Kaira-chan: Sorry everyone! Sorry for the long updating period!
Kyla: She was gwounded for a while...
Yami Kaira: Then she had writer's block...
Yami: Then she didn't WANT to work on it because it was getting so long...and she had writer's block...
Pharaoh Yami: And she's working on 13 other fics right now, plus some unpublished ones...
Kyla: Pwus she must wowk now...so Ishtar-chan can come back home for 2 days...
Kaira-chan: Yeah, I've been busy...
Kyla: Kywa-chan no own Yu-Gi-Oh!
AUTHOR NOTES ON THE STORY!!
OK, sorry people, I have no idea who had the Sennen Tauk before Aishisu... so I made someone up.
Oh yeah, this doesn't apply to this chapter, but I'm going to answer the question on why Yami never got married, so, yeah, the girl he likes ISN'T a Mary-Sue, it pains me to write it because of that small fact *Sighs* Anyways, yeah, so she's NOT based on me, but she is a original character. So yeah...don't hate me for it...
THANK YOU KNIGHT OF DARKNESS FOR BETA READING THIS CHAPTER!!
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Abayomi sat up, his bones groaning in protest. He winced in pain as his bones fell into place. He had scarcely moved in the past week. Now his bruises may have mostly healed, but now he was stiff all over. He cursed at his luck.
He rolled his head on his neck, and his arms in their sockets, hearing and feeling every crack. He shut his eyes tightly, trying to clear his mind of what his bones were doing in there. He really didn't want to know right now.
He stood up, losing his balance. He had to press his hand against the cool clay wall in order to regain it.
"I feel like a newborn child," he grumbled, taking a wobbly step forward.
"Aby-chan?" Nabooru's head appeared from through the door way. "Aby-chan? Are you ok?" she asked, seeing him leaning against the wall.
"Yeah, yeah. I'm fine," he grumbled again, pushing himself forward. He stumbled and nearly fell, but with much waving of his arms he kept his balance.
"Aby-chan, maybe I should go find Jou-kun," Nabooru said. Abayomi nodded. "If I can't find Jou-kun, how about I just bring Anuba back?" she asked. Abayomi nodded again.
Nabooru ran out the door, while Abayomi leaned against the wall. Then he realized what he just did. People would think he was helpless. He glared inwardly at himself, and took a tentative step forward.
He managed to walk to the door with minimum tripping.
Note to self, he mumbled inside his head, next time it hurts to move, remember to still force myself to walk once a day. He said. Now his legs were weak, and all of his bones ached.
He stepped out of the door way, and began walking towards the market.
He received stares from many of the villagers. Some were staring at him fearfully, and others yet were waving, and smiling, and saying things like "YOU ROCK ABAYOMI!" and "Way to go, Abayomi!" He didn't even know half these people.
He walked past them, with full intentions of finding some of his friends. He ran into someone, who mumbled an incoherent apology. He looked, to see short white hair walking away.
"Bakura!" he cried. He looked at his side. "Give me back my money, you bastard!" he called.
Bakura turned around. "Abayomi?" he said, shock etched on his face. Then he glared. "I thought you were still hiding your face," he growled.
"No, I was recovering. Something only people with courage need to do," he glared back.
"No, someone only with the brains of a bull would fight an emseh. Oh sorry, that's an insult to the bulls," Bakura glared.
"Give me back my money, Bakura," Abayomi said, his eyes narrowing dangerously.
Bakura huffed. "Fine," he growled, tossing a sack of money back to Abayomi. Abayomi looked in it as soon as he caught it, Bakura already walking away.
"BAKURA! THIS IS FILLED WITH ROCKS!" he growled.
Bakura turned around, and smirked. "Oops, wrong pouch..." He grinned, he turned back and began to run.
"BAKURA!" Abayomi shouted, chasing after Bakura.
Bakura grabbed a horse that was tied up to a pole, jumped on its back, and kicked it into a gallop, laughing manically.
"HEY!" a man cried, running out of the hut he was in. "Give me back my horse, you thief!" he cried. Abayomi looked at him as he ran past. He was obviously a traveler.
Abayomi moaned. If he didn't get that horse back, Egypt could be plunged into war again. It had been at peace for about 9 years now, and he didn't want to have to put up with a war that he'd actually be able to remember.
"I'm sorry, sir!" Abayomi said, grabbing a beautiful white stallion from the man. The other horse must have been a pack horse that had had its baggage removed, for this horse was much too beautiful.
"I promise I'll bring him back," Abayomi said while untying the horse. "And your other one too," he said, hopping onto its back. "HA!" he cried out, kicking the horse's sides hard.
The man just stared in shock as the boy rode off. "He's a good rider for such a small boy," he mumbled. "I didn't know that commoners in this country could afford to have riding lessons..."
Abayomi pressed himself against the back of the galloping horse. He'd never ridden before (That he could remember) but somehow this seemed familiar.
"Ha! Ha!" he called into the horse's ears. It seemed to speed up.
"Abayomi?!" he heard someone call up in front of him. He looked, only to see Nabooru leading Jonouchi towards their house.
He grinned sheepishly, before his gaze was forced back in front of him. He was catching up to Bakura quickly.
"HA!" he cried louder into the horse's ear.
Bakura heard it and turned around, eye widening slightly. As he passed a cart, he stuck out his foot knocking it over.
Abayomi's eyes widened. If he stopped he'd never catch Bakura, but if he didn't then he'd run into the cart. He was still wondering as he kept riding. It was too late to stop now.
He leaned back on the horse and pulled back and up with the reigns. The horse immediately recognized the command and sailed over the cart. It landed gracefully on the other side, and kept riding.
Abayomi turned his head behind him, his eyes widening as he realized he had jumped it. Unfortunately, this moved the weight on the horse's back, and it slowed, not knowing what Abayomi wanted it do. Abayomi growled and kicked the horse hard, leaning down again. He probably wouldn't catch up to Bakura now... unless...
Abayomi turned sharply, the horse's barrel (That's the chest part I believe) dangerously close to the ground, Abayomi leaned with it.
As the horse straightened and so did Abayomi, and he galloped through a back ally.
He appeared on the next road over, and galloped a few more over, before turning onto another road, the one that Bakura should be on.
He was right, and he saw Bakura appearing. Bakura was turned around, searching for Abayomi behind him. Abayomi stopped his horse, and waited in the middle of the street. (A/N: Sorry, I don't know if that's the right command, but I do western riding, and we don't really learn to jump until much, much later (Because of the horn on the saddle, it would dig into your ribs). Besides its Ancient Egypt, I'm sure they jumped differently then us O_o)
His horse was breathing heavily, and he wondered if he had over worked it.
As the other horse drew closer, Abayomi made his horse rear up. It let out a shrill cry, which drew Bakura's attention to in front of him.
He stopped his horse sharply, too sharply, so he wouldn't run into Abayomi. He flew off the horse and landed a few feet away.
"Are you okay, Bakura?" Abayomi asked, immediately wondering why. It wasn't like he cared or anything.
"Yeah, I'm fine," he said. Abayomi slid off his horse, and walked to the still sitting Bakura.
"My money, Bakura," he said. Bakura grumbled and placed a bag in his hand. Abayomi opened it, and looked inside. It was his money. He tied it onto his waist, and jumped onto the white horse.
Both horses were breathing heavily, and were now gathering a coat of salty sweat. Abayomi sighed. He hoped the man wouldn't mind too much.
He took the other horse, which was a light grey, by the reigns, and rode with the white horse at a slow walk, one hand on the white's reigns, and one's on the gray's.
The cart was already being cleaned up as he past, stray oranges being picked up and dusted off. He maneuvered around the mess and soon enough he was back where he left the traveler.
He slid off of the whites back gracefully and handed the reigns to the man. "I'm sorry. I may have worn your horses a little. I am so very sorry..." He said, looking at his feet.
"Don't be kid," the man said. Abayomi looked up, to see the man smiling. "He never gets ridden like that, neither of them," he said, then a pause. "Listen, I'm thinking, that maybe this horse would be better in your care then in mine," he said, handing the reigns of the white horse to Abayomi. Abayomi stared at them.
"Th-thank you..." he stuttered. Then he seemed to realize what he was holding. He looked up at the man quickly. "But he's a fine horse! Maybe you should keep him, I mean; you two must have been through a lot. I just can't take him. You must have raised him, and he must have cost a lot!" Abayomi exclaimed.
"No, no. Take him. I won't be able to bring him where I'm going anyway. I was actually looking to sell both my horses here, but he seems to like you," the man said, and as if on cue, the horse nudge Abayomi's arm with his head. "He didn't cost me anything at all. His mother is right there," he gestured to the grey pack horse. "He was absolutely free really," he laughed. "So it wouldn't be fair for me to sell him. Plus, he's still young, and has a lot more to learn. You two could grow together," the man smiled.
Abayomi stared at him, his eyes widening. "Thank you so much sir!" He cried, like he was five years old again. Not that he remembered when he was five, but all the same...
He hugged the man, and then he hugged his new horse. "I'm going to name him Chafulumisa," He said. Then he looked at the man. "Is that okay?" he asked, timidly.
"He's your horse. But I think it suits him," the man smiled.
"Thank you again sir. Can I have your name?" Abayomi asked.
The man nodded. "My name is Chike," He smiled.
Abayomi looked at him. "Chike?! You must be really important for a name like that," Abayomi gasped. "I mean, if not it could be considered Blas – blos –Blousefomous," Abayomi said, trying to search for the word in his head. He had heard Mahado say it many times.
"Blasphemous?" Chike asked.
Abayomi nodded. "Yes, it could. But may I ask your name? So I know who Chafulumisa belongs to, and if I ever visit again, I'll know who to see," he said.
Abayomi smiled and nodded. "My name is Abayomi. Abayomi Ishaq," He answered.
"The name suits you well, little one," Chike smiled, patting Abayomi's pointy hair. He swung onto his mare's back. "Your hair by the way. It reminds me of a hand..." The man said, smiling down at Abayomi. Abayomi touched it. He supposed it would, but he had been aiming more for a star. "I'll see you someday little one, Abayomi Ishaq," Chike said, mysteriously. "Ha!" He cried, kicking the horse. The horse galloped away.
Abayomi stood their and watched as he rode off, lost in his own thoughts. He would've stayed there longer if Chafulumisa, his new stallion hadn't nudged him. He snapped back into the real world. Then he went to the hut and knocked. A woman came to the door.
Abayomi recognized her as Ramla, the village prophetess.
"Oh! I'm sorry Ramla-sama, I didn't know you lived here," Abayomi said, looking upon her withered face.
"Not many do, Heq," Ramla said, her voice wispy and mysterious.
Abayomi stared at her for a moment, wondering if she was really crazy, like everyone said she was.
She smiled. "Come in, Heq."
He followed her warily. "Actually, Ramla-sama, I just wanted to ask who that man was who was just here," Abayomi said, hoping that his new horse was ground tied.
"Him? He didn't say," Ramla said.
"Really? He didn't?" Abayomi asked, then; "Hey! You're a prophetess! You should just know these things," Abayomi said, raising his voice.
"Calm down Heq. It is not my right to say what or who he is. It is not my right, to tell others of others, only of themselves..." Ramla said, her mysterious voice becoming, if at all possible, more mysterious.
Abayomi looked around her hut. It was dark, which was the first thing he noticed. Especially when the door closed. He waited for his eyes to adjust to the dark. He immediately regretted it. He tried not to gag, yet he didn't do a very good job.
Her walls were covered with dead animals. Hearts, livers and intestines filled bowls, which lay scattered around the room. He noticed something else filling the bowls...it was a liquid, very dark... He tried not to disgorge (Gotta love that thesaurus). The bowls were filled with blood.
Ramla looked at him. "Well, are you going to sit or not?" She asked. Abayomi looked around, but sat on the floor anyway.
"No, no, you don't sit there," Ramla sighed. Abayomi blinked. He sat anywhere on the floor at everyone else' house. .
"I'm sorry," He said, confused. He stood up again.
"This way," Ramla said, mysteriously.
Abayomi nodded and followed her to another room. This one was filled light from a fire that burned in the center of the room. Around the fire, there were cousins. She pointed at one, a blue one. "Sit there, Heq," she said. Abayomi nodded again, and sat down on it.
"Um... why am I here?" Abayomi asked, looking around. He looked back at their past conversation. He didn't remember asking for his fortune read.
Ramla smiled slightly. "Why are you asking me?" she asked.
"...Because you're the one who invited me in," Abayomi said obviously. Ramla's expressions fell.
"No, that's not what I mean. I am not the one to answer that question; you are the one who has to answer it yourself..." She said.
Abayomi blinked. "Well... I don't really know either," he sighed. This was getting him nowhere.
"Your past, too you, is shrouded in mystery, is it not?" she asked.
"Duh. Everyone in the village knows that I can't remember more then a few years back," he answered.
Ramla's face fell more. "A secret shall be relieved in due time, Heq. With my help, you may unravel it sooner then you thought..." Ramla said again, he voice once again cryptic.
"What are you talking about?" Abayomi asked, not at all impressed. "Why do you keep calling me Heq? Are you really as crazy as people say?" He asked, tilting his head, curiously.
"That's it! Get out of my house!" she screamed.
Abayomi looked around. "Gladly," he mumbled standing up. He walked through the darkened room, and as he walked into the sunlight, he could've sworn he heard Ramla mumble, "Never do the fortunes of kids..."
He walked through the door, blinking hard against the sunlight. He smiled when he say Chafulumisa still standing where Abayomi had left him.
He picked the reigns up off the ground and rode towards his house. He thought about that Ramla woman. Why did she keep calling him Heq? Could she have really revealed his past to him?
He was so lost in thought he didn't pay attention to where he was going, and only snapped out of it when his horse suddenly turned. He looked down to see Mahado standing there.
"Mahado!" He called, Mahado looked up and smiled.
Abayomi slid off of Chafulumisa and hugged Mahado. "I haven't seen you in forever!" He smiled, clinging to Mahado's waist.
"Yeah, it's been along time," Mahado smiled, touching Abayomi's back lightly in what he considered a hug. Abayomi smiled and pulled back, leaving his hands on Mahado's waist and he smiled into Mahado's face. "So why didn't you come see me at all?" Abayomi asked.
"Palace duties are getting hectic," Mahado smiled back. He looked into the face of Chafulumisa. "So, is he yours, or are you just borrowing him?" he asked, referring to the horse.
"Oh! He's mine! I just got him today. Isn't that great?" Abayomi asked, fully pulling away from Mahado to stroke Chafulumisa's muzzle. "I named him Chafulumisa."
"Really?" Mahado asked, walking up to the horse. "That's a nice name," He said.
"You think so?" Abayomi asked. "Thank you."
"Hey, listen, I have to go to your house, to see Eshe. You wanna come with me?" Mahado asked.
"Huh? Oh sure! Do you wanna ride Chafulumisa?" Abayomi asked, stroking his horse's neck.
"No, I'm okay. I don't want to get to stiff tomorrow," Mahado laughed.
"Stiff?" Abayomi asked, looking at him curiously.
"What? Don't tell me you forgot. If you ride too much, you'll get really stiff the next day, around here," Mahado said, rubbing his thighs.
"...Why would I forget that? I mean, why would I even know it?" Abayomi asked, leading Chafulumisa by the reigns.
"Eeek," Mahado gasped, stiffening. "Um, I don't know. I thought everyone did. I suppose commoners don't though, huh?" Mahado covered.
"Hmm.... I don't know, maybe they taught it when we were young?" Abayomi said.
"Hmm... Perhaps," Mahado answered back.
The full realization sunk into Abayomi. "Stiff?!" he called. "But! But I'm still stiff today! I don't want to be stiff tomorrow too," Abayomi cried.
Mahado laughed. "Don't worry about it," he grinned. "Listen, tomorrow I'm coming back to your place, to check on Eshe again. Then perhaps we can go out and do something," he offered.
"Sure!" Abayomi smiled. He and Mahado hadn't hung out in a long time.
They turned a corner, and Abayomi's home stood in front of them. "Oh...where am I going to put Chafulumisa?" Abayomi pouted, looking at his stallion.
"I'm sure we'll think of something," Mahado smiled, resting his hand lightly on Abayomi's shoulder.
Abayomi smiled. "Yeah! I bet we will!" he grinned.
"Just leave him out here for a while," Mahado said. "We'll go inside, and once I'm done with Eshe, then we'll think of something.
Abayomi smiled, dropping the reigns, and together, he and Mahado walked into his house.
"Eshe! Nabooru! I've got a horse!" Abayomi called as he opened the door. Nabooru and Eshe were both sitting on the floor, talking.
"You've what?" Nabooru cried, shock etched all over her face.
"I've got a horse," Abayomi smiled.
"That's great Abayomi," Eshe said.
Abayomi smiled. Nabooru got up, and stormed outside, muttering something that sounded an awful lot like, "Stupid lying Aby-chan, I've got to see this..."
As she got outside she gasped. "Oh! He's so pretty!" She cried. "Hey! Aby-chan! Isn't this the horse you were chasing Bakura-baka with?" She called from outside.
"Chased Bakura....baka with?" Mahado asked, and both he and Eshe looked at Abayomi questionably. Usually when someone insulted Bakura (Such as calling him Bakura-baka) Abayomi got really, really mad. Now he was just standing there.
"Yeah...Bakura and I got into a fight before the fight with the emseh..." Abayomi said, smiling sheepishly.
"...You're the one who was in the fight with the emseh?" Mahado asked.
"Yeah...that was me," Abayomi said, his smile getting more sheepish.
"Hm... Someone was saying it was you, but I thought you were smarter then that," Mahado said casually.
"Are you calling me stupid?" Abayomi asked.
"What else do you call someone who picks fights with an emseh?" Mahado asked, his voice light and mocking.
"Mahado! Don't be mean," Abayomi whined.
"Haven't you ever heard to respect your elders?" Mahado laughed, a playful glow in his eyes.
"Only to those who deserve it," Abayomi stuck out his tongue. Mahado laughed. "Hey, Yomi, how about you go wait outside, while I talk to Eshe?" Mahado asked. Yomi nodded and went outside with Nabooru and Chafulumisa.
Mahado looked at Eshe. "How are you feeling?" he asked her.
"Me? I'm okay. It hurts a little when the baby kicks, but it should be okay. It was the same for Nabooru," Eshe answered.
"Ramla-sama said that the baby should be coming in exactly one week..." Mahado said, his voice quiet, solemn.
Eshe's face also fell solemn. "You sure?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper.
"Ramla is scarcely wrong. She holds the power of the Tauk after all," Mahado sighed. "If that's the case...then I wish you well, and.... I hope that it's not always right," he said, hugging her.
"Me too...me too..." The said, hugging him back, silent tears falling down her face. "I'll pray for you both," He whispered into her ear.
"Hello?" a timid voice rang out behind Abayomi, who was petting his horse. Nabooru looked over the back, of the horse, because she was on the opposite side. Abayomi turned around.
"Oh, hello..." Abayomi said, looking at her. She looked a lot different then nearly everyone in the village. Her hair was gold, and her eyes were the color of the sky. He held up a lock of his golden hair. "Your hair's the same colour as some of mine..." He said.
She smiled. "I guess it is," she said as her smile turned into a grin. "I'm glad you're at least not bothering me about my looks," she said.
Nabooru laughed. She pointed at Abayomi. "Look at who you're talking to! You think he's going to bother people about their looks?" She laughed again.
The girl giggled. "Hi, my name is Mana. What's yours?" She asked them.
"My name is Abayomi."
"And mine's Nabooru."
"Oh, are you two brother and sister?" Mana asked.
Nabooru asked. "No! He just lives with us, because he can't remember anything about his past," she laughed.
Mana looked at Abayomi for confirmation, and was greeted with his lavender eyes filled with sorrow. He seemed to notice her looking at him, because he smiled widely and nodded.
"Oh..." she said.
"Hey! Mana. You're not from around here are you?" Abayomi asked, changing the subject. "Where are you from? Why are you here?"
"Nope, I'm not from around here. My mom sent me from my village so I could work in the palace. She wants me to be a priestess," Mana sighed, looking down.
"You look sad. What's the matter?" Abayomi asked, Nabooru crossed her arms over the back of Chafulumisa and looked at her.
"Well... I don't really want to be a priestess," she sighed. "And well, what if everyone in the castle is really mean, and they don't like me. That wouldn't be fun...." she sighed.
"No! I know lots of people from the palace. A lot of them are really nice. Even the Pharaoh is getting nicer, but I've never met him. Actually, I have some priest and priestess friends too. My one friend, Mahado, he's a priest. He's really nice. But he's not one of the special six priests. He wants to be, I think someone in his family is, I never asked, but he isn't qualified yet. I think he needs to take a student or something in order to be one..." Abayomi said.
"Really? Is he really nice?" Nabooru asked, some imagining a really nice grandpa like person. After all, what kind of teenager would actually want such responsibility.
"Yeah, he's actually just inside my house right now," Abayomi said, pointing to his hut like thing. "I know! Maybe you could be his student! I hear Aishisu just took one. And some other people, I don't know them though," Abayomi said.
"Okay!" Mana smiled. Abayomi and she and Nabooru talked longer while they waited for Mahado to come out.
"So, what do you mean one of the special six priests?" Mana asked, petting Chafulumisa's muzzle.
"You mean you don't know?" Abayomi asked, Mana shook her head. "Oh, well out of all the priests, the six most qualified, and with the most magical ability, with the strongest KAA, are each given an item," Abayomi said. "I don't know a lot. Shimon, Mahado and Aishisu don't really tell me a lot about them."
"Hey Yomi, I'm finally out," Mahado said behind Abayomi.
"Mahado! Hi! What did you and Eshe talk about?" Abayomi asked, smiling widely.
"Not a lot. Mostly about the baby," Mahado smiled.
"Really? That's cool!" Abayomi smiled. Then he turned to Mana, who was staring at Mahado, wide eyed.
Bu-bump. Mana's heart seemed to skip a beat. "Th-that's Mahado?" She asked, staring at him.
Abayomi smiled widely and nodded. "Yep, yep! That's my friend Mahado! He's the greatest!" Abayomi exclaimed. Mahado blushed lightly at the compliment.
What's this I'm feeling? Mana thought. Could it be...love? Her cheeks turned a light pink. "P-pleased to meet you, Priest Mahado.." She stuttered.
"Nice to meet you too," Mahado smiled politely, softly back at her, making her heart nearly stop. He has such a beautiful smile...
"Oi! Mahado! That's Mana," Abayomi smiled, pointing at Mana. "Her mom wants her to be a priestess. You said you were looking for a student, right?" Abayomi asked. The fifteen year old nodded.
"I would love you have you as a student, Miss Mana," Mahado smiled.
"Thank-Thank you...Teacher-sama," Mana said.
Mahado looked at her, tilting his head. He's so cute when he does that! "Teacher-sama?" he asked, then he shrugged. "Well, come on, I'll take you to the palace," he smiled.
"Good-bye Mahado! I'll see you tomorrow!" Abayomi exclaimed, hugging Mahado good-bye.
Mana watched them, jealousy seeming to creep up on her. That should be me... She thought.
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Kaira-chan: . There was so much more I wanted to write on this chapter! But it was getting too long. I need to remember that the next chapter has to be longer then this one .
Yami Kaira: Haha! =P
Yami: ...**Reads through it** Wow...that's a little long... 4198 words long...
Kaira: . Dammit! I knew I should've stopped when I saw it was nearly 9 pages long with no author notes.
Pharaoh Yami: And you did ^-^ lol. Hey! For once I actually acted like a kid!
Kaira-chan: I would too, you just got a horse...
Pharaoh Yami: True, true.
Kaira-chan: Hey! I just thought of a new section for my ending author notes!
~~~~~~~QUESTIONS ANSWERED SO FAR~~~~~~~~
This is where I put where I answer the questions of Ancient Egyptian stuff in each chapter. ^-^ If that doesn't make sense, then w/e you'll catch on.
CHAPTER ONE!! Emerge...
Umm... Why Yami's father is named Akunamakanon?
CHAPTER TWO!!! Seto's Friends...
Umm... How old was Yami when he first left the palace? *Shrugs* I don't know, I guess the beginning chapters don't really explain a lot...
CHAPTER THREE!!! Dinner at a pheasant's house...
Did you know Pheasant is a bird, and I wasn't really paying attention when I wrote the chapter name?
Um...yeah, I can't really think of any answered questions on this one...
CHAPTER FOUR!!! Left behind...
Why can't Yami remember his dear father?
I'll do more next chapter...
~~~~~QUESTIONS~~~~~~~~
Does anyone know roughly how old Mana was in the Manga? It's a little late now, but I was thinking about 12 - 14...
How did Yami's father die?
How did Yami's mother die?
Hmm... Should I kill Eshe's baby, or let him live? Decisions, decisions.
I'm still not 100% on the Malik thing... Who thinks I should put Malik in, and who thinks that I should just... not put him in?
Who here knows who held the items before the current holders. As in, who wielded the ring before Mahado... and the tauk before Aishisu, and so on....
~~~~~~~REVIEW REPLIES~~~~~~~~
BakaNeko2: *To review on chapter 18*
Hmm...I see ff.net must've changed your name . Sux, ne? I can't remember if I replied to this yet, I hope I didn't waste too much of your time O_o...don't let the suspense kill you. Lol! J/p, neways, I'm glad you like it!
Yami Bakura's Wife:
Hylo Jeshi-chan! Was it a sad chapter? Cool ^-^ No Bakura, no killing Yami! Bad Bakura =P And no offence taken Jeshi ^-^
BakaNeko2:
Bakura's all alone? What about Abayomi? Lol, j/p ^-^ He's not all alone, he's still friends with Jonouchi. I don't think you care much tho...by the sound of your review, you don't like him much O_o Hehehe ^-^;; Don't worry, if I do put him in, he won't be crazy ^-^ Lol, so many people have said I should put him in, I probably will...
Amy (changed the writing Amy, so you can tell):
I'm sorry. Especially if it wasn't you! Sorry for embarrassing you. And no problem about the Shonen Thingy. And if it wasn't you... I'm so sorry *Bows in apology*
Meroko1:
hmm...looks like ff.net changed YOUR name too...It has??? Yay!! *Gives you a cookie* Aby-chan and Bakura will make up soon...I mean, you'll have to see! **Hopes I didn't just ruin the story** Lol, I think it was both their faults for Aby cutting his hand. If Aby-chan hadn't been so proud! =P Lol, I'm glad you like the emseh thingy ^-^ Lol.
DarkFoxy:
Lol, actually, I'd like more constructive criticism! It helps me make my stories better! I hope characters didn't suddenly appear in this, like Ramla O_o I'm sorry if they did. And I hope this one isn't that wandery...ey... either. I'm sorry it took so long to update, yeah, it must be annoying for the readers when an author gets writers block. I'll try to cut back ^-6;;
S.A: **To Ch. 17**
Lol, I'm glad you like this chapter ^-^ O_o wow, someone actually LIKES Bakura's new g/f O_o lol.
S.A : **To Ch. 18**
Lol...I take it I destroyed your like for her in this chapter, huh? Lol ^-^;; sorry! Yes, I do believe she might be more eviler then Ishtar-sama as you call him =P
S.A:
And then... Abayomi becomes lighter again . Lol, neways, you really think that the angst mood is helping? You really think that there still IS an angst mood? Hehe ^-^;;; Hmm, your opinion counts a lot for this story, but I'm still really not sure to put him in, because so many people have said they want him in . But, your opinion does count for a lot ^-^
Curtis Zidane Ziraa:
Hmm... tip? O_o I'm so confused.....
Aleuwolf:
**Blames the stupid vacation** lol! ...Wrestle a croc? Wow O_o I do believe I just updated my story before you updated yours =P unless O_O What if my Author Alert isn't working for you either!! Ahhh!!! O_O I'll go check soon! Lol, you were a little bit of help ^-^;; And here's your payback ^-^
Yugi-Redwall-Fan:
I updated soon enough, right? **Doesn't want a crazy reviewer** lol ^-^ J/p. I actually I have many crazy reviewers, because I'm a crazed authoress =P j/p
Angel Of Sorrow:
O_o Your stories are good! Ahhh, I get it, you must be like me! See, I think my stories suck horrible, so I have no idea when I've never had a flame that wasn't apologized for yet!! O_o I'm still expecting them... their coming...I know they are...there all waiting...and then their all going to attack me at once... hoping to burn me alive!! Neways, like I was saying, I like your stories. The Childhood of a Tomb Robber story made my friend Jeshi (Yami Bakura's Wife) cry, so yeah, you're a good authoress... hey, would you mind if I advertised for that story in the next chapter?
Akkiko-Lord-Of-Destruction:
Hehehe… ^_^;; Gomen! And I'll continue ^_^ No worries...
Link the Traveler:
And another one whose against having Malik in here. There are more of you than I thought O_o oks, then, thanks for the answers.
Sam:
Seriously? You're joking, right? I mean, I'm not that good of an authoress O_o
Franklin707:
Um...sure? O_o
YumeTakato:
Heh, yeah, I think your right O_o...but I am still getting a lot of people saying that his father died in battle, so... yeah .
Emerald-Forest:
Updating ^-^ Yay! and thanks for the review!!!1
Silverlight3:
lol, that certain pharaoh is MINE!! *Huggles Yami and Pharaoh Yami* lol, j/p. I'm willing to share him with Aleuwolf, so I might as well share with you too. I'm glad I could help! ^-^ You got to take Ancient Egypt in school?! I HATE YOU!!! Lol, j/po, but I had to learn about it on my lil' ol' lonesome. Lol ^-^ Thanks for the review BTW.
