Well, I just can't stay with one or two things for very long. I've have a few ideas for fics, and then I came across one called "And We Were Angels" by amcm74, and I started to develop my own ideas for an angel/demon fic. I'd read some with angels and demons before, but none so great as "And We Were Angels". You all should definitely check that fic out, it's amazing! I can't stop reading it! :)…But anyway, read mine too! It's nothing like that one. But you can all be the judge of that…
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The fabled war in Heaven—that man of the future would ponder and debate over for centuries—raged on in the beautiful celestial plains. The Faithful verses The Renegades. The tension was phenomenal and had been building for millenniums, from the very first day when the Almighty created His angels; The First Angel, leader of all other angels, God's closest companion, bearing wings of silver to emphasize power; The Council Angels, a group of one hundred loyal angels seeming to have no thoughts other than serving Him; The Guardian Angels, bearing golden feathered wings to mark their status, extremely humble and highly respected; a group of angels separated into ranks, whose soul purpose was to serve the Father and carry out his special assignments as He saw fit; and The Experiments, twenty angels given freewill and a choice as to whether they wanted to serve God or Lunaus, the first angel to leave Heaven, also called Lucifer, among other names.
The great battle began not long after Lunaus parted ways with Heaven and created his own kingdom of sin. God decided to offer The Experiments, infused with freewill—thus concealing them from God's warm light—a chance to prove their loyalty. They only had to answer one question: Do you love your Maker? All but two of the twenty angels fled to Lunaus upon finding they'd been part of an experiment and had never felt God's love. The remaining angels—one male, one female—were immediately praised by the Almighty and received by Him, showering them with the deprived light.
Centuries passed since the Great Abandonment and souls began to crowd around the Gates of Heaven. God wasn't entirely sure what to do with these wandering spirits. There was no specific place for them in Heaven, and so He created The Keeper of the Souls, a celestial being, though not an angel, who carried the keys to Human Eternity, a separate section of Heaven reserved for believers. The Keeper, with God's guidelines, decided which souls entered Heaven and which were left at the Gates. To gain access to The Great Beyond a soul would have had to live a virtually sinfree life and acknowledge the existence of God. The latter was never what kept a soul from entering Heaven. And lost souls could not enter, even if they'd never committed a single sin, for they weren't even aware they were dead and therefore couldn't speak with The Keeper without being confused and wander away.
Lunaus, upon seeing the billions of denied souls hovering around Heaven's Gates, decided to take them with him, offering them all that they desired, whether it be sinful or not. With his powers he created what is known as Hell, and a legion of followers; his demons. He created his First Demon and two to assist this fledgling; a council and what he called a lackey. Other servant demons were made, though the first three possessed the most power and could rule over the servants.
Finally Lunaus had an army of demons and indebted human souls, as well as the eighteen Fallen Angels still retaining their celestial abilities and now blackened wings, to march against God and His Angels. He went up to the Gates and demanded to be let in. The Keeper of the Souls warned him that he was already out of the Almighty's favor and should not tread so close to the edge. Lunaus ignored his words and charged the Gates with his followers. The Fallen Angels used their powers to disable other angels and soon they began to fight back with fury. Never had their Paradise been compromised before. They loathed Lunaus and fought with all their power. In the end Lunaus achieved a thousand new Fallen Angels and the remaining male of The Experiments, his treasured prize. God ended the war with what the Earth called The Great Flood, illustrating His ultimate power and pushing back all the demons and Fallen Angels, though it cost Him nearly all of His mortals. The souls of the good dead bombarded the Gates, overwhelming God and The Keeper. As an apology He accepted them as a new breed of angels and promised to never allow the innocent to suffer foolishly for immortal disputes.
Lunaus swore he would avenge God and retreated back to Hell, though quite pleased with his gains.
Afterward only one of The Experiments remained, and she was presented with the power to grant miracles as issued by God, an honor only He possessed in the past. The First Angel, fifty Guardian Angels, half of the rank angels, and The Keeper of the Souls remained as well.
In Hell the new Fallen Angels were given red wings to contrast with the black wings of the First Fallen Angels, thus giving the Firsts more power and rein over the Seconds. The last male of The Experiments was endowed with black wings as well, though bearing one white feather to signify that he had remained in Heaven much longer than the rest, and he was named The Keeper of the Damned Souls; storybooks would call him Death or The Grim Reaper. He preferred Fallen Angel #17.
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---Chapter 1! Hey all! That was the very first chapter of my newest fic, and I hope you're intrigued enough to continue reading as I continue posting. I've read other fics that deal with the angel/demons Heaven/Hell issues involving Bulma and Vegeta, and everyone else, but I decided to give it a shot myself and see where I can get with it. I love the idea and angels drive me nuts (in a good way). I love their wings. I want wings! *pouts* Anyway, please tell me if you think I should continue.
REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Reviews=More Chapters)
Next time: The actual beginning of the story…
Note: Obviously you only know for sure who one of the DBZ characters is, and that's 17, The Keeper of the Damned Souls. And if you haven't already figured it out, 18 is the last of The Experiments…The rest I'll give you as the story progresses.
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The fabled war in Heaven—that man of the future would ponder and debate over for centuries—raged on in the beautiful celestial plains. The Faithful verses The Renegades. The tension was phenomenal and had been building for millenniums, from the very first day when the Almighty created His angels; The First Angel, leader of all other angels, God's closest companion, bearing wings of silver to emphasize power; The Council Angels, a group of one hundred loyal angels seeming to have no thoughts other than serving Him; The Guardian Angels, bearing golden feathered wings to mark their status, extremely humble and highly respected; a group of angels separated into ranks, whose soul purpose was to serve the Father and carry out his special assignments as He saw fit; and The Experiments, twenty angels given freewill and a choice as to whether they wanted to serve God or Lunaus, the first angel to leave Heaven, also called Lucifer, among other names.
The great battle began not long after Lunaus parted ways with Heaven and created his own kingdom of sin. God decided to offer The Experiments, infused with freewill—thus concealing them from God's warm light—a chance to prove their loyalty. They only had to answer one question: Do you love your Maker? All but two of the twenty angels fled to Lunaus upon finding they'd been part of an experiment and had never felt God's love. The remaining angels—one male, one female—were immediately praised by the Almighty and received by Him, showering them with the deprived light.
Centuries passed since the Great Abandonment and souls began to crowd around the Gates of Heaven. God wasn't entirely sure what to do with these wandering spirits. There was no specific place for them in Heaven, and so He created The Keeper of the Souls, a celestial being, though not an angel, who carried the keys to Human Eternity, a separate section of Heaven reserved for believers. The Keeper, with God's guidelines, decided which souls entered Heaven and which were left at the Gates. To gain access to The Great Beyond a soul would have had to live a virtually sinfree life and acknowledge the existence of God. The latter was never what kept a soul from entering Heaven. And lost souls could not enter, even if they'd never committed a single sin, for they weren't even aware they were dead and therefore couldn't speak with The Keeper without being confused and wander away.
Lunaus, upon seeing the billions of denied souls hovering around Heaven's Gates, decided to take them with him, offering them all that they desired, whether it be sinful or not. With his powers he created what is known as Hell, and a legion of followers; his demons. He created his First Demon and two to assist this fledgling; a council and what he called a lackey. Other servant demons were made, though the first three possessed the most power and could rule over the servants.
Finally Lunaus had an army of demons and indebted human souls, as well as the eighteen Fallen Angels still retaining their celestial abilities and now blackened wings, to march against God and His Angels. He went up to the Gates and demanded to be let in. The Keeper of the Souls warned him that he was already out of the Almighty's favor and should not tread so close to the edge. Lunaus ignored his words and charged the Gates with his followers. The Fallen Angels used their powers to disable other angels and soon they began to fight back with fury. Never had their Paradise been compromised before. They loathed Lunaus and fought with all their power. In the end Lunaus achieved a thousand new Fallen Angels and the remaining male of The Experiments, his treasured prize. God ended the war with what the Earth called The Great Flood, illustrating His ultimate power and pushing back all the demons and Fallen Angels, though it cost Him nearly all of His mortals. The souls of the good dead bombarded the Gates, overwhelming God and The Keeper. As an apology He accepted them as a new breed of angels and promised to never allow the innocent to suffer foolishly for immortal disputes.
Lunaus swore he would avenge God and retreated back to Hell, though quite pleased with his gains.
Afterward only one of The Experiments remained, and she was presented with the power to grant miracles as issued by God, an honor only He possessed in the past. The First Angel, fifty Guardian Angels, half of the rank angels, and The Keeper of the Souls remained as well.
In Hell the new Fallen Angels were given red wings to contrast with the black wings of the First Fallen Angels, thus giving the Firsts more power and rein over the Seconds. The last male of The Experiments was endowed with black wings as well, though bearing one white feather to signify that he had remained in Heaven much longer than the rest, and he was named The Keeper of the Damned Souls; storybooks would call him Death or The Grim Reaper. He preferred Fallen Angel #17.
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---Chapter 1! Hey all! That was the very first chapter of my newest fic, and I hope you're intrigued enough to continue reading as I continue posting. I've read other fics that deal with the angel/demons Heaven/Hell issues involving Bulma and Vegeta, and everyone else, but I decided to give it a shot myself and see where I can get with it. I love the idea and angels drive me nuts (in a good way). I love their wings. I want wings! *pouts* Anyway, please tell me if you think I should continue.
REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Reviews=More Chapters)
Next time: The actual beginning of the story…
Note: Obviously you only know for sure who one of the DBZ characters is, and that's 17, The Keeper of the Damned Souls. And if you haven't already figured it out, 18 is the last of The Experiments…The rest I'll give you as the story progresses.
