Okay, well this is the first thing I have ever posted, wrote about 5 stories just can't make myself post them *sigh* oh well…

Diclamer: duh, Naruto=NOT MINE! If it was do you think I would be posting this on FF.net? I didn't think so.

This I originally started as a song for the band I am in.. well the more I got done the more it reminded me of Gaara…. Well I decided I might as well post something…. This is it. If you all like it I will post more, if not I will be content to read… well R&R.

btw, this is written as if Gaara was talking, I guess…. w/e… well tell me if this sounds like Gaara

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Can't lose control

Can't lose my soul

How can I hide…

When the enemy is inside?

Sleep escapes me

Can't let it take me

How many died?

When I tried to hide?

The demons within

They know my every sin…

They're dead.

My hands are red.

I must have slipped

It never missed.

Now I don't mind,

We're one of a kind.

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Well? Tell me if it sucked… it was a song originally… but… it, ummm, morphed? Also, if anyone has ideas for a title…. It would be appreciated!

Gaara: I am SOOOO not that whinny!

Orrin: shut up, Gaara.

Gaara: you will pay for that!!

Orrin: *runs from Gaara, making the fatal mistake of forgetting the sand* hopefully I will be alive to read your reviews… if there are any. *coughcough*