Moshi moshi minna-san! Thanks for your support. Ai anata! Sorry for the delay…
Important! Tatsuha's eyes, in this story, are also amber. Ok? Well, my story, my rule! Because this is AU, the characters will be a bit AU-ized as well (well, some of them anyway). Ok… proceed!
Summary: Shuichi accidentally sleeps with Tatsuha. But how? Isn't Shuichi really faithful to Yuki? How did Tatsuha do that and why?
Warnings: Some coarse language, sex scenes/references. I've warned you about the lemon, so don't flame if you don't like it. [Hot and steamy (though short), graphical scene… anyone okay with that?]
Keys (important):
1 Thoughts (Italics)
2 "speech" (Speech marks)
3 What is assumed (Underlined)
Special thanks: To the reviewers! Thanks so much, you make me feel much more at home! *Looks at reviews* Nan desu ka? Wow! *cries* I LOVE YOU ALL!!!
*Throws reviewers Shu-kun plushies as a gift of thanks*
~^^~ These are the reviewers that reviewed last time (before it was taken off)
alex
dragoneyes
Felera
TheSilentSenshi
KittyKitty
StarSweeper
HawkClowd
Tinanit Enozym
gokusgal
Ice Angel6
Rejiita
punky girl
Lexa1
Callisto
Bandana
Firedraygon97
Mirai aria
Fics_hunter
~^^~ These are the reviewers who reviewed after I reposted it.
Heartless Angel – Thanks for liking the story so much… And no, I am not talented. I have zero talent (XD hehehe)
AISH – You read my other fics? I've only written one Gravi fic… I think it was the same one but you haven't reviewed the other time… ^^
Rinuah – I'm so glad you liked it ^^ Thanksie!!! I'm curious of how the real Yuki reacts too (in other words, I haven't started on the Tatsuha-being-busted part yet ^^)
Bluesummers73 – I'm pleased you thought it was interesting ^^
Shuichi Shindo – Your Tatsuha? Hahaha, I thought you loved Yuki! ^___^ Thanks for tuning in.
StarryEyedChick – I haven't read the manga, actually… Just doing a bit of AU from the anime ^_^ And from what you have said (the Tatsuha-attaching-to-Shu thing), I think the manga would be sweet ^^
Kaleo – Uh ha, it is from the anime, though I was trying to experiment with a thing or two…
Mizuki97 – Thanks for liking the plot! ^^ And yes, such a shame ff.net took it off… I haven't read the feedbacks from chapter 3 yet! X'C And sorry, I wasn't thinking of redoing the second chapter… I know it's a bit graphic, but I couldn't resist doing on (No! I've only did a few lemons and quite terribly as well… but most of my fics are humor and I don't do lemons in humor… so I'm taking this chance to do one.)
Mirai aria - ^^ I'm delighted that this story is one of your favourites. I don't know about posting it on other websites… I'm trying to create a website of my own to put up some lemon bits… but my internet is too slow! XC
Elk – I'm so happy you loved it so far ^^ This chapter will have a graphic lemon (well, that's why it got removed off ff.net the first time)
Riversprite77 – A lot of people told me about posting it on other websites, but I don't really want to go to those websites because there are only a few readers there… Oh well…
HikariChang - ;_; They did deleted it… I was shocked when they did because I was up to the 3rd chapter and I haven't read the feedbacks yet. Worse, I was banned from using ff.net for a month or so and I really needed to update the other fics.
LilPurplFlwr – Thanks for your compliment ^^ Here's the next chapter… graphical lemon hot steamy sex scene -_-;;;;;
Hen-na-hazureta – Oh, it's okay that you haven't gotten on ff.net for a while, you reviewed anyway ^^ and I thank you!
Kuroi Kitty - ^_^ Is it that good?
Black dios – Thanks so much for supporting "Mistake"
Disclaimers: Gravitation and all the bishies aren't mine (and never will be). I own... the story ^___^
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Last time…
Tatsuha eyed the wide violet ones on Shuichi intently. He raised his hand and stroked Shuichi's face gently, half-wondering if Yuki ever did that to Shuichi. Shuichi's eyes widen, and then they went a little bit starry.
"Yuki..." Shuichi breathed.
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Track 2
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Tatsuha took the gasp Shuichi had as an opportunity and kissed Shuichi softly, demanding his tongue into the smaller boy's mouth.
'If this was what Shuichi felt like, then I guess my dear Ryuichi would be quite similar. Shuichi is so sweet.' Tatsuha thought, enjoying every bit of the kiss. He, subconsciously, had slowly fallen out of love with the brunette artist, and replacing his feelings for the singer of NG on Shuichi instead.
Tatsuha dragged Shuichi to Yuki's bedroom. He stopped and thought, 'I have to be real careful about this. Wait, my body's not exactly like Yuki's. Shuichi will realise!'
Tatsuha thought of a way that would make him safe and not let Shuichi realise. He knew Shuichi was meticulous about Yuki's features and will notice that Tatsuha's body is slightly fatter than Yuki's.
'First, I'll ask him if he had sex or not. Someone naive like him might even be a virgin.'
"Brat, have you ever slept with anyone else?"
"N-nani? Yuki, I didn't. You're the only one."
"Good." Tatsuha sighed. 'So he has had sex with my brother.'
"Why'd you ask?"
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Want lemon… see profile… (under "Mistake" chapter 2)
I'm sorry I had to do this… If you have any problems, drop me a line at dna_daa@yahoo.com.au
Originally posted on [25/11/2003]
2nd posting on [12/04/2004]
