Author's Note: This is my *first* Stargate fanfic... so please don't laugh at it... too much. It may be a little crappy at
first but I'm sure I'll pick up sooner or later... hopefully!
OO......... Please enjoy!
Please note that I've only seen seasons 1 thru 4... so that's how far everything is.
I'm sorry if I spell any words wrong... like Shapa'ai... or Shau'ri. I wasn't sure on either... so I took an educated guess! lol!
Hidden Enemies
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Colonel Jack O'neill shovled the oatmeal into his mouth as Sam stared at him.
He stopped shoveling and looked up at her, "What'cha staring at, Carter?"
"N-nothing! Sir, I was just noticing how much oatmeal you've been eating lately..." Jack raised an eyebrow as Sam
continued talking, "Sir... aren't you getting tired of oatmeal by now?"
Jack set his spoon down in the bowl, "Carter... after that whole..." Jack waved his had in a small circle, "That
whole... time loop thing... I don't think I've ever been able to look at Fruitloops, or any cereal the same way again."
Sam smiled and looked around, "Say, have you seen Teal'c or Daniel around this morning?"
"Teal'c's off doing his... kel...no...whatever it's called. Last time I saw Daniel, he was still sleeping...
face down at his computer."
"Who are you?" Daniel's voice seemed to bounce off the walls.
"Let me come through..." the voice answered him, "Tell your friends to let me come through... to let me come through
the Shapa'ai."
"The Stargate? Why do you want through the Stargate?" Daniel was just plain confused now.
"Let me through..." the voice trailed off when all of the sudden, there was a tap on his shoulder. He turned around,
only to see...
"Shau'ri," Daniel was dumbfounded... "But... Teal'c... the staff weapon... this makes no sense... why are you here?"
Shau'ri's soft voice spoke, "Let her through, my Daniel..." It was only after that, that the room turned into a
swirling dark vortex and he was forced into conciousness.
He awoke to the fact that he had fallen asleep on his keyboard and that the 's' key had been held down long enough to crash
the program he had been running. He just sighed and turned the computer off.
"That...dream," was all he could manage to get out. He was still drowsy and everything was a blur. He pushed on his
glasses and was about to go for a cup of coffee, but the voice that surrounded the base stopped him.
"Unschedualed off world activation."
Hearing that, Daniel rushed to the gate room. Jack spotted him, "It's about damn time you woke up, I was starting to
wonder if you fell into a coma."
Daniel was about to answer that when he was cut off, "We've never encountered this address before. The gate's been
activated... but nobody seems to be attempting to come through."
General Hammond spoke up, "Send a probe through."
Carter scanned the probe's readings, "Air is breathable... temperature is 76 degrees farenheight," she paused,
"What's..." A girl was slowly aproaching the probe. She jumped back when Daniel's voice came from the probe.
"This is Dr. Daniel Jackson of the SGC, we're not going to hurt you."
"You... are not... Goa'uld?" The girl seemed hopeful of this.
"No..." Daniel started, "Look, we're talking to you through this metal device. We'd like to come..."
"What?!" The girl was panicked, "But you'll be..." before she could finish, she doubled over in pain.
Hammond immediately responded, "SG-1, I want you to go in there."
"With respect Sir, wasn't she trying to warn us of something?"
"I'm aware of that Major, but from the sound of things, there might be Goa'ulds on that planet."
Sam was uneasy, "Yes Sir."
The planet was just as the probe had indicated, habitable.
"Why have you come?" A worried voice came from behind them, "I tried to tell you not to." It was the girl again...
this time she looked very weak.
"We're peaceful explorers," Daniel began, "We're here to help."
"You can't help..." the girl cut in, "The Goa'ulds have come and gone," she began to sob, "Everyone in the village is
dead. I - I played dead so they... so they wouldn't get me too."
"Damn it," Jack snarled, "The snake heads are gone?!" The girl quickly nodded her head, and looked down at the
ground.
"Well... you should come with us back back to the base," Sam looked at the girl, "You can't stay here alone... you
don't look like you're quite an adult yet."
The girl nodded, "I'm only fourteen. If... if I go to this 'base' of yours, will I be a prisinor?"
"Of course not!" Sam was quick to answer, "But you won't be able to leave the base."
"So I will be a prisinor..."
Sam sighed in defeat, she was right, "Yes... you will... but I assure you, you won't be treated like one. I promise nobody
will hurt you."
"I will go under one condition." She seemed to be bracing herself for something.
"What's that?"
"You must put some kind of servailence in my quarters becau-" she seemed to be fighting something, "au... au... au...
ause... guh..." fell to the ground with a yelp of pain.
"Alright... get her through the gate," Jack ordered as Sam and Daniel grabbed each of her arms to hoist her up from the
ground.
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AN: Well... that's the end of chapter 1! O_O I hope you liked it. Sorry it was so short... the next chapter will be longer.
Please read and review!
~Johnna~
first but I'm sure I'll pick up sooner or later... hopefully!
OO......... Please enjoy!
Please note that I've only seen seasons 1 thru 4... so that's how far everything is.
I'm sorry if I spell any words wrong... like Shapa'ai... or Shau'ri. I wasn't sure on either... so I took an educated guess! lol!
Hidden Enemies
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Colonel Jack O'neill shovled the oatmeal into his mouth as Sam stared at him.
He stopped shoveling and looked up at her, "What'cha staring at, Carter?"
"N-nothing! Sir, I was just noticing how much oatmeal you've been eating lately..." Jack raised an eyebrow as Sam
continued talking, "Sir... aren't you getting tired of oatmeal by now?"
Jack set his spoon down in the bowl, "Carter... after that whole..." Jack waved his had in a small circle, "That
whole... time loop thing... I don't think I've ever been able to look at Fruitloops, or any cereal the same way again."
Sam smiled and looked around, "Say, have you seen Teal'c or Daniel around this morning?"
"Teal'c's off doing his... kel...no...whatever it's called. Last time I saw Daniel, he was still sleeping...
face down at his computer."
"Who are you?" Daniel's voice seemed to bounce off the walls.
"Let me come through..." the voice answered him, "Tell your friends to let me come through... to let me come through
the Shapa'ai."
"The Stargate? Why do you want through the Stargate?" Daniel was just plain confused now.
"Let me through..." the voice trailed off when all of the sudden, there was a tap on his shoulder. He turned around,
only to see...
"Shau'ri," Daniel was dumbfounded... "But... Teal'c... the staff weapon... this makes no sense... why are you here?"
Shau'ri's soft voice spoke, "Let her through, my Daniel..." It was only after that, that the room turned into a
swirling dark vortex and he was forced into conciousness.
He awoke to the fact that he had fallen asleep on his keyboard and that the 's' key had been held down long enough to crash
the program he had been running. He just sighed and turned the computer off.
"That...dream," was all he could manage to get out. He was still drowsy and everything was a blur. He pushed on his
glasses and was about to go for a cup of coffee, but the voice that surrounded the base stopped him.
"Unschedualed off world activation."
Hearing that, Daniel rushed to the gate room. Jack spotted him, "It's about damn time you woke up, I was starting to
wonder if you fell into a coma."
Daniel was about to answer that when he was cut off, "We've never encountered this address before. The gate's been
activated... but nobody seems to be attempting to come through."
General Hammond spoke up, "Send a probe through."
Carter scanned the probe's readings, "Air is breathable... temperature is 76 degrees farenheight," she paused,
"What's..." A girl was slowly aproaching the probe. She jumped back when Daniel's voice came from the probe.
"This is Dr. Daniel Jackson of the SGC, we're not going to hurt you."
"You... are not... Goa'uld?" The girl seemed hopeful of this.
"No..." Daniel started, "Look, we're talking to you through this metal device. We'd like to come..."
"What?!" The girl was panicked, "But you'll be..." before she could finish, she doubled over in pain.
Hammond immediately responded, "SG-1, I want you to go in there."
"With respect Sir, wasn't she trying to warn us of something?"
"I'm aware of that Major, but from the sound of things, there might be Goa'ulds on that planet."
Sam was uneasy, "Yes Sir."
The planet was just as the probe had indicated, habitable.
"Why have you come?" A worried voice came from behind them, "I tried to tell you not to." It was the girl again...
this time she looked very weak.
"We're peaceful explorers," Daniel began, "We're here to help."
"You can't help..." the girl cut in, "The Goa'ulds have come and gone," she began to sob, "Everyone in the village is
dead. I - I played dead so they... so they wouldn't get me too."
"Damn it," Jack snarled, "The snake heads are gone?!" The girl quickly nodded her head, and looked down at the
ground.
"Well... you should come with us back back to the base," Sam looked at the girl, "You can't stay here alone... you
don't look like you're quite an adult yet."
The girl nodded, "I'm only fourteen. If... if I go to this 'base' of yours, will I be a prisinor?"
"Of course not!" Sam was quick to answer, "But you won't be able to leave the base."
"So I will be a prisinor..."
Sam sighed in defeat, she was right, "Yes... you will... but I assure you, you won't be treated like one. I promise nobody
will hurt you."
"I will go under one condition." She seemed to be bracing herself for something.
"What's that?"
"You must put some kind of servailence in my quarters becau-" she seemed to be fighting something, "au... au... au...
ause... guh..." fell to the ground with a yelp of pain.
"Alright... get her through the gate," Jack ordered as Sam and Daniel grabbed each of her arms to hoist her up from the
ground.
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AN: Well... that's the end of chapter 1! O_O I hope you liked it. Sorry it was so short... the next chapter will be longer.
Please read and review!
~Johnna~
