Thunderbob6-hissy fit? Really? Because I was actually quite calm when I wrote that! LOL! Perhaps immature and spiteful, but, for the most part, very calm. Not very hissy-like at all. I was actually kind of chuckling to myself....Ah, well...as for the satire thing, I suppose that's true. But I fear that I may insult people and get flamed...although I've come to realize that flaming isn't so bad. Because then it's fun to rub it into the flamers face that you can still post another chapter and they can't do anything about it, which I did last time...damn, I really am immature, aren't I? I suppose I can't help myself...it's fun to be immature sometimes, anyways! LOL! But thanks for the review, Thunderbob6! Besides, you have to be cool because you have Bob in your name and Bob rocks! How I love him so! That is, Bob from Reboot...just don't ask...lol!
Anyways, I decided to post another scene so soon because I got so many reviews for the last one and I feel bad leaving you all waiting...because I know that gets annoying, being a fanfiction reader myself. So, I'll post scene 12 now. Don't know when the next one is going to be posted, though. I have written up to twenty four now, but I don't want to post them all at once, because a few people commented it would be better if I didn't and I think they're right. So I leave you waiting in suspense! Haha! Man, I really have to get around to writing the next twenty six scenes...still got plenty of time, though...that's why it's nice when you have a dozen or so other scenes already written! You don't have to worry about writing the rest right away! LOL! Anyway, here you go! Scene 12! And I'll try not to ramble before the next few scenes! LOL!
Scene 12
Asuka's title: "Wasteland to the left, wasteland to the right."
Shinji's title: "Can you shut up now?"
[The scene opens the next morning. Asuka is sitting on the sand-considering everything around them is just desert-and Shinji is just waking up. Neither Kaoru or the campfire are present; both have disappeared.]
Shinji: Hey, Asuka, where's Kaoru?
Asuka: He left us, the bastard.
Shinji: [rising to his feet] He what?!
Asuka: Yep; in the middle of this wasteland. Not that we weren't in this wasteland before he showed up, but still-it's the principal of the matter.
Shinji: Some friend he turned out to be.
Asuka: Hey, you should have known better, Shinji, than to think it was anything more than a one night stand.
Shinji: We didn't do anything.
Asuka: Yeah, but you sure were sleeping VERY close to each other.
Shinji: Can you shut up now?
Asuka: I guess so; I'll probably just taunt you with it later.
Shinji: That works fine enough. Now, which way do we go?
Asuka: Beats the hell out of me.
Shinji: Well…do you remember which way Rei pointed? What it looked like? Anything?
Asuka: Let's see. Wasteleand to the left, wasteland to the right. Yep, everything looks pretty much like the same barren nothing. Unless, of course, you count the sand as something, but then you'd be being optimistic and we wouldn't want that, now would we?
Shinji: Guess not. [pause] Ah…let's just go right. It's not like it really matters either way. I mean, it's not like there is an Eden and if there really was one, knowing our crappy luck, we'll never find it.
Asuka: Sounds fine to me. Getting lost was on the top of my to-do list today, anyways.
Next Scene:
Asuka's title: "How about secret option number three?"
Shinji's title: "Okay, then; we're in hell."
Anyways, I decided to post another scene so soon because I got so many reviews for the last one and I feel bad leaving you all waiting...because I know that gets annoying, being a fanfiction reader myself. So, I'll post scene 12 now. Don't know when the next one is going to be posted, though. I have written up to twenty four now, but I don't want to post them all at once, because a few people commented it would be better if I didn't and I think they're right. So I leave you waiting in suspense! Haha! Man, I really have to get around to writing the next twenty six scenes...still got plenty of time, though...that's why it's nice when you have a dozen or so other scenes already written! You don't have to worry about writing the rest right away! LOL! Anyway, here you go! Scene 12! And I'll try not to ramble before the next few scenes! LOL!
Scene 12
Asuka's title: "Wasteland to the left, wasteland to the right."
Shinji's title: "Can you shut up now?"
[The scene opens the next morning. Asuka is sitting on the sand-considering everything around them is just desert-and Shinji is just waking up. Neither Kaoru or the campfire are present; both have disappeared.]
Shinji: Hey, Asuka, where's Kaoru?
Asuka: He left us, the bastard.
Shinji: [rising to his feet] He what?!
Asuka: Yep; in the middle of this wasteland. Not that we weren't in this wasteland before he showed up, but still-it's the principal of the matter.
Shinji: Some friend he turned out to be.
Asuka: Hey, you should have known better, Shinji, than to think it was anything more than a one night stand.
Shinji: We didn't do anything.
Asuka: Yeah, but you sure were sleeping VERY close to each other.
Shinji: Can you shut up now?
Asuka: I guess so; I'll probably just taunt you with it later.
Shinji: That works fine enough. Now, which way do we go?
Asuka: Beats the hell out of me.
Shinji: Well…do you remember which way Rei pointed? What it looked like? Anything?
Asuka: Let's see. Wasteleand to the left, wasteland to the right. Yep, everything looks pretty much like the same barren nothing. Unless, of course, you count the sand as something, but then you'd be being optimistic and we wouldn't want that, now would we?
Shinji: Guess not. [pause] Ah…let's just go right. It's not like it really matters either way. I mean, it's not like there is an Eden and if there really was one, knowing our crappy luck, we'll never find it.
Asuka: Sounds fine to me. Getting lost was on the top of my to-do list today, anyways.
Next Scene:
Asuka's title: "How about secret option number three?"
Shinji's title: "Okay, then; we're in hell."
