Reviewers over the Chaps!
Ch. 1
Dark Dragon34 : continue this is REALLY good
AN: Thank you so much!!! I like the emphasis on 'Really'
yuki san1 : GREAT CHAPPIE! Please continue! BUH-BYE ^.~
AN: Yuki-san has been with me a long time so thank you so much.
Anonymous: whore!
AN: *sigh* If you have to say such things…AT LEAST SIGN IT SO I CAN GIVE YOU A PIECE OF MY MIND AS WELL!!!
Youkai Goddess : I like this story! But there is one little mistake you made, Hiei and Yukina have red eyes not brown. Just wanted to point that out. Anyway update soon!^_^
AN: Ah, yes. Youkai Goddess-such a great one at that! Been through the toughest things with me and my stories. ^_^;; maybe just the stories so far…but that may change one day. Thanks so much. And as you can see, I did change that about their eyes.
Icewolfdemon: Hey, I loved it please continue soon.
AN: Wow! IceWolfDemon, I've been to the website and I loved it! You all should give IceWolfDemon a shout out or something! *smiles* YAY!
Dr. Hannah : ^.^ yay! kool! well, meh, IIalways thought it was yoko kurama. That's what the other fics had, maybe that's the Japanese name. hey, I heard of Yuki somewhere, some other fic, with yukina and a school and this weird kid. meh.
AN: *smiles* Sorry, Dr. Hannah, I actually looked up snow in a Japanese dictionary and I thought it would be neat to have the race of demons that set him off be the kind he'd fall in love with. Cute, yes? About Yohko Kurama…in the manga, Yohko is a spirit fox with about nine tails, determining on how advanced they are, or something along those lines. His demon name is Kurama but his human name is Shuiichi. That's the anime lesson for today! LOL.
Kay-san1 : kage-dono kage-dono! this is so adorable! this is such a sweet story! and i love how u have that whole thing where yuki and yukina r so alike. its adorable. i cant wait for more kage-dono! this is a very nice story and covers lots of emotions! very VERY good job and i cant wait for more!
AN: Aw, thanks Kay-san! That's so sweet! She's been with me with me a lot in my stories! Hey, Kay-san? Did you know my real middle name is Kay? Coincidence? I think not. ^_^;
Nami the Tomb Robber: What a cute little story! ^-^ i like it already!
AN: Nami, thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it in just the first chap!
Bakufun-13 : HIEI HAS RED EYES! That is one of the thinks that makes him so adorable and cute and tough looking all at the same time! ...Oh yeah, good story, keep going ^_^
AN: *sigh* sorry SORRY SORRY! LOL! I get it, please! Don't bite my head off or eat me?! I changed it! I'm really, really, truly, truly sorry! Yes…he is cute and tough looking…gotta love him.
Ken no Kakera : Very good, baby! Yuki and Hiei aren't related, are they? I hope not, cuz I want them to get together...
AN: *sigh* NO--Hiei and Yuki are NOT related! Thank you for bringing that to my attention. Yuki, as you can read in the last chap, had a strange mother who cried reddish purple gems. Because of this, I made Yuki and Hiei both kinda like outcasts. But, their families did not mix at all, let me just clear that up.
Sango=ss: Good chapter! Extremely interesting!
AN: thank you so much! It's nice to see an Inuyasha fan here and there with a name that shows it!
Sango=ss: Yippy good good good chapter There R no words to express this overwelming happiness! hehehe I love being a drama queen
AN: Um…you replied twice to the same chap but that's alright! I love the extra reviews! And may I just say, you are a great drama queen. I'm sure there are words to describe my stories.
Ch. 2
Youkai Goddess : YAY! That was a nice chappie! Whats goin' to happen next?! Please update soon!^_^
AN: You know…I'm so glad that you ppl stay with me for so long. It does a lot for my esteem…yea, okay, psychology go bye bye! NOW! *smiles* thanks Youkai Goddess!
Kay-san1 : ai! kage-san! oh oh oh that was so great! my my i wonder whatever shall happen to yuki? no, really, i'm very curious to know. but omg that was funny when they fell down the hill! bwahahahaha!! *sweatdrops* erm, sorry 'bout that...anywayz, great chappie! i cant wait for more kage-san!
Lol, thank you so much Kay-san! Hehe, you're a curious one, ain't cha?
Sango=ss : O very exciting And unlike most fanfiction authors your chaps R actually long! Yeah!
AN: yes…in word, I try to at least write 10 pages, maybe even more in Tahoma font 14.
Ch. 3
icewolfdemon : I LOVE IT! PLEASE UPDATE
AN: Thanks again Ice Wolf Demon!
Youkai Goddess : O! This just keeps getting interesting! Hurry up with the next chapter! I wanna know what happens next! Luv ur story!^_^
AN: Wow! Thanks! Interesting?! Spooky!
Kay-san1 : aw! she went and put the blanket over him. thats so sweet! i cant wait to see what comes next! kage-san this is such a totally adorable story! write more asap cuz im dyin to know what comes next!
AN: *smiles* Yes…I had to do the blanket. Adorable…that's so cute! Don't die because of my story, please?! I wuv you! …Not like that. Sorry.
Sango=ss : Normally I don't like romance but this is good! ~_^
AN: Aws! Sango! Thanks so much! I'm glad you like this romance!
Ch. 4
Sango=ss : Yeah rebelious Yuki! Keep her like this please and keep her suprising hiei please!
AN: *smiles* She surprises him a lot, doesn't she?
Ken no Kakera : Update soon! This is one of my favorite Hiei/OC pairing stories!
AN: Thanks! I'm glad it's one of your faves!
Crystal (crystal2bme@aol.com): Hey. Hm...what to say... I know. I don't usually read these kinds of fanfics...*Puppy jumps on key board, She's lying...she's lying...lying...* *Crystal grabs puppy off keyboard* Ahem, right. As I was saying before I got interrupted, I don't always read many of these, but from what I've read so far this story's really good, you've got my interest. I hope ya update soon. Well, if ya need help with fanfics or want to talk, feel free to email me, kay? ~_~
Gotta go!
See ya later,
Crystal
AN: Thanks so much Crystal. Cute puppy. ^_^
Mmmmmmm : I like it I beg you to write more!
AN: Mew? Thanks so much…but you really didn't have to beg.
Youkai Goddess : *claps* That was such a great chapter! I know this is too soon to ask but when will they confess to each other?! Hurry up and update the next chapter!^_^
Luv this story!^_^
AN: wow! Applause too?! Well, Youkai Goddess, they confessed at the very end of the very last chap…I had to make you all wait. I love suspense, don't you?
Kay-san1 : oh my, kage-san! that was great! no, better than great! totally completely awesome! so sweet. but that part, when he called her that, and that part and all, oh i couldnt even breath! i was afraid i'd fog up the screen forever, that i was! so i jus' wanted ta let ya know that i loved it an' i hope ya write some more soon!
AN: lol, yea…the name calling is a plus
icewolfdemon : Hey, Kage, I love it, please continue as soon as possible.
AN: Thanks! I tried to keep it going quickly!
Ch. 5
Kay-san1 : kage-san! ie! kawaii! i mean, kawaii in an angsty, depressing way, but ya know what i mean. i'm writting more of 'not what they seem' right now, great chappie, and ttyl!
AN: *smiles* Thanks Kay-san! Wow! Cute and angst…yay!
Saelbu : I like this a lot please update soon.
AN: Thanks a lot Saelbu!
Youkai Goddess : OMG! Poor Yuki! Why'd ya have to kill her? Is she comin' back?
And why is everyone acting so calm? Update soon, soon, soon!
AN: CALM DOWN! My plans for this story was to get Hiei and Yuki together, not hurt them forever!
Sango=ss : No fair! Why can't I write such a good story. I think I have more stability than U, but that might be my problem!
AN: Sango…if you need help with writing the story, you can contact me and I'll give you some pointers…of course I never listen to my own words. Just think of something odd and unusual…then throw caution to the wind!
Ch. 6
Sango=ss : Yippy sappy romance. ~I'm being sarcastic here!~ A little more comedy or slashing with sword please! But otherwise good chapter! And a little romance is good sometimes ~emphasis on the little~
AN: *smiles* so Sango goes for the kill. Sorry bout the romance, but that was a choice in my story but I hope you don't mind too much.
Saelbu : Aw how sweet, write again soon.
AN: *smiles* Thanks!
Kay-san1 : oh that is so sweet! yuki-san that is adorable! what a great chappie that was!
AN: Wow…I think many of you thought it was sweet!
Ken no Kakera : Yay! Tons o' fluff! Update soon!
AN: Thanks so much Ken no Kakera! I'm glad you like fluff!
Youkai Goddess : Aw, that is so beautiful in a "Were not at that part yet" way.
I know that made completely no sense at all but I'm stupid. *shrugs*
Update the next chapter soon!^_^
AN: you're not stupid at all, Youkai Goddess. I bet I can out stupid you any day lol…it's my gift.
Ch. 7
Sango=ss: EVIL! U write the best stories, I love U ~Not really, but...~
AN: aws! Thanks, I don't think I write the best stories…check out my fave authors and stories in my profile if you think I'm good.
Kitsune Kida : hey!! this is such a good story. I hope you write more soon, i really really like it. Good job and please update soon. See Ya!!
AN: Thanks Kitsune! Your name reminds me of Shippou from Inuyasha
Ken no Kakera : Well, I finally got around to reading it. I loved it! They finally got to kiss! Please update soon!
AN: Yea, thanks a lot for the support! Yep…a kiss! lol
Toxic Tears1 : That was so good! Update soon!
AN: Thanks a lot…Are your tears really toxic?
Me:Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!
AN: That's not me so you people aren't confused…and I did update.
Miss Anime Luver : OMG! That was so ... I can't find the right words but it was great!
And Koku-whats-his-name is alive? Go Hiei! Kick his ass! I mean whoops. Lol! Next chapter, please update soon. ^_^
AN: lol, Yea…that Koku guy is alive…well, was. HAHA! Cheer some for Yuki too.
Saelbu : Wow that was good, please continue soon.
AN: *grins* Thanks a lot!
animerocker : okay that was really good but i think you might of accidentally repeated the chapter so any way the story has a really good plot and it's an original oc so please continue
AN: Yes I did and I corrected it, thanks!
Youkai Goddess : Um, I think you repeated chapter 6.
AN: Yes I know, I straightened that out though.
Kay-san1 : kya! this is so sweet! i love that line 'Well how is that? Yusuke would be the last one to have a nice spirit beast wait no, Hiei. she nodded'. hahaha! well anyways kage this is great. im over the crying about ren and kurama (for the moment). write more soon!
AN: Thanks! I love that too. I had to make some humor! There's too much of it in my life not too!
Quvil : Isn't this the same as the previous chapter?
AN: Yes, thanks. I'm sorry bout that
TrU AzN cHiK : Your story is SUPERIOR! My favorite Hiei/OC story I ever read! PLZ update
AN: Thanks! Wow! I'm so happy!
Ch. 8
Saelbu : That was great, update soon. ^_^
AN: Thanks!
Raven Ishtar : i love the story! its not like many other romance stories. it has a really great plot!
AN: Hey, what can I say, Raven? I'm not like many other people.
Shiro Ryu : I love it! Please continue updating! Soon!
AN: Thanks! Mew!
Anomalies : hey. great story. i really like it. so creative and original. pure genius. is there going to be anymore to this story? love the pairings. who'd of thought the great hiei would fall for one of his own kind? ^-^
AN: WOW! Thanks! Creative and original? I'm not a genius so…lol! Oh, hell yea there was more! WAIT A SEC! Hiei is NOT an ice demon of any kind! Koorime means ice maiden, that is it. And since Hiei is a male, he CANNOT be an ice maiden of Koorime. Had he not been born of Koorime, he could have ice in him. Since it was Koorime and the Koorime are asexual, the blood was divided equally between Hiei and Yukina. Yukina was the ice maiden and Hiei was EXACTLY like his dad, a fire demon. There is no way he is an ice demon. I read about this stuff in many places. To put it plainly, he is not an ice demon, he is full fire demon. No where in his profile did the creator put in any way he is partially ice demon.
Kay : Great story. Please update soon.
AN: Kay…thanks so much! I tried to update as soon as possible but sometimes it was really hard to.
Youkai Goddess : *screams in delight* COOL CHAPPIE AND YOU FINALLY UPDATED! ^_^ Wow, I need to collect myself for a moment *takes deep breath*
Thats better. And aw, Hiei comforting Yuki. CUTE! (I don't know why I'm like this today, must be becuz I just finish taking my English exam) The part were Hiei and Kurama talked about protecting whoever got my mind twisted in the gutter for a bit but I finally got it (Damn, I'm slow) And I think Yuki slapping Hiei was a bit much(half amusing though, Hiei getting slapped *giggle*) but no complaints So...THEY ARE OFFICIALLY A COUPLE NOW! YIPPEE! *jumps up and down and laughs* (I'm way to hyper *grins*) Hurry and update soon! Luv ur story! ^_^
AN: lol, Hiei comforting? Who'd have thought? I hope you passed the English exam. LOL, Aws, I'm sorry for making your mind go into the gutter. I didn't mean to. We're all slow compared to Hiei, yea? *smiles* Yes, Yuki slapping Hiei was pretty bad however…HOWEVER!!! Remember that she is a bit rebellious and he began to rub off on her through the story so I had to do it. They aren't…officially a couple till the last chap. Everyone should be a wee bit hyper.
Sango=ss : Woho more hopeless romance I'm so happy ~I'm actually not being sarcastic here~ and there is adventure. Now add funny junk and I'll be fine.
AN: WOW! Thanks Sango! That makes me feel great since you really don't' read stories like this. Thanks so much!
Ch. 9
Rachael : that was really good, what happened to the wound on his abdomen? is hiei going to get the courage to tell yukina the truth? i hope so *-* please update soon maby yukina could ask a truth question about her brother like do they know about him or is he in the room or stuff like that, anyway please please please update really soon
AN: Hiei is a demon so he heals faster and read the rest. I'm not telling no one nothing! WAHAHHAHA!
Ken no Kakera : Woo! Can't wait for the Truth or Dare! I'm sure it'll be hilarious.
AN: *smiles* Thanks so much. I hope it was a good chap too?!
Saelbu : That was great, I really enjoyed it. Update soon. ^_^
AN: Saelbu, thanks so much! It's great to hear reviews!
Kay-san1 : Oh, you can have so much fun with truth or dare!! Hehe. I can't wait for more!! (ah, i have a picture i found of 'mommy kurama'! i love it!)
*huggles the pretty-boy fox* ^.^ U know how hiei says hn when he doesnt know what to say? my word is meow. teehee. Meow. GREAT CHAPPIE!
AN: Aws, Kay-san, that's sweet. Yes…Kurama being mommy…it's wrong but kinda funny to think of. My word is 'Mew.'
Youkai Goddess : Yay! New chappie! ^_^ That was a scary thought, Kurama looking like a wife. *shudder* Must get that thought of my head. Anyway, Hiei and Yuki's conversation was interesting. I wonder how they will react when they play Truth or Dare.
Well, update soon! ^_^
AN: *smiles* Kurama…wife…odd but funny! I hope you liked it!
Ch. 10
Sango=ss : WRITE! NEXT! CHAPTER! Or suffer the consequences such as hit with Yusuke's spirit gun, slashed with Kuwabara's and Hiei's swords, Killed by Koenma, hit with a baseball bat by botan, slashed with Kurama's Rose Whip, frozen by the combined powers of Yuki, Touya and Yukina, slapped by Keiko and generally decimated by Jin's tornado fists and Chu's normal fists. ^_^
AN: CHILL! *hides* MEW! CALM DOWN! I did!
Celestialgrl126 : Ah! *running around room screaming* Why did u have 2 end w/ a cliffhanger, Why! I'm going insane over hear! ok deep breath...*regains composure* (not that i ever had 1 in the first place) *Smiles w/ honey coated innocence* if u dont update soon i will b forced 2 send a picture of the ring and find out ur phone# 2 tell u 7 more days... So update already, OR ELSE! Mohahahaha. Ja
AN: Cliffys are fun! Don't worry, I'm already insane. If you don't believe me, ask my friends ^_^;; Um…k? innocence is something I don't have…
Invisible : kage1586, i loved your story "When Fire and Ice Collide"...it is such a great story!!...you must write more of this story, i really want to know what happens!...i will not threaten you like some of my reviewers have...i just wish and pray that you will write more of your story Sincerely, Invisible_the_sleepy_one
AN: Aws, thanks Invisible…yes, as you may have read up there…people have threatened me as well…
Saelbu : NO! Not a cliffhanger! Oh well great chapter and update soon. ^_^
AN: Aws! Poor you! But hey, I did update!
Youkai Goddess : The beginning was funny. ^_^ Truth or dare lol And its so sweet that Hiei saved all those tears for her. AWW, so sweet. GO HIEI! KILL THAT DUMB BIG DRAGON thingy or whatever it is. Please update soon! ^_^ Luv ur story!
AN: *smiles* thanks a lot for the support girl! Yes…I had to make him make a necklace…it was gnawing at my brain…I don't have one…well it was gnawing at my finger!
Ch. 11
Kay-san1 : haha! sorry i didn't read this sooner kage, but i've been so busy. what with my b-day coming up, my friend gonna move back to japan, school, and all, it's been hecktic! ah well. Anywho, GREAT JOB! this was tons of fun to read. i loved it.
AN: It's okay, Kay-san…HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Tell your friend hi for me. Burn the school…yea
Sango=ss : O romantic! I actually loved this chapter! Keep this story up or die! The Hiei in this story is nice and soft I'm falling in love with him! And absolutely love the end pummeling part! It definitely is a unique and perfect ending! Oh no, the new Hiei is rubbing off on me! Save me Touya my ice pri- *Touya sweeps me into his arms and caries me into the sun set* You needed more me in this story *he yells back to mean authoress*
AN: Sango, thanks! Don't fall in love with Hiei…that's my job *smiles*…Yes, I had to put more humor at the end especially for you. *smiles more* Don't let him rub on you, he does that for Yuki only ^_^;; Sorry Touya but I have to watch more of you to grasp your personality better.
Kayla : AW! That was so cute. I LOVED THIS STORY! One of the best stories i ever read. :)
AN: Thanks Kayla, that really makes me feel better.
Saelbu : YAY! That was great!! ^_^
AN: Saelbu…calm down lol, thanks!
Youkai Goddess : AH! THAT WAS THE BEST CHAPTER! They finally admitted to each other! *jumps up and down* THAT WAS SO COOL! Botan jumping out of the bushes and yelling like that. lol Great work! I luv this story so much! ^_^
AN: Botan is just that way so I had to do that, no? thank you so much Youkai Goddess.
blue-eyed-demon : HEY! I love ths fic, I mean dude you've got talent that's for sure, anyways You have to do a sequel! ~ Blue~
AN: thanks blue-eyed-demon…I may just do a sequel…I wonder *thinks* perhaps!
sailor-z-360: i am laughing so hard at that ending. write more. add on to the story DON'T MAKE THIS THE END WAH! sorry this is the first fanfic in my favorets list.
AN: *smiles* I'm glad that you liked the ending so much and I'm honored that I'm on your fave list…truly! It's so wonderful ^_^;;;; Anywho! As I said, I MIGHT make a sequel…and then again, I may just keep up with inventing new stories, yes? *smiles more* I like making new stories!
~*~ Alright, I know that Vash was not a reviewer on the actual site but he has encouraged me *mutters under breath* ordered me *cough* to write more of the story all the time. Thanks ^_^;; I just had to include him in on the little thanking page~*~
Until next time my dear reviewers, this is Youkai Kage signing out!
~*~ A few words are nothing unless used with meaning.~*~
*sniffs* ain't that the truth? *goes and sulks*
