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Chapter 8

(The next scene starts with Elizabeth running towards the governors mansion. She is just getting through the gate when she sees Jack deciding whether or not to knock on the door.)

Elizabeth: Jack?

(Jack turns around startled.)

Jack: Elizabeth! I need to talk to William...where is he?

Elizabeth: Well, I could get mad at you for not saying hello, but Will and I really need your help. Come with me.

(Elizabeth and Jack make their way to the prison. Elizabeth explains to Jack what's going on.)

Elizabeth: ...We haven't been told who saw the two of you together, but if we don't get him out he could be there for six months!

Jack: Six months..hmmm...well, at least their not trying to hang him!

(Elizabeth gives Jack a 'if looks could kill' look.)

Jack: Sorry.

(The two finally arrive at the prison where they find that Mullroy and Murtogg have still not returned. They go in and find Will staring out the small window in the cell. Will turns at the sound of Elizabeths voice...)

Elizabeth: Will, look who I found!

Will: Jack!

Jack: This scene seems a bit familiar. Except I was the one behind bars.

(Jack proceeds to lift the bench and open the door.)

Jack: Will, I really need to talk to you 'bout something.

Will: What is it?

Jack: Well, I....Do you hear something?

(The three go to the door of the prison and see Mr. Gibbs frantically yelling out Jacks name.)

Jack: Gibbs, bloody hell. We don't want the entire Royal Navy here right now mate.

Gibbs: Sorry, but Anamarias callin' for ya.

Jack: Right, then....

(Will and Elizabeth raise their eyebrows at each other behind Jacks back.)

Gibbs: She don't look so well sir. Just a fair warnin'

(Jack suddenly looks worried. He turns to Will.)

Jack: Will, I really DO need to talk to ya mate....

Will: Go Jack. We'll catch up.

(Jack nods and runs off towards the Black Pearl. End Scene.)

(The next scene is in a huge cave. There are thousands of pirate ghosts gathered and it appears that even more are coming. Captain Portolan is standing on a large rock trying to get everyone's attention.)

Portolan: My fellow pirates of the past....welcome! We are all here because we seek revenge!

(All the pirates begin to shout. After they calm down a bit Portolan continues.) We have all been slain, hung or tortured to death by some bloody officers who didn't like our way of life! (More shouting.) We were just trying to make a decent living out on the great sea and how do we get repaid? (Even more shouting. Portolan begins sounding sarcastic.) If you ask me it sounds like someone is trying to gain as much power as possible! (shouting continues.) What do you say to killing us some Royal Navy?

Pirates: AYE!!!! (Shouts of joy are heard. End Scene.)