A/N: Thanks for the reviews for my past story and the review for this story, chibibaka!!!
It's nice to know that at least someone enjoys the story. My writing skills vary between
chapters, so some are much better than others. Anyway, the action starts here, so enjoy! ^^
-J. R. Grant
South City was famous for their carnival / dance that they held yearly. The
admission cost was pretty high, but the carnival was huge and going to it was a huge deal.
Paris had gotten her and Goten tickets and she was currently waiting for her boyfriend to
show up.
"Paris!" Goten called out, running up to her. He embraced her and swung her
around before he set her back down on the ground. Paris frowned.
"What took you so long Goten!? Does it always take you an extra half an hour to
get to a date?" Paris complained. Goten laughed weakly, a hand behind his head.
"My mom had to talk to me before I could go... she was worried I'd try and do
something that wasn't kosher..." Goten replied looking down at the ground in
embarassment. Paris twisted her mouth to the side in thought, but decided it wasn't worth
dwelling on.
"Let's go!" Paris said after throwing away any disturbing thoughts she had once
had. Goten nodded and grabbed her hand as they walked towards the carnival.
Their joy was short lived, however, because at that very moment the ferris wheel
stopped and floated into the air. Throughout the carnival people could hear the screams
of the terrified people on the ride. Goten looked towards the floating wheel and could feel
a very powerful presence that was keeping the ride afloat.
"Goten, what's happening?" Paris asked with a small note of fear in her voice.
Goten glared at the entity who was responsible for this.
"Stay here, Paris. I'll figure this out." Goten said and, before his girlfriend could
reply, took off into the sky towards the ferris wheel. As Goten drew closer, the figure of
the demon behind this came into view. Goten had no idea who it was, but was determined
to make sure he didn't ruin this carnival for him and his girlfriend.
Nayr watched with ammusement as the half-saiyan drew closer to him. This had
been well thought out by he and his sister. He smiled as Goten arrived.
"I don't know who you are, but I don't think the people here like you holding
them up like that." Goten told Nayr. Nayr laughed and held the ride up with one hand.
"You want it, saiyan? Take it." Nayr said and threw the ferris wheel at Goten.
Goten reached up to catch it.
"Ka...me...ha..." Nayr started. Goten's eyes went wide. This was all a trap!
Goten flew up to catch the ferris wheel. Nayr laughed manically and lifted his aim up at
Goten. "me...HAAAA!!!!!!!!!!" A huge, one hundred metre blast came out, demolishing
the ferris wheel, it's inhabitants and left Goten laying brutally injured on the ground. Nayr
landed in front of Goten, pulling what looked like a black seed from his pocket. He
flicked the seed into Nayr's stomach. Goten winced at first, then gasped. His body began
to transform. His eyes turned red and a long forked tail sprung out of Goten's back. His
skin turned whiter at which point Goten coughed and a beam of light coursed between his
body and Nayr's as Nayr pulled out all of Goten's ki. Goten fell to the ground lifeless.
* * *
Paris' eyes went wide as she saw the explosion take place. She jumped as she
heard a voice behind her.
"Beautiful, isn't it?" the voice asked. Paris turned around to see Samantha. The
demon priestess smiled, her earrings jingling as Samantha walked towards Paris.
"It's terrifying!" Paris screamed. Samantha closed her eyes and shook her head.
"So many people see events in such a static way. To some people it might have
been beautiful... the brilliant light display... the sound of the explosion. Some people see
past the destruction, Pair-ees, and soon so shall you."
"How did you know my name?"
"I can read your very thoughts, my dear." Samantha said as she pulled out a
seed similar to Nayr's and flicked it into Paris' belly button. Paris fell to her knees,
gasping. Her very figure began to change. Her hair turned black and shortened to a short,
messy hair style, her eyes turned as red as Samantha's and she became a little shorter. In
front of Samantha was a completely different person than had been there before.
"Hello, mother." it said innocently with little emotion in it's voice. Samantha
smiled and embraced her child.
"Your name is Kunsan, your mission is to seek out and destroy the Saiyan named
'Celipa'. Do you understand?"
"Yes, mother. I shall not fail."
A\N: The demons on Lucifer reproduce by planting seeds: in the dirt, in a tree, in a rock or
even in a human. It doesn't matter. The problem is that all seeds turn out female, which
is what happened with Paris and Goten. Nayr stopped the transformation prematurely by
stealing his ki, so Goten didn't fully transform into a demon female. Just thought I'd try
and clear that up. Anyhow, please read and review until my next chapter!!! I need all the
suggestions I can get! @_@
~ J. R. Grant
It's nice to know that at least someone enjoys the story. My writing skills vary between
chapters, so some are much better than others. Anyway, the action starts here, so enjoy! ^^
-J. R. Grant
South City was famous for their carnival / dance that they held yearly. The
admission cost was pretty high, but the carnival was huge and going to it was a huge deal.
Paris had gotten her and Goten tickets and she was currently waiting for her boyfriend to
show up.
"Paris!" Goten called out, running up to her. He embraced her and swung her
around before he set her back down on the ground. Paris frowned.
"What took you so long Goten!? Does it always take you an extra half an hour to
get to a date?" Paris complained. Goten laughed weakly, a hand behind his head.
"My mom had to talk to me before I could go... she was worried I'd try and do
something that wasn't kosher..." Goten replied looking down at the ground in
embarassment. Paris twisted her mouth to the side in thought, but decided it wasn't worth
dwelling on.
"Let's go!" Paris said after throwing away any disturbing thoughts she had once
had. Goten nodded and grabbed her hand as they walked towards the carnival.
Their joy was short lived, however, because at that very moment the ferris wheel
stopped and floated into the air. Throughout the carnival people could hear the screams
of the terrified people on the ride. Goten looked towards the floating wheel and could feel
a very powerful presence that was keeping the ride afloat.
"Goten, what's happening?" Paris asked with a small note of fear in her voice.
Goten glared at the entity who was responsible for this.
"Stay here, Paris. I'll figure this out." Goten said and, before his girlfriend could
reply, took off into the sky towards the ferris wheel. As Goten drew closer, the figure of
the demon behind this came into view. Goten had no idea who it was, but was determined
to make sure he didn't ruin this carnival for him and his girlfriend.
Nayr watched with ammusement as the half-saiyan drew closer to him. This had
been well thought out by he and his sister. He smiled as Goten arrived.
"I don't know who you are, but I don't think the people here like you holding
them up like that." Goten told Nayr. Nayr laughed and held the ride up with one hand.
"You want it, saiyan? Take it." Nayr said and threw the ferris wheel at Goten.
Goten reached up to catch it.
"Ka...me...ha..." Nayr started. Goten's eyes went wide. This was all a trap!
Goten flew up to catch the ferris wheel. Nayr laughed manically and lifted his aim up at
Goten. "me...HAAAA!!!!!!!!!!" A huge, one hundred metre blast came out, demolishing
the ferris wheel, it's inhabitants and left Goten laying brutally injured on the ground. Nayr
landed in front of Goten, pulling what looked like a black seed from his pocket. He
flicked the seed into Nayr's stomach. Goten winced at first, then gasped. His body began
to transform. His eyes turned red and a long forked tail sprung out of Goten's back. His
skin turned whiter at which point Goten coughed and a beam of light coursed between his
body and Nayr's as Nayr pulled out all of Goten's ki. Goten fell to the ground lifeless.
* * *
Paris' eyes went wide as she saw the explosion take place. She jumped as she
heard a voice behind her.
"Beautiful, isn't it?" the voice asked. Paris turned around to see Samantha. The
demon priestess smiled, her earrings jingling as Samantha walked towards Paris.
"It's terrifying!" Paris screamed. Samantha closed her eyes and shook her head.
"So many people see events in such a static way. To some people it might have
been beautiful... the brilliant light display... the sound of the explosion. Some people see
past the destruction, Pair-ees, and soon so shall you."
"How did you know my name?"
"I can read your very thoughts, my dear." Samantha said as she pulled out a
seed similar to Nayr's and flicked it into Paris' belly button. Paris fell to her knees,
gasping. Her very figure began to change. Her hair turned black and shortened to a short,
messy hair style, her eyes turned as red as Samantha's and she became a little shorter. In
front of Samantha was a completely different person than had been there before.
"Hello, mother." it said innocently with little emotion in it's voice. Samantha
smiled and embraced her child.
"Your name is Kunsan, your mission is to seek out and destroy the Saiyan named
'Celipa'. Do you understand?"
"Yes, mother. I shall not fail."
A\N: The demons on Lucifer reproduce by planting seeds: in the dirt, in a tree, in a rock or
even in a human. It doesn't matter. The problem is that all seeds turn out female, which
is what happened with Paris and Goten. Nayr stopped the transformation prematurely by
stealing his ki, so Goten didn't fully transform into a demon female. Just thought I'd try
and clear that up. Anyhow, please read and review until my next chapter!!! I need all the
suggestions I can get! @_@
~ J. R. Grant
