Disclaimer: I don't own anything or anybody, just the plot.
A/N: I have to say a review a got no too long ago was deeply disturbing. It was by someone called Sarcasm Personified. (if you want you can read it by clicking reviews) but what he had to say I think, would crush any young, inexperienced writers' heart. In it he said something along the lines of "This is...disgusting. I don't think I've ever seen such a horrible interpretation of Jareth. In fact, I'd say this is the worst ever." I can take a little productive criticism but this... this just seems to cross the line. To whoever wrote that horrible review, I wanna say something to you. Fuck you.
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"Oh my god!! Oh my god!! Oh my god!!" Sarah screamed, practically hysterical. She got from underneath her covers, still in her skimpy little pajamas. She immediately began to pace the room; futiley trying to think up a way to stop the disaster she knew was coming.
"Darling?" Jareth asked slowly, opening one eye and yawning; reminding Sarah of a lion once again.
"Get up, get up, get up!!" Sarah yelled motioning frantically with her hands. "My parents are home!!! God, I just know Karen is gonna freak! I can just hear her now."
"Don't worry beautiful..." he said flashing her a sexy grin.
"Don't worry!?!?" Sarah asked, her face turning red from lack of oxygen. "I have a sexy, hot-ass guy laying on my bed, and here I am dressed in skimpy, almost see-through pajamas!!" As Sarah sighed, drawing in breath to calm her raging nerves, her legs began to turn into jello underneath her.
In one fluid movement, Jareth had his hand on her lower back, catching her only an inch from the ground. He stood, staring down at her with those mismatched eyes and Sarah began to feel herself melt.
"Careful, darling," he said in a husky tone, laying her down on the bed. Minutes after, Sarah's heart was still pounding in her chest.
"Sarah?" her step-mother asked while walking into her room. Sarah's eyes widened and then squeezed shut and she prepared herself for the monstrosity she knew was coming. "Oh... I didn't know we had visiters..."
Sarah's eyes squeezed shut again for several more minutes before tentively opening. No yelling? No screaming? No stomping...? What was going on! She looked at her mother but she looked perfectly calm and was in fact, looking at Sarah strangely. She quickly stole a glance down and was surprised to see that she was dressed in a normal tank-top and jeans. She peeked at Jareth and was surprised to find that he was dressed similarly. If he was sexy in his tight light spandex pants and ivory poets' shirts; then damn was he gorgeous in everyday regular clothes. He was dressed in tight, black leather pants that fit snuggly over his lower body. A smooth, silky black shirt hugged every curve of his upper body, efficiently showing off all of the muscles of his chest. Sarah stole in a breath as she looked at him, feeling the familiar beating in her heart.
"Well... I guess I'll be downstairs then..." Sarah's mother said slowly looking back and forth from Jareth to Sarah. It was obvious she was wondering how her plain-looking daughter had captured such a hunky man.
"What the hell!" Sarah exclaimed, once she was sure her mother had left the room and had long since left hearing range.
"What? It was just simple, rudimentary magic, my love. Why, are you impressed?" Jareth said, gaving her a little wink and a wolfish grin.
"Well... yes, actually," Sarah had to admit. "I thought she was going to kill me!"
"Well I'm so happy to help m'love. You know I'd never let any harm to come to you. Would you perhaps like to see anymore of my magic? Perhaps in the bedroom?" Sarah's eyes widened as Jareth gave her a grin that would stop a grown woman in her tracks. She stared into his eyes, getting lost in their mismatched gaze. She had never noticed before that he had different colored eyes... They were so deep and full of emotion. Whoever had said that eyes are a window into a person's soul, sure as hell wasn't lying. After only a few minutes, Sarah shook herself out of her trance with only a little blush.
"So sweetheart... weren't you saying you'd put me up for the night... erm well maybe more than a night."
"I never said that!" Sarah exclaimed indignantly. She knew that if she let the Goblin King into her life, chaos and destruction were soon to follow. But how could she say no to such a sexy man?
"I promise I'll good love! Please!!!" Jareth begged, laying on the puppy dog look. Unbeknownst to Sarah, Jareth's fingers were cross behind his back.
"Okay...Okay...."she said reluctantly. "But you have to behave and stay and trouble. And one more thing," Sarah said with a devilish smile," you have to come to school with me."
"School?" Jareth asked puzzled. What was this...school? Well whatever it was, it was more than worth it to stay in the same house as his beloved. Surely this school couldn't be so bad... Unfortunetly, Jareth was dead wrong.
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TADAAAA! What do you think for the third chapter? ^^ I hope you all liked it!! Please review!! =) Bye!
A/N: I have to say a review a got no too long ago was deeply disturbing. It was by someone called Sarcasm Personified. (if you want you can read it by clicking reviews) but what he had to say I think, would crush any young, inexperienced writers' heart. In it he said something along the lines of "This is...disgusting. I don't think I've ever seen such a horrible interpretation of Jareth. In fact, I'd say this is the worst ever." I can take a little productive criticism but this... this just seems to cross the line. To whoever wrote that horrible review, I wanna say something to you. Fuck you.
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"Oh my god!! Oh my god!! Oh my god!!" Sarah screamed, practically hysterical. She got from underneath her covers, still in her skimpy little pajamas. She immediately began to pace the room; futiley trying to think up a way to stop the disaster she knew was coming.
"Darling?" Jareth asked slowly, opening one eye and yawning; reminding Sarah of a lion once again.
"Get up, get up, get up!!" Sarah yelled motioning frantically with her hands. "My parents are home!!! God, I just know Karen is gonna freak! I can just hear her now."
"Don't worry beautiful..." he said flashing her a sexy grin.
"Don't worry!?!?" Sarah asked, her face turning red from lack of oxygen. "I have a sexy, hot-ass guy laying on my bed, and here I am dressed in skimpy, almost see-through pajamas!!" As Sarah sighed, drawing in breath to calm her raging nerves, her legs began to turn into jello underneath her.
In one fluid movement, Jareth had his hand on her lower back, catching her only an inch from the ground. He stood, staring down at her with those mismatched eyes and Sarah began to feel herself melt.
"Careful, darling," he said in a husky tone, laying her down on the bed. Minutes after, Sarah's heart was still pounding in her chest.
"Sarah?" her step-mother asked while walking into her room. Sarah's eyes widened and then squeezed shut and she prepared herself for the monstrosity she knew was coming. "Oh... I didn't know we had visiters..."
Sarah's eyes squeezed shut again for several more minutes before tentively opening. No yelling? No screaming? No stomping...? What was going on! She looked at her mother but she looked perfectly calm and was in fact, looking at Sarah strangely. She quickly stole a glance down and was surprised to see that she was dressed in a normal tank-top and jeans. She peeked at Jareth and was surprised to find that he was dressed similarly. If he was sexy in his tight light spandex pants and ivory poets' shirts; then damn was he gorgeous in everyday regular clothes. He was dressed in tight, black leather pants that fit snuggly over his lower body. A smooth, silky black shirt hugged every curve of his upper body, efficiently showing off all of the muscles of his chest. Sarah stole in a breath as she looked at him, feeling the familiar beating in her heart.
"Well... I guess I'll be downstairs then..." Sarah's mother said slowly looking back and forth from Jareth to Sarah. It was obvious she was wondering how her plain-looking daughter had captured such a hunky man.
"What the hell!" Sarah exclaimed, once she was sure her mother had left the room and had long since left hearing range.
"What? It was just simple, rudimentary magic, my love. Why, are you impressed?" Jareth said, gaving her a little wink and a wolfish grin.
"Well... yes, actually," Sarah had to admit. "I thought she was going to kill me!"
"Well I'm so happy to help m'love. You know I'd never let any harm to come to you. Would you perhaps like to see anymore of my magic? Perhaps in the bedroom?" Sarah's eyes widened as Jareth gave her a grin that would stop a grown woman in her tracks. She stared into his eyes, getting lost in their mismatched gaze. She had never noticed before that he had different colored eyes... They were so deep and full of emotion. Whoever had said that eyes are a window into a person's soul, sure as hell wasn't lying. After only a few minutes, Sarah shook herself out of her trance with only a little blush.
"So sweetheart... weren't you saying you'd put me up for the night... erm well maybe more than a night."
"I never said that!" Sarah exclaimed indignantly. She knew that if she let the Goblin King into her life, chaos and destruction were soon to follow. But how could she say no to such a sexy man?
"I promise I'll good love! Please!!!" Jareth begged, laying on the puppy dog look. Unbeknownst to Sarah, Jareth's fingers were cross behind his back.
"Okay...Okay...."she said reluctantly. "But you have to behave and stay and trouble. And one more thing," Sarah said with a devilish smile," you have to come to school with me."
"School?" Jareth asked puzzled. What was this...school? Well whatever it was, it was more than worth it to stay in the same house as his beloved. Surely this school couldn't be so bad... Unfortunetly, Jareth was dead wrong.
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TADAAAA! What do you think for the third chapter? ^^ I hope you all liked it!! Please review!! =) Bye!
