As soon as her father and Norrington left the room Elizabeth got out of
bed, put on her nightdress, opened her window, took one BIG gulp and
climbed out. [Don't worry; you'll be fine, you're doing this to save Will!
Just keep going... ] was all she thought of, as her shoulder hurt terribly
while climbing down.
A foggy mist filled the cold night air as she made her way to the jail. She started to get cold, only wearing a thin nightgown and breezy nightdress, but she didn't have the time to change because it was getting darker by the second and she needed to get Will out of there.
Elizabeth started to get scared. [Why is the town so deserted?] she thought to herself. She then started to feel an odd feeling... almost as if... someone was... following her???
She finally noticed the distant image of the prison and sighed a sigh of relief as she walked towards it. [Just a few more steps; you're almost there!] she thought. The quietness, coldness, and fog of the town was reminding her of the night she was kidnapped by pirates. Just then she heard a crash from behind her and her heart stopped. She looked around, "Who's there?" she was barely able to say.
There was no answer.
"I said who's there!?" she asked, slightly louder than before.
Suddenly she felt a hand grab her hair from behind. It shocked her so much she screamed.
* * *
Will finally gave up on trying to get out of the cell. Although he had helped build them, and knew the secret to getting out, he needed more weight than himself to break down the bars, and even if he was able to do so, the guards would surely hear it and he wouldn't have enough time to escape. [I just hope that Elizabeth's all right.] he thought.
Just then he heard someone scream from right outside his cell. He instantly got up and looked out of his barred window, only to see that the person who screamed was none other than Elizabeth.
* * *
As soon as she screamed she felt a cold, rough hand clap over her mouth, and a familiar voice say, " 'ello poppet." It was Pintel. "Long time no see, eh?"
Then she heard Will's voice yell, "Elizabeth!" worriedly from inside the prison.
She kicked and punched, trying to break free of his grasp, when she finally stepped on one of his toes, which just happened to be his soft spot, and was able to run a few steps more towards the jail when she felt him grab the back of her nightdress. She yelped in surprise, slipped her arms out of it, and ran into the prison as fast as she could.
Pintel looked from the nightdress he was holding, to Elizabeth, escaping into the Prison. "Argh!" he yelled as he ran, not quite as fast, after her.
* * *
Will saw Elizabeth run into the jail and sighed of relief as he turned to the door of his cell awaiting her. Soon enough, he heard her swift, quick footsteps come down the stairs. "Will!" she breathed, completely out of breath. "Elizabeth!" He smiled, then frowned, "Did he hurt you?" he asked concerned. "I'm O.K. for now, we have to hurry though - - where's the key?" she asked quickly. "Over there." Will replied as he pointed to the dog.
"Come here puppy." She said gently to it, as he trotted over, "Good dog!" she said as she grabbed the keys. "I don't know which one it is!" she said worriedly. "Er... just try one." Will replied.
Elizabeth went through the first three keys and none of them worked, when Pintel rushed in. "I've got you now, poppet!" he said as he turned and saw Will, "Oooo, well if it isn't Mr. Turner." He smirked, "I've hit the jackpot!"
"Elizabeth, run!" Will yelled, but it was too late, Pintel grabbed her around her waist as she accidentally dropped the keys.
He turned her around so that she faced him and slammed her against the wall, as she hit, kicked, and punched him.
Just then she heard Will's voice from the right of her, "Get your ruddy hands off her!" he yelled angrily, and as he said the last word he punched Pintel hard in the cheek, knocking him out.
He then brought Elizabeth into a quick hug. "Are you all right?" he asked her, concerned. She nodded, her eyes teary from the pain in her arm when he had pushed her against the brick wall. "How did you get out?" she asked. "Keys." He replied simply as he grabbed her arm and lead her out of the prison. "Hurry, we need to get out of here, fast!"
Elizabeth and Will ran out of the jail when they bumped into (literally) a tall, muscular pirate. "Fancy meeting you here." he said in his deep, cold voice, as others appeared out of the fog, smirking.
* * *
Oooo, cliffie! I hope you liked what I've written so far! R/R! (No flames please!)
Shout-outz to my reviewers:
To Skye Dragon: Thank you SO much for your suggestions. You are absolutely right and I am rearranging, adding, and changing my chapters. Yes, I did rush it. I got so much into all the "Elizabeth's in trouble oh no Will save her!" (lol) stuff and wrote all the first four chapters at once. I write much better when I take time to breathe in between chapters, lol! I agree, Commodore Norrington would never do anything like what I have written, but honestly, people are writing Will/Jack fics, and that's even MORE unlikely to happen! I have sort of changed his love into lust, and in the movie (until the end) you can tell that Norrington and Will don't get along very well, so I picked it up from there. Oh, and about him running away when Elizabeth's hurt, it's because he's afraid of what he had just done. That is why he lies to Governor Swann about what had happened to Elizabeth because he cannot accept what he had - - accidentally - - done to her (all though the kissing thing was quite evil too!) and because he was afraid of losing the Governor's trust and his reputation for being well respected man. About kissing her in public, he sort of just lost it because he found out Elizabeth didn't love him and he wanted her so badly. The two men holding Will back were actually MEANT to be the two Jack encountered, lol. Even though they got a promotion at the end of the movie they'll always be clumsy and clueless in my oppinion (as much as I love 'em lol). Yes, Elizabeth usually does act "polite and proper" throughout most of the movie, but, in my story, her being with the pirates for a while, love for Will, and anger towards Norrington caused her react differently than she would usually have . And no, fanfiction.net did not switch chapters two and three. For some dumb reason I decided to put them that way - - sort of like from Elizabeth's POV to Will's POV, but you mentioning that made me change my mind, and I will switch the order. Oh, and about the "puppet/poppet" thing, lol thank you so much for informing me of my mistake! I had always thought that it was just Pintel's weird accent!!! Oh my god i'm SUCH a complete idiot! Yes, as I was proofreading my story I did notice a few mistakes and will fix them. Thank you again for your suggestions!
To "Kelsey", Esteed, Leolyn Greenleaf, LordLanceahlot, "Rachel", MissMeganJane, Kaydee, and Steff7: Thank you SO VERY MUCH for such lovely reviews! You've definately encouraged me to write more! Thanks again!!
To "MidnightMoon12": Yes, I am planning to put Jack in further chapters... but I can't promise it.
-OceanGirl28
A foggy mist filled the cold night air as she made her way to the jail. She started to get cold, only wearing a thin nightgown and breezy nightdress, but she didn't have the time to change because it was getting darker by the second and she needed to get Will out of there.
Elizabeth started to get scared. [Why is the town so deserted?] she thought to herself. She then started to feel an odd feeling... almost as if... someone was... following her???
She finally noticed the distant image of the prison and sighed a sigh of relief as she walked towards it. [Just a few more steps; you're almost there!] she thought. The quietness, coldness, and fog of the town was reminding her of the night she was kidnapped by pirates. Just then she heard a crash from behind her and her heart stopped. She looked around, "Who's there?" she was barely able to say.
There was no answer.
"I said who's there!?" she asked, slightly louder than before.
Suddenly she felt a hand grab her hair from behind. It shocked her so much she screamed.
* * *
Will finally gave up on trying to get out of the cell. Although he had helped build them, and knew the secret to getting out, he needed more weight than himself to break down the bars, and even if he was able to do so, the guards would surely hear it and he wouldn't have enough time to escape. [I just hope that Elizabeth's all right.] he thought.
Just then he heard someone scream from right outside his cell. He instantly got up and looked out of his barred window, only to see that the person who screamed was none other than Elizabeth.
* * *
As soon as she screamed she felt a cold, rough hand clap over her mouth, and a familiar voice say, " 'ello poppet." It was Pintel. "Long time no see, eh?"
Then she heard Will's voice yell, "Elizabeth!" worriedly from inside the prison.
She kicked and punched, trying to break free of his grasp, when she finally stepped on one of his toes, which just happened to be his soft spot, and was able to run a few steps more towards the jail when she felt him grab the back of her nightdress. She yelped in surprise, slipped her arms out of it, and ran into the prison as fast as she could.
Pintel looked from the nightdress he was holding, to Elizabeth, escaping into the Prison. "Argh!" he yelled as he ran, not quite as fast, after her.
* * *
Will saw Elizabeth run into the jail and sighed of relief as he turned to the door of his cell awaiting her. Soon enough, he heard her swift, quick footsteps come down the stairs. "Will!" she breathed, completely out of breath. "Elizabeth!" He smiled, then frowned, "Did he hurt you?" he asked concerned. "I'm O.K. for now, we have to hurry though - - where's the key?" she asked quickly. "Over there." Will replied as he pointed to the dog.
"Come here puppy." She said gently to it, as he trotted over, "Good dog!" she said as she grabbed the keys. "I don't know which one it is!" she said worriedly. "Er... just try one." Will replied.
Elizabeth went through the first three keys and none of them worked, when Pintel rushed in. "I've got you now, poppet!" he said as he turned and saw Will, "Oooo, well if it isn't Mr. Turner." He smirked, "I've hit the jackpot!"
"Elizabeth, run!" Will yelled, but it was too late, Pintel grabbed her around her waist as she accidentally dropped the keys.
He turned her around so that she faced him and slammed her against the wall, as she hit, kicked, and punched him.
Just then she heard Will's voice from the right of her, "Get your ruddy hands off her!" he yelled angrily, and as he said the last word he punched Pintel hard in the cheek, knocking him out.
He then brought Elizabeth into a quick hug. "Are you all right?" he asked her, concerned. She nodded, her eyes teary from the pain in her arm when he had pushed her against the brick wall. "How did you get out?" she asked. "Keys." He replied simply as he grabbed her arm and lead her out of the prison. "Hurry, we need to get out of here, fast!"
Elizabeth and Will ran out of the jail when they bumped into (literally) a tall, muscular pirate. "Fancy meeting you here." he said in his deep, cold voice, as others appeared out of the fog, smirking.
* * *
Oooo, cliffie! I hope you liked what I've written so far! R/R! (No flames please!)
Shout-outz to my reviewers:
To Skye Dragon: Thank you SO much for your suggestions. You are absolutely right and I am rearranging, adding, and changing my chapters. Yes, I did rush it. I got so much into all the "Elizabeth's in trouble oh no Will save her!" (lol) stuff and wrote all the first four chapters at once. I write much better when I take time to breathe in between chapters, lol! I agree, Commodore Norrington would never do anything like what I have written, but honestly, people are writing Will/Jack fics, and that's even MORE unlikely to happen! I have sort of changed his love into lust, and in the movie (until the end) you can tell that Norrington and Will don't get along very well, so I picked it up from there. Oh, and about him running away when Elizabeth's hurt, it's because he's afraid of what he had just done. That is why he lies to Governor Swann about what had happened to Elizabeth because he cannot accept what he had - - accidentally - - done to her (all though the kissing thing was quite evil too!) and because he was afraid of losing the Governor's trust and his reputation for being well respected man. About kissing her in public, he sort of just lost it because he found out Elizabeth didn't love him and he wanted her so badly. The two men holding Will back were actually MEANT to be the two Jack encountered, lol. Even though they got a promotion at the end of the movie they'll always be clumsy and clueless in my oppinion (as much as I love 'em lol). Yes, Elizabeth usually does act "polite and proper" throughout most of the movie, but, in my story, her being with the pirates for a while, love for Will, and anger towards Norrington caused her react differently than she would usually have . And no, fanfiction.net did not switch chapters two and three. For some dumb reason I decided to put them that way - - sort of like from Elizabeth's POV to Will's POV, but you mentioning that made me change my mind, and I will switch the order. Oh, and about the "puppet/poppet" thing, lol thank you so much for informing me of my mistake! I had always thought that it was just Pintel's weird accent!!! Oh my god i'm SUCH a complete idiot! Yes, as I was proofreading my story I did notice a few mistakes and will fix them. Thank you again for your suggestions!
To "Kelsey", Esteed, Leolyn Greenleaf, LordLanceahlot, "Rachel", MissMeganJane, Kaydee, and Steff7: Thank you SO VERY MUCH for such lovely reviews! You've definately encouraged me to write more! Thanks again!!
To "MidnightMoon12": Yes, I am planning to put Jack in further chapters... but I can't promise it.
-OceanGirl28