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Okay! Hi there! This is mainly an Author's Note!!!
Part two of Alone is up! It's called Torment...I'm making this, because not all alone-readers read Second Chance, or even my ever-updated Bio(-.-') which says all my most recent updates.
Torment is less mushy-gushy romance, and more stabbing angst, and thriller-ness....part three will be less of a suspence/horror thing, but still angst.
it will probably be a 4 or 5 parter.
so...to make sure I'm not breaking rules here, heres a prologue/epilogue, to Torment/Alone, respectively.
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" So, Chosen Solitary Remnant, huh, nice name." Saiya-ken said dryly, resting her Liquid Wand lazily on her shoulder.
" It's not the keywords, it's the parameters!" Kenin, party leader, retorted, hefting his Master's axe in both hands, " This is a dream area!!"
" More like nightmare." Triiya mumbled, gripping her Fiend Spear warily, as she scanned the dark zone.
" Come now! Imagine, an area rich with Grunty food and treasure, always night, and no dungeon!" Kenin insisted enthusiastically.
" Exactly, nightmarish."
" Guys." Saiya-ken said suddenly, " I think my Fairies Orb is broken. I used it, but no monster portals appeared..."
" Huh? That's weird, wait a sec..." Kenin replied, and stood silent a second, before saying, " Yeah, mine too....imagine that! An area rich with treasure, and no monsters guarding it!"
" Kenin....there's probably a reason..." Triiya started, when an alarmed cry from Saiya-ken interrupted her.
" What?! What is it???" Kenin asked, running up to the wayward Wavemaster.
When Triiya's gaze fell on the source of Saiya's surprise, she gasped, jutting rocks, soaked in fresh, glittering blood.
" Ah...Triiya's got us all jumpy! That's just back round...." Kenin laughed loudly.
" B-but....you can't interact with the backround..." Saiya-ken whispered, turning around slowly, and revealing bloody hands.
Triiya screamed, and said, " That's it!! I'm outta here!!!"
" Triiya! Wait!!" Kenin pleaded, then smiled, when golden rings did not appear around the panicked Wavemaster, " There you go, this is obviously some special-"
" I...I CAN'T GATE OUT!!!!!" Triiya screamed.
" Th-there's a--" Kenin started, but Saiya-ken screamed in horror, and was flung into the sky, a strange...red wand appearing behind her.
It was then that the Heavy axeman and the Long arm realised the moon had been blotted out by a huge, looming shadow.....
As Saiya-ken screamed, the screen fizzled, and then she was gone....no ghost...nothing...there was lifting sensation, and Kenin knew he was staring at death... he could feel it...
the screams of Triiya were distant, and garbled, as pain shot through him, and the being pointed at him, tauntingly.
"...oh...God..."
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There, what do you think? Like it? Continue on to Torment!! I'm waiting!! ^.^
( BTW please review this..too...I wrote it at a whim...)
Yusagi Sombermoon
Okay! Hi there! This is mainly an Author's Note!!!
Part two of Alone is up! It's called Torment...I'm making this, because not all alone-readers read Second Chance, or even my ever-updated Bio(-.-') which says all my most recent updates.
Torment is less mushy-gushy romance, and more stabbing angst, and thriller-ness....part three will be less of a suspence/horror thing, but still angst.
it will probably be a 4 or 5 parter.
so...to make sure I'm not breaking rules here, heres a prologue/epilogue, to Torment/Alone, respectively.
-------------------------------------
" So, Chosen Solitary Remnant, huh, nice name." Saiya-ken said dryly, resting her Liquid Wand lazily on her shoulder.
" It's not the keywords, it's the parameters!" Kenin, party leader, retorted, hefting his Master's axe in both hands, " This is a dream area!!"
" More like nightmare." Triiya mumbled, gripping her Fiend Spear warily, as she scanned the dark zone.
" Come now! Imagine, an area rich with Grunty food and treasure, always night, and no dungeon!" Kenin insisted enthusiastically.
" Exactly, nightmarish."
" Guys." Saiya-ken said suddenly, " I think my Fairies Orb is broken. I used it, but no monster portals appeared..."
" Huh? That's weird, wait a sec..." Kenin replied, and stood silent a second, before saying, " Yeah, mine too....imagine that! An area rich with treasure, and no monsters guarding it!"
" Kenin....there's probably a reason..." Triiya started, when an alarmed cry from Saiya-ken interrupted her.
" What?! What is it???" Kenin asked, running up to the wayward Wavemaster.
When Triiya's gaze fell on the source of Saiya's surprise, she gasped, jutting rocks, soaked in fresh, glittering blood.
" Ah...Triiya's got us all jumpy! That's just back round...." Kenin laughed loudly.
" B-but....you can't interact with the backround..." Saiya-ken whispered, turning around slowly, and revealing bloody hands.
Triiya screamed, and said, " That's it!! I'm outta here!!!"
" Triiya! Wait!!" Kenin pleaded, then smiled, when golden rings did not appear around the panicked Wavemaster, " There you go, this is obviously some special-"
" I...I CAN'T GATE OUT!!!!!" Triiya screamed.
" Th-there's a--" Kenin started, but Saiya-ken screamed in horror, and was flung into the sky, a strange...red wand appearing behind her.
It was then that the Heavy axeman and the Long arm realised the moon had been blotted out by a huge, looming shadow.....
As Saiya-ken screamed, the screen fizzled, and then she was gone....no ghost...nothing...there was lifting sensation, and Kenin knew he was staring at death... he could feel it...
the screams of Triiya were distant, and garbled, as pain shot through him, and the being pointed at him, tauntingly.
"...oh...God..."
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There, what do you think? Like it? Continue on to Torment!! I'm waiting!! ^.^
( BTW please review this..too...I wrote it at a whim...)
Yusagi Sombermoon
