LogicalRaven: I would never guess that you would read my story lol, sorry for the past/present error, it because I forgot to change back all the verbs to present.
I wont do any past/present error from now on because I will double check to make sure that I don't repeat them.
Thank for the other others person that had read my first chapter. This is for you, the second one.
Hope that you will all like it!!!
Harry Potter Vacation
Chapter 2
"Ding dong"
"Ding dong"
"Who will come to our house this early in the morning!" said uncle Vermon in a big mad voice.
Uncle Vermon walked from to kitchen to the door. He opens the door and saw a girl with black raven hair
"Who are you", said Uncle Vermon
"Hi, I'm Cho, a friend of Harry", said Cho who was looking at a big man with a moustache. Cho was wearing a medium black skirt that stopped just where her knees where with a red top.
"There is no Harry in this house, miss", said uncle Vermon nervously
"Yes there is" yell Cho
She pushes Mr. Vermon out of the way and enters the house.
"Harry, are you there…Where are you...HARRY", shout Cho in the house looking for him
During this time, He was in his room on the second floor. Harry heard Cho calling him downstair. He tooked his trunk and the cage of Hedwig. She (Hedwig) flew in the room. He looks at her and said: "I will be at Cho Chang house, OK, meet me there." He then left the room and went downstairs. "Get out of my house miss", shout Mr. Vermon "Harry there you are", said Cho with a big smile. "Cho", said Harry, he tought she was gorgous "Come fast, my dad is waiting outside in the car""Get out, get out you freak," roar Mr Vermon
Harry run outside the
house with Cho. They went to the black mercedez that was in front of the house.
Harry heard the door of the Dursleys' family close so fast he thought it would
break in half. When they were in front of the car, a man opens the door. Cho
put Harry's trunk and cage in the car's back trunk. The two
enter in the car and took togethor the back seet.
"Harry, this is my father"
"Dad, this Harry the boy that a spoked with you about"
"Please to meet you Mr. Chang", said Harry nervously
"Hi Mr.Potter, I finally meet you at last.
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During this time, Cho was talking all about her family, what did they like to do, what they don't , the vacation trip that they tooked ,etc…
Harry did't talk a lot about his life because almost everyone knew what the boy-who-lived did. He only answer some few question that Mr Chang asked him.
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"Harry, this my house", said Cho
"Wow, it's beautiful", said Harry looking at the giant house
"Come I will present you my mom"
"Dad, can you put his trunk in my room"
"Yes, sweetheart" said Mr Chang
Harry and Cho enter the big house. They went together to the kitchen.
In the kitchen was an old lady wearing a Chinese dress and Cho's mom thought harry.
"Oh, hi sweetheart" said Mrs Chang who was wearing a traditional Chinese blue dress
"Mom, This is Harry"
"Hi, Mrs Chang, it a pleasure to meet you"
"Hello, Harry, so I finally meet Cho's boyfriend", said Mrs Chang looking at her daughter with a big smile
"Mom! Harry is not my boyfriend, he's only my friend", said Cho who was now almost all red"
"Harry, come with me I will show where you will be sleeping"
The two teenagers went out of the kitchen and went to the second floor.
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+ I know it short but it because I didn't have a lot of time this week. I had a lot of homework and exams. +
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+ The next chapter will be longer!!! I hope that you liked this one +
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+ I need a beta reader ok so if someone want to be it, write it in the review or email me +
+ SORRY FOR THE PAST/PRESENT error it because I want to post it fast because I am going to +
+ my friend house lol +
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