Please, keep the reviews coming! All the comments are very appreciated.
CHAPTER 5
The club was just opening and the crowd was starting to fill in, as Derek immediately began spinning, with Marisol just watching in awe. She was staring at him the whole time, just happy that he would look over and smile every few minutes. The multi-colored, flourescent lights were bouncing off the dark walls and into Marisol's heart.
She had always loved the club scene, and now what was better than to enjoy a great place with your new boyfriend? She watched her boyfriend spin on the high platform as she looked down on the crowd, watching all types of different stories unfold. But the lights suddenly turned darker and everyone disappeared into the music. Derek at this point was using a lot of DJ Baby Anne, but as soon as he was done, the crowd came back into focus and back into life. Marisol saw everyone greet each other once the lights turned slightly back on and around the huge rooms of the club, almost as if they were in a different world during 'Down To Zero' and 'Fury'. She was in a different world of her own, too. All that mattered was herself and Derek.
As the night wore on, Marisol emerged herself into the music and the magenta lights and green glowsticks soon became just more notes in any happy hardcore song that Derek was spinning. She started moving, and she found herself into a different world for a few minutes. She felt connected to everyone else in the club, and then started to cry. Even though she hadn't actually spoken to Derek in an hour or so, she felt closer to him than ever before now.
Once Derek was done around midnight, he took off his headphones and said goodbye to the crowd, who was beginning to fill out just a little. The early morning groups would be arriving shortly, and that was a completely different atmosphere altogether. Marisol then noticed a girl coming up to the platform, aimed right towards Derek. Marisol grew paranoid and moved closer to her boyfriend, nudging him on the shoulders. He turned around, saw the girl, smiled and said to Marisol, "I'll take care of this."
Derek headed over to the girl and then a few seconds later, pointed to Marisol. The girl nodded solemnly and got swept away in the crowd, disappearing into the black. Marisol gave a sigh of relief and Derek came back over to her. The two of them grabbed Derek's equipment, the club manager said goodbye to Derek, and they were off to his car to load in the equipment. "Damn, that was a good set, chico! I loved every minute of it...thank you." Marisol told Derek, hopping into the passenger seat and buckling her seatbelt.
"Really? Well thank you. I wish I could've spent it with you, would've been nicer that way but it was a good night anyway, right?" Derek replied, throwing the car into gear and heading off to the hotel.
_________________________________________
"Marisol, my dear, moi has been looking far and wide for your presence!" Marisol zipped around in her room to see JP standing in the doorway, his hands on each side of the doorway, smiling. Marisol moaned and let him in. Derek was out doing some errands, considering it was early the next morning.
"Ok. I'm nice enough to let you in here. Now, you dumb asshole, you will tell me what you are here for. And if it's not good, then you better pray that you have as much bones that you have in your cheekbones throughout the rest of your body because I just MIGHT have to fuck you up-" Marisol said, standing up from the bed and looking JP right in the eye.
JP laughed, those cheekbones showing more than ever, and he answered calmly, "Don't be so hostile, m'dear. Everything will be alright. I have come here to offer my apologies. I should not have spoken to your new boyfriend like that. It was wrong of moi. Je suis très désolé."
Marisol tapped her fingers on top of the bed's railing and asked, "Ok, I accept your apology. Now leave before I'm going to change my mind, Jean-Paul. I'm warning you, chico."
"But I haven't even had a chance to ask you a question, madame!" JP exclaimed, trying to hold back as Marisol pushed him towards the door.
Marisol growled and answered angrily, "WHAT?! Just ask the fucking question, you annoying shit."
"Will you get back together with me? I still care deeply for you, oui, believe it or not." JP said confidently, giving a slight smirk at the end of his question.
Marisol let go of JP and let her jaw drop down to the floor. "What the FUCK did you just ask me? Is this some kind of joke that your fatass friend Luther put you up to, chico? I guess I'm gonna have to grab Jevonte's gun and take care of some shit right away-"
"I was serious! That man Derek is no good for you, madame. I am the one for you and you know it. You've always known it. Don't replace me with some American like him. You know you want what the French has to offer, Marisol. You know that you want ME. I can see it in your eyes, oui. Come, take my hand." JP said, still as confident as ever, and holding out his hand to a disgusted Marisol.
"That is the biggest load of bullshit I have ever heard, chico! Get out of my room and don't you DARE ever say anything like that to me again! Actually, don't say ANYTHING to me ever again! Just stay out of my life and leave my boyfriend alone." Marisol yelled, opening the door and throwing JP out. Marisol slammed the door as JP ran straight into Derek in the hall.
Derek broke JP's fall and JP started to walk away. Derek didn't feel like fighting, so he just opened the door to an incredibly angry Marisol. "What's wrong? Oh. Let me guess, that jackass JP upset you. I can take care of him for you! I'm sick of him and Elise always being immature and rude."
Marisol flipped her hair and answered, "Yeah. Some of the people on this circuit are really pretty annoying. Everyone is annoying. I'm not even that good, chico! Sometimes I wonder why I still stay here. I just love snowboarding. I love it. And I love you too, of course." She started kissing Derek.
The two of them kissed for a few minutes and then began removing articles of clothing. Marisol just took off her shirt and Derek just took off his pants, and the two of them got into the bed, smiling.
But, before anything could happen, the door flew in and in came Seeiah. "Hey, girl! I just found out that we get another three days off, so we still have a couple weeks left off!"
Derek sat up in the bed and replied, "Uh, could you just leave? This isn't a good time, as you could tell." He heard Marisol give a snicker from under the covers. "Yeah, LEAVE!" Marisol said.
Seeiah's face dropped. She nodded, and stomped out of the room. She slammed the door and as soon as she entered the hallway, tears formed in her eyes. Jevonte was at work, so she didn't know what to do.
She went into the lobby and started crying there. A few minutes later, Zoe was walking down the stairs when she saw Seeiah crying. "Oh my god, Seeiah, what's wrong?" She asked, sitting down next to Seeiah.
Seeiah took her face out of her hands and answered sadly, "Marisol and Derek told me to leave. They don't want me around anymore, I heard Marisol saying how she doesn't like anyone in the circuit and that we're ALL annoying. Zoe, she didn't even mention ME! I was supposed to be her best friend!"
Zoe scowled, and then frowned. She nodded. "Hmm, that's really fucked up. You want me to go talk to Marisol? There is no reason she should treat you like that. I wouldn't do that to Moby, or even Psymon, that's for sure."
Seeiah shook her head. "Nah, it's alright...I don't want you gettin' involved anyway. But thanks girl, that's really nice of you to offer. You're a good person, funk-o-matic!"
Laughing, Zoe answered, "Yeah, you too, Seeiah. I'm sure you and Maireesoll will work things out." She gave Seeiah a pat on the back and went back upstairs, searching for Moby and Psymon.
Seeiah sighed. Usually she was happy, upbeat and annoying; but now she was just upset for once. Meanwhile, Marisol and Derek enjoyed their time together and didn't even give Seeiah a second thought.
_________________________________________
I think this is the longest one so far! Make sure you review. :)
CHAPTER 5
The club was just opening and the crowd was starting to fill in, as Derek immediately began spinning, with Marisol just watching in awe. She was staring at him the whole time, just happy that he would look over and smile every few minutes. The multi-colored, flourescent lights were bouncing off the dark walls and into Marisol's heart.
She had always loved the club scene, and now what was better than to enjoy a great place with your new boyfriend? She watched her boyfriend spin on the high platform as she looked down on the crowd, watching all types of different stories unfold. But the lights suddenly turned darker and everyone disappeared into the music. Derek at this point was using a lot of DJ Baby Anne, but as soon as he was done, the crowd came back into focus and back into life. Marisol saw everyone greet each other once the lights turned slightly back on and around the huge rooms of the club, almost as if they were in a different world during 'Down To Zero' and 'Fury'. She was in a different world of her own, too. All that mattered was herself and Derek.
As the night wore on, Marisol emerged herself into the music and the magenta lights and green glowsticks soon became just more notes in any happy hardcore song that Derek was spinning. She started moving, and she found herself into a different world for a few minutes. She felt connected to everyone else in the club, and then started to cry. Even though she hadn't actually spoken to Derek in an hour or so, she felt closer to him than ever before now.
Once Derek was done around midnight, he took off his headphones and said goodbye to the crowd, who was beginning to fill out just a little. The early morning groups would be arriving shortly, and that was a completely different atmosphere altogether. Marisol then noticed a girl coming up to the platform, aimed right towards Derek. Marisol grew paranoid and moved closer to her boyfriend, nudging him on the shoulders. He turned around, saw the girl, smiled and said to Marisol, "I'll take care of this."
Derek headed over to the girl and then a few seconds later, pointed to Marisol. The girl nodded solemnly and got swept away in the crowd, disappearing into the black. Marisol gave a sigh of relief and Derek came back over to her. The two of them grabbed Derek's equipment, the club manager said goodbye to Derek, and they were off to his car to load in the equipment. "Damn, that was a good set, chico! I loved every minute of it...thank you." Marisol told Derek, hopping into the passenger seat and buckling her seatbelt.
"Really? Well thank you. I wish I could've spent it with you, would've been nicer that way but it was a good night anyway, right?" Derek replied, throwing the car into gear and heading off to the hotel.
_________________________________________
"Marisol, my dear, moi has been looking far and wide for your presence!" Marisol zipped around in her room to see JP standing in the doorway, his hands on each side of the doorway, smiling. Marisol moaned and let him in. Derek was out doing some errands, considering it was early the next morning.
"Ok. I'm nice enough to let you in here. Now, you dumb asshole, you will tell me what you are here for. And if it's not good, then you better pray that you have as much bones that you have in your cheekbones throughout the rest of your body because I just MIGHT have to fuck you up-" Marisol said, standing up from the bed and looking JP right in the eye.
JP laughed, those cheekbones showing more than ever, and he answered calmly, "Don't be so hostile, m'dear. Everything will be alright. I have come here to offer my apologies. I should not have spoken to your new boyfriend like that. It was wrong of moi. Je suis très désolé."
Marisol tapped her fingers on top of the bed's railing and asked, "Ok, I accept your apology. Now leave before I'm going to change my mind, Jean-Paul. I'm warning you, chico."
"But I haven't even had a chance to ask you a question, madame!" JP exclaimed, trying to hold back as Marisol pushed him towards the door.
Marisol growled and answered angrily, "WHAT?! Just ask the fucking question, you annoying shit."
"Will you get back together with me? I still care deeply for you, oui, believe it or not." JP said confidently, giving a slight smirk at the end of his question.
Marisol let go of JP and let her jaw drop down to the floor. "What the FUCK did you just ask me? Is this some kind of joke that your fatass friend Luther put you up to, chico? I guess I'm gonna have to grab Jevonte's gun and take care of some shit right away-"
"I was serious! That man Derek is no good for you, madame. I am the one for you and you know it. You've always known it. Don't replace me with some American like him. You know you want what the French has to offer, Marisol. You know that you want ME. I can see it in your eyes, oui. Come, take my hand." JP said, still as confident as ever, and holding out his hand to a disgusted Marisol.
"That is the biggest load of bullshit I have ever heard, chico! Get out of my room and don't you DARE ever say anything like that to me again! Actually, don't say ANYTHING to me ever again! Just stay out of my life and leave my boyfriend alone." Marisol yelled, opening the door and throwing JP out. Marisol slammed the door as JP ran straight into Derek in the hall.
Derek broke JP's fall and JP started to walk away. Derek didn't feel like fighting, so he just opened the door to an incredibly angry Marisol. "What's wrong? Oh. Let me guess, that jackass JP upset you. I can take care of him for you! I'm sick of him and Elise always being immature and rude."
Marisol flipped her hair and answered, "Yeah. Some of the people on this circuit are really pretty annoying. Everyone is annoying. I'm not even that good, chico! Sometimes I wonder why I still stay here. I just love snowboarding. I love it. And I love you too, of course." She started kissing Derek.
The two of them kissed for a few minutes and then began removing articles of clothing. Marisol just took off her shirt and Derek just took off his pants, and the two of them got into the bed, smiling.
But, before anything could happen, the door flew in and in came Seeiah. "Hey, girl! I just found out that we get another three days off, so we still have a couple weeks left off!"
Derek sat up in the bed and replied, "Uh, could you just leave? This isn't a good time, as you could tell." He heard Marisol give a snicker from under the covers. "Yeah, LEAVE!" Marisol said.
Seeiah's face dropped. She nodded, and stomped out of the room. She slammed the door and as soon as she entered the hallway, tears formed in her eyes. Jevonte was at work, so she didn't know what to do.
She went into the lobby and started crying there. A few minutes later, Zoe was walking down the stairs when she saw Seeiah crying. "Oh my god, Seeiah, what's wrong?" She asked, sitting down next to Seeiah.
Seeiah took her face out of her hands and answered sadly, "Marisol and Derek told me to leave. They don't want me around anymore, I heard Marisol saying how she doesn't like anyone in the circuit and that we're ALL annoying. Zoe, she didn't even mention ME! I was supposed to be her best friend!"
Zoe scowled, and then frowned. She nodded. "Hmm, that's really fucked up. You want me to go talk to Marisol? There is no reason she should treat you like that. I wouldn't do that to Moby, or even Psymon, that's for sure."
Seeiah shook her head. "Nah, it's alright...I don't want you gettin' involved anyway. But thanks girl, that's really nice of you to offer. You're a good person, funk-o-matic!"
Laughing, Zoe answered, "Yeah, you too, Seeiah. I'm sure you and Maireesoll will work things out." She gave Seeiah a pat on the back and went back upstairs, searching for Moby and Psymon.
Seeiah sighed. Usually she was happy, upbeat and annoying; but now she was just upset for once. Meanwhile, Marisol and Derek enjoyed their time together and didn't even give Seeiah a second thought.
_________________________________________
I think this is the longest one so far! Make sure you review. :)
