So, here is the new chapter, and I wanna thank you ALL for the really nice
and great reviews that you gave me!
I know this plot isn't very original, but I just wanna give it my own twist! ;) And I'm really sorry that the first 2 chapters WERE so messed up...but that's fixed now, well I hope so anyway! :P
I'm new here on Fanfiction.net and I just have to get used to the format, but now I know how to write it, and I hope it will never happen again! Oh, and thanks everyone that says that my English is good! You made me blush! Haha
So, like I said before: if there is something I really spelled wrong. PLEASE SAY IT...I can learn from my mistakes! And if something is not correct in my story, please say that too! Other then that. I'm glad that you liked the first chapters, and here is the next part! ENJOY! :D
Love, Mayke
~Part 4~ Jess' clothes
Jess was lying in his tent, he really didn't feel like going to the party that they were throwing to welcome them all. He'd rather be home in New York to hang out with his friends, and doing things he was actually good at. But no...he was here, in the middle of nowhere; where he didn't have friends and didn't feel the need to do anything fun.
"Are you coming?" Someone said and turned a bright flashlight right in his face. Even though he had his face down because he was reading he could still feel the light burning into his eyes. He held his hand in front of his face to block the light.
"Geezz, could you please stop that?" Jess said to Michael and tried to look at him. Michael turned off the flashlight and when Jess saw him he was shocked.
"Are you going to wear THAT?" Jess said laughing pointing to Michael's clothes.
Michael looked down on his clothes, but was ashamed to look at Jess again. He really didn't had anything else to wear, this were his normal clothes and that's were he felt save in.
"SOooooo..." Jess said bored, as he looked at Michael while he was checking his clothes.
"What?"
"Oh, nothing..." Jess said after reconsidering his earlier thoughts that he just had. He started reading further till he noticed that Michael was still looking at his own clothes and Jess could see in his eyes that he felt insecure.
"Would you...uhm...you can borrow my clothes if you want to." Jess said to him. Michael looked up to him and a smile came upon his face.
"Really?" His eyes lit up as he saw Jess going trough his clothes and tossed him a pair of jeans and a t-shirt.
"Here you go, and now beat it, I wanna read." He said like he never really did nice to Michael. Michael didn't wanna make Jess mad so he quickly got out of the tent to change.
When Michael was gone Jess looked up in deep thoughts. He had been nice to him, he really was nice. Jess was confused because this wasn't him...he was never nice to types like Michael; he even hated them back in New York because they were always in his way, trying to fit in. But what changed that?
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Rory was sitting on a small wooden bench as she looked at Lane who was actually having a good time. Party's were never Rory's thing, she always tried to avoid them when she was little or clung onto her mother and pleaded her to bring her back home, and right now she still didn't liked it.
So there she was, the Party was from her point of view really boring. There weren't many people to talk to because everybody was dancing or talking to people Rory didn't like. She sighed and looked around to search for something to do, she saw Michael sitting on the other side of the bench.
She shoved over to him. "Hi!" Rory said. Michael looked up and smiled.
"Hi!"
Rory looked at him and saw that there were some changes, and she liked it. It's not like he was really different but he was definitely improved.
"You look good." She pointed at his clothes; she could see him blushing even though it was dark.
"it's not...it's not mine." He said, Rory didn't really know Michael, but she had always liked him. They once had to do a project together, and Rory noticed that Michael really wasn't that bad.
"Whose is it then?" Rory asked him while she looked at his clothes again trying to remember from who it was.
"I borrowed them from..."
"Jess?" Rory asked questioning just before Michael could finish his sentence.
Rory looked past Michael right into the face of Jess.
"Yeah, how did you know?" Michael asked surprised, he obviously didn't know that Jess was standing right behind him.
Rory felt uncomfortable, but she didn't know why and she couldn't shake the feeling off.
"Hi" Rory said shy, as she slowly shoved back to her spot on the bench. Jess saw it and took the opportunity to sit next to her. Rory felt herself more uncomfortable by the minute; she tried to look everywhere but to him, but didn't really succeed because her eyes drifted again and again to Jess.
Jess noticed it, and smirked. "Something to see?" he asked arrogant.
"What is your problem?" Rory asked angry, she was shocked by her own comment and quickly shut her eyes and hoped that Jess didn't hear her. But that was even too stupid to think because she had almost yelled it, and even a few people from the dance floor were looking at her.
"What?" Jess asked her, she could feel his eyes burning in her skin.
Suddenly she didn't cared anymore, she didn't like this Jess guy for some reason, he was arrogant and annoying, she didn't care if he was the new boy. She was sick and tired of him, the only thing he could do was acting arrogant, and he wasn't nice to most people. She saw him looking at her most of the day, she could feel it, and she didn't like it.
"You know DAMN well what I mean! Please don't act like you don't know what I'm talking about. I've seen you acting all day. You really think that you're something don't you?" Rory shot angry, then quickly walked away to avoid the stares that she got from all the people around them.
Jess said there, completely shocked by the words that were still echoing in his head. He looked up, and saw that everyone was staring at him. He tried to act cool, so he shrugged his shoulders looked at Rory who he could still see and grabbed a book that was sitting in his back pocket. He was not gonna let himself down just by some comment from a chick. He was way different then they all thought, and they would see it eventually.
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I know it's short, and I'll try to write more the next time, but I'm in my finale year of high school, so I don't actually have much time to write, but I try anyway! ;)
PLEASE REVIEW! :D
I know this plot isn't very original, but I just wanna give it my own twist! ;) And I'm really sorry that the first 2 chapters WERE so messed up...but that's fixed now, well I hope so anyway! :P
I'm new here on Fanfiction.net and I just have to get used to the format, but now I know how to write it, and I hope it will never happen again! Oh, and thanks everyone that says that my English is good! You made me blush! Haha
So, like I said before: if there is something I really spelled wrong. PLEASE SAY IT...I can learn from my mistakes! And if something is not correct in my story, please say that too! Other then that. I'm glad that you liked the first chapters, and here is the next part! ENJOY! :D
Love, Mayke
~Part 4~ Jess' clothes
Jess was lying in his tent, he really didn't feel like going to the party that they were throwing to welcome them all. He'd rather be home in New York to hang out with his friends, and doing things he was actually good at. But no...he was here, in the middle of nowhere; where he didn't have friends and didn't feel the need to do anything fun.
"Are you coming?" Someone said and turned a bright flashlight right in his face. Even though he had his face down because he was reading he could still feel the light burning into his eyes. He held his hand in front of his face to block the light.
"Geezz, could you please stop that?" Jess said to Michael and tried to look at him. Michael turned off the flashlight and when Jess saw him he was shocked.
"Are you going to wear THAT?" Jess said laughing pointing to Michael's clothes.
Michael looked down on his clothes, but was ashamed to look at Jess again. He really didn't had anything else to wear, this were his normal clothes and that's were he felt save in.
"SOooooo..." Jess said bored, as he looked at Michael while he was checking his clothes.
"What?"
"Oh, nothing..." Jess said after reconsidering his earlier thoughts that he just had. He started reading further till he noticed that Michael was still looking at his own clothes and Jess could see in his eyes that he felt insecure.
"Would you...uhm...you can borrow my clothes if you want to." Jess said to him. Michael looked up to him and a smile came upon his face.
"Really?" His eyes lit up as he saw Jess going trough his clothes and tossed him a pair of jeans and a t-shirt.
"Here you go, and now beat it, I wanna read." He said like he never really did nice to Michael. Michael didn't wanna make Jess mad so he quickly got out of the tent to change.
When Michael was gone Jess looked up in deep thoughts. He had been nice to him, he really was nice. Jess was confused because this wasn't him...he was never nice to types like Michael; he even hated them back in New York because they were always in his way, trying to fit in. But what changed that?
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Rory was sitting on a small wooden bench as she looked at Lane who was actually having a good time. Party's were never Rory's thing, she always tried to avoid them when she was little or clung onto her mother and pleaded her to bring her back home, and right now she still didn't liked it.
So there she was, the Party was from her point of view really boring. There weren't many people to talk to because everybody was dancing or talking to people Rory didn't like. She sighed and looked around to search for something to do, she saw Michael sitting on the other side of the bench.
She shoved over to him. "Hi!" Rory said. Michael looked up and smiled.
"Hi!"
Rory looked at him and saw that there were some changes, and she liked it. It's not like he was really different but he was definitely improved.
"You look good." She pointed at his clothes; she could see him blushing even though it was dark.
"it's not...it's not mine." He said, Rory didn't really know Michael, but she had always liked him. They once had to do a project together, and Rory noticed that Michael really wasn't that bad.
"Whose is it then?" Rory asked him while she looked at his clothes again trying to remember from who it was.
"I borrowed them from..."
"Jess?" Rory asked questioning just before Michael could finish his sentence.
Rory looked past Michael right into the face of Jess.
"Yeah, how did you know?" Michael asked surprised, he obviously didn't know that Jess was standing right behind him.
Rory felt uncomfortable, but she didn't know why and she couldn't shake the feeling off.
"Hi" Rory said shy, as she slowly shoved back to her spot on the bench. Jess saw it and took the opportunity to sit next to her. Rory felt herself more uncomfortable by the minute; she tried to look everywhere but to him, but didn't really succeed because her eyes drifted again and again to Jess.
Jess noticed it, and smirked. "Something to see?" he asked arrogant.
"What is your problem?" Rory asked angry, she was shocked by her own comment and quickly shut her eyes and hoped that Jess didn't hear her. But that was even too stupid to think because she had almost yelled it, and even a few people from the dance floor were looking at her.
"What?" Jess asked her, she could feel his eyes burning in her skin.
Suddenly she didn't cared anymore, she didn't like this Jess guy for some reason, he was arrogant and annoying, she didn't care if he was the new boy. She was sick and tired of him, the only thing he could do was acting arrogant, and he wasn't nice to most people. She saw him looking at her most of the day, she could feel it, and she didn't like it.
"You know DAMN well what I mean! Please don't act like you don't know what I'm talking about. I've seen you acting all day. You really think that you're something don't you?" Rory shot angry, then quickly walked away to avoid the stares that she got from all the people around them.
Jess said there, completely shocked by the words that were still echoing in his head. He looked up, and saw that everyone was staring at him. He tried to act cool, so he shrugged his shoulders looked at Rory who he could still see and grabbed a book that was sitting in his back pocket. He was not gonna let himself down just by some comment from a chick. He was way different then they all thought, and they would see it eventually.
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I know it's short, and I'll try to write more the next time, but I'm in my finale year of high school, so I don't actually have much time to write, but I try anyway! ;)
PLEASE REVIEW! :D
