Kai's heart Dranzer's Soul
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Chapter 4- Night Fever, Street Fever
Max woke up in the middle of the night; it was two in the morning. He raised his head and glanced around to see what had woken him. The moonlight shining in through the window fell on the figure on the bed next to his.
Unlike Tyson who was snoring away and Kenny who was cuddled cosily up inside his blankets and Ray who purred slightly in his sleep, Kai was tossing and turning panting slightly. One hand was clutching his side, the other was by his leg clutching the screwed up blanket, his other leg was scrunched up against his chest.
Max could see the glistening drops of sweat on Kai's forehead. Max was no expert on illnesses but Kai seemed to be having some sort of fever. Max padded quietly over in his blue nightshirt and whispered "Kai? Wake up."
He felt his forehead, it was raging hot and tingled, he tugged at the blankets Kai had twisted around him and managed to get them free.
He covered Kai's body as warmly as he could and looked around helplessly to see if there was anything he could do to help his friend. Maybe he should tell the others but he knew Kai wouldn't be too happy about that.
Max had just climbed back in bed when he saw a light coming from something on top of the bedside table.
With a rustle of wings, Dranzer zoomed out of Kai's blade and curled up beside Kai. Kai's hand came out of the covers and unconsciously cuddled Dranzer, seeking comfort in the phoenix's fiery warmth.
Max felt a pang of sadness and was sober instead of his usual hyper mood. As he realised that Dranzer was probably the only comfort kai had had as a child. Max had grown up a lucky kid with plenty of toys, holidays and his parents. He was still rather childlike at times.
'Poor Kai' he murmured.
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When the Bladebreakers woke up in the morning Kai had already got up. His bed was neatly made and his blade was gone so he'd most likely gone to practise. Max peered around the grounds of the dojo but couldn't find Kai anywhere.
"BREAKFAST EVERYONE!!" yelled Tyson "you won't get any if you don't come now!" Max hurried straight to the kitchen, nearly bashing into Kenny who was coming out of the bathroom, knowing Tyson, there wouldn't be any left by the time they got there.
Max managed to grab the box of cornflakes and poured himself a bowl, there was a clinking noise and a mini torch that doubled as a pen dropped out. "Hey I want the toy!" whined Tyson "only joking Maxie you can have it."
Ray had his arm protectively round his plate of toast and was keeping an eye on Tyson who had finished his toast and bacon and was looking for something else.
"Where's Kai?" Ray suddenly asked.
"Probably practising" said Kenny one hand typing away and one hand holding his toast. "Did you know that all of Kai's stats have improved 70% since when we first met him?!"
"Wow" said Max "wish I could improve that much on my attacking." 'I wonder how Kai's doing today?' He thought
"I wonder how he does it?" said Ray.
"Glurkchly unthoone" said Tyson with his mouthful. Kenny translated as "freakishly inhuman".
"I had a really good night last night" continued Tyson, "I dreamt I was at this huge banquet just for my birthday and the plates never ran out of food and kept on refilling themselves! Mmmmmmmmm I could almost taste that chocolate gateau!"
"I'm gonna go look for Kai" said Ray "he should have at least told us where he was going, with those weird bad guys on the loose and his condition who knows what could happen to him?"
____ Kai was wandering through the streets of Tokyo (A/N I think that's where Tyson lives), passersbys stared at him yelling "hey Kai!" and "can I have your autograph?" Kai was fed up of it, he darted down one of the back alleys, it was an area he new well from his Bladeshark days, the Bladesharks had long disbanded and scattered across Japan.
The alleys were strewn with dirt and litter, abandoned cars and pieces of machinery. He passed knocked over dustbins, broken pushchairs, a bashed up Mitsubishi and a couple of motorbikes leaking oil propped by the wall.
Once he'd gotten deep into the maze of alleys he found an old 30 storey building that looked like someone had blasted half of it off and could collapse at any moment. His feet stepped on something slippery, he looked down and saw huge pools of oil and some greeny looking substance, he whipped around. He was sure he'd heard something, pushing a door out of his way he walked into the room, all his senses on alert.
It looked like the fist floor of the building was some old night clubbing place, the rest was probably old housing stuff. There was a bar with rusting taps and broken tables and chairs rotting away. He walked confidently towards the bar; he sniffed the air, alcohol and something else.
He looked along the shelves of dusty bottles, recognising the labels for Bacardi and vodka. "Hmph" he was about to go and explore the rest of the place when a loud bang met his ears. "Gunshot" he breathed, his body immediately reacted, sprinting away from the source of danger, his chest tightened and hurt as he ran outside, he could hear sounds from all the east and west alleys.
He was facing the broken side of the building, glanced up and made up his mind, he knew how to travel along the rooftops from his childhood, a lot of adults who were nearly all scared of heights, couldn't get him. He placed one foot on a bar of metal jutting out of the broken wall and grabbed the lengths of broken wood and brick to hoist himself of the ground and started climbing.
His foot slipped once or twice but he was saved by his quick reaction, and managed to get to the top and onto the roof. He could hear the sound of revving cars and he could smell the poisonous fumes. From his view, perched, crouching, hands and feet on the top of the 30 storey building, he could see for miles and miles around Tokyo. 'I wonder what my team are doing.' There was a crash and the noise like somebody had knocked a lot of things over.
Kai squinted down from under his slate blue bangs, his white silk scarf was reflected in his gray eyes, whipping around him in the wind. His face was calm, the frown replaced with a line of determination.
He now knew what sort of danger t h e y w e r e i n . Correction. H e. W a s. I n.
****************************************************** I think that's my best chapter along with the first chapter, I've realised the other two chapters didn't have enough action in, oh well, I suppose this fic is supposed to be angsty and action and adventure. I am keeping my promise, 2 more chpaters to write before this sunday! That's your easter present Droopy1389! ^_^ Anyway, press that button! ( is the arrow in the right place? ^_^)
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Aww wow! I've gotten so many friendly reviews for this fic, thanx loads to:
Svart Marai, Tomoe2Kenshin, russle, Droopy1389,
Please read my Cute Lil Confused Kai fic aswell!
Chapter 4- Night Fever, Street Fever
Max woke up in the middle of the night; it was two in the morning. He raised his head and glanced around to see what had woken him. The moonlight shining in through the window fell on the figure on the bed next to his.
Unlike Tyson who was snoring away and Kenny who was cuddled cosily up inside his blankets and Ray who purred slightly in his sleep, Kai was tossing and turning panting slightly. One hand was clutching his side, the other was by his leg clutching the screwed up blanket, his other leg was scrunched up against his chest.
Max could see the glistening drops of sweat on Kai's forehead. Max was no expert on illnesses but Kai seemed to be having some sort of fever. Max padded quietly over in his blue nightshirt and whispered "Kai? Wake up."
He felt his forehead, it was raging hot and tingled, he tugged at the blankets Kai had twisted around him and managed to get them free.
He covered Kai's body as warmly as he could and looked around helplessly to see if there was anything he could do to help his friend. Maybe he should tell the others but he knew Kai wouldn't be too happy about that.
Max had just climbed back in bed when he saw a light coming from something on top of the bedside table.
With a rustle of wings, Dranzer zoomed out of Kai's blade and curled up beside Kai. Kai's hand came out of the covers and unconsciously cuddled Dranzer, seeking comfort in the phoenix's fiery warmth.
Max felt a pang of sadness and was sober instead of his usual hyper mood. As he realised that Dranzer was probably the only comfort kai had had as a child. Max had grown up a lucky kid with plenty of toys, holidays and his parents. He was still rather childlike at times.
'Poor Kai' he murmured.
~*~*~
When the Bladebreakers woke up in the morning Kai had already got up. His bed was neatly made and his blade was gone so he'd most likely gone to practise. Max peered around the grounds of the dojo but couldn't find Kai anywhere.
"BREAKFAST EVERYONE!!" yelled Tyson "you won't get any if you don't come now!" Max hurried straight to the kitchen, nearly bashing into Kenny who was coming out of the bathroom, knowing Tyson, there wouldn't be any left by the time they got there.
Max managed to grab the box of cornflakes and poured himself a bowl, there was a clinking noise and a mini torch that doubled as a pen dropped out. "Hey I want the toy!" whined Tyson "only joking Maxie you can have it."
Ray had his arm protectively round his plate of toast and was keeping an eye on Tyson who had finished his toast and bacon and was looking for something else.
"Where's Kai?" Ray suddenly asked.
"Probably practising" said Kenny one hand typing away and one hand holding his toast. "Did you know that all of Kai's stats have improved 70% since when we first met him?!"
"Wow" said Max "wish I could improve that much on my attacking." 'I wonder how Kai's doing today?' He thought
"I wonder how he does it?" said Ray.
"Glurkchly unthoone" said Tyson with his mouthful. Kenny translated as "freakishly inhuman".
"I had a really good night last night" continued Tyson, "I dreamt I was at this huge banquet just for my birthday and the plates never ran out of food and kept on refilling themselves! Mmmmmmmmm I could almost taste that chocolate gateau!"
"I'm gonna go look for Kai" said Ray "he should have at least told us where he was going, with those weird bad guys on the loose and his condition who knows what could happen to him?"
____ Kai was wandering through the streets of Tokyo (A/N I think that's where Tyson lives), passersbys stared at him yelling "hey Kai!" and "can I have your autograph?" Kai was fed up of it, he darted down one of the back alleys, it was an area he new well from his Bladeshark days, the Bladesharks had long disbanded and scattered across Japan.
The alleys were strewn with dirt and litter, abandoned cars and pieces of machinery. He passed knocked over dustbins, broken pushchairs, a bashed up Mitsubishi and a couple of motorbikes leaking oil propped by the wall.
Once he'd gotten deep into the maze of alleys he found an old 30 storey building that looked like someone had blasted half of it off and could collapse at any moment. His feet stepped on something slippery, he looked down and saw huge pools of oil and some greeny looking substance, he whipped around. He was sure he'd heard something, pushing a door out of his way he walked into the room, all his senses on alert.
It looked like the fist floor of the building was some old night clubbing place, the rest was probably old housing stuff. There was a bar with rusting taps and broken tables and chairs rotting away. He walked confidently towards the bar; he sniffed the air, alcohol and something else.
He looked along the shelves of dusty bottles, recognising the labels for Bacardi and vodka. "Hmph" he was about to go and explore the rest of the place when a loud bang met his ears. "Gunshot" he breathed, his body immediately reacted, sprinting away from the source of danger, his chest tightened and hurt as he ran outside, he could hear sounds from all the east and west alleys.
He was facing the broken side of the building, glanced up and made up his mind, he knew how to travel along the rooftops from his childhood, a lot of adults who were nearly all scared of heights, couldn't get him. He placed one foot on a bar of metal jutting out of the broken wall and grabbed the lengths of broken wood and brick to hoist himself of the ground and started climbing.
His foot slipped once or twice but he was saved by his quick reaction, and managed to get to the top and onto the roof. He could hear the sound of revving cars and he could smell the poisonous fumes. From his view, perched, crouching, hands and feet on the top of the 30 storey building, he could see for miles and miles around Tokyo. 'I wonder what my team are doing.' There was a crash and the noise like somebody had knocked a lot of things over.
Kai squinted down from under his slate blue bangs, his white silk scarf was reflected in his gray eyes, whipping around him in the wind. His face was calm, the frown replaced with a line of determination.
He now knew what sort of danger t h e y w e r e i n . Correction. H e. W a s. I n.
****************************************************** I think that's my best chapter along with the first chapter, I've realised the other two chapters didn't have enough action in, oh well, I suppose this fic is supposed to be angsty and action and adventure. I am keeping my promise, 2 more chpaters to write before this sunday! That's your easter present Droopy1389! ^_^ Anyway, press that button! ( is the arrow in the right place? ^_^)
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