AN: *Grins* I am so glad you all like this. I love every review. And I am going to respond to them after a disclaimer.

The Song, Fire and Wonder is by Marc Anthony, the author of the Last Rune Series, which I love, it's my favorite series. Everybody's fool is by evanescence. Changed 'She' to 'He' because Mavis sings it.
A lot of the other things are also by evanescence. I used a lot of songs, so if you know them, you can just skip them if you want.
I don't own POtC. I do own Mavis and her crew and the plot.

Got lotr- don't worry. She didn't kill him-yet, maybe she won't. I have a plot and that would ruin it if I told you, sorry.

:)- Mavis hates Jack because Jack killed her mother, destroyed her town, almost killed her, abandoned her, and Mavis was kidnapped by Barbossa and was his prisoner for 13 years. Because of Jack. And their childhood arguments.

PirateWHSG- all will be reveled. And the town, Solace, no one is aloud to commit any crime of any kind. It the only rule aside from no one is aloud to arrest a person for a crime, or get revenge for a wrong.

Lolater-Thank you very much. Or muchas gracious mi nueve amiga. I think. Hmm, half year of Spanish-anyway. Don't worry, all will be shown.

Eby-Thank you .

I don't know how long this will be..... I know for a fact there will be a two chapters after this, maybe three and a new timeline.

And now to chapter 5

Chapter 5

Jack looked down in astonishment at the old music box in his hands. And then up to the door where his twin sister had left not a minute before.

"Jack-"Elizabeth said, "I want to know the truth."

"A long time ago, I made a horrible mistake, and everyone around me had to pay." Jack replied, "I have to go talk to her." He added, though he knew that Mavis would have already made herself very scarce. But that hardly mattered.

"How? She's already gone and left." Will asked.

"I know where she is going. And I have to go there too. It has been a long time." Jack replied.

"Go where?" Will asked, worried that Jack would say death. "Where is she going, and where are you following?"

"It has been a very good thing that I got to see you two lovebirds again. I really missed ye. I'd love to stay awhile more with you, but I have to be leaving now." Jack replied steadily getting up, he was still holding the music box so tightly his knuckles where white.

"Jack, to where are you going?" Will persisted.

"Home. I'm finally going home." Jack replied, and walked out the door to his ship.

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Mavis walked out of the tavern in a hurry. She looked completely calm and composed. Rebecca knew better.

"Commodore." She said to get Mavis's attention. "What happened?"

"What happened? I'll tell you what happened! He looked sorry, and guilty. And he had his friends with him. He saved their lives you know that? Why, I don't want to believe he redeemed himself. I don't! He's a liar, always was and always has been. Rebecca I-"Mavis stopped ranting, "I don't know what to do."

"I know, Mavis, I know. But he seems to have redeemed himself. My brother, most certainly did not. No one that we have hunted down to make them pay even felt a twinge of regret. That was what made it easy." Rebecca said.

"I need to go home. I will find out if he truly means his words." Mavis bowed her head and walked to her ship. "I will only go with a few, the rest of my fleet will stay hear until I return, Understand?"

"Aye captain." Rebecca said. She quickly left and spread the word. Five minutes later, Mavis went on the Feminist Tide with Rebecca and a few others in tow. Mavis grinned silently to herself. She loved her crew, they always got around fast and knew from experience what was going to happen.

Mavis looked out over the ocean and set sail.

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A few weeks later, while the rain was pouring steadily, Jack docked far off shore of his home. Or what was left of it. The once large town was now only ashes and cinders. There were the skeletal remains of homes all over the place. Jack closed his eyes, took a deep breath and started off toward where his home once was. He saw a crouching figure kneeling over the bones of a long dead person. He knew it was Mary, or what was left of her. He walked up right to his twin sister who was crying freely and laid a hand on her shoulder.

"Mavis...." Jack said, and heard her sing.

"Perfect by nature, Icons of self-indulgence Just what we all need, More lies about a world that

Never was and never will be Have you no shame don't you see me You know you've got everybody fooled.

Look here he comes now Bow down and stare in wonder Oh how we love you, No flaws when your pretending But now I know he

Never was and never will be You don't know how you betrayed me And somehow you've got everybody fooled

Without the mask where will you hide? Can't find yourself, lost in the lie.

I know the truth now I know who you are, And I don't love you anymore

It never was and never will be, Your not real and you can't save me Somehow now your everybody's fool"

"Mavis, I'm sorry. So sorry. Mary named you right, though."

"Damn you Jack." She whispered slowly. Mavis slowly got up and looked him straight in his eye, "damn you to hell. You took away my hate, and that was all I had left." Mavis looked back down to their mother's corpse. Jack realized that he was also crying. Carnage was all around them, but the hate that stood between them for so long fell apart. Jack told himself a long tie ago that he was the strong one because he was older. He didn't feel strong now. The rain fell from the purple sky, that still held the remnants of candy clouds so long ago.

The two knelt down at their mothers body, tears silently streaming down their faces. Mavis put down a rose over Mary's skeletal chest.

"Rest in Peace." She choked.

"Funny how we ended up here." Jack said slowly.

"No it's not." She looked at him and began to sing.

"We live out lives in a circle, and wander where we can but after fire and wonder, We end where we began

I have journeyed northward And laughter there I kept, Until I journeyed southward, And it was there I wept

And for a time I lingered in the eastern lands of light, Until I journeyed Westward, Alone in shadowed night

I was born in springtime, In summer I grew strong But Autumn dimmed my eyes To sleep the winter long.

We live our lives in a circle And wander where we can but after fire and wonder, We end where we began"

She stopped, "so is this where it ends? After Monsters come and scream my name, after I bleed inside and am left an empty shell. After I've damned myself? Am I too lost to be saved. How can it end here after I've screamed and died and prayed, and bled. It ends. I've been living on hate, Jack. And you've taken it away. Now I have nothing, now I am nothing."

"I'm sorry. No one told me she's not breathing. And I've been living a lie, so I could hide. But my hiding is gone. I guess it is over. Both of us dying here as the raindrops tell a story. A story of two twins that died after so many years living a lie."

"No." Mavis said silently, "this is where it will end. But this is not the end." Jack looked at her and nodded. "I still can't forgive you. Maybe I never will, but one day, I might." Jack nodded again. Then they both rose and left, to return another day.

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AN: This is not over. I still have more to say.

Again, review. Many thanks.