this question Hiei paid very close attention. Koenma answered, "Why don't you watch?"
Koenma pressed a few buttons on his remote control and the tv screen showed the battle from right after when Mitsu took the spell book. The Reikai Tantei watched closely as the battle played itself out, again. They saw themselves fall at the hands of the spell, Hiei being the first. They then watched as Mitsu flipped through the spell book, only to find she couldn't read it. Then how she charged at Tara. And how Tara disappeared and returned, and then the crucial moment when the dagger broke. But then they saw how she won, by summoning her spirit energy and stabbing the sorceress with the scythes{2} she created.
"Oh I see now," said Yusuke understanding. But Hiei was still confused how had she summoned her energy. She was just a weak ningen. He decided to ask Koenma about it. "Koenma, how did she summon the energy?" Koenma wasn't sure of this himself and shrugged. "You'll have to ask her, but don't wake her up she's still tired," Koenma began. "I think you guys should bring her home and just hang out at her house until she wakes up." Kuwabara then said, "But the day's over, we don't have to hang out with her anymore." Kurama replied, "The demon world has a different 'time zone', its only noon in New York." "Oh" was Kuwabara's reply. Before the group could exit the office, Koenma said, "Oh yea guys, I forgot to mention, since Mitsu has some interesting powers, she's going to train with Genkai{1}. And after that she's going to join you as the 5th detective."
And that's a wrap, sorry it's shorter/worse than last time but, I'm really tired today, and have stuff to do. And I'm not going to forget the footnotes.
{1} Post dark tournament
{2} Forgot to mention last chapter, the scythes are like Kuronue's from Poltergeist Report.
Ok I shall try and update soon, like next weekend. So basically, I'll try and update every weekend. Anyways, sorry for the confusion. My sister's pen name is Morphius not chaos.
And now for review responses.
colddarkness69: Thank you for reviewing. And anyone can inspire someone. But the reason I put the death thing like that was cause it was creepy. Creepy is good. Once again thanks!
AmayaSaria: Thank you for reviewing, but you should update more often.
Disturbedvixen: Ok I spelled it right because I'm special, no actually I just looked and copied down. Anyway thanks for faithfully waiting the whole three months and reviewing, and no I did not say there was a new story, I said I FINALLY /updated/ my story. Once again thank you. And I hope you liked my new chapter.
Tyedye/Rin: Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you like that chapter. And I updated!
jettwolf90: Thank you for reviewing, and I will tell you when the Hiei shirt gets here, but that may not be for a while. Anyway, I hope you like the new chapter.
Morphius: Bad grammar, hn, I fixed the thing with the chaos penname.
{1} can't curse because of rating, so be creative
{2} she set the book down but not where Tara could get it
Anyway for anyone who is still reading, onward, to chapter 5!
In the field where the fight took place
The two fighting teenagers turned to the small fire demon still sprawled on the ground. Kurama checked his friend's pulse, only to find it slowing. "The poison has gotten into his bloodstream, so his body was using his spirit energy to keep him alive. But the spirit power ran out, so it's been eating at his life energy," he informed the group grimly. "Unless someone gives him some power, he'll die." The group was devastated at the terrible news. Each member of the group tried to give some spirit energy, but apparently the after effects of the spell kept them from using their energy. Mitsu was the only one hadn't tried to help Hiei yet, but this wasn't because she didn't /want/ to help rather, because she was still weary from the battle.
She didn't want her favorite character to die, so she placed her hands over Hiei's well-muscled chest and allowed her spirit power to flow into his body. After a moment or two of this, some color returned to the fire demon's face and his breathing was slowly returning to normal. Mitsu smiled knowing he was going to be ok, before she fainted from exhaustion due to the rough fight and helping Hiei. She fell forward, her head landing gently on Hiei's chest. Kuwabara suddenly started snickering and then said, "I wonder what Shorty's gonna do when he wakes up." The other two laughed at the prospect of Hiei waking up finding an eighth-grader's head resting on his chest.
Kurama and Yusuke were having a staring contest, while Kuwabara refereed, having already lost against both of them when Hiei stirred. He slowly opened his eyes, and found himself staring at the starry night sky. The jaganshi began to sit up but felt an unnatural weight on his upper body. From his halfway sitting position he looked down to find Mitsu's head resting comfortably on his chest. Not wanting to wake her, he gently set her head on the ground beside him.
"What is the meaning of this? I wake up and find her asleep using me as a pillow!" he shouted irritably. The other three boys at first they laughed, but then Kurama explained, "Mitsu passed out while giving you her energy to keep you alive." Hiei was at a loss for words at first but then asked, "Why didn't you help me? You three are much more powerful than she is." Yusuke answered, "We couldn't. It must've been a side effect of the spell." Hiei's only reply was "Hn"
"Let's get going," Hiei said standing up, brushing himself off. "Hiei, what about Mitsu?" Kurama inquired, gesturing to the unconscious girl. "Let me guess, you want me to carry her?" Hiei replied. "Well yea, since you move the fastest and won't be slowed down by her, and 'cause it's your fault she's knocked out." Yusuke responded. "Hn, fine." Was all Hiei said as he walked over to the knocked out girl. And Kurama went to go get the spell book, which was near Tara's corpse.
As the group was about to leave Kuwabara asked, "Wait, do you guys even know where we are. Or where we're going?" Kurama said, "Of course we're in the demon world. And a portal to the spirit world isn't too far away." "Oh" was Kuwabara's reply. Hiei sped ahead with the unconscious Mitsu in his arms as the other three tried to keep up with his incredible pace.
Soon the group reached the swirling vortex of the portal that would take them to spirit world. The group hopped into the portal and reappeared in Koenma's office.
In the Reikai
"Great job guys!" Koenma congratulated as Hiei set Mitsu down carefully against a wall. He then sat next to her. Koenma was talking but Hiei wasn't listening, he was trying to figure out how Mitsu, a normal human girl, had defeated Tara. 'That doesn't make sense, if Tara imprisoned us, how did Mitsu win? All she had was a dagger?' Hiei thought confusedly. Then Koenma called ogre over to put the book back in the vault. Yusuke who was also perplexed at how Mitsu had defeated Tara asked, "Hey pacifier-breath how'd Mitsu win? I mean, all she had was a dagger." At this question Hiei paid very close attention. Koenma answered, "Why don't you watch?"
Koenma pressed a few buttons on his remote control and the tv screen showed the battle from right after when Mitsu took the spell book. The Reikai Tantei watched closely as the battle played itself out, again. They saw themselves fall at the hands of the spell, Hiei being the first. They then watched as Mitsu flipped through the spell book, only to find she couldn't read it. Then how she charged at Tara. And how Tara disappeared and returned, and then the crucial moment when the dagger broke. But then they saw how she won, by summoning her spirit energy and stabbing the sorceress with the scythes{2} she created.
"Oh I see now," said Yusuke understanding. But Hiei was still confused how had she summoned her energy. She was just a weak ningen. He decided to ask Koenma about it. "Koenma, how did she summon the energy?" Koenma wasn't sure of this himself and shrugged. "You'll have to ask her, but don't wake her up she's still tired," Koenma began. "I think you guys should bring her home and just hang out at her house until she wakes up." Kuwabara then said, "But the day's over, we don't have to hang out with her anymore." Kurama replied, "The demon world has a different 'time zone', its only noon in New York." "Oh" was Kuwabara's reply. Before the group could exit the office, Koenma said, "Oh yea guys, I forgot to mention, since Mitsu has some interesting powers, she's going to train with Genkai{1}. And after that she's going to join you as the 5th detective."
And that's a wrap, sorry it's shorter/worse than last time but, I'm really tired today, and have stuff to do. And I'm not going to forget the footnotes.
{1} Post dark tournament
{2} Forgot to mention last chapter, the scythes are like Kuronue's from Poltergeist Report.
Ok I shall try and update soon, like next weekend. So basically, I'll try and update every weekend. Anyways, sorry for the confusion. My sister's pen name is Morphius not chaos.
And now for review responses.
colddarkness69: Thank you for reviewing. And anyone can inspire someone. But the reason I put the death thing like that was cause it was creepy. Creepy is good. Once again thanks!
AmayaSaria: Thank you for reviewing, but you should update more often.
Disturbedvixen: Ok I spelled it right because I'm special, no actually I just looked and copied down. Anyway thanks for faithfully waiting the whole three months and reviewing, and no I did not say there was a new story, I said I FINALLY /updated/ my story. Once again thank you. And I hope you liked my new chapter.
Tyedye/Rin: Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you like that chapter. And I updated!
jettwolf90: Thank you for reviewing, and I will tell you when the Hiei shirt gets here, but that may not be for a while. Anyway, I hope you like the new chapter.
Morphius: Bad grammar, hn, I fixed the thing with the chaos penname.