Pokemon:a story of partners and heroes
IÕm just trying out this first fic to see how people like it but IÕm actually going to write a story that actually begins regularly at the first town. Please review and say if this story is good at all. note~ I know this copies Ruby and Sapphire but please donÕt bag on me for that.

This adventure opens up with our young heros heading for Petalburg city to fight AshÕs dad Norman. He is very anxious to find out if he can be his dad. May thinks he can do it and is very confident in him. As they approach the gym they are surprised to see Wally standing outside waiting for someone. Ash and Wally decide to have a battle and Ash is very confident. The battle insues and Ash cleans out WallyÕs Kirlia with his Combusken. That is the only pokemon Wally has. Ash wins! ASh is very happens and continues into the gym. He goes straight to his dads gym leader room. His dad is waiting and expecting him. They talk for a minute and the battle insues. His dad send out Slaking and he sends out Lairon. Lairon hits a critical hit with headbutt and knocks out Slaking in one hit. Ash keeps Lairon in and Norman sends out Vigoroth. Vigoroth hits with focus punch and Lairon is knocked out. Ash sends out Kirlia and with one psychic he knocks out Vigoroth. Norman sends out Slaking and the Slaking knocks out Kirlia with one body slam. Ash sends out Combusken Lv.35. He hits Slaking with a double kick and Slaking has half health. Slaking attacks with a focus punch but it misses. Combusken attacks with double kick and Slaking is knocked out. Combusken evolves into Blaziken at Lv.36. Ash is so proud and he has beaten his dad. His dad rewards him with badge and Ash is off.