IMPORTANT MESSAGE
I want to thank everyone who has reviewed my story. I encourage people to post with critiques and ideas, so that I may expand my writing skills. If you don't like the story, go ahead and tell me, your opinion is respected. But judge the story. DO NOT presume to make judgments of my character by the content of my writing. Also, DO NOT, I REPEAT, DO NOT make judgments about those who review the story. Not everyone is an Oxford scholar, not everyone is an excellent typist. DO NOT make the mistake in thinking these are unintelligent people by the remarks they leave and the way they write. For all you know, you may be degrading a Master Degree Harvard graduate with a broken arm who can only type with his weak hand, thereby keeping his comments short because of his condition.

Thank you. I plan to have the next chapter up by Saturday night. It is in the making right now.