Aw hey thanks to my first reviewers for this story!!
Rogue! (Official member to the Review Crew) And
Introducing!! Lol
Jacob!!
And I just got a review from SugaMama
And Renia
Aha Oh My God as I'm writing this "I keep hearing you got mail" and new reviews are pouring in! so I keep changing my thank you's lol
Thanks you Four!
I had no intentions of updating so quickly but hey why not? I mean I do have some free time on my well and willing hands so why not?
***
"Well!" asked Sirius impatiently, "What are we waiting for?" Remus replied, while rolling his eyes, "Sirius, we kinda needa pack!" "no," insisted Sirius, "we just go out and buy stuff!'' James interjected, "yeah, but some of us, like me! have their stupid jealous wife, sitting at home, wasting ALL my money!" he groaned dramatically. "he has a point, you know!" peter told them seriously.
4 hours later
"So" said Sirius frowning. " I was foolish enough to imply that you knew how to get to his place eh Lupin?"
"Now see here" growled Remus in-between clenched teeth. He grouped the wall that was concealing the entrance to the vacation spot. "It-has-to be here-somewhere" he muttered distractedly as he continued patting the wall madly.
"Maybe you have to tap it with your wand" offered up James shrugging. He had a mild concern spread on his face and after one look from Remus, he retreated to a near by box to rest upon.
"I-bet-" said Peter enthusiastically. "You have to say some super secret password!! Like on That episode of Merlins magical mischief of miraculously monotonous mayhem-Where Merlin was in a tight situation and then WHAM ZAM ZOWIE he said the magic word and he was saved!!"
Peter mused on "I bet it some real cool word like hmm Calabunga! That's what Merlins catch phrase is you know?"
"Look you dung for brains" snarled Sirius loosing his temper with the more than enthusiastic Peter. "Remus's parents are INTELLECTUALS! They would never watch such a mindless show as of Merlins magical mischief of miraculously monotonous mayhem!! And no way in hell would they ever say CalaBunga for Christ sakes"
but he was cut off-
The wall started to tremble viciously. One by one the brick will separated and left a narrow path. Dust filled the air, filling the lungs of the young men. The wall lead to a pitch black hall way.
"Well I'll be" murmured Remus placing his hand upon his chin in awe.
Peter let out a triumphant whoop and punched the air with his pudgy fist. Very rarely was Peter ever right. He was the member of the group who always needed protection but always strived for the attention. He had no special charm like James Charisma like Sirius or genuine sincerity like Remus. He was just Peter nothing more and nothing less.
"How would you like to kiss his ass now Sirius?" teased James "Would you like to bend over or have you sit and him stand?"
This comment earned James a rough playful punch in the arm and malicious glare from his best mate.
"Moving right along then" said Remus clapping his hands together hastily.
"Right" said Sirius and James in unison moving towards the pathway.
"Lumous" murmured Remus and the end of his wand lit up with a vibrant teal.
Hunching over the marauders traveled through the small crawl place, beating branches and vines that stood in their path. After fifteen minutes of silent traveling only heavy breathing could be heard being exhaled from the Marauders.
"I'm tired of all this crawling" whined Peter
"don't worry your little head about it, were not enjoying this anymore then you are" huffed Sirius while pushing a rather large plant from his face.
"just relax" said Remus kindly. "we're only five minutes away now
"five minutes my ass" seethed Sirius as he crouched out of the crawl place and began dusting himself off.
"well it's rather hard, to know how far you are from some place when you only have wand light" snapped Remus.
The beach was simply extravagant. The sky was clear and a rich blue color. The sea breeze gently would graze your cheek and make you smile from it warmth. Laughter and joy wafted in the air. The Marauders stood there mezmerorzed by mother nature's beauty at it's complete best. The warmth entranced them and made them feel so light and happy.
"Remus??, Remus Lupin is that you?" screeched a curvy Blonde from the other side of the beach.
"damn" purred Sirius as he did his typical inspection.
"Patience York" murmured Remus as he smiled into her embrace.
"it's been so long since ive seen you" said Remus chuckling
" I know too long" said Patience giggling.
Patience nervously tucked her blonde locks behind her ear and fidgeted with her leg in the sand "so." she murmured.
"you look fabulous love, honestly you've completely changed you've lost so much weight it's remarkable. If I didn't just have my heart broken you know I'd be all over you" said Remus was a suave smile.
Patience laughed apprectivly " The last time we saw each other rem, I we were 12 and I weighed 200 pounds!!!"
"dear lord" said Sirius quickly rebounding by covering it with a cough
"So" said Sirius recovering" Talking about being Single, I'm single your hot lets go get wet" he smiled broadly and wrapped his arm around the curly blonde.
"Look buddy, I'm not some toy to play with, your not my type quite frankly I find nothing attractive about you. You're the wheeling and dealing type The one night standers and I don't need that. The tall dark and handsome. The perfect at quidditch heart breaking guy that everyone hates to love and loves to hate!" Patience seethed as she struck Sirius across the face.
A loud snap filled the air.
"Rejection" said James chuckling
ew yea I know! I hate when Sirius hooks up with people it's just wrong! Lol So I had to make a strong will character to kind of put his sexiness in it's place. I hope you guys enjoyed this chapter. I started writing it a couple days ago hoping to post it then but alas that never happened. SO here I am not with this I wish it was a tad long but inspiration fails me and I don't wish to write complete crap just to fill up the page.
Not my style. I'm hoping to get more reviews on this I received four already which was amazing because it was all in the first day! Which I'm so very happy about!. I wish this to be another success maybe hopefully like intolerable cruelty?
Cait and I are working for ya and we hope you like this! So please drop us a line and tell us how we are doing!
Even add anything-constructive crit because it is sooo very helpful. I know I will have loads of grammatical errors. That just is not my strong spot! And no matter what I still can't seem to get it all right lol!
A saw a **great** author do this so I'm dittoing her idea!
My Immortal By Evanescence
I'm so tired of being here
Supressed by all my childish fears
And if you have to leave
I wish that you would just leave
Cause your presence still lingers here
And it won't leave me alone
These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time can not erase
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you screamed I'd fight away all of your fears
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me
You used to captivate me by your resonating mind
Now I'm bound by the life you left behind
Your face it haunts my once pleasant dreams
Your voice it chased away all the sanity in me
These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time can not erase
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you scream I'd fight away all of your fears
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me
I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
But though you're still with me
I've been alone all along
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you screamed I'd fight away all of your fears
I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me
PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rogue! (Official member to the Review Crew) And
Introducing!! Lol
Jacob!!
And I just got a review from SugaMama
And Renia
Aha Oh My God as I'm writing this "I keep hearing you got mail" and new reviews are pouring in! so I keep changing my thank you's lol
Thanks you Four!
I had no intentions of updating so quickly but hey why not? I mean I do have some free time on my well and willing hands so why not?
***
"Well!" asked Sirius impatiently, "What are we waiting for?" Remus replied, while rolling his eyes, "Sirius, we kinda needa pack!" "no," insisted Sirius, "we just go out and buy stuff!'' James interjected, "yeah, but some of us, like me! have their stupid jealous wife, sitting at home, wasting ALL my money!" he groaned dramatically. "he has a point, you know!" peter told them seriously.
4 hours later
"So" said Sirius frowning. " I was foolish enough to imply that you knew how to get to his place eh Lupin?"
"Now see here" growled Remus in-between clenched teeth. He grouped the wall that was concealing the entrance to the vacation spot. "It-has-to be here-somewhere" he muttered distractedly as he continued patting the wall madly.
"Maybe you have to tap it with your wand" offered up James shrugging. He had a mild concern spread on his face and after one look from Remus, he retreated to a near by box to rest upon.
"I-bet-" said Peter enthusiastically. "You have to say some super secret password!! Like on That episode of Merlins magical mischief of miraculously monotonous mayhem-Where Merlin was in a tight situation and then WHAM ZAM ZOWIE he said the magic word and he was saved!!"
Peter mused on "I bet it some real cool word like hmm Calabunga! That's what Merlins catch phrase is you know?"
"Look you dung for brains" snarled Sirius loosing his temper with the more than enthusiastic Peter. "Remus's parents are INTELLECTUALS! They would never watch such a mindless show as of Merlins magical mischief of miraculously monotonous mayhem!! And no way in hell would they ever say CalaBunga for Christ sakes"
but he was cut off-
The wall started to tremble viciously. One by one the brick will separated and left a narrow path. Dust filled the air, filling the lungs of the young men. The wall lead to a pitch black hall way.
"Well I'll be" murmured Remus placing his hand upon his chin in awe.
Peter let out a triumphant whoop and punched the air with his pudgy fist. Very rarely was Peter ever right. He was the member of the group who always needed protection but always strived for the attention. He had no special charm like James Charisma like Sirius or genuine sincerity like Remus. He was just Peter nothing more and nothing less.
"How would you like to kiss his ass now Sirius?" teased James "Would you like to bend over or have you sit and him stand?"
This comment earned James a rough playful punch in the arm and malicious glare from his best mate.
"Moving right along then" said Remus clapping his hands together hastily.
"Right" said Sirius and James in unison moving towards the pathway.
"Lumous" murmured Remus and the end of his wand lit up with a vibrant teal.
Hunching over the marauders traveled through the small crawl place, beating branches and vines that stood in their path. After fifteen minutes of silent traveling only heavy breathing could be heard being exhaled from the Marauders.
"I'm tired of all this crawling" whined Peter
"don't worry your little head about it, were not enjoying this anymore then you are" huffed Sirius while pushing a rather large plant from his face.
"just relax" said Remus kindly. "we're only five minutes away now
"five minutes my ass" seethed Sirius as he crouched out of the crawl place and began dusting himself off.
"well it's rather hard, to know how far you are from some place when you only have wand light" snapped Remus.
The beach was simply extravagant. The sky was clear and a rich blue color. The sea breeze gently would graze your cheek and make you smile from it warmth. Laughter and joy wafted in the air. The Marauders stood there mezmerorzed by mother nature's beauty at it's complete best. The warmth entranced them and made them feel so light and happy.
"Remus??, Remus Lupin is that you?" screeched a curvy Blonde from the other side of the beach.
"damn" purred Sirius as he did his typical inspection.
"Patience York" murmured Remus as he smiled into her embrace.
"it's been so long since ive seen you" said Remus chuckling
" I know too long" said Patience giggling.
Patience nervously tucked her blonde locks behind her ear and fidgeted with her leg in the sand "so." she murmured.
"you look fabulous love, honestly you've completely changed you've lost so much weight it's remarkable. If I didn't just have my heart broken you know I'd be all over you" said Remus was a suave smile.
Patience laughed apprectivly " The last time we saw each other rem, I we were 12 and I weighed 200 pounds!!!"
"dear lord" said Sirius quickly rebounding by covering it with a cough
"So" said Sirius recovering" Talking about being Single, I'm single your hot lets go get wet" he smiled broadly and wrapped his arm around the curly blonde.
"Look buddy, I'm not some toy to play with, your not my type quite frankly I find nothing attractive about you. You're the wheeling and dealing type The one night standers and I don't need that. The tall dark and handsome. The perfect at quidditch heart breaking guy that everyone hates to love and loves to hate!" Patience seethed as she struck Sirius across the face.
A loud snap filled the air.
"Rejection" said James chuckling
ew yea I know! I hate when Sirius hooks up with people it's just wrong! Lol So I had to make a strong will character to kind of put his sexiness in it's place. I hope you guys enjoyed this chapter. I started writing it a couple days ago hoping to post it then but alas that never happened. SO here I am not with this I wish it was a tad long but inspiration fails me and I don't wish to write complete crap just to fill up the page.
Not my style. I'm hoping to get more reviews on this I received four already which was amazing because it was all in the first day! Which I'm so very happy about!. I wish this to be another success maybe hopefully like intolerable cruelty?
Cait and I are working for ya and we hope you like this! So please drop us a line and tell us how we are doing!
Even add anything-constructive crit because it is sooo very helpful. I know I will have loads of grammatical errors. That just is not my strong spot! And no matter what I still can't seem to get it all right lol!
A saw a **great** author do this so I'm dittoing her idea!
My Immortal By Evanescence
I'm so tired of being here
Supressed by all my childish fears
And if you have to leave
I wish that you would just leave
Cause your presence still lingers here
And it won't leave me alone
These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time can not erase
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you screamed I'd fight away all of your fears
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me
You used to captivate me by your resonating mind
Now I'm bound by the life you left behind
Your face it haunts my once pleasant dreams
Your voice it chased away all the sanity in me
These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time can not erase
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you scream I'd fight away all of your fears
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me
I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
But though you're still with me
I've been alone all along
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you screamed I'd fight away all of your fears
I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me
PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!