Woo! Okay, little intro here. So...I read the fourth manga, and there's a character from it I *really* want in this, it'll help me pull Erutis more into the story. So...this story will now have taken place sometime after the fourth book. (This means Raenef's 'meaness' will have been resolved long ago.) Now, watch me fearlessly dance around the plot holes and try desperately to keep my ficcy above water as more DD volumes are shipped! ^_^ Enjoy! /p
center
***/center/p
centerbTo Make You Proud/b/briChapter Two/i/center/p
"And you'll make sure the guards remain up on through the night!" Eclipse boomed...again. /p
"Right..." Chris sighed. All morning all he had heard was "AND YOU'LL MAKE SURE THIS HAPPENS AND THIS AND DON'T FORGET TO WASH THESE AND MAKE SURE THIS IS IN WORKING ORDER AND BLAH BLAH" /p
"Oh..." Eclipse paused for a moment, "And you'll make sure THAT ONE doesn't leave!" He snapped and pointed accusingly to Erutis, who was standing away preparing to see Raenef off. /p
"WHA-!?" Erutis looked scandalized. /p
"If I come to hear about a boasting no-bosomed knight who said she'd escaped from a certain demon lord's castle I'll have your head!" /p
"No bwhat/b!?" Erutis screamed. /p
"I understand..." Chris sounded all too tired. /p
"Very well, we're going then." Eclipse tossed his cape over his shoulder (rather sexily) and turned to Raenef, "We will be back in one week." /p
"AM I TO STAY HERE TILL I'M OLD AND GREY!?" Erutis tried to pipe up. /p
"Oh, and be sure to lock the gates every night, I don't want any stray dogs or other wandering beasts shredding the lawn and making this place seem any less like a Demon Lord's abode!" Eclipse called back to Chris from inside the white light that was preparing to take him and Raenef to the court. /p
"RIGHT!...all RIGHT!" Chris yelled again. /p
"WASTE MY YOUTH AWAY IN THIS DANK CASTLE!? OF COURSE! A GORGEOUS CAPTIVE! A GREAT SWORDS MASTER FORCED TO LIVE A LIFE WITH NO ADVENTURE!" Erutis was now on her knees and beginning to sob./p
Meanwhile, the bright light around Eclipse and Raenef had now began to close up and seem to swallow them whole. Chris watched and saw within the instance the two finally gone. /p
"Finally..." he wheezed. "Had about enough of that....WHERE DOES HE GET OFF!? Giving me all these chores like I'm a god damn servant rather than the anointed cleric I am!?" Chris turned and took his right arm around his chest, stretching it out thoroughly. "You know, you're helping me with these chores Eru-" Suddenly realizing the insane yelling that Erutis had been doing all morning was now faded, Chris snapped around to see the knight, who was no where in sight. "Erutis?....." No answer. "ERUTIS!!!" He ran to the gates and there he found ...the proud swords master caught between the prickly-steel bars of the entrance - a sad and obviously botched attempt at escape. /p
"....WELL!?" She snapped, "ARE YOU GOING TO HELP ME OR WHAT!?" /p
center
***/center/p
Appearing suddenly into a place with no light when coming from a place with brilliant light had done something strange to Raenef's vision, and he began to stumble forward with his hands stretched out. Quickly though, he felt a hand firmly grasp his shoulder. "Just stand still..." Eclipse hissed in his ear. /p
"Okay..." he whispered back. /p
"DEMON LORD RAENEF, THE FIFTH!" A deep voice boomed, and within a second of that the lights suddenly switched on. They were in a grand hall much like the one he had been in before. He was standing before a throne, and lining the walls were peop-ER-demons of all sorts, just like there had been before. /p
"So glad you could join us, Young Master." The grand demon Aurelid spoke softly, with a hinted air of supremacy about him. "You will find your place with the other Junior Demon Lords, and ahh...Eclipse....?"/p
Eclipse did not step forward, but stood behind Raenef and bowed, "My leige." /p
"Well, you weren't invited but I suppose all is well..." Aurelid focused his attentions on Raenef now. "More than one Junior Demon Lord has brought their servants..." Unbeknownst to all, Eclipse kicked himself mentally. "Of course, out of all the rest, I didn't think iyou/i pompous enough to bring an entourage..." Splendid! Not only did Raenef have a reputation of being an invalidic mental spaz, but now he was also an arrogant ass. Eclipse mentally kicked himself again. /p
Aurelid waved his arm elegantly and all took notice of him again, "You will all be shown to your rooms now, and I will call on each of you as I will as our time progresses." And with that, he was gone. /p
Demon guards soon began to pop up all around and see each demon lord (some demon lord and co.'s) to their appointed rooms. /p
Before theirs came however, Raenef couldn't help but notice how tense Eclipse was. He reached out instinctively to grab and reassuringly squeeze his servant's hand, but it was quickly pulled away from him. /p
Eclipse looked down to the boy, as if to say, 'No...not here, it's not the proper way.' /p
Raenef got the message, and just in time too, since their doormat servant had appeared. /p
center
***/center/p
"I can't stand this!" Chris screamed. He was in the middle of grand hall no.5567 equipped with a mop and bucket of cleaning solution. He had been cleaning the place since Raenef and Eclipse had gone that morning. "WHY are there so many rooms!?" /p
"Who knows." Erutis chimed in, she was leaning against the wall with her arm curled around a broom. "I guess Demon Lords need...extra space..." /p
"You know, maybe if Raenef wasn't such a dummy ECLIPSE would be able to hire a maid and butler STAFF to do all this." Chris was fuming and beginning to ramble now. /p
"A staff...?" /p
"Right! A freaking STAFF to do all this menial CRAP!" /p
"Hey!" Erutis dropped her broom and pounced Chris, "Why don't WE hire a staff? At least while they're gone?"/p
"Gyah!" Chris crumbled to the floor under Erutis's weight. "That's a great idea!" However, just as Chris was imagining being fed purple grapes by naughty french maids Erutis had to burst his bubble. /p
"Yeah...too bad we don't have any money." She sighed. /p
Chris groaned. /p
Neither of the two had noticed as time slipped by them, and so didn't notice that it was night now. /p
center
***/center/p
Raenef had already contracted a nasty case of cabin fever, which is why he felt the need to escape the designated room where Eclipse had told him very sternly to "NEVER LEAVE!"/p
It wasn't natural though, you couldn't keep Raenef locked up in a room. His spirit needed to be free, and he needed to feel nature's sweet air on his skin. Plus he was really hungry and absolutely HAD to find a kitchen. /p
As he turned another strange corridor he wondered if this was really such a good idea. There seemed to be a lot of corridors, yet not a lot of new territory. /p
It took him a minute to realize that even though he had kept close to an outside balcony, that the birds and bugs chirping had suddenly muted a few minutes ago. He stopped as soon as he realized. /p
"H-hello?" He questioned with a tremble in his voice just as he began to feel a wicked presence creeping up on him. /p
A hand brushed through his pony-tail and he whipped around to see no one behind him. /p
"Pretty little boy..." someone whispered hotly into his left ear, to which he turned and saw Demon Lord Krayon. /p
"Mister Krayon!" Raenef exclaimed, "Am I glad to see you, I thought you were a monster or something." The youth grinned./p
Krayon smiled back, "Hello Raenef. What're you doing up and out so late?" /p
"Mmm, I was trying to find food. But I think I got really lost, so now I'm just trying to find a way back to my room." Raenef finished, at that his stomach growled. /p
"Oh? Why didn't you just order something while in your room?"/p
"You can DO that?" Raenef's eyes were big now and the sight ejected a giggle from Krayon. /p
"Of course." He concluded. /p
"Oh-okay, thanks!" Raenef was ready to go until he felt a hand on his shoulder...again./p
"Tell me, how did you escape Eclipse's clutches?" The garish blond cooed. /p
"Er...I...uh...I n-never ask permission from Ecli-er-my servants. ANY of my servants..." /p
"Is that so?" Krayon whispered again into Raenef's ear. "Well then, sir, I'll let you get back to your room." /p
"Okay, see you later! Nite-nite!" Raenef returned all bubbly. Krayon sweat dropped and then disappeared into the shadows. "Oh wait...how do you get back to your room!?" Raenef cried, but to no avail as Master Krayon was already gone. "Aww man..." he sighed. How was he going to find his way back now? /p
"Heh heh heh...pathetic." /p
"Huh?" Raenef turned to see a figure lurking the shadows. /p
"You're pathetic." It spoke and stepped out to reveal another Junior Demon Lord. A boy a bit taller and more muscular than Raenef, with curly blond hair that framed his face and fell just short of his collar bone. He was wearing very regal clothing, dressed up in dark velvet green and silken silver garments. /p
"I know." Raenef countered with a smile. /p
The boy sweat-dropped, "Err...hahahah" He brought his jeweled hand up to scratch the back of his head, "I see." At that the point he stood perfectly still and stared at Raenef, who wasn't quite sure what to think. Suddenly, "FIRE ARROW!" the demon screamed, which sent a huge arrow covered in molten lava flying straight for Raenef's head. Luckily though, he ducked out of the way just before it struck him. /p
On the flood now, he looked up to the demon who had begun to cackle, "Hey, what's your problem!?" He yelled, "Who are you!?"
/p
"I am the Fifth Demon Lord Junaken, his grand highness!" he boomed, "and I have challenged you, you pathetic excuse for a fifth descendant of his lordship master Raenef the fourth!" /p
"Uhm...huh?" Raenef asked quietly. /p
"Don't you know what a challenge is?" Junaken asked with the back of his hand half over his mouth. /p
"...no..." Raenef replied sheepishly. /p
"HAHAHAH!" The grand Junaken began to shake with laughter, "You've got to be kidding! You're so pathetic!" /p
"...hey" Fully offended, Raenef stood up. /p
"Oh, oh...don't even bother now." Junaken took out a silver cloth from his coat pocket and began to dab the laugh-tears away from his eyes. "You know, I had you all wrong. I thought you'd be this incredibly powerful, ruthless demon lord. What with the legendary Eclipse as your loyal servant, and how you seem to know every one of the grandest Demon Lords like Aurelid and Krayon." Junaken paused, the tinge of jealousy laced in his comments was unmistakable, he was looking to Raenef again, wondering whether or not he'd heard it and if he would retort. /p
Raenef was still confused, he didn't sense the jealousy and was beginning to wonder why this Junior Demon Lord was staring at him so intently now. "Uhh.." before he could say anything else his stomach growled again, to which he sweat dropped. "Okay, well, nice meeting you, buh-bye!" He said quickly and began to walk off. Just then lighting crashed outside and he stopped in his tracks. /p
"I didn't say you could leave." Junaken raised his hand and began to wield some strange silver ball of light. "Whether or not you're a grand demon lord doesn't matter to me, but I still want to take your life." /p
"Wha!?" Raenef whipped back around to face Junaken, "B-but..." /p
"Goodbye," and with that the silver ball of light shot out of Junaken's hands and flew towards Raenef. /p
Big green eyes widened at the attack for a moment before everything suddenly went black. Raenef could hear the wind again and he quickly noticed that the blackness billowing all around him was really fabric. It was soft and the scent reminded him of Eclipse...."ECLIPSE!" the blond boy cried. /p
At the last second Eclipse had stepped in to neutralize the blow given by Junaken. "That's enough!" He spoke deeply, it was obvious by the tone of his voice that he was irritated. Raenef gulped. "Go back to your room, Junaken!"/p
"How dare you tell ME what to do, and how DARE to interfere in our spar - SERVANT!" Junaken growled angrily. /p
Eclipse tilted his head downwards to stare straight at Junaken, his black eyes glittering with contempt. He was in full fighting stance and everything that emanated from him seemed to say, 'Try me.' /p
The anger of Junaken quickly diminished as he saw this, the great Eclipse in all his glory. Suddenly all the horror stories he had heard of this demon tearing his enemies to shreds seemed to come back to him all at once. He took a step back quickly, "...Very well." Junaken was composed and no longer wanting to fight. He turned suddenly and disappeared, just like Krayon had, back into the shadows. /p
Meanwhile, Raenef was purring. The soft cape swishing all around him coupled with the smell and feel of the fresh dusk air almost made him forget his hunger and the fact that he was being attacked. He was knocked out of this trance by the quick turn of Eclipse. /p
"WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING!?" He screamed. /p
Raenef gaped and trembled, "I was err...hungry." /p
Eclipse sighed at the sight of Raenef's quivering bottom lip, "Why didn't you ask me for food?" /p
In reply, Raenef shrugged. Just then his stomach growled...again. /p
Eclipse sweat dropped. /p
center***/center/p
PHEW! Finally did it! See, I wrote it way back when I finished Chapter one, but I didn't edit it till...tonight. :P Sorry! Thanks for all the reviews! If it wasn't for them I'd never have posted the new chapter. I'm horrible at keeping with things. Sorry!/p
Special thanks to Yaoi Goddess Kome, Seventh Sage and SilverKnight7 - for making me get off my ass by repeated reviews! Muchly appreciated! XD
center
***/center/p
centerbTo Make You Proud/b/briChapter Two/i/center/p
"And you'll make sure the guards remain up on through the night!" Eclipse boomed...again. /p
"Right..." Chris sighed. All morning all he had heard was "AND YOU'LL MAKE SURE THIS HAPPENS AND THIS AND DON'T FORGET TO WASH THESE AND MAKE SURE THIS IS IN WORKING ORDER AND BLAH BLAH" /p
"Oh..." Eclipse paused for a moment, "And you'll make sure THAT ONE doesn't leave!" He snapped and pointed accusingly to Erutis, who was standing away preparing to see Raenef off. /p
"WHA-!?" Erutis looked scandalized. /p
"If I come to hear about a boasting no-bosomed knight who said she'd escaped from a certain demon lord's castle I'll have your head!" /p
"No bwhat/b!?" Erutis screamed. /p
"I understand..." Chris sounded all too tired. /p
"Very well, we're going then." Eclipse tossed his cape over his shoulder (rather sexily) and turned to Raenef, "We will be back in one week." /p
"AM I TO STAY HERE TILL I'M OLD AND GREY!?" Erutis tried to pipe up. /p
"Oh, and be sure to lock the gates every night, I don't want any stray dogs or other wandering beasts shredding the lawn and making this place seem any less like a Demon Lord's abode!" Eclipse called back to Chris from inside the white light that was preparing to take him and Raenef to the court. /p
"RIGHT!...all RIGHT!" Chris yelled again. /p
"WASTE MY YOUTH AWAY IN THIS DANK CASTLE!? OF COURSE! A GORGEOUS CAPTIVE! A GREAT SWORDS MASTER FORCED TO LIVE A LIFE WITH NO ADVENTURE!" Erutis was now on her knees and beginning to sob./p
Meanwhile, the bright light around Eclipse and Raenef had now began to close up and seem to swallow them whole. Chris watched and saw within the instance the two finally gone. /p
"Finally..." he wheezed. "Had about enough of that....WHERE DOES HE GET OFF!? Giving me all these chores like I'm a god damn servant rather than the anointed cleric I am!?" Chris turned and took his right arm around his chest, stretching it out thoroughly. "You know, you're helping me with these chores Eru-" Suddenly realizing the insane yelling that Erutis had been doing all morning was now faded, Chris snapped around to see the knight, who was no where in sight. "Erutis?....." No answer. "ERUTIS!!!" He ran to the gates and there he found ...the proud swords master caught between the prickly-steel bars of the entrance - a sad and obviously botched attempt at escape. /p
"....WELL!?" She snapped, "ARE YOU GOING TO HELP ME OR WHAT!?" /p
center
***/center/p
Appearing suddenly into a place with no light when coming from a place with brilliant light had done something strange to Raenef's vision, and he began to stumble forward with his hands stretched out. Quickly though, he felt a hand firmly grasp his shoulder. "Just stand still..." Eclipse hissed in his ear. /p
"Okay..." he whispered back. /p
"DEMON LORD RAENEF, THE FIFTH!" A deep voice boomed, and within a second of that the lights suddenly switched on. They were in a grand hall much like the one he had been in before. He was standing before a throne, and lining the walls were peop-ER-demons of all sorts, just like there had been before. /p
"So glad you could join us, Young Master." The grand demon Aurelid spoke softly, with a hinted air of supremacy about him. "You will find your place with the other Junior Demon Lords, and ahh...Eclipse....?"/p
Eclipse did not step forward, but stood behind Raenef and bowed, "My leige." /p
"Well, you weren't invited but I suppose all is well..." Aurelid focused his attentions on Raenef now. "More than one Junior Demon Lord has brought their servants..." Unbeknownst to all, Eclipse kicked himself mentally. "Of course, out of all the rest, I didn't think iyou/i pompous enough to bring an entourage..." Splendid! Not only did Raenef have a reputation of being an invalidic mental spaz, but now he was also an arrogant ass. Eclipse mentally kicked himself again. /p
Aurelid waved his arm elegantly and all took notice of him again, "You will all be shown to your rooms now, and I will call on each of you as I will as our time progresses." And with that, he was gone. /p
Demon guards soon began to pop up all around and see each demon lord (some demon lord and co.'s) to their appointed rooms. /p
Before theirs came however, Raenef couldn't help but notice how tense Eclipse was. He reached out instinctively to grab and reassuringly squeeze his servant's hand, but it was quickly pulled away from him. /p
Eclipse looked down to the boy, as if to say, 'No...not here, it's not the proper way.' /p
Raenef got the message, and just in time too, since their doormat servant had appeared. /p
center
***/center/p
"I can't stand this!" Chris screamed. He was in the middle of grand hall no.5567 equipped with a mop and bucket of cleaning solution. He had been cleaning the place since Raenef and Eclipse had gone that morning. "WHY are there so many rooms!?" /p
"Who knows." Erutis chimed in, she was leaning against the wall with her arm curled around a broom. "I guess Demon Lords need...extra space..." /p
"You know, maybe if Raenef wasn't such a dummy ECLIPSE would be able to hire a maid and butler STAFF to do all this." Chris was fuming and beginning to ramble now. /p
"A staff...?" /p
"Right! A freaking STAFF to do all this menial CRAP!" /p
"Hey!" Erutis dropped her broom and pounced Chris, "Why don't WE hire a staff? At least while they're gone?"/p
"Gyah!" Chris crumbled to the floor under Erutis's weight. "That's a great idea!" However, just as Chris was imagining being fed purple grapes by naughty french maids Erutis had to burst his bubble. /p
"Yeah...too bad we don't have any money." She sighed. /p
Chris groaned. /p
Neither of the two had noticed as time slipped by them, and so didn't notice that it was night now. /p
center
***/center/p
Raenef had already contracted a nasty case of cabin fever, which is why he felt the need to escape the designated room where Eclipse had told him very sternly to "NEVER LEAVE!"/p
It wasn't natural though, you couldn't keep Raenef locked up in a room. His spirit needed to be free, and he needed to feel nature's sweet air on his skin. Plus he was really hungry and absolutely HAD to find a kitchen. /p
As he turned another strange corridor he wondered if this was really such a good idea. There seemed to be a lot of corridors, yet not a lot of new territory. /p
It took him a minute to realize that even though he had kept close to an outside balcony, that the birds and bugs chirping had suddenly muted a few minutes ago. He stopped as soon as he realized. /p
"H-hello?" He questioned with a tremble in his voice just as he began to feel a wicked presence creeping up on him. /p
A hand brushed through his pony-tail and he whipped around to see no one behind him. /p
"Pretty little boy..." someone whispered hotly into his left ear, to which he turned and saw Demon Lord Krayon. /p
"Mister Krayon!" Raenef exclaimed, "Am I glad to see you, I thought you were a monster or something." The youth grinned./p
Krayon smiled back, "Hello Raenef. What're you doing up and out so late?" /p
"Mmm, I was trying to find food. But I think I got really lost, so now I'm just trying to find a way back to my room." Raenef finished, at that his stomach growled. /p
"Oh? Why didn't you just order something while in your room?"/p
"You can DO that?" Raenef's eyes were big now and the sight ejected a giggle from Krayon. /p
"Of course." He concluded. /p
"Oh-okay, thanks!" Raenef was ready to go until he felt a hand on his shoulder...again./p
"Tell me, how did you escape Eclipse's clutches?" The garish blond cooed. /p
"Er...I...uh...I n-never ask permission from Ecli-er-my servants. ANY of my servants..." /p
"Is that so?" Krayon whispered again into Raenef's ear. "Well then, sir, I'll let you get back to your room." /p
"Okay, see you later! Nite-nite!" Raenef returned all bubbly. Krayon sweat dropped and then disappeared into the shadows. "Oh wait...how do you get back to your room!?" Raenef cried, but to no avail as Master Krayon was already gone. "Aww man..." he sighed. How was he going to find his way back now? /p
"Heh heh heh...pathetic." /p
"Huh?" Raenef turned to see a figure lurking the shadows. /p
"You're pathetic." It spoke and stepped out to reveal another Junior Demon Lord. A boy a bit taller and more muscular than Raenef, with curly blond hair that framed his face and fell just short of his collar bone. He was wearing very regal clothing, dressed up in dark velvet green and silken silver garments. /p
"I know." Raenef countered with a smile. /p
The boy sweat-dropped, "Err...hahahah" He brought his jeweled hand up to scratch the back of his head, "I see." At that the point he stood perfectly still and stared at Raenef, who wasn't quite sure what to think. Suddenly, "FIRE ARROW!" the demon screamed, which sent a huge arrow covered in molten lava flying straight for Raenef's head. Luckily though, he ducked out of the way just before it struck him. /p
On the flood now, he looked up to the demon who had begun to cackle, "Hey, what's your problem!?" He yelled, "Who are you!?"
/p
"I am the Fifth Demon Lord Junaken, his grand highness!" he boomed, "and I have challenged you, you pathetic excuse for a fifth descendant of his lordship master Raenef the fourth!" /p
"Uhm...huh?" Raenef asked quietly. /p
"Don't you know what a challenge is?" Junaken asked with the back of his hand half over his mouth. /p
"...no..." Raenef replied sheepishly. /p
"HAHAHAH!" The grand Junaken began to shake with laughter, "You've got to be kidding! You're so pathetic!" /p
"...hey" Fully offended, Raenef stood up. /p
"Oh, oh...don't even bother now." Junaken took out a silver cloth from his coat pocket and began to dab the laugh-tears away from his eyes. "You know, I had you all wrong. I thought you'd be this incredibly powerful, ruthless demon lord. What with the legendary Eclipse as your loyal servant, and how you seem to know every one of the grandest Demon Lords like Aurelid and Krayon." Junaken paused, the tinge of jealousy laced in his comments was unmistakable, he was looking to Raenef again, wondering whether or not he'd heard it and if he would retort. /p
Raenef was still confused, he didn't sense the jealousy and was beginning to wonder why this Junior Demon Lord was staring at him so intently now. "Uhh.." before he could say anything else his stomach growled again, to which he sweat dropped. "Okay, well, nice meeting you, buh-bye!" He said quickly and began to walk off. Just then lighting crashed outside and he stopped in his tracks. /p
"I didn't say you could leave." Junaken raised his hand and began to wield some strange silver ball of light. "Whether or not you're a grand demon lord doesn't matter to me, but I still want to take your life." /p
"Wha!?" Raenef whipped back around to face Junaken, "B-but..." /p
"Goodbye," and with that the silver ball of light shot out of Junaken's hands and flew towards Raenef. /p
Big green eyes widened at the attack for a moment before everything suddenly went black. Raenef could hear the wind again and he quickly noticed that the blackness billowing all around him was really fabric. It was soft and the scent reminded him of Eclipse...."ECLIPSE!" the blond boy cried. /p
At the last second Eclipse had stepped in to neutralize the blow given by Junaken. "That's enough!" He spoke deeply, it was obvious by the tone of his voice that he was irritated. Raenef gulped. "Go back to your room, Junaken!"/p
"How dare you tell ME what to do, and how DARE to interfere in our spar - SERVANT!" Junaken growled angrily. /p
Eclipse tilted his head downwards to stare straight at Junaken, his black eyes glittering with contempt. He was in full fighting stance and everything that emanated from him seemed to say, 'Try me.' /p
The anger of Junaken quickly diminished as he saw this, the great Eclipse in all his glory. Suddenly all the horror stories he had heard of this demon tearing his enemies to shreds seemed to come back to him all at once. He took a step back quickly, "...Very well." Junaken was composed and no longer wanting to fight. He turned suddenly and disappeared, just like Krayon had, back into the shadows. /p
Meanwhile, Raenef was purring. The soft cape swishing all around him coupled with the smell and feel of the fresh dusk air almost made him forget his hunger and the fact that he was being attacked. He was knocked out of this trance by the quick turn of Eclipse. /p
"WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING!?" He screamed. /p
Raenef gaped and trembled, "I was err...hungry." /p
Eclipse sighed at the sight of Raenef's quivering bottom lip, "Why didn't you ask me for food?" /p
In reply, Raenef shrugged. Just then his stomach growled...again. /p
Eclipse sweat dropped. /p
center***/center/p
PHEW! Finally did it! See, I wrote it way back when I finished Chapter one, but I didn't edit it till...tonight. :P Sorry! Thanks for all the reviews! If it wasn't for them I'd never have posted the new chapter. I'm horrible at keeping with things. Sorry!/p
Special thanks to Yaoi Goddess Kome, Seventh Sage and SilverKnight7 - for making me get off my ass by repeated reviews! Muchly appreciated! XD
