Ok this story is the combination of two very different storylines; I'm
sure that you have figured the first one out by now, but as to the second
one????? Well that would spoil all of the surprise plot twists that I'm
going to use. ;-P
Oh and I (sadly) can't claim ownership over the League or and of the characters from the books.
*Black screen*
V.O. "There are times when everything in life seems perfect"
The Nautilus skims across the water; fade
The League is all standing in the very front of the deck; fade
Tom is spinning around, Becky in his arms; fade
Tom sitting at a table with two other young men laughing; fade
V.O. "What if in a single moment,"
Tom and another agent hiding in the shadows; fade
A gunshot, Tom diving into the other agent "Look out!"
The two tumbling down a steep incline,
Tom's head slams into a rock, everything goes black
V.O. "It was all stolen from you"
Tom, arms held by two men, being beaten; fade
Becky throwing her self across a bed sobbing; fade
Mina throws something into a wall with a scream; fade
Jekyll, Mina, and Skinner standing on a dock watching the Nautilus sink beneath the waves.
(Over-head angle) The three look at each other then head off in different directions; fade
Tom falling onto his knees in front of a grave tears running down his cheeks; fade
V.O. "What would you do?"
(Over-head angle) Tom is on his knees in a small cell, head bent. His back is covered in whip lashes, some are fresh.
V.O. "How far would you go to get it all back?"
Tom throws back his head and screams; fade
Mina whirls, eyes wide in shock
Tom, in torn and dirty clothes, dives off a high cliff
Skinner runs down an alley, shedding coat and hat
Two figures -silhouetted by the setting sun- locked in an intense sword fight
Light from a torch reveals a cave full of treasure
Skinner and Tom sitting on a chest in the middle of the room. Tom is changed; his hair is dark and to his shoulders, his face is mostly hidden behind a beard.
Skinner: "Your probably the richest man in the world right now mate. So...what are you going to buy?"
Tom: "Revenge." *Fade*
[b]Fragile as Glass[/b]
By Leigh S. Durron
Coming soon
Okay, let me know what you think. Should I write it or forget it?
Oh and I (sadly) can't claim ownership over the League or and of the characters from the books.
*Black screen*
V.O. "There are times when everything in life seems perfect"
The Nautilus skims across the water; fade
The League is all standing in the very front of the deck; fade
Tom is spinning around, Becky in his arms; fade
Tom sitting at a table with two other young men laughing; fade
V.O. "What if in a single moment,"
Tom and another agent hiding in the shadows; fade
A gunshot, Tom diving into the other agent "Look out!"
The two tumbling down a steep incline,
Tom's head slams into a rock, everything goes black
V.O. "It was all stolen from you"
Tom, arms held by two men, being beaten; fade
Becky throwing her self across a bed sobbing; fade
Mina throws something into a wall with a scream; fade
Jekyll, Mina, and Skinner standing on a dock watching the Nautilus sink beneath the waves.
(Over-head angle) The three look at each other then head off in different directions; fade
Tom falling onto his knees in front of a grave tears running down his cheeks; fade
V.O. "What would you do?"
(Over-head angle) Tom is on his knees in a small cell, head bent. His back is covered in whip lashes, some are fresh.
V.O. "How far would you go to get it all back?"
Tom throws back his head and screams; fade
Mina whirls, eyes wide in shock
Tom, in torn and dirty clothes, dives off a high cliff
Skinner runs down an alley, shedding coat and hat
Two figures -silhouetted by the setting sun- locked in an intense sword fight
Light from a torch reveals a cave full of treasure
Skinner and Tom sitting on a chest in the middle of the room. Tom is changed; his hair is dark and to his shoulders, his face is mostly hidden behind a beard.
Skinner: "Your probably the richest man in the world right now mate. So...what are you going to buy?"
Tom: "Revenge." *Fade*
[b]Fragile as Glass[/b]
By Leigh S. Durron
Coming soon
Okay, let me know what you think. Should I write it or forget it?
