Chapter 11: Discounts and Pains
Hey everyone sorry for not updating for nearly two weeks. I have been real busy
with my schoolwork and putting in long hours at the university. You can imagine
how tired I am at this point. So here is your update. This chapter may not be
long, but Enjoy anyway. ^_^.
Thomas, that has got to hurt!
After seeing Van show up with his tuxedo, Thomas still doesn't get it.
"Which tie would look best with this suit?" Fiona asks herself while looking
over the tie rack.
"Bow tie or Tie- tie?" Van asks confused.
"Bow tie." Fiona says smiling, Van gets a picture of what he would look like in
a bow tie.
"My mom made me wear one when I was little. I didn't like it too much." Van says
shaking his head of the image.
"But now you're grown up. Let's find you one that doesn't bring back traumatic
experiences." Fiona says making van smile.
"That would be best." Van says overlooking the rack with Fiona.
The outer mall*
"I don't know why I let you talk me into this." Moonbay complains now entering
the food court of the upstairs mall.
"Hey if I have to brush my hair, then you have to wear a dress." Irvine says
with a grin on his face.
"I'm going to look so dorky." Moonbay whines.
"No you won't. You'll be with me and if anyone says anything in reference to
you, then I'll punch them in the face for you." Irvine says putting his arm
around Moonbay. She smiles.
"Thanks Irvine. So what expensive store are we going to look in and not buy
anything?" Moonbay jokes as they take a seat at the all American burger
restaurant. (We have that here in our mall).
"Oh not today Moon, today we are lucky." Irvine says pulling out his plastic.
"Oh a credit card. Let me guess you got this off some guy at school." Moonbay
says grinning.
"No it belongs to me. See I told my mom I needed money for this event at school
and she gave me this." Irvine says showing Moonbay the discover card.
"I applied for one of those and I discovered I couldn't get one. Moonbay says
making Irvine laugh. (Got the joke with the discover card?)
"Well I discovered I couldn't, but under my mom's credit I can." Irvine says
leaning over the table. "So what do you say we go clean out some stores?"
Moonbay smiles. "Let's do it, but after we eat something."
Downstairs in the shop*
Thomas is paying for his suit now.
"For this price, do I get a matching corsage too?" Thomas asks looking at his
receipt.
"No just the suit." Mr. Lynette says laughing at the comment Thomas made.
Back of the store*
"Ok are we done here?" Fiona asks turning to Van.
"Yeah we are. I hate to see what this is going to cost." Van says taking out his
wallet.
"Don't worry, you'll get a discount under me." Fiona says smiling at Van, who
pulls out his Eurofa Master Card.
"How much is the discount?" Van asks looking up at Fiona.
"Well how much is the suit?" Fiona asks.
"As much as your dress." Van says.
"Well then you'll only be paying $250.00" Fiona says with a smile that comforts
van. (Thanks to all my faithful reviewers who gave me that answer. ::Hugs:::
Thanks so much guys.)
"Oh really? Wow I can pay that." Van says putting his wallet away. Fiona and Van
make their way to the counter to get everything rung up. Mr. Lynette scans
Fiona's dress while pressing a few buttons.
"Ok princess that'll be 250.00, but since you are 3/4 owner of the store, then you
can give me 145." Mr. Lynette says as Fiona hands him 150.00. He gives the
change back.
"Oh daddy, Van wants the discount." Fiona speaks up.
"He's with you?" Mr. Lynette asks looking at Van, who smiles nervously.
"Ok." Mr. Lynette says scanning Van's suit along with the tie. "That'll be
250.00."
Van gives him the credit card and he swipes it. A few minutes passes and the
scanner beeps. He hands the card back to Van.
"Now if anything happens to this suit or your dress Fiona, you can always bring
it back here for free repairs. What money you got off the suit or dress will pay
for that." Mr. Lynette says explaining the insurance policy. Well, his.
Thomas, who has been watching from the doorway, runs back in and to the counter.
"Um excuse me Mr. Lynette, would it be ok if I got a discount too? I'm with
Fiona." Thomas asks excitedly.
"Sorry Thomas, you already paid for the suit. Now if something were to go wrong
with it before you wear it, then I can see what I can do." Mr. Lynette explains
as Thomas's smile drops.
"Better luck next time Thomas." Van says smiling as Thomas turns his sad smile
into a glare of death.
"See you later Daddy and I might be home a little late tonight." Fiona says
turning away from the counter.
"Not too late princess." Mr. Lynette smiles. Fiona and Van leaves the store and
into the outer mall.
"So where to now?" Van asks turning to Fiona.
"Do you have matching shoes for that suit at home?" Fiona asks turning to Van.
"Nope." Van states.
"Well I know of a nice shoe shop up near the food court." Fiona says noticing
the expression on Van's face.
"It's Inexpensive." Fiona says now seeing Van's smile.
The two continue down the hall with Thomas watching them from a distance.
"Even if I have to go against everything I believe in, before harvest night is
over, I will have my dance with Fiona, Alisi Lynette." Thomas says growling
while slowing walking behind them to the next shop.
Raven and Reese* (you know I have to add these nut jobs lol)
Reese and Raven are at his house, planning the damage they are going to do.
"So when I crawl in the vent, I'm going to pull this timer out of the bomb and
BAM, it's going to stink." Raven says showing Reese the stink bomb.
"It's awful tiny to make a big place like that smell." Reese says taking is from
Raven.
"The tinier it is, the worst it gets." Raven says with his trademark grin.
Raven's little brother Robby comes upstairs and to see his room, who's only 6.
"What do you want brat?" Raven asks turning to his little brother.
"You are pwanning something mean." Robby says.
"So what if I am?" Raven asks harshly.
"Raven he's only a kid." Reese says turning to Robby. "We're going to blow up a
school." Reese grins making Robby move back a bit.
Robby's eyes begin tear up and he runs out yelling "Mom"
"I hate little kids." Raven says turning back to the blue prints. "So after I
set off the bomb, you set off the fire alarm."
Reese nods in agreement.
At the mall*
Irvine and Moonbay are in the dress shop of Irvine's choice.
"Go on and pick one." Irvine says slightly pushing Moonbay over to the rack.
"Alright I'm going." Moonbay says making her way over to the rack. When she gets
over to the rack, she spots some one familiar.
"Wait, can it be?" Moonbay says looking the girl over. "Diana?"
The black haired girl turns around to see Moonbay.
"Moonbay?" Diana practically yells.
"Yes it's me." Moonbay says facing the girl.
"I didn't expect to see you in here. How's it going?" Diana asks putting her
dress across her arm.
"Oh not much. Irvine is being mean and making me wear a dress." Moonbay jokes.
"Who are you going to the dance with?"
Oh Karl asked me to go with him." Diana says.
"Where is he?" Moonbay asks looking around.
"Oh he went to Donut shop to get some donuts." Diana says rolling her eyes.
"Typical."
"Well I hope you two have a nice time." Moonbay says politely.
"Same goes to you. I'm going to find kitty and her boyfriend so we can go."
Diana says parting with Moonbay, who goes to get Irvine outside the store.
Van and Fiona*
Van and Fiona are sitting on a bench resting from their shopping trip.
"Ok so we got the outfits, shoes and Corsages." Fiona says going over the list.
"Did we miss anything?"
"I don't think we did. Oh book a limousine for that night." Van says sitting up.
"Since my dad works for the company then I can simply ask him. He'll do anything
for his son."
Fiona smiles at Van's goofy expression. "I'm sure he will."
"Why don't we use some of the money we saved from your dad's shop and get
something to eat. On me." Van says holding out his arm.
"Sure ok." Fiona says putting her arm on Van's so they link and get up from the
bench. Van grabs the bags and escorts Fiona upstairs to the food court for
dinner. Thomas, who has been hiding behind the bench they were at, comes into
plain view.
"You forgot one thing on your list Fligheit, one stolen date and a very
miserable night for you." Thomas says to himself while smiling very devilish.
OK people enough for now. That's all I got for now. Like I said before flamers
are ignored and not paid attention to and if you leave a flame, expect it and
you to be sent to the discard bin, but for everyone else I hoped you like it.
I'm sorry once again for not updating in a while. School has been my life for
that time, but spring break is in another week so I should have more time to
update during that time. Song fic coming soon.
For those of you who didn't get the email, Messenger of light can't touch me,
not now anyway. I'm too legit. ::Dances to the M.C. Hammer song: Can't touch
this:: She can't touch this merchandise.
Review and Thanks.
Hey everyone sorry for not updating for nearly two weeks. I have been real busy
with my schoolwork and putting in long hours at the university. You can imagine
how tired I am at this point. So here is your update. This chapter may not be
long, but Enjoy anyway. ^_^.
Thomas, that has got to hurt!
After seeing Van show up with his tuxedo, Thomas still doesn't get it.
"Which tie would look best with this suit?" Fiona asks herself while looking
over the tie rack.
"Bow tie or Tie- tie?" Van asks confused.
"Bow tie." Fiona says smiling, Van gets a picture of what he would look like in
a bow tie.
"My mom made me wear one when I was little. I didn't like it too much." Van says
shaking his head of the image.
"But now you're grown up. Let's find you one that doesn't bring back traumatic
experiences." Fiona says making van smile.
"That would be best." Van says overlooking the rack with Fiona.
The outer mall*
"I don't know why I let you talk me into this." Moonbay complains now entering
the food court of the upstairs mall.
"Hey if I have to brush my hair, then you have to wear a dress." Irvine says
with a grin on his face.
"I'm going to look so dorky." Moonbay whines.
"No you won't. You'll be with me and if anyone says anything in reference to
you, then I'll punch them in the face for you." Irvine says putting his arm
around Moonbay. She smiles.
"Thanks Irvine. So what expensive store are we going to look in and not buy
anything?" Moonbay jokes as they take a seat at the all American burger
restaurant. (We have that here in our mall).
"Oh not today Moon, today we are lucky." Irvine says pulling out his plastic.
"Oh a credit card. Let me guess you got this off some guy at school." Moonbay
says grinning.
"No it belongs to me. See I told my mom I needed money for this event at school
and she gave me this." Irvine says showing Moonbay the discover card.
"I applied for one of those and I discovered I couldn't get one. Moonbay says
making Irvine laugh. (Got the joke with the discover card?)
"Well I discovered I couldn't, but under my mom's credit I can." Irvine says
leaning over the table. "So what do you say we go clean out some stores?"
Moonbay smiles. "Let's do it, but after we eat something."
Downstairs in the shop*
Thomas is paying for his suit now.
"For this price, do I get a matching corsage too?" Thomas asks looking at his
receipt.
"No just the suit." Mr. Lynette says laughing at the comment Thomas made.
Back of the store*
"Ok are we done here?" Fiona asks turning to Van.
"Yeah we are. I hate to see what this is going to cost." Van says taking out his
wallet.
"Don't worry, you'll get a discount under me." Fiona says smiling at Van, who
pulls out his Eurofa Master Card.
"How much is the discount?" Van asks looking up at Fiona.
"Well how much is the suit?" Fiona asks.
"As much as your dress." Van says.
"Well then you'll only be paying $250.00" Fiona says with a smile that comforts
van. (Thanks to all my faithful reviewers who gave me that answer. ::Hugs:::
Thanks so much guys.)
"Oh really? Wow I can pay that." Van says putting his wallet away. Fiona and Van
make their way to the counter to get everything rung up. Mr. Lynette scans
Fiona's dress while pressing a few buttons.
"Ok princess that'll be 250.00, but since you are 3/4 owner of the store, then you
can give me 145." Mr. Lynette says as Fiona hands him 150.00. He gives the
change back.
"Oh daddy, Van wants the discount." Fiona speaks up.
"He's with you?" Mr. Lynette asks looking at Van, who smiles nervously.
"Ok." Mr. Lynette says scanning Van's suit along with the tie. "That'll be
250.00."
Van gives him the credit card and he swipes it. A few minutes passes and the
scanner beeps. He hands the card back to Van.
"Now if anything happens to this suit or your dress Fiona, you can always bring
it back here for free repairs. What money you got off the suit or dress will pay
for that." Mr. Lynette says explaining the insurance policy. Well, his.
Thomas, who has been watching from the doorway, runs back in and to the counter.
"Um excuse me Mr. Lynette, would it be ok if I got a discount too? I'm with
Fiona." Thomas asks excitedly.
"Sorry Thomas, you already paid for the suit. Now if something were to go wrong
with it before you wear it, then I can see what I can do." Mr. Lynette explains
as Thomas's smile drops.
"Better luck next time Thomas." Van says smiling as Thomas turns his sad smile
into a glare of death.
"See you later Daddy and I might be home a little late tonight." Fiona says
turning away from the counter.
"Not too late princess." Mr. Lynette smiles. Fiona and Van leaves the store and
into the outer mall.
"So where to now?" Van asks turning to Fiona.
"Do you have matching shoes for that suit at home?" Fiona asks turning to Van.
"Nope." Van states.
"Well I know of a nice shoe shop up near the food court." Fiona says noticing
the expression on Van's face.
"It's Inexpensive." Fiona says now seeing Van's smile.
The two continue down the hall with Thomas watching them from a distance.
"Even if I have to go against everything I believe in, before harvest night is
over, I will have my dance with Fiona, Alisi Lynette." Thomas says growling
while slowing walking behind them to the next shop.
Raven and Reese* (you know I have to add these nut jobs lol)
Reese and Raven are at his house, planning the damage they are going to do.
"So when I crawl in the vent, I'm going to pull this timer out of the bomb and
BAM, it's going to stink." Raven says showing Reese the stink bomb.
"It's awful tiny to make a big place like that smell." Reese says taking is from
Raven.
"The tinier it is, the worst it gets." Raven says with his trademark grin.
Raven's little brother Robby comes upstairs and to see his room, who's only 6.
"What do you want brat?" Raven asks turning to his little brother.
"You are pwanning something mean." Robby says.
"So what if I am?" Raven asks harshly.
"Raven he's only a kid." Reese says turning to Robby. "We're going to blow up a
school." Reese grins making Robby move back a bit.
Robby's eyes begin tear up and he runs out yelling "Mom"
"I hate little kids." Raven says turning back to the blue prints. "So after I
set off the bomb, you set off the fire alarm."
Reese nods in agreement.
At the mall*
Irvine and Moonbay are in the dress shop of Irvine's choice.
"Go on and pick one." Irvine says slightly pushing Moonbay over to the rack.
"Alright I'm going." Moonbay says making her way over to the rack. When she gets
over to the rack, she spots some one familiar.
"Wait, can it be?" Moonbay says looking the girl over. "Diana?"
The black haired girl turns around to see Moonbay.
"Moonbay?" Diana practically yells.
"Yes it's me." Moonbay says facing the girl.
"I didn't expect to see you in here. How's it going?" Diana asks putting her
dress across her arm.
"Oh not much. Irvine is being mean and making me wear a dress." Moonbay jokes.
"Who are you going to the dance with?"
Oh Karl asked me to go with him." Diana says.
"Where is he?" Moonbay asks looking around.
"Oh he went to Donut shop to get some donuts." Diana says rolling her eyes.
"Typical."
"Well I hope you two have a nice time." Moonbay says politely.
"Same goes to you. I'm going to find kitty and her boyfriend so we can go."
Diana says parting with Moonbay, who goes to get Irvine outside the store.
Van and Fiona*
Van and Fiona are sitting on a bench resting from their shopping trip.
"Ok so we got the outfits, shoes and Corsages." Fiona says going over the list.
"Did we miss anything?"
"I don't think we did. Oh book a limousine for that night." Van says sitting up.
"Since my dad works for the company then I can simply ask him. He'll do anything
for his son."
Fiona smiles at Van's goofy expression. "I'm sure he will."
"Why don't we use some of the money we saved from your dad's shop and get
something to eat. On me." Van says holding out his arm.
"Sure ok." Fiona says putting her arm on Van's so they link and get up from the
bench. Van grabs the bags and escorts Fiona upstairs to the food court for
dinner. Thomas, who has been hiding behind the bench they were at, comes into
plain view.
"You forgot one thing on your list Fligheit, one stolen date and a very
miserable night for you." Thomas says to himself while smiling very devilish.
OK people enough for now. That's all I got for now. Like I said before flamers
are ignored and not paid attention to and if you leave a flame, expect it and
you to be sent to the discard bin, but for everyone else I hoped you like it.
I'm sorry once again for not updating in a while. School has been my life for
that time, but spring break is in another week so I should have more time to
update during that time. Song fic coming soon.
For those of you who didn't get the email, Messenger of light can't touch me,
not now anyway. I'm too legit. ::Dances to the M.C. Hammer song: Can't touch
this:: She can't touch this merchandise.
Review and Thanks.
