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---------------------------------- The Next Night--------------------------- ------------ "Ugh!" Megumi looked at Kaoru in disgust, "Why do you wear those shoes there ugly!" Kaoru glared, "Well I'm not getting new ones unless you buy them!!" The two girls glared at each other, a small crack like a bone whistled in the distance. They both turned "what was that!" Kaoru whispered. "I don't kno......" Megumi's words were broken by a flash of metal piercing her stomach. Kaoru screamed and hit the offender with a stone. The person stood staring at the blood spilling from Megumi; rivers of tears flowed down Kaoru's face as old memories flashed in her mind. The man turned to her, "Come with me.." a stern voice, her face expressed fear, " No!!" she screamed trying to run. The man lifted his sword and with one foul swoop slashed the top of her legs, then turned and punched a hole through her shoulder. She fell with intolerable pain from her wounds; she was covered with blood. He lifted her limp body and left...leaving Megumi to bleed to death in the shadows.