I don't have much to comment on b/c I am typing this right after posting chapter 3. I'll have more for comments next chapter, assuming you review!!!

Daine woke up at dawn. She knew she was in Numair's arms, but she was a little bewildered as to where she was. Then she remembered last night and assumed Numair carried her upstairs. He must have been really quiet and gentle, she thought, because I'm generally a light sleeper. Numair felt her move and woke up, sort of.
"Good morning, love." She said when she saw he was awake.
"Magelet, must you always wake so early on vacation?"
"It's a habit. And it's good for you."
"For you, maybe, not for me." Daine made a face at him. "Well, now that I'm up, what's for breakfast?" He asked.
"How about good old porridge and toast?"
"Sounds good to me. Are you going to serve me breakfast in bed?"
"You sound so pathetic. Aren't you the one who's supposed to serve me breakfast in bed?" She raised her eyebrows at him.
"Since when do we follow tradition?" He said, matter-of-factly.
"You make a good point, Master Mage. But you realize that I'll have to leave to get it." He had pulled her closer, almost falling back asleep.
"Oh," he groaned. "Ok, I guess it's worth it. I'm really hungry." She laughed and got up. She threw on her breeches and ran downstairs. She returned a few minutes later and they ate together.

When they finished eating, Numair went to his study to research for his next experiment while Daine brought the tray downstairs and checked on the horses. They got so caught up in what they were doing that neither of them were surprised when they heard the distant bells of Pirates' Swoop call midday, and realized they were hungry again. Daine went to find Numair in his study. When he saw her in the doorframe, he smiled and waved her over. He took her in his lap and kissed her softly. "How about I treat you to lunch now with a picnic?" He asked.
Daine's face lit up. "That sounds wonderful! I'll go get the food ready." Numair was well known for not packing enough food to fill his stomach.
"I'll come watch you." They both laughed and went to the kitchen.

They put the food on Cloud and Spots, so they could walk hand-in-hand through the forest. When they found a clearing, they unloaded the food and sat down. They talked about life at the palace, and their friends. Dessert was chocolate cake. It was very messy and Daine ended up with it all over her face.
"Let me get that for you, magelet." Numair leaned over and started giving her tiny, little, kisses right around her lips. Daine felt shivers go down her spine. Suddenly, she couldn't take it any more. She put her hands on his head and guided his lips to hers. She kissed him with so much passion that it surprised both of them. Their hearts raced, their veins pounded with blood. Their hands ran over each other's bodies so that they could feel that wonderful shock that seemed to run through their bodies whenever they touched. Soon, their clothes were in a pile on the ground and they were showing each other, once more, how much they loved each other, and couldn't live without the other.

I know this one is kinda short, but it seemed like a good place to cut it off.