Disclaimer: Plain and simple. I do not own Yu-Gi-Oh.
A/N: Hello everyone. Thank you for coming back! I'm not so sure this story deserves the loyalty. I love the plot, I just don't think I wrote it properly. It's been inconsistent, and for that I apologize. This chapter and the next will be the only two that go together style-wise, I think. This was an experiment, and you can rest assured that it will not be repeated. But I do hope you enjoy this chapter and the one that follows! They are the final two. Thank you for taking the time to read them! I promise to do better in the future!
~ Ocean
Wolfspeaker1: Thank you so much! You don't realize how nice it was to hear that you simply enjoy my writing. I always enjoy hearing from you as well. My my, fluff and plot? To some, that would be an accusation, but I'll take it as the compliment I know you intended it to be. I hope you enjoy the remainder of this story. ^_^
Sorceress MooNBlaDeR: *turns on an electric fan to help cool you off * Guess I did something good, huh? I always pictured the movie being some really corny, low-budget film that neither of them would ever had paid to see on their own. Nothing dirty, just a bad movie. But then, when you have either of them as your date, who cares what the movie is. And yeah, I know most of the words I type. I've had to use the thesaurus less and less the more I write. Enjoy!
jkateel: I'm glad you liked that scene with Jasper and the crowd! It wasn't even planed. It just came out as I was writing and afterwards, I had to stop, blink, and reread it. It worked amazingly well, I think. Kept me from writing a two page description on what Jasper was feeling. ^_~ And I don't mind you quoting. It proves you read the chapter! And stop bowing already. You know you have talent. All I require is an orange popsicle to keep Yami happy. Now keep your reviews 'as interesting as hell'!
DragonsDesire: *has to cover ears at the shouting, though is grinning all the way * Thanks! Good to know that I am getting the story across with so few words. I hope you enjoy this round!
Kerigan: 'Speechless.' Pretty much sums it up.
WigglyJello: Nice name. I picked a name once simply because I was in the kitchen and looking at a can of pumpkin mix. The undoubtedly non-clever result soon followed. We need not speak of that incident again. I agree with you. It isn't every morning you wake up with something that pretty next to you. But the story won't progress any further than it has in that department. Sorry, just not what I was going for. But there will be future stories... I hope I'm not promising something I can't deliver. But anyway, I thank you for the kind words about my story!
Koishii No Tenshi: *squeals * You added me to your favorites? Thank you! What a compliment! I'm happy you are enjoying my story! I hope this chapter meets your expectations!
lotus re-incarnate: You're like a passing breeze with your reviews. By the time someone is able to experience it fully you are gone. Makes for quite the lasting impression. Please do so again.
metallicbubbles: Hooking is good. Yep. I like hooking. Get that schoolwork done so you can waste time reading my story, got it? And I'll continue ignoring mine so I can write. I think I'm wrapping up a lot of bad karma here. Eh, that's what Spring Break is for.
Nightengale13: Oh you, is it? *reaches over and grabs notebook and pen so I can take notes on your review and respond to it properly * Hee. I'm supposed to make you think! Not the other way around! Now, let's begin, shall we? 'Cuddleworthy.' Sounds like a nice story title, doesn't it? I'm glad I was able to add some warmth to a bad day. I get... well, migraines are no fun, and I often look towards fanfiction to distract me from the pain. I understand what it means to have that distraction, and I am so happy I was able to provide it for someone else. Next, you mentioned my other stories, promoting them for me, so extra kudos for you. Thank you for taking the time to explain to me how you see my interpretation of Yami and Yuugi. I know I write them differently than most authors do, and even take them beyond the show. I try not to take them too far, however. I simply believe that the show leaves much of their personalities out, omits them when they would 'interfere' with the plot, no matter how weak it may be. If there is a problem with the show, I think it falls along this line. The characters never really change, or learn from their mistakes. Arguably there has been some development, and I haven't watched the entire series yet, but I just don't recognize any significant progression. *embarrassingly enough looses my train of thought and has to think a moment before I find it again * I think who we see in the show is only the base of the characters, and in that regard, there are many representations of their personalities that could be 'correct.' I do not, however, want to cross that thin line, and know that I will always be able to count on you to keep me in my place. ^_^ I appreciate your remarks on the style, though I would have to disagree with you. Not in your interpretation or the rules or anything like that. Simply that it was my intent not to be grammatically correct. I wanted to invoke crisp, sudden emotions and feelings without any complication of explanation. I agree it doesn't work as well as I'd hoped it would. That's why this story is the only one I will ever write in this style. So don't let it grow on you too much, alright? A J/S scene? Can I curse you now for making me think about it? If one is written, it won't be part of this story. Just a little independent thing. But don't hold your breath. You may see elements of it in another story, however. Okay, I'll let you go read now. Good to hear from you as always. Yours is one of the reviews I look most forward to!
Abi2: Whoa. Praise personified! You really think this story is on par with FAH? That is quite the compliment, indeed. I'm flattered you think so highly of it. And I'm grateful to hear that the sensuality that I was trying to put into it actually made it in. The best mark of a story is re-readability! Thank you so much for your descriptions and kindness!
Seventh Sage: Seeing floating hearts is a good thing, right? ^_~ The story appreciates the huggles, and I appreciate the review! Thanks!
Fallen Hikari: You caught me. 'One Night in Bangkok' is one of my favorite stories, and Edmondia certainly has a unique and enthralling style of her own. Her style was the inspiration for this story. I wasn't trying to copy it, just utilize its ability to invoke such emotion. I will admit that I never thought 'subtlety' would be a word used to describe this story. Interesting! Thank you for reviewing, and I hope you like this chapter. ^_^
Moonlitspire: Peaceful, huh? I like that. I think that is what I was trying to go for, the two of them finding peace in the midst of the turbulent world they live in. Yes, I like that a lot! Glad you like it so much! Now don't wait any longer and go read!
Mel Gods: The word! The word! Yes, I am happy now. ^_^ Naw, no worries, you didn't ramble. I just sat quietly and smiled throughout the whole review, and after such kind words, my mind is complete mush. I'm relieved to hear the short sentences are working. I was always taught to write long, involved ones, and it has been exceedingly difficult to write these short descriptions. Takes several drafts to get them done in a manner that isn't entirely too choppy. You are a little too clever for your own good, however. I won't answer any of your questions, and you'll see why later on. For now I'll leave you with this chapter and refrain from rambling myself. Enjoy, and I'll see you next time around!
Towairaito Zoon: Hee, glad I could get some juices flowing there! Hope you are able to come out of your writer's block soon. Frustrating place to be in. Thanks for reviewing!
Ente: Thank you! Glad you like the duality of Jasper and Saber's personalities. I hope you enjoy this chapter just as much!
saiko yasha: *falters at the weight of my title * Whoa... you sure lay it on thick! I am in no way opposed to bottling whatever it is you think I have. Money is good. It is so nice to hear that you think my characterizations are tangible. It is the one thing I strive for above all else. Even though the show deals with supernatural themes, if one can't buy into it, the story looses all credibility. Thank you for helping me achieve this by letting me know the message I am sending. As for a Seto/Jou? I dunno... I do have an impression of Seto, and at risk of bodily harm, it is not an entirely favorable one. Don't get me wrong! I do like his character, most of the time. He's complex, that's for sure. I'm not entirely keen on the Seto/Jou pairing (there, I admit it. I await retribution) I do have a story in mind with Seto in it. May not be to your liking. Ah, I'm saying to much here. I'm flattered you like my writing enough to request a story! Thank you! I'll take it into consideration. See you next time!
Hime no Ichigo: Yeah, they were in the middle of the street, but it was also the middle of the night. Besides, considering what they do, I don't think they would mind if one person saw them doing something as simple as kissing. Yes yes, more fluff. I can't write any Yami/Yuugi without fluff. It just isn't possible. Thanks for the 'Get-Well' note! All better now. Go read and enjoy!
TJ: Short. Direct. Appreciated.
Mukyuu Tenshi: I find it funny that you ask about the plot development. Heh, this story doesn't get too much deeper than this, unless you want the hidden meaning behind every line that would result in story as long as my others. But we don't want that here. I'm glad you like this story and took the time to review. Thank you!
Anime Girl Sasami: *applauds * You captured my meaning of their clothes! I was trying to show their personalities that way. To show their differences, and their similarities as well. And also how they fit together. Yay for you for seeing that! Yay for me for writing something that made sense! Ahem... yes, moving on. And about the line 'pure despite Jasper's profession,' you hit the mark on that one too. I was trying to show that what you do doesn't always define who you are. I also wanted to show that while it may damage you, you do have the capability to survive. Wow. I didn't realize I was asking one line to do so much. Poor thing. You did an excellent job analyzing! I look forward to your next observations!
SoulDreamer: Thank you! I'm happy you like this so much! Enjoy this chapter!
Jasmine's Scent
By Ocean
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Chapter Four: Resolve
Busy night.
Full chairs. Crowded tables strained under the weight of play and drink. Raucous laughter. Wailing lights cascading rainbows around a darkened room.
Bodies everywhere. Crowded like cattle. Clucking like hens. Movement abundant. Music redundant. Dance and sex and allure and lust all pungent in the air.
An odd backdrop of class. Refinement. Such decor did not fit a place meant for fulfillment of carnal, physical pleasure.
He was back at his pole. His territory. None other touched it on the nights he worked. Jasper leaned his back against the dull metal. Leg bent so the soul of his foot was flush against the pole. Eyes closed in rest.
Aloof. Distant. His an atmosphere of 'look... but don't you dare consider touching.' Slender fingers drummed lazily against Jasper's crossed arms.
A coated sigh passed through full lips.
He didn't flinch as a body draped in fabric danced past him. Didn't want to move or think. Or respond to the world.
Jasper just wanted to... rest.
Pleasure he had already delivered this night. Numbly. Automatically. With little interest or attachment. He didn't need that anymore. It was readily supplied by someone else.
But he was still required to parade. Entice. Induce others to spend freely their money and morals. A showpiece to decorate the other entertainers.
The pole shifted behind him. Warmth of a shoulder brushed against Jasper's arm. His crisp eyes snapped open. Glared over his shoulder.
Sharp, smooth curves of a wine glass dominated his view. Fine dusky fingers encompassed the liberating liquid.
Jasper considered a moment before accepting the truce. Saber was allowed to lean against his pole.
Their mirrored stances balanced the stage. Their mingling auras magnetized the air. Electric. Currents of energy rippled. Ensnared attentions and coaxed them toward the stage.
Each wine glass floated to moist lips. Several pairs of eyes widened in expectation. Many lips were wet with suddenly dry tongues.
Such a delicious portrait those two made.
Sly fingers sought out Jasper's behind the pole. Secretly. Confidently. With as much flirtation as those talented fingers could deliver.
Jasper raised his glass to his sumptuous mouth. His tongue darted out. A rosy confection that skimmed the glass and hid the smile that threatened to form.
Smooth vibrations tantalized and soothed Jasper's raw nerves. Fingers played and teased around his hand. He found himself returning the caresses.
Open unguarded flirtation hidden behind a veil of complete visibility.
Close.
Intimate.
Honest.
Teasing.
Fun.
Jasper released a quiet moan and tilted his head back to rest on Saber's shoulder.
"We should do this more often," Jasper sighed. Unheard in the mass of pounding music and voices.
"Drink?"
"That too." Wistful breath accompanied the words.
Their hands continued to trickle together.
"Nice pole," Saber commented.
"Mmm. My pole." Slight amusement lifted the airy voice. Possessive insistence sustained it. Jasper squeezed the pleasing fingers tickling his own as he spoke.
The message was recieved... and easily accepted.
Saber turned his head, lips now slipping into Jasper's cotton tresses. "Why do you stay?" Tone was low. Coaxing. Crooning in sheer sensuality.
Pleasant shivers pierced like icicles Jasper's over sensitive scalp. His mind rendered incapable a moment as Saber slowed the perusal of his hand to long, slow, strong strokes of comfort.
Jasper fell slowly into the body behind his pole. Defenses breached while Saber continued to seduce him. He pressed his head softly against the plush lips in his hair.
A quiet admission. "I have nowhere else to be."
A moment of contemplation. "Are you willing to leave?" Saber's lips added an arousing massage to the question.
Jasper closed his eyes and nuzzled discreetly into Saber's shoulder. "So long as I'm going home."
Saber blinked slowly. A decision needed to be made. He arched his neck back along Jasper's profile. Placed a soft, loving kiss on the pulse in his neck. Jasper responded with a nice, fetching little whimper.
"It looks as though the two of you are on your way to satisfying quite a few fantasies. At least, that's the impression I'm getting from some of the expressions on our customers' faces."
Both sensual creatures sighed at the interruption. The voice was soft. Quiet. Resonating. An eerie intelligence and knowing awareness circled the body that stood before them.
Average stature. Bland features. Nothing above ordinary about his skin. Or shape. Or hair or posture. Nothing outstanding about his clothes. Or presence. Or stature.
But eyes that could hypnotize in a manner that left one both fearful and in awe. Very few requested his company.
Very few could afford his price.
"What is it, Shadow?" Saber demanded flatly.
"Hmm." Shadow floated around Saber, turning ash-colored eyes to Jasper, who was resolutely ignoring him. "Yes... he suits you well."
To whom he was speaking neither Jasper nor Saber could tell.
Shadow glided his way in a small circle around them. Unconcerned with Saber's warning, watchful glare. Amused by Jasper's blatant refusal to acknowledge his presence.
A predatory growl alerted Shadow that he was too close to the pole and its owner. Sly smirk covered his lips as he obliged Saber's demand and took a step away from the prized possession.
"We've had an offer." It was time that Shadow stated his purpose.
"What a rare occurrence indeed." Jasper chuckled softly at Saber's irritated sarcasm.
Shadow narrowed his eyes. Mood changed abruptly from jest to haughty superiority. "It's Jasper he wants. 'The little imp of the Arrowhead.' His words, not mine."
He finally held Jasper's attention. Iris eyes looked lazily at the entertainer. Bitterness clouded his tone.
"I've already had my appointment tonight. No more." Jasper turned his face into Saber's lean neck. His tone soft. Pleading. So desperate. "No more..."
Saber caught the emotion and held it tightly. His fingers stilled in Jasper's hand. Clinging. Holding. Supporting as it could. He drifted to Jasper's side of the pole.
Do not cross this barrier. We are beyond your reach.
Shadow's mood changed again. Light. Jovial. Childish eagerness flitted about him.
Saber's distrust doubled.
"Oh good! That means he's free for the taking!" Hands clasped at Shadow's chest. "So much money he offered. Sounds like the impulsive type. I like him already!"
"Go to it then," Saber sneered.
Shadow gave a giddy squeal of excitement as he bounced over to the reception hall.
Jasper turned more fully into Saber's masculine form. Wriggled to seduce an embrace. Clenched eyes and choked a sigh as warm arms encircled and held him. Saber pressed his smooth cheek against Jasper's throbbing temple. Blinked.
Decision made.
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to be concluded...
