That night at the Scott's house...
"Haley?" Tim Cooper shook Haley James awake as she lay on the pullout bed
in the living room.
"Hmm..." she mumbled back. Tim got on top of Haley and tried to kiss her.
"What the...?"
"Shh... Haley just be quiet."
"Tim what are you doing?!' Haley screamed as she shoved Tim off of her. Tim
smacked her across the head and told her to shut up or he'd kill her. He
took off his jeans and worked off her pajamas. He inserted himself inside
of her and proceeded to rape her. When he was done, he got off the crying
Haley and put back on her pajamas and his jeans. He walked away back to his
bedroom.
"Peyton?" Haley cried over the phone quietly to her friend.
"Hales? What's wrong?" Peyton asked sleepily but worriedly.
"It's Tim. Peyton you need to get over here. He raped me Peyton."
I think I'm going to do the next chap from Haley's perspective instead of
third person what do you think?