WOW! I never realized how many errors I had. I bet that you guys all did. Sorry. Feral: (I can't get on to the internet right now- so I hope that's spelled right) I absolutely loved that idea. I'll definitely do that, but probably not for a while. I want to finish writing all my other stories before I start any new ones.
I didn't get to many reviews for chapter 9. that was depressing. All I want to say is the more reviews I get the faster I put the chapter up. (that's why it took so long to get this up) but I've said that before. So on with the story. (I promise that Jesse and Suze will get together soon!) (I miss not being able to write any fluff between the two, so there will definitely be a lot in the last few chapters)
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chapter 10:
Suze's P.O.V.
I watched as Jesse ran out of the room. Did he know how much this was killing me? I looked at the clock. Lunch was over, and I wasn't ready to go to class. Plus Jesse would be in class, and I definitely didn't want to face him. I headed for the cemetery. No one ever goes there, so it would be the most peaceful place to go.
I reached the cemetery and kept walking. I didn't stop until I came to an empty lot. I didn't even realize that I had started walking this direction, but I had ended up where Jesse's grave used to be. I knew it was no longer there, so it came as no shock to me when I found it empty. I sat down and started to cry. This is where I had first kissed Jesse. This is where he first told me that he loved me, and those two things would never happen again. All because of this necklace. I yanked it off of my neck and threw it as far away from be as possible. I didn't look to see where it landed, I didn't want to know.
I started crying even harder. Why did I ever go back? Why? I sat there, crying for who knows how long, when finally I heard a little voice from behind me. "I think you dropped this." said Jesse's twin sister. Her hand was stretched out and dangling from it was the necklace. I took it from her and set it down in front of me. "You seem sad. What's wrong?" Maria asked me. She sat down and stared at me with eyes so much like Jesse. "You look a lot like Jesse. You must be Maria"
"You know Jesse?" Maria asked me somewhat surprised.
"He's in all of my classes at school. I'm Susannah." This time Maria's mouth dropped open. "Your Susannah?" she cocked her head off to the side. "Yes, I can see it now."
"See what?" I asked with raised eyebrows. "Nothing, you just look like someone. Now, why are you crying?"
"It's a long story." Maria got this I-don't-think-so look on her face "long story, my tushi. Give me the rundown if you want." I gave a little laugh. This girl has a tough spirit. "Ok, I'll give you the run down of it. I'm in love with someone who doesn't love me back."
"Let me guess. Jesse?" I looked up at her. This girl seemed so full of knowledge. She would have been very powerful, had she not died when she was eight. I nodded my head in response to her answer. A reassuring smile grew on Maria's face.
"Give him some time, he'll come around. He's just scared right now."
"Scared of what?" I asked Maria, as she began to stand back up.
"It's not my place to tell you. I have to go now. I'll see you some other time. Oh, and something tells me that you should keep a better eye on that necklace." She said that last part while staring at the necklace lying in front of me. It was kind of creepy the way that she said it too. Then she went back into her cheerful self. "bye!" she said, waving her hand. "bye"
I watched as she dematerialized. Wishing she would have told me more about Jesse. I stood up to go myself. Glancing at my watch I knew that I had five minuets to get to my last period. If I hurried I could make it. but little did I know that that would be happening, or that this day was going to last a lot longer than I thought.
I was almost out of the cemetery when I felt a hand on my shoulder. I stifled a scream and turned around to find myself looking into the eyes of a teenage girl. She had blue eyes, blond hair. She was very pretty, but looked extremely said. "please help me, they need to put him away."
"wait, first you need to tell me your name." I said, remembering what Jesse had told me when I had first me Doc's mother. See Jesse, I did listen to what you said. I did listen to you.
"I'm Jessica Allen, and I need you to help me bring my murderer into custody." I stared at her for a second, realizing how serious she was, and how she seemed to be in a hurry. "ok, I got you, now tell me how you were murdered." By the look on Jessica's face, she was getting irritated.
"We don't have time for that, he's already chosen his next victim. By the end of tonight, she'll be dead." Now there's the reason for the hurry. "Ok, tell me everything I need to know."
"Yesterday when I was walking home from school, a guy pulled his van over to the curb next to me. he got out of the car, and knocked me unconscious. When I woke up I was tied to wall, in some basement. There was a girl next to me, she's younger than I, only thirteen I think. Her name is Sara. She was still unconscious, but I recognized her as a freshman at my school. When the guy came back down he looked at the two of us. He said that since I was awake, and she wasn't, that he would kill me first. We went over to me, and untied me from the wall. He broke my hands while doing so, so I wouldn't get away. He brought me to a different part of the basement, and he raped me. he then snapped my neck. I was told that you would be the one that would be able to help me." All I want to know is who in there right mind tells these people to come to me. I mean really, don't they see that I have my own problems.
"How do you know that this guy hasn't killed Sara too?" Jessica rolled her eyes. "Because I went to check on her, he won't do it till later, but we must hurry."
Ok, I have to get a friend first. No offense but I'm not about ready to deal with a rapist by myself." I started running for my sixth period class. Paul was in the class, and would be more than grateful to help. I hope. We got to the class when I realized something.
"I can't go in there; I'll get in trouble for missing class. I want you to go in there, and say 'Paul, Suze needs your help, come quick.'" Jessica dematerialized, and only then did I remember Jesse. He was in that class too. He would hear Jessica, and, well who knew what he would do. A moment later, Paul came running out of the classroom fallowed by Jessica.
"Suze what's wrong?" he said after he saw me. "We need to stop a murder, Jessica, do you know your way to the place there keeping Sara?" she nodded her head, and I turned back to Paul. "You're going to drive us to where ever Jessica tells you to. I'll explain on the way."
We raced over to where Paul had parked his car. We got in and Jessica immediately started to give us directions. I explained to Paul everything I knew. "Let me get this strait. You'll go try to bring a murder to justice by yourself, but you won't go by yourself to try to save a thirteen year old girl?" now was so not the time for jokes. "First off, this is a full grown man we're talking about here. Michael was only seventeen, and he had a big crush on me so I trusted that he wouldn't hurt me. Plus last time I was really wishing for some help. And if the RLS angels didn't come, Michael would have killed me."
"The angels almost killed you themselves." Paul said sternly. "Hey, that was a long time ago. This is completely different. And I did go get you did I not?"
"There it is" Jessica said, ignoring our bickering. Her finger was stretched out to an old run down house. We had driven past the main part of a town, and were in the more remote area of Carmel. The houses were fewer in-between and this served as the perfect place for a murder.
"Well, let's go save Sara."
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Ok, bet none of you were expecting the whole murder/rape thing to show up. Right well there's going to only be about four more chapters and I promise that Jesse will be in here shortly. (Actually at the end of the next chapter.) I hope you liked it. Now go review!!!!!!! I'll post again after I get my reviews up to a total of 60. Just call me greedy.
