*sniff sniff* why doesn't anyone review? Do you not like ma story? If you
don't, can you just review and tell me wat I need to improve on? Reviews
are very encouraging to me.
To Junky (the ONLY review I got, and you gave me the will to continue): I noe this starts like Romeo and Juliet, but I only realized this after I finished writing this chapter. The rest of the story (according to my knowledge of romeo and juliet, which isn't a lot) won't be the same.
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Enemies by Blood, Together by Destiny: Assassination
As Link led Zelda to the dance floor, she began to think. She had heard the name Link before, but she couldn't remember. She was deep in though and didn't hear Link when he called.
" Earth to Zelda! Are you there?"
" Oh, sorry Link, I was thinking about something else."
" Okay.. As I was saying, don't you love the decorations?" Link said as he began to dance with Zelda.
Zelda looked around for the first time and marveled and the design. She gasped. The sight was breathtaking. There were chandeliers hanging on every inch of the roof. In the middle of the room, was a giant chandeliers that made the other chandeliers look like a speck of dust. Under the giant chandelier was a magnificent glass sculpture of the king.. Most of the furniture was made of glass. So the light from the chandeliers made the glass more beautiful. Around the room were purple silk drapes.
" It's beautiful Link." Zelda said as she put her head on Link's shoulder.
Link smiled and wrapped his arms around Zelda and slowly danced to the beat of the music. They were both enjoying the others presence and didn't notice the time go by. They wanted this moment to last an eternity. Suddenly, Impa tapped on Zelda's shoulder.
" My Princess, please excuse my interruption, but you must follow me now."
Her voice seemed urgent. So Zelda reluctantly followed. But she didn't leave without giving Link a kiss on the cheek.
" May we meet again Link."
Link bowed down and in return, kissed the princess's hand.
"It was certainly an honor to dance with you tonight. I hope I will get to do that honor again later on Zelda. But before you leave, I would like you to have this." Link said as he gave Zelda a necklace with a pink jewel at the end. He put it on for her. "May you always have me in your heart."
Zelda blushed and quickly said a goodbye before following Impa.
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Zelda's POV
As she followed Impa, Zelda began to wonder. Why would Impa want me to go with her? Where was she taking me? I have never seen this part of the castle before. But she trusted Impa, and followed her.
" My dear Zelda, I have overheard a plot to kill you and the king. I have told the king, but he won't believe me. He..he dismissed me.."
Zelda gasped and couldn't believe what she just heard. It couldn't be true! Her father wouldn't do such a thing! Her father should know that Impa was very loyal to the royal family of Hyrule.
" Zelda, you must trust me. Hide here in this room. Only I know about this room and no one will find you here. When everyone has left, dress in those clothes over there. If guards find you, say you have wandered here to see the party, but hid when you heard trouble. Once they set you free, go straight to Talador, for they will not expect the princess to be hiding in their own land."
Zelda was lost of words, wasn't Link from Talador? That couldn't be right. But she trusted Impa more than anyone.
"Impa, what about my father? And where are you going?"
Impa looked sadly at the ground. "I'm sorry Zelda, but I have no power to speak to the king now. I will go and help your father out when trouble comes and when he believes me again."
Zelda nodded once again. " One last question, what do you mean by Talador not expecting me to be there?'
" Talador is the country that wants you and your father dead."
Zelda was shocked. That couldn't be true!
" I'm sorry Zelda, but I have to go. Please, be safe. Good bye my dear princess." Impa said.
Zelda didn't know it right now, but these were the last words she was going to hear from her dear friend Impa. She clutched the necklace given by Link and hoped with all she had that this wasn't true and Impa was playing a trick on her. But Zelda had never seen Impa so serious before.
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Link's POV
Link began to wonder why Zelda had to go. She didn't return for a long time. He could see there were many young women waiting for him to ask them to dance, but he couldn't abandon Zelda. Somehow, he had created a bond between them. He didn't care about what his father thought. He knew this was true love. Suddenly, his father tapped his shoulder and told him t follow. His sisters were already out the door already. Link wanted to protest, but his father silenced him. They went to their carriage and silently left. When they were out of the castle, his father spoke.
" My son, I have not told you about this because I didn't want you to be sad, but I have been planning an assassination on the Hyrulian King and their princess."
Link gasped. It couldn't be true!
" YOU CAN'T! I HAVE TO GO BACK AND RESCUE HER!'
" This is a chance to have revenge at last."
"FATHER! I LOVE THE PRINCESS!"
At this, the king was enraged.
"LINK, I FORBID YOU TO LOVE HER OR GO BACK. YOU SHALL NEVER SPEAK OF HER AGAIN IN MY PRESENCE!"
"YOU CAN'T DO THIS!"
The king then ordered a guard to beat his son until he fainted. He shock his head and said, " Link, one day you'll understand this is for your own good." He picked up Link and put on the bed in the carriage. Then, they continued their way home.
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Zelda's POV
Zelda began changing into the clothes Impa had prepared. Each second was painful. The man she loved had lied to her. Even though they had only met for one day, it felt like an eternity. A few minutes later, she heard a commotion downstairs. The assassination had begun. She prayed that her father and Impa would be safe.
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Impa's POV
She heard the killers coming. Time was running out. She had to convince the king. As she approached the Royal Table, the guards forbid her to come closer.
" Keep out peasant." One of the guards said.
" I MUST see the king of Hyrule!"
" You cannot see any king unless you're called."
" But.."
Before Impa could finish. The killers had already entered the building. Everyone froze for a second and ran. The killers took no notice of them, but headed straight for the king of Hyrule. When they reached him, Impa jumped in between the king and the killers.
" Run my king! They are coming to kill you!"
The king ran, but wasn't fast enough. Just as he reached the door, they caught up and killed him. They then turned to Impa.
" Where is the princess!"
" You may kill me and torture me. But I will NEVER betray my dear princess!"
" You miserable old hag! This is for the trouble you've caused!"
One of the killers stabbed her heart and laughed.
" I've failed you my princess.." Were the last words Impa said before she died.
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sorri for the very sad ending.but it has to happen. please review, I'll be very happy if you did. And I hope this chapter is better than the last one I wrote. It certainly is longer! Please tell me wat I have to improve on, I'd really appreciate it.
Once again, please read Pinguicha's great Zelda/Link fic. It'll inspire you like it did to me!
UPDATE! Sorri! I just found out I blocked anonymous reviews! I'm so sorri for saying no1 reviewed when it was probably my fault. Thank you, and hoped you enjoyed this chapter!
To Junky (the ONLY review I got, and you gave me the will to continue): I noe this starts like Romeo and Juliet, but I only realized this after I finished writing this chapter. The rest of the story (according to my knowledge of romeo and juliet, which isn't a lot) won't be the same.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Enemies by Blood, Together by Destiny: Assassination
As Link led Zelda to the dance floor, she began to think. She had heard the name Link before, but she couldn't remember. She was deep in though and didn't hear Link when he called.
" Earth to Zelda! Are you there?"
" Oh, sorry Link, I was thinking about something else."
" Okay.. As I was saying, don't you love the decorations?" Link said as he began to dance with Zelda.
Zelda looked around for the first time and marveled and the design. She gasped. The sight was breathtaking. There were chandeliers hanging on every inch of the roof. In the middle of the room, was a giant chandeliers that made the other chandeliers look like a speck of dust. Under the giant chandelier was a magnificent glass sculpture of the king.. Most of the furniture was made of glass. So the light from the chandeliers made the glass more beautiful. Around the room were purple silk drapes.
" It's beautiful Link." Zelda said as she put her head on Link's shoulder.
Link smiled and wrapped his arms around Zelda and slowly danced to the beat of the music. They were both enjoying the others presence and didn't notice the time go by. They wanted this moment to last an eternity. Suddenly, Impa tapped on Zelda's shoulder.
" My Princess, please excuse my interruption, but you must follow me now."
Her voice seemed urgent. So Zelda reluctantly followed. But she didn't leave without giving Link a kiss on the cheek.
" May we meet again Link."
Link bowed down and in return, kissed the princess's hand.
"It was certainly an honor to dance with you tonight. I hope I will get to do that honor again later on Zelda. But before you leave, I would like you to have this." Link said as he gave Zelda a necklace with a pink jewel at the end. He put it on for her. "May you always have me in your heart."
Zelda blushed and quickly said a goodbye before following Impa.
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Zelda's POV
As she followed Impa, Zelda began to wonder. Why would Impa want me to go with her? Where was she taking me? I have never seen this part of the castle before. But she trusted Impa, and followed her.
" My dear Zelda, I have overheard a plot to kill you and the king. I have told the king, but he won't believe me. He..he dismissed me.."
Zelda gasped and couldn't believe what she just heard. It couldn't be true! Her father wouldn't do such a thing! Her father should know that Impa was very loyal to the royal family of Hyrule.
" Zelda, you must trust me. Hide here in this room. Only I know about this room and no one will find you here. When everyone has left, dress in those clothes over there. If guards find you, say you have wandered here to see the party, but hid when you heard trouble. Once they set you free, go straight to Talador, for they will not expect the princess to be hiding in their own land."
Zelda was lost of words, wasn't Link from Talador? That couldn't be right. But she trusted Impa more than anyone.
"Impa, what about my father? And where are you going?"
Impa looked sadly at the ground. "I'm sorry Zelda, but I have no power to speak to the king now. I will go and help your father out when trouble comes and when he believes me again."
Zelda nodded once again. " One last question, what do you mean by Talador not expecting me to be there?'
" Talador is the country that wants you and your father dead."
Zelda was shocked. That couldn't be true!
" I'm sorry Zelda, but I have to go. Please, be safe. Good bye my dear princess." Impa said.
Zelda didn't know it right now, but these were the last words she was going to hear from her dear friend Impa. She clutched the necklace given by Link and hoped with all she had that this wasn't true and Impa was playing a trick on her. But Zelda had never seen Impa so serious before.
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Link's POV
Link began to wonder why Zelda had to go. She didn't return for a long time. He could see there were many young women waiting for him to ask them to dance, but he couldn't abandon Zelda. Somehow, he had created a bond between them. He didn't care about what his father thought. He knew this was true love. Suddenly, his father tapped his shoulder and told him t follow. His sisters were already out the door already. Link wanted to protest, but his father silenced him. They went to their carriage and silently left. When they were out of the castle, his father spoke.
" My son, I have not told you about this because I didn't want you to be sad, but I have been planning an assassination on the Hyrulian King and their princess."
Link gasped. It couldn't be true!
" YOU CAN'T! I HAVE TO GO BACK AND RESCUE HER!'
" This is a chance to have revenge at last."
"FATHER! I LOVE THE PRINCESS!"
At this, the king was enraged.
"LINK, I FORBID YOU TO LOVE HER OR GO BACK. YOU SHALL NEVER SPEAK OF HER AGAIN IN MY PRESENCE!"
"YOU CAN'T DO THIS!"
The king then ordered a guard to beat his son until he fainted. He shock his head and said, " Link, one day you'll understand this is for your own good." He picked up Link and put on the bed in the carriage. Then, they continued their way home.
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Zelda's POV
Zelda began changing into the clothes Impa had prepared. Each second was painful. The man she loved had lied to her. Even though they had only met for one day, it felt like an eternity. A few minutes later, she heard a commotion downstairs. The assassination had begun. She prayed that her father and Impa would be safe.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Impa's POV
She heard the killers coming. Time was running out. She had to convince the king. As she approached the Royal Table, the guards forbid her to come closer.
" Keep out peasant." One of the guards said.
" I MUST see the king of Hyrule!"
" You cannot see any king unless you're called."
" But.."
Before Impa could finish. The killers had already entered the building. Everyone froze for a second and ran. The killers took no notice of them, but headed straight for the king of Hyrule. When they reached him, Impa jumped in between the king and the killers.
" Run my king! They are coming to kill you!"
The king ran, but wasn't fast enough. Just as he reached the door, they caught up and killed him. They then turned to Impa.
" Where is the princess!"
" You may kill me and torture me. But I will NEVER betray my dear princess!"
" You miserable old hag! This is for the trouble you've caused!"
One of the killers stabbed her heart and laughed.
" I've failed you my princess.." Were the last words Impa said before she died.
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sorri for the very sad ending.but it has to happen. please review, I'll be very happy if you did. And I hope this chapter is better than the last one I wrote. It certainly is longer! Please tell me wat I have to improve on, I'd really appreciate it.
Once again, please read Pinguicha's great Zelda/Link fic. It'll inspire you like it did to me!
UPDATE! Sorri! I just found out I blocked anonymous reviews! I'm so sorri for saying no1 reviewed when it was probably my fault. Thank you, and hoped you enjoyed this chapter!
