Alright!!! Thank you people for loving my fic!!! I really appreciated it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anyway here is the third of In Akihabara...!
But first, all of my yadda achoo choo choo 's! THANKS FOR REVIEWING!!! Anyway, I couldn't post this up since well, homework (I'm not from Japan. I know it's summer in the northern hemisphere but it's winter in the southern hemisphere), and my dad keeping me away from the computer (his computer actually) and everything that's been happening. Plus my other fic, 'Drunk' which I wanted to finish first before this one. But don't worry. I am going to finish this one as well as this.. I'm one of those people who finishes those that they've started. So, anyway, I promised that I won't work on anything except for Drunk, but you know that promises are made to be broken. But a vow is different. Vows are made to be kept and fulfilled. So I'll vow to you people who are reading this that I will finish THIS fic. I'm not sure about 'Drunk' but, I'll finish it too, if you like it. So anyway, on with the story.
I do not own FY or anything. I forgot to mention, there might be some crossover with Cyberteam in Akihabara or Akihabara Deno Gumi or something close. Well they are in Akihabara. If you don't know CiA then this might become a spoiler to you. I also don't own that Anime. I don't even own this computer! Italicized stuff are the flashbacks, dreams thoughts... you get it. and the one enclosed in the parenthesis are my comments question etc.
Once again, I am sorry Taka, Tamahome, T/M, Tasuki/M or anyone/?. This is a H/M fic love story that might become a rated R. Oh and in this Odou-kun will .... nah. You just read it for yourself. And there is no Yaoi or anything that contains something for homosexuals. nil nada.
And to that reviewer of mine (I'm sorry! I couldn't remember your name! Why didn't I saved that review?!?!?) who guessed that Odou was Hotohori, well sorry, but nope, he isn't Hotohori. Nice guess though! Odou's description does look like a bit of Hotohori. Hey they're brothers! And I dedicate this fic to you and the others who read this!
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"..." means talking
(...) means my comments and explanations
0o0o0 means to be continued
In Akihabara... Chapter 3 Sibling fight
The next day Miaka woke up from a dream. . .
She was at the country, at the fields at sunset and at the foot of a small hill where the sun sets... And on top of the hill was a tree, an old oak (are there oak trees in Japan?) tree...And by the tree, was someone... he or she was beautiful, elegant. But the sun was extremely bright, and so Miaka never saw the face. But one thing is sure is that the person gave Miaka something... (Remember this dream! This is very important)
It ended there. She was awaken by the ring of her alarm clock. Miaka shook her head and wondered What was that all about?, then headed downstairs for her breakfast with her father.
"Morning, Miaka!" greeted his father cheerfully.
"Good morning, Otou-san" Miaka automatically. She sat down at her chair, then ate her breakfast. It was a very depressing morning since it was already raining cats and dogs outside...
"Miaka," said Mr. Akaseikun, "would you like to me to give you a lift?". He was worried about the weather. Miaka might get sick.
Miaka accepted her father's offer and soon, just before 8:00 a.m. In the front of the school was a big crowd of girls. Of course. being a girl born with curiosity, Miaka came to look at what the crowd of girls was looking at.
It was the Tsukushi brothers, wet to the bones and was fighting quietly, blaming each other.
"It's all your fault!" came Odou who was very red from his anger, "Why do we have to come early, anyway?!". "And how come you didn't bring YOUR car!! You have one!"
"What?!" came Sei, very red as well, "You have one too! Besides, I told you to bring an umbrella! But did you listed to me?! Noooo. You said it won't rain but it did! I told you so! I told you so...." and on and on the two went on fighting.
Miaka wondered, why are they fighting? and why did they came this early? why are these girls crowding over these two? Probably because the two are soaking wet... She sweatdropped as one of the girls around the two boys swooned when Sei looked at her, crazy hormonally challenged freaks!
Suddenly someone spoke at the speaker, "Attention, Akihabara University students! Due to the typhoon, classes have been suspended." Immediately, there were loud cheers from the students, and rushing to get out of the building. Meanwhile, Miaka stayed for the two. She was still too timid to stop them from fighting.
"I'M GOING HOME!!!!" spat Odou to his brother, and stomped his way towards his locker. Miaka followed Odou, leaving Sei all alone. Sei got all his friends, she thought, but Odou isn't very social. He probably only have me as his friend...
She skipped just to catch up with Odou. He was very tall unlike the Chiriko she knew. "Odou-kun!" She cried out, to her friend, "wait up!"
Odou looked behind to see Miaka. He smiled to her. "Hey Miaka!" Odou said, quickly changing his mood.
"Why were you two fighting. You too seems so close to each other!" commented Miaka.
"Yeah, we're close," said Odou, looking at the petite girl, "But, sometimes, we fight too."
"What caused the fight?"
"Well, Onii-chan told me to get up early, since he planned to get here early."
"Why?"
"Well, you know, he's quite popular around girls, and as much as possible, he tries to avoid them. "
"How come? He's lucky to have all those fans."
"Hehe, yeah.. but you see, he's not interested in girls. But he's not a homo, of course he's just not interested in girls. Anyway, I better go... bye Miaka-koi!" and Odou ran from his locker, and into the pouring rain.
"'Miaka...koi'?" said Miaka to herself, blushing. Can't be! No way!
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Sei looked at Miaka's back as well as his brother's... He felt... odd... just to watching them together
"Oi!" said Paul, nudging his friend at the ribs, "wuz wrong wiz you (hint: --from French--) ?"
"Nothing," said Sei sighing.
"Well, wuz are zyou vaizingk fvour (what are you waiting for?)? Lez go home!" said Paul, slapping Sei at the back,
"Nah. I'll wait for a while. I need to get something under my table. Go on ahead." said Sei. Paul shrugged, and went out of the building.
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I know. It's incomplete. But we must focus about what Odou meant by 'Miaka-koi'.
If you don't know what 'koi' is, it means 'koishii' or 'koishi' or 'koibito' which means "Darling". I'm not sure which is which, since I found "koishi" means "darling" and ditto "Koibito"
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