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Author's Note:
I lied! I'm terribly sorry, but I've decided to write more. I would like to clear something up though; First off, this is my story, at least the general story line is. This is based off of JK's brilliant story Harry Potter. Now I know that it's not completely identical to her story, but that's the idea of a fan fiction. And I've also had some complaints about my characters and I'm here to say that I don't care! Just like I don't approve of all those Mary Sue characters, I won't change it because it's too angsty. The idea of making a character like that is because of the general story line. Some people like to write stories with lots of drama. I happen to be one of those people; I hate drama in my life, but love it on paper. I'm sorry if this has offended anyone, but I just needed to explain this before you read on. Second, I know this is going against my entire 'one shot story' deal, but someone said something to me that irritated me, but intrigued me at the same. So I'm fixing that, this very minute... ^_^. Sorry if this sucks, I'm trying to write more and get better.
Ash.
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The next day was a jumble of different emotions, colliding with such force against each other, it could make someone scream. By the end of the day, Enid was ready to. Oh, but everything started out decent. She woke up with a smile on her face and dressed alone, as her roommates had left early. It was a Saturday and she found herself humming to herself as she fixed her demented looking hairstyle. She had thought that at first, but on second thought, it rather fitted her. She tucked her bangs behind her ears while several wisps fell around her face. She threw on a regular black shirt fitted with the slogan, 'Sweetwater' written across the chest and a baggy pair of ripped jeans.
The common room was empty as she made her way down, so she headed straight for Great Hall, slightly nervous. She hadn't talked to Remus after she left the room, and wasn't sure how he had taken it. But she could remember the smile on his face, and figured it couldn't have been that bad.
The drama started before she even reached the Great Hall. The lingering smell of breakfast made her stomach turn in anticipation. However, she nearly ran straight into Sirius in the hurry.
"Excuse me," Enid said, trying to move out of his way.
He held out his arm, preventing her from moving in any direction. "We need to talk."
"Another time, perhaps?" Enid replied, "I'm hungry."
"Listen, I'm sorry for never talking to you till now," Sirius continued. "It's just that, you've been scaring me sometimes. I thought you might hex me if I said anything."
"Oh, and what a smart move you made instead, waiting till the last minute. I must say, that is an improvement," Enid laughed harshly.
"Will you listen to me, please?" Sirius sighed.
"No," Enid said simply. "Why should I? When have you ever given me the time of day? This is so like you Sirius Black. You would never go out of the way for anyone but yourself. Now just leave."
Enid moved to storm off and was surprised that she slipped by easily, but stopped in anger at what he said next.
"Don't get pissed at me, just because I got out of that hell house before you did," Sirius called.
Enid turned sharply to see him leaning against the wall, grinning. "You're a real asshole sometimes, you know that?" With that she stalked into the Great Hall, very irritated and extremely hungry. She went to her table and indulged herself into some food before going over to the Gryffindor table and sitting next to her best friend.
There was something of an awkward atmosphere that hung in the air. Lily smiled casually at her, but she read the look on her face. Even James looked a little let down, even though his arm rested on Lily's shoulder.
"Did someone die?" Enid said, finally.
"No, not really," Lily said.
Enid nodded. "Okay, be that way. Where's Remus at?"
"Oh, I think he's still sleeping up in the dormitory," James said quickly.
"Okay," Enid said, eyeing them oddly.
James smiled slightly at his best friend as he strolled in and sat across from Enid. Sirius wiped away a strand of hair from his face and she could hear the distant sighs from across the room and felt disgusted.
"I still need to talk to you," Sirius said.
"Terribly sorry, I don't need to," Enid replied.
"It's about last night," Sirius went on, as if she hadn't said anything.
"And what about it Sirius? Are you going to ask for my forgiveness or some crap like that and try buddy, buddy with me?" Enid snapped. Lily coughed slightly and Enid turned quickly towards her, "What? I know something is going on, and you won't say anything. So get over it and let it out."
"No, I'm not. I wanted to tell you that I don't approve of you and Remus," Sirius said, casually.
"Good for you," Enid said, and started to get up from the table.
"You two are too different, Enid. You don't understand, you'll only get hurt," Sirius pressed on.
"I'm glad you're so suddenly concerned," Enid yelled backwards as strolled off.
She was thoroughly pissed now. How did he have the right to treat her like that? To walk around like he had control over people's emotions. He had no control if she chose to like Remus and likewise with him. Somehow, she knew something was, and pondered it, the entire way to the lake.
She spend the majority of the day sitting out under a willow tree by the lake, watching everyone else soaking up the sunlight and enjoying themselves. She was hit with a sudden sadness that she couldn't explain. A bad feeling was lingering in the pit of her stomach. She heard a high pitched squeal laugh in the distance and turned her head to see Lily being tickled and chased by James. They parted with a peck on the cheek as she walked over and sat down next to Enid.
"Have you been here all day?" Lily inquired.
"I suppose so," Enid replied, casually.
"But, that's too much sunlight for our little Enid to handle," Lily cried, sarcastically.
Enid playfully shoved her as she screamed again and they began to playfully fight with each other. It was almost like old times, the two of them hanging out, unaware of their surroundings. In fact, Remus was making his way towards the two girls, beginning to rethink his coming at the sight of them laughing. The closer he got, the more he wanted to just turn around and leave her in perfect bliss. But happiness was only temporary; at least that's what he told himself. Nothing was permanent in this life, 'especially with me,' he reminded himself.
Enid had finally given up and was lying on her back in the grass, staring up at the clear blue sky. She closed her eyes and laughed gently, "Imagine if everything could be like this."
"Life would be great," Lily replied. "Ah, clouds are beginning to set in."
Enid opened her eyes and saw not only the speckles of clouds in the distance, but a familiar face. He was leaning over her, his lips parted in a small grin, amber eyes sparkling but clouded slightly with something else, something Enid couldn't make out.
"Hello," Remus said.
"Oh, hi," Enid said, taken aback.
Enid still sat in the grass, not sure what to do or to say now. She had thought about it all morning, but now everything seemed to just fade away. Lily was leaning up against the tree, suddenly stood up and cleared her throat. "Well, I have to be going; I'm supposed to be meeting James right about now." They both watched as she ran off the other way, slowing her pace as she got closer to the castle.
Remus lowered himself and sat down where Lily had just gotten up from. He leaned his head against the wood and breathed in deep. Enid sat still in the grass, she could feel something in her stomach, and it bothered her slightly but made her smile at the same time.
Remus opened his mouth several times to speak, but then closed it again. The words he planned to say kept jumbling around in his mind, causing him to rethink the entire thing, but it had to be done. "Enid," Remus finally said.
"Hm?" Enid replied, tipping her head back into the grass more to look at him.
"We... we can't do this," Remus said, finally. Now that it was out, he wished he had never said it.
The feeling in Enid's stomach seemed to grow worse, as if something was trying to escape, fluttering around. "What do you mean?"
"I mean what happened yesterday, when you, er," Remus tried to speak.
"Kissed you?" Enid answered.
"Yeah," Remus said. He seemed to be at loss for words, once again.
Enid suddenly sat up; Remus looked into her eyes and saw that they were raging. The grey in her eyes were flaring, forcing the gentle blue in her eyes to decrease. "You talked to my brother, didn't you?"
"What? Well, yeah, this morning," Remus said, confused. "But I don't see what he has to do with this."
"Bullshit, Remus. This is all bullshit," Enid snapped. She turned on her heel and stormed off towards the castle.
"Believe me Enid, I would tell you if I could," Remus said to where Enid once sat.
I lied! I'm terribly sorry, but I've decided to write more. I would like to clear something up though; First off, this is my story, at least the general story line is. This is based off of JK's brilliant story Harry Potter. Now I know that it's not completely identical to her story, but that's the idea of a fan fiction. And I've also had some complaints about my characters and I'm here to say that I don't care! Just like I don't approve of all those Mary Sue characters, I won't change it because it's too angsty. The idea of making a character like that is because of the general story line. Some people like to write stories with lots of drama. I happen to be one of those people; I hate drama in my life, but love it on paper. I'm sorry if this has offended anyone, but I just needed to explain this before you read on. Second, I know this is going against my entire 'one shot story' deal, but someone said something to me that irritated me, but intrigued me at the same. So I'm fixing that, this very minute... ^_^. Sorry if this sucks, I'm trying to write more and get better.
Ash.
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The next day was a jumble of different emotions, colliding with such force against each other, it could make someone scream. By the end of the day, Enid was ready to. Oh, but everything started out decent. She woke up with a smile on her face and dressed alone, as her roommates had left early. It was a Saturday and she found herself humming to herself as she fixed her demented looking hairstyle. She had thought that at first, but on second thought, it rather fitted her. She tucked her bangs behind her ears while several wisps fell around her face. She threw on a regular black shirt fitted with the slogan, 'Sweetwater' written across the chest and a baggy pair of ripped jeans.
The common room was empty as she made her way down, so she headed straight for Great Hall, slightly nervous. She hadn't talked to Remus after she left the room, and wasn't sure how he had taken it. But she could remember the smile on his face, and figured it couldn't have been that bad.
The drama started before she even reached the Great Hall. The lingering smell of breakfast made her stomach turn in anticipation. However, she nearly ran straight into Sirius in the hurry.
"Excuse me," Enid said, trying to move out of his way.
He held out his arm, preventing her from moving in any direction. "We need to talk."
"Another time, perhaps?" Enid replied, "I'm hungry."
"Listen, I'm sorry for never talking to you till now," Sirius continued. "It's just that, you've been scaring me sometimes. I thought you might hex me if I said anything."
"Oh, and what a smart move you made instead, waiting till the last minute. I must say, that is an improvement," Enid laughed harshly.
"Will you listen to me, please?" Sirius sighed.
"No," Enid said simply. "Why should I? When have you ever given me the time of day? This is so like you Sirius Black. You would never go out of the way for anyone but yourself. Now just leave."
Enid moved to storm off and was surprised that she slipped by easily, but stopped in anger at what he said next.
"Don't get pissed at me, just because I got out of that hell house before you did," Sirius called.
Enid turned sharply to see him leaning against the wall, grinning. "You're a real asshole sometimes, you know that?" With that she stalked into the Great Hall, very irritated and extremely hungry. She went to her table and indulged herself into some food before going over to the Gryffindor table and sitting next to her best friend.
There was something of an awkward atmosphere that hung in the air. Lily smiled casually at her, but she read the look on her face. Even James looked a little let down, even though his arm rested on Lily's shoulder.
"Did someone die?" Enid said, finally.
"No, not really," Lily said.
Enid nodded. "Okay, be that way. Where's Remus at?"
"Oh, I think he's still sleeping up in the dormitory," James said quickly.
"Okay," Enid said, eyeing them oddly.
James smiled slightly at his best friend as he strolled in and sat across from Enid. Sirius wiped away a strand of hair from his face and she could hear the distant sighs from across the room and felt disgusted.
"I still need to talk to you," Sirius said.
"Terribly sorry, I don't need to," Enid replied.
"It's about last night," Sirius went on, as if she hadn't said anything.
"And what about it Sirius? Are you going to ask for my forgiveness or some crap like that and try buddy, buddy with me?" Enid snapped. Lily coughed slightly and Enid turned quickly towards her, "What? I know something is going on, and you won't say anything. So get over it and let it out."
"No, I'm not. I wanted to tell you that I don't approve of you and Remus," Sirius said, casually.
"Good for you," Enid said, and started to get up from the table.
"You two are too different, Enid. You don't understand, you'll only get hurt," Sirius pressed on.
"I'm glad you're so suddenly concerned," Enid yelled backwards as strolled off.
She was thoroughly pissed now. How did he have the right to treat her like that? To walk around like he had control over people's emotions. He had no control if she chose to like Remus and likewise with him. Somehow, she knew something was, and pondered it, the entire way to the lake.
She spend the majority of the day sitting out under a willow tree by the lake, watching everyone else soaking up the sunlight and enjoying themselves. She was hit with a sudden sadness that she couldn't explain. A bad feeling was lingering in the pit of her stomach. She heard a high pitched squeal laugh in the distance and turned her head to see Lily being tickled and chased by James. They parted with a peck on the cheek as she walked over and sat down next to Enid.
"Have you been here all day?" Lily inquired.
"I suppose so," Enid replied, casually.
"But, that's too much sunlight for our little Enid to handle," Lily cried, sarcastically.
Enid playfully shoved her as she screamed again and they began to playfully fight with each other. It was almost like old times, the two of them hanging out, unaware of their surroundings. In fact, Remus was making his way towards the two girls, beginning to rethink his coming at the sight of them laughing. The closer he got, the more he wanted to just turn around and leave her in perfect bliss. But happiness was only temporary; at least that's what he told himself. Nothing was permanent in this life, 'especially with me,' he reminded himself.
Enid had finally given up and was lying on her back in the grass, staring up at the clear blue sky. She closed her eyes and laughed gently, "Imagine if everything could be like this."
"Life would be great," Lily replied. "Ah, clouds are beginning to set in."
Enid opened her eyes and saw not only the speckles of clouds in the distance, but a familiar face. He was leaning over her, his lips parted in a small grin, amber eyes sparkling but clouded slightly with something else, something Enid couldn't make out.
"Hello," Remus said.
"Oh, hi," Enid said, taken aback.
Enid still sat in the grass, not sure what to do or to say now. She had thought about it all morning, but now everything seemed to just fade away. Lily was leaning up against the tree, suddenly stood up and cleared her throat. "Well, I have to be going; I'm supposed to be meeting James right about now." They both watched as she ran off the other way, slowing her pace as she got closer to the castle.
Remus lowered himself and sat down where Lily had just gotten up from. He leaned his head against the wood and breathed in deep. Enid sat still in the grass, she could feel something in her stomach, and it bothered her slightly but made her smile at the same time.
Remus opened his mouth several times to speak, but then closed it again. The words he planned to say kept jumbling around in his mind, causing him to rethink the entire thing, but it had to be done. "Enid," Remus finally said.
"Hm?" Enid replied, tipping her head back into the grass more to look at him.
"We... we can't do this," Remus said, finally. Now that it was out, he wished he had never said it.
The feeling in Enid's stomach seemed to grow worse, as if something was trying to escape, fluttering around. "What do you mean?"
"I mean what happened yesterday, when you, er," Remus tried to speak.
"Kissed you?" Enid answered.
"Yeah," Remus said. He seemed to be at loss for words, once again.
Enid suddenly sat up; Remus looked into her eyes and saw that they were raging. The grey in her eyes were flaring, forcing the gentle blue in her eyes to decrease. "You talked to my brother, didn't you?"
"What? Well, yeah, this morning," Remus said, confused. "But I don't see what he has to do with this."
"Bullshit, Remus. This is all bullshit," Enid snapped. She turned on her heel and stormed off towards the castle.
"Believe me Enid, I would tell you if I could," Remus said to where Enid once sat.