Authors note:

Yes I have finally come to me scenes and realized that my fan fiction is a big piece if junk, and I thank all of you who where brave enough to tell me so in the first place. I do believe though I can make this story better. If you will all allow me time to rewrite this story I would be happy to do so. I will be sure to add in more detail and keep in mind all the suggestions given to me I will be sure to have it checked and double checked before it is posted so that it is free of spelling errors.

Sincerely

Kitty_kat