Author-ey Notes: I've got a few of them today. The first however, Happy Birthday Ron!!
And moving onto story related things:
stargurl727 - Yes, nagging is -very- good. I do enjoy writing nagging..
AL: Thanks :. And in an earlier review you asked about phone calls? Here's the first phone call of the story, more shall come as soon as I settle on a good format for them..
4. Early Morning Phone Call
*ring*
The red numbers on the digital clock read 5:00am.
*ring*
Who would call at 5am?
*ring*
Whoever it was just wasn't giving up.
*ring*
Grace sat up in the bed in the guest room and grabbed the phone. She hit the on button.
"Go away! It's five in the morning!"
"It's eight here. Forgot about the time change, sorry yo."
"Oh, Rove, it's you. I thought I would have to hunt someone down and hurt them."
"Didn't mean to wake you up. So.. you get my letter?"
"Yeah. You'll get the responce in a few days."
"Cool." A long pause. "I need your help."
"With?"
"Jane. And Iris. I want to break up with Iris."
"Finally he comes around. Just took him six months. Kill off your relationship with the Eye and get together with Girardi."
"I don't want to hurt anyone, yo."
"Rove, either way someone's gonna get hurt. Just dump Squeaky. She and the Bird can run off together."
"...The Bird?"
"The geek's girlfriend. They'd be perfect together. Just call Iris and kill it."
"It's not that easy Grace."
"Sure it is you idiot. You -just- said you wanted to break up with Cousin It. And you -know- you and Girardi are perfect for each other."
"I don't want to break up with Iris in a letter, yo."
"Then wait until the end of the month when you get back from New York. Either way.."
"I'll wait. Breaking up with someone in a letter just seems really low."
"You you really -have- finally seen the light."
"Unchallenged."
"Good job Rove. Now I'm hanging up on you and going back to bed. Talk to you later."
"Thanks Grace. Bye."
And moving onto story related things:
stargurl727 - Yes, nagging is -very- good. I do enjoy writing nagging..
AL: Thanks :. And in an earlier review you asked about phone calls? Here's the first phone call of the story, more shall come as soon as I settle on a good format for them..
4. Early Morning Phone Call
*ring*
The red numbers on the digital clock read 5:00am.
*ring*
Who would call at 5am?
*ring*
Whoever it was just wasn't giving up.
*ring*
Grace sat up in the bed in the guest room and grabbed the phone. She hit the on button.
"Go away! It's five in the morning!"
"It's eight here. Forgot about the time change, sorry yo."
"Oh, Rove, it's you. I thought I would have to hunt someone down and hurt them."
"Didn't mean to wake you up. So.. you get my letter?"
"Yeah. You'll get the responce in a few days."
"Cool." A long pause. "I need your help."
"With?"
"Jane. And Iris. I want to break up with Iris."
"Finally he comes around. Just took him six months. Kill off your relationship with the Eye and get together with Girardi."
"I don't want to hurt anyone, yo."
"Rove, either way someone's gonna get hurt. Just dump Squeaky. She and the Bird can run off together."
"...The Bird?"
"The geek's girlfriend. They'd be perfect together. Just call Iris and kill it."
"It's not that easy Grace."
"Sure it is you idiot. You -just- said you wanted to break up with Cousin It. And you -know- you and Girardi are perfect for each other."
"I don't want to break up with Iris in a letter, yo."
"Then wait until the end of the month when you get back from New York. Either way.."
"I'll wait. Breaking up with someone in a letter just seems really low."
"You you really -have- finally seen the light."
"Unchallenged."
"Good job Rove. Now I'm hanging up on you and going back to bed. Talk to you later."
"Thanks Grace. Bye."
