After....about...maybe....eight months, I'm back. I seriously considered dropping
this story, I thought it was getting WAY to unrealistic and I lost sight of
the plot line. I'll try and finish it up soon, please R & R!! I like
reviews. =)
What...? Hiei was spinning, spinning, spinning, upside down and inside out, over and under and in between. He saw nothing. He heard nothing. He felt, smelled, and tasted nothing. Time slowed down and stopped, and all that existed was the fathomless void, spinning with him, spiraling deeper, deeper, faster, faster. He just...was. And then he wasn't. He was jolted out of the abyss with a snap, his senses returning in a nauseating lurch, temporarily blinded by beams of sunlight. He heard Kurama gasping beside him...so he wasn't the only one to experience this.
"Are you two okay? No da!" Once again, the all too chipper cat-guy's voice. As if he didn't have enough problems.
"Yeah...I think we're all right...but...where are we?" Kurama spoke, brushing off invisible specks from his clothing.
"It's not so much a matter of where as a matter of when."
The sound of too familiar voices caused Hiei's head to snap up, his stomach lurching at the sudden action. Oh no...not again.
"Will you two please stop laughing?" A pause. "Hey, who's the shrimp?"
Oh no...please not again.
"WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO?!" Hiei shouted.
"Well...the portal didn't exactly go how it was planned, no da...."
Hiei grumbled something that would be useless to write here as it would violate the PG rating. Kurama merely chuckled.
"Come on, Hiei. It's not that bad. Haven't you ever wanted to go back in time, correct your mistakes, right your wrongs?"
Hiei glared at the fox's sly smile and the twinkling in his eyes and muttered yet another expletive.
"So...what are we going to do?" It was Kurama.
"Well, I suppose you'll have to relive it again, no da. Portals seldom twist unless for a reason."
Kurama shrugged.
Hiei glowered.
---End Ch.1---
a/n: So, what do you think so far? It's much better than the previous chappies. =) I kinda use a style from Fahrenheit 451 with that one...
What...? Hiei was spinning, spinning, spinning, upside down and inside out, over and under and in between. He saw nothing. He heard nothing. He felt, smelled, and tasted nothing. Time slowed down and stopped, and all that existed was the fathomless void, spinning with him, spiraling deeper, deeper, faster, faster. He just...was. And then he wasn't. He was jolted out of the abyss with a snap, his senses returning in a nauseating lurch, temporarily blinded by beams of sunlight. He heard Kurama gasping beside him...so he wasn't the only one to experience this.
"Are you two okay? No da!" Once again, the all too chipper cat-guy's voice. As if he didn't have enough problems.
"Yeah...I think we're all right...but...where are we?" Kurama spoke, brushing off invisible specks from his clothing.
"It's not so much a matter of where as a matter of when."
The sound of too familiar voices caused Hiei's head to snap up, his stomach lurching at the sudden action. Oh no...not again.
"Will you two please stop laughing?" A pause. "Hey, who's the shrimp?"
Oh no...please not again.
"WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO?!" Hiei shouted.
"Well...the portal didn't exactly go how it was planned, no da...."
Hiei grumbled something that would be useless to write here as it would violate the PG rating. Kurama merely chuckled.
"Come on, Hiei. It's not that bad. Haven't you ever wanted to go back in time, correct your mistakes, right your wrongs?"
Hiei glared at the fox's sly smile and the twinkling in his eyes and muttered yet another expletive.
"So...what are we going to do?" It was Kurama.
"Well, I suppose you'll have to relive it again, no da. Portals seldom twist unless for a reason."
Kurama shrugged.
Hiei glowered.
---End Ch.1---
a/n: So, what do you think so far? It's much better than the previous chappies. =) I kinda use a style from Fahrenheit 451 with that one...
