Chapter 3! Ok now I have to warn you all in saying that I just finished a
large pile of Twizzlers liquorish and I have plenty of caffeine in me...now,
to warn you further, I now have 2 jobs, been working on 4 fics, and am
going to Europe in wow O_O two weeks from today....O_O I'll be gone for 10
days and have no clue whether I get to see a computer...O_O scary...but don't
worry because I'll be bringing a notebook and writing as often as I
can...then when I get back I'll have plenty of updates ^_^
And I only received a few reviews for chapter 2. -_-' was it that bad??? Oh well ^_^ from the opinions I gathered, I've decided to go with this attack...read and find out!
And just for Azuloy Knesia, I know your going to give me crap later about the conversation between Hiei, Ayisa, and Kurama, so um...be nice ok? Pretty sure that by just looking at the chapter name, you know what its about already...
Chapter 3!
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"That was just too easy!" Yana laughed, looking at the dead Kuwabara. He listened to the real Yusuke bang his fists on the metal door and smirked. "Too bad Urameshi isn't here..."
"Yeah, the poor sap didn't know what hit him. Ok, let's get back to Genkai..." Kido said.
They left the room, leaving Kuwabara lying on the ground in a pool of his blood and Yusuke in the closet. It didn't take them long to get through the maze and back by Genkai. When they returned, they noticed Genkai and Mitarai sitting on the ground, their mouths were sticky and there were wooden sticks laying all over the place.
"W-what happened here?" Kido asked.
"I see you got the job done." Genkai replied, looking at Yana, "Good job, Mitarai found some popsicles outside and brought them in. There's still some sitting over in our freezer in the corner (A/N where'd that come from?!)
The two boys walked over and opened the freezer door and found half a box of cherry popsicles. They grabbed them and sat down to eat the popsicles which, unknown to them, were injected with even more sugary goodness than normal.
Kido licked the last of the cherry popsicle off of the stick and threw it to the side. He and Yana sat beside Genkai and Mitarai. Then, as if everything was set to go off at the "beep" of a timed watch, Yana's watch began to beep. The four of them jumped up with wide eyes.
Genkai turned to Mitarai with an evil grin on her face. "Now that Kido and Yana have started, why don't you go and pay the two demons a visit. They should be somewhere towards the beginning still. I'll also send some more of my friends to help you a bit, not that you need any help, but just incase..."
Mitarai looked at Genkai and laughed. "You got it Genkai, I'll go and make them wish they were never born." He walked off into the darkness leaving Kido and Yana to tell Genkai how they had beaten the fallen spirit detective and his defective friend...
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Somewhere towards the beginning of the maze...
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"Will you get theses off of me?!" Hiei yelled as Ayisa continued to drag him through the maze. She had no idea where she was going and kept running into dead-ends...
"I don't have the key..." She giggled, looking at the hand-cuffs.
"What do you mean you don't have the key?! It's around your neck!" Hiei screamed. He began to reach for the key with his free hand, but Ayisa stopped him.
"Oh yeah lookie here, I guess it is around my neck!...well, too bad..." She taunted. He looked as if he would run and leave her lost in the maze if he was released, so she decided to compromise. "Here, I'll make you a deal. You promise to stay with me, and I'll take off the hand-cuffs."
"Hn. I want more you baka..." Hiei said, taunting her back.
"Um...how about, when we get out of here, I'll buy you more sweet snow?" She replied.
Hiei thought about it for a minute and then decided that he really wanted some sweet snow and agreed to stay with her.
She removed the choker from her neck and unlocked the hand-cuffs with the key. "There, are you happy? Remember, no sweet snow unless you stay with me."
"Hn. I'm not stupid, I remember." He walked in front of her rubbing his wrist where the cuffs had been. 'baka youkai onna! I can't believe her, oh well, it doesn't matter, she still looks cute, no matter how bossy she can be.' He thought. They continued to walk and after a bit, they stopped to rest. Ayisa looked at the wall of the maze and smiled. She took out a tube of red lipstick from her pocket and wrote in a large heart, "I love Hiei" "There!" She exclaimed, looking at her work.
"Pathetic, lets just get going, ok?" Hiei said, reaching for her hand. She took it and they continued through the maze for what seemed like an eternity when Ayisa came to a stop.
"I love Hiei!" She exclaimed once again, "Are you cheating on me?"
"W-what? NO!" Hiei yelled.
"But why did someone else write that they loved you?" She asked, her voice filled with puzzlement.
"Baka! We're going in circles! That's the same "I love Hiei" sign you made earlier!" Hiei yelled.
"Oh..."
"Hn. Baka!" He smirked.
"You're a baka!" She laughed, poking him in the arm.
He poked her back and pretty soon they were poking each other at high speeds...Just then, a loud beeping noise could be heard from Ayisa's waist.
"Wha?" She looked down and saw the walkie-talkie Kurama had given her attached to her belt. She picked it up and pushed the big red button. "Hello?"
"Ayisa? Is that you?" Kurama said, speaking through his walkie-talkie. "Where are you and Hiei right now?"
"We're ok Yoko, we're just a little lost..."
"A little lost?!" Hiei screamed.
"Shhhh! I'm talking to Yoko!" She said, placing her hand over the receiver and hitting him over the head with her other hand.
"Ouch! That hurt!" He yelled, hitting her back.
She reached over and grabbed his katana. He went to block her hand and she smacked his forehead. He hit her back again and they continued this for quite some time.
"Will you stop it!?" She finally shrieked, whacking him one more time on the head, "You're such a baby!"
"And you're not?!"
"I didn't say I wasn't..." She said smiling.
"Um, Ayisa, Hiei? The car is turning around...." Kurama said through the walkie-talkie. (A/N: you know when brothers and sisters fight in the back of the car and the parents say, "Don't make me turn this car around!" that's what this is...)
"THERE IS NO CAR!" They both yelled into the communicator.
"Whatever, just stay together and follow your instincts." Kurama advised and the walkie-talkie clicked off.
They continued to walk down the path, staying an arms distance away from each other when, suddenly, they stopped. The sound of a dragging shovel could be heard. They slowly turned around only to find an eight foot ghoul slowly coming right for them. He was dragging a large metal shovel which scraped the ground, leaving an ear-splitting shriek with every step the ghoul took.
"Oh my god its alive!" Ayisa shrieked, jumping into Hiei's arms.
"Of course its alive you baka!" He snapped, dropping her on the ground. He drew his katana and sped at the ghoul. With three quick slices, the shovel fell to the ground with a loud clatter, along with the ghoul's head, torso, and legs. "There, happy now?"
"Um...yeah, thanks..." She said, still shaking. They continued on, when they heard that ear-splitting screech once again. Ayisa slowly turned around, not sure if she really wanted to see what was there.
The ghoul was back on its feet, as if nothing had happened, as if it hadn't been sliced three different times, it walked towards them still dragging the shovel. "Uh, Hiei?" She shivered. "W-what do we do now?"
The ghoul looked as if it was ready to bury someone. It's eyes were filled with nothingness as it came closer. "It's dead." Hiei remarked.
"B-but then how is it walking towards us? Didn't you kill it?" She stammered.
"No, it's a ghoul. I didn't kill it, at first, I didn't know what it was, but after it put itself back together, I can only be positive that he is a ghoul." Hiei explained.
"S-so what do we do?" Ayisa said, still trembling in fear.
"We, don't do anything, I'll take care of it." He said, standing forward. He held out his fists and they ignited with two orange flames. "Fists of the Mortal Flame!" He sped at the ghoul and punched him over and over again.
The ghoul staggered backwards, letting out a loud grunt, but kept coming back for more. Finally, Hiei doused the flames on his hands and grabbed the walkie-talkie out of Ayisa's hands and jabbed it into the ghoul's dead, rotting flesh. The electrical waves reacted with the ghoul's flesh and blew up, taking the ghoul down with it.
"There." He stated.
They continued to walk on through the darkness, when Ayisa stopped once again. This time she heard the eerie sound of dripping water...
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So, a cliffy! Sorry people chapter 4 will be up as soon as possible....so, anyways, what did you think? Review!!! And don't forget, I need your help in figuring out what the next sugary snack will be....I've already gotten one for ice cream...anymore ideas?...
And I only received a few reviews for chapter 2. -_-' was it that bad??? Oh well ^_^ from the opinions I gathered, I've decided to go with this attack...read and find out!
And just for Azuloy Knesia, I know your going to give me crap later about the conversation between Hiei, Ayisa, and Kurama, so um...be nice ok? Pretty sure that by just looking at the chapter name, you know what its about already...
Chapter 3!
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"That was just too easy!" Yana laughed, looking at the dead Kuwabara. He listened to the real Yusuke bang his fists on the metal door and smirked. "Too bad Urameshi isn't here..."
"Yeah, the poor sap didn't know what hit him. Ok, let's get back to Genkai..." Kido said.
They left the room, leaving Kuwabara lying on the ground in a pool of his blood and Yusuke in the closet. It didn't take them long to get through the maze and back by Genkai. When they returned, they noticed Genkai and Mitarai sitting on the ground, their mouths were sticky and there were wooden sticks laying all over the place.
"W-what happened here?" Kido asked.
"I see you got the job done." Genkai replied, looking at Yana, "Good job, Mitarai found some popsicles outside and brought them in. There's still some sitting over in our freezer in the corner (A/N where'd that come from?!)
The two boys walked over and opened the freezer door and found half a box of cherry popsicles. They grabbed them and sat down to eat the popsicles which, unknown to them, were injected with even more sugary goodness than normal.
Kido licked the last of the cherry popsicle off of the stick and threw it to the side. He and Yana sat beside Genkai and Mitarai. Then, as if everything was set to go off at the "beep" of a timed watch, Yana's watch began to beep. The four of them jumped up with wide eyes.
Genkai turned to Mitarai with an evil grin on her face. "Now that Kido and Yana have started, why don't you go and pay the two demons a visit. They should be somewhere towards the beginning still. I'll also send some more of my friends to help you a bit, not that you need any help, but just incase..."
Mitarai looked at Genkai and laughed. "You got it Genkai, I'll go and make them wish they were never born." He walked off into the darkness leaving Kido and Yana to tell Genkai how they had beaten the fallen spirit detective and his defective friend...
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Somewhere towards the beginning of the maze...
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"Will you get theses off of me?!" Hiei yelled as Ayisa continued to drag him through the maze. She had no idea where she was going and kept running into dead-ends...
"I don't have the key..." She giggled, looking at the hand-cuffs.
"What do you mean you don't have the key?! It's around your neck!" Hiei screamed. He began to reach for the key with his free hand, but Ayisa stopped him.
"Oh yeah lookie here, I guess it is around my neck!...well, too bad..." She taunted. He looked as if he would run and leave her lost in the maze if he was released, so she decided to compromise. "Here, I'll make you a deal. You promise to stay with me, and I'll take off the hand-cuffs."
"Hn. I want more you baka..." Hiei said, taunting her back.
"Um...how about, when we get out of here, I'll buy you more sweet snow?" She replied.
Hiei thought about it for a minute and then decided that he really wanted some sweet snow and agreed to stay with her.
She removed the choker from her neck and unlocked the hand-cuffs with the key. "There, are you happy? Remember, no sweet snow unless you stay with me."
"Hn. I'm not stupid, I remember." He walked in front of her rubbing his wrist where the cuffs had been. 'baka youkai onna! I can't believe her, oh well, it doesn't matter, she still looks cute, no matter how bossy she can be.' He thought. They continued to walk and after a bit, they stopped to rest. Ayisa looked at the wall of the maze and smiled. She took out a tube of red lipstick from her pocket and wrote in a large heart, "I love Hiei" "There!" She exclaimed, looking at her work.
"Pathetic, lets just get going, ok?" Hiei said, reaching for her hand. She took it and they continued through the maze for what seemed like an eternity when Ayisa came to a stop.
"I love Hiei!" She exclaimed once again, "Are you cheating on me?"
"W-what? NO!" Hiei yelled.
"But why did someone else write that they loved you?" She asked, her voice filled with puzzlement.
"Baka! We're going in circles! That's the same "I love Hiei" sign you made earlier!" Hiei yelled.
"Oh..."
"Hn. Baka!" He smirked.
"You're a baka!" She laughed, poking him in the arm.
He poked her back and pretty soon they were poking each other at high speeds...Just then, a loud beeping noise could be heard from Ayisa's waist.
"Wha?" She looked down and saw the walkie-talkie Kurama had given her attached to her belt. She picked it up and pushed the big red button. "Hello?"
"Ayisa? Is that you?" Kurama said, speaking through his walkie-talkie. "Where are you and Hiei right now?"
"We're ok Yoko, we're just a little lost..."
"A little lost?!" Hiei screamed.
"Shhhh! I'm talking to Yoko!" She said, placing her hand over the receiver and hitting him over the head with her other hand.
"Ouch! That hurt!" He yelled, hitting her back.
She reached over and grabbed his katana. He went to block her hand and she smacked his forehead. He hit her back again and they continued this for quite some time.
"Will you stop it!?" She finally shrieked, whacking him one more time on the head, "You're such a baby!"
"And you're not?!"
"I didn't say I wasn't..." She said smiling.
"Um, Ayisa, Hiei? The car is turning around...." Kurama said through the walkie-talkie. (A/N: you know when brothers and sisters fight in the back of the car and the parents say, "Don't make me turn this car around!" that's what this is...)
"THERE IS NO CAR!" They both yelled into the communicator.
"Whatever, just stay together and follow your instincts." Kurama advised and the walkie-talkie clicked off.
They continued to walk down the path, staying an arms distance away from each other when, suddenly, they stopped. The sound of a dragging shovel could be heard. They slowly turned around only to find an eight foot ghoul slowly coming right for them. He was dragging a large metal shovel which scraped the ground, leaving an ear-splitting shriek with every step the ghoul took.
"Oh my god its alive!" Ayisa shrieked, jumping into Hiei's arms.
"Of course its alive you baka!" He snapped, dropping her on the ground. He drew his katana and sped at the ghoul. With three quick slices, the shovel fell to the ground with a loud clatter, along with the ghoul's head, torso, and legs. "There, happy now?"
"Um...yeah, thanks..." She said, still shaking. They continued on, when they heard that ear-splitting screech once again. Ayisa slowly turned around, not sure if she really wanted to see what was there.
The ghoul was back on its feet, as if nothing had happened, as if it hadn't been sliced three different times, it walked towards them still dragging the shovel. "Uh, Hiei?" She shivered. "W-what do we do now?"
The ghoul looked as if it was ready to bury someone. It's eyes were filled with nothingness as it came closer. "It's dead." Hiei remarked.
"B-but then how is it walking towards us? Didn't you kill it?" She stammered.
"No, it's a ghoul. I didn't kill it, at first, I didn't know what it was, but after it put itself back together, I can only be positive that he is a ghoul." Hiei explained.
"S-so what do we do?" Ayisa said, still trembling in fear.
"We, don't do anything, I'll take care of it." He said, standing forward. He held out his fists and they ignited with two orange flames. "Fists of the Mortal Flame!" He sped at the ghoul and punched him over and over again.
The ghoul staggered backwards, letting out a loud grunt, but kept coming back for more. Finally, Hiei doused the flames on his hands and grabbed the walkie-talkie out of Ayisa's hands and jabbed it into the ghoul's dead, rotting flesh. The electrical waves reacted with the ghoul's flesh and blew up, taking the ghoul down with it.
"There." He stated.
They continued to walk on through the darkness, when Ayisa stopped once again. This time she heard the eerie sound of dripping water...
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So, a cliffy! Sorry people chapter 4 will be up as soon as possible....so, anyways, what did you think? Review!!! And don't forget, I need your help in figuring out what the next sugary snack will be....I've already gotten one for ice cream...anymore ideas?...
