Me again Minna! This is chapter 2 of my story! I hope you like it! I hope
you guys also liked chapter one! If you have any idea's, or any thing to
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My story, chapter 2
Keitaru, and Hiei
Normal P.O.V.
Yuhina fell from the sky crying. She was caught before she hit the ground though, she looked into the face of her savior, he looked like her! Well, all except for his hair. He had the same crimson eyes, the same color hair, and almost the same face.
"Where'd you come from?" His voice was high-pitched, he only looked about 8 or 9. Truth be known, he was 11. "My name is Hiei, were you abandoned to?" He asked and saw a string hanging out of the babies bondages, there were sutra bands surrounding her small fragile body.
He gave it a small tug and found that it was a Hiruiseki stone, just like his! He starred, then his ruby eyes locked with hers. No one else but himself and his sister Yukina had eyes like that. Could this girl, possibly be part of my family? He thought.
The baby smiled when she saw him she started giggling. Hiei smiled and hugged the baby close. He gave her back her Hiruiseki stone and sat on a rock with her in his arms.
"Did they abandon you to?" He asked the little girl who's face went from happy to a sad frown. "Oh! I didn't mean to upset you!" He said worriedly, he didn't want to make this little girl cry.
"You must be part of my family, you have the same eyes as me.... But what's your name?" He asked looking into her deep crimson eyes. Then a name came to him, Yuhina. "Is your name Yuhina?" he asked, the little baby grabbed his finger and giggled.
"It is, huh? Sounds like Yukina. You must be related to me...." The baby giggled once again when he said 'Yukina'. She grabbed the Pearl gem hanging from his neck and pulled on the string of hers.
"What are you doing?" He asked curiously as the baby looked like she was determined to do something with their Pearl gems. She put them together, they looked exactly the same! Identical, that proved they were born of the same mother. Hiei smiled warmly at the child and hugged her.
"I hate not being able to keep you, but I'll come back for you soon, Yuhina." He said as he carried her through the woods of Makai. He came upon a small house. He walked up to it and knocked lightly on the door, a young woman with rose red hair and crystal blue eyes answered, she looked human.
"Can I help you? Oh you poor things! What happened?" The woman asked curiously, half of shock, half of worry. "Please come inside." Hiei refused.
"I have a favor to ask of you miss...." He started.
"Keitaru, Keitaru Shizuka." She explained.
"Shizuka-san, will you take care of my little sister until I return? I would take her with me, but I-" He tried to explain.
"Of course! Say no more! I'll take care of her until you return." She said smiling.
"Promise you won't eat her?" Hiei asked holding Yuhina against his chest protectively. That was the last thing he wanted. He would only leave her here for a short while, and only to be safe.
"I don't eat meat, I'm a vegetarian...." She was so surprised at the children that she forgot to ask their names. She felt embarrassed. These poor helpless things must've been neglected by their family.
"My name is Hiei, and this is my little sister, Yuhina." Hiei told her.
"Alright, I'll take care of your little sister Hiei, don't worry. I promise she'll be safe." She said as he handed the bundle to her. She looked at the baby, she was sleeping.
"I'll be back as soon as I can, thanks again!" He disappeared off into the wilderness. Keitaru smiled and took the baby inside to her house. She took off the bondages and off and dressed her in a pink kimono that used to belong to her daughter.
"Its de ja vu all over again. Lucky for you I had a daughter, but she, was killed in a demon attack....." She started to explain her story to the infant. "Why am I telling you though? You can't understand me, can you?" she smiled warmly at the child.
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Two years later, Keitaru had grown quite attached to Yuhina. Hiei had not yet returned from where ever he was. She was starting to wonder if he would ever come back. Yuhina could now walk, not fully but almost. She could sort of talk, but not full words.
"Yuhina! Dinner time!" Keitaru shouted to Yuhina who was now in the other room playing. Then the door broke down, a man stood there, he had short dark hair, piercing black eyes, pale skin, an orange triangle on his forehead.
"Who are you?!" Keitaru gasped. Yuhina came in, the man looked at her, she had long black hair that was tied up in two buns, and big bright crimson eyes.
"Hmm.... What an interesting child.... I think I'll take her." The man said stepping toward Yuhina. Keitaru jumped in the way putting her hands up in defense to protect Yuhina. "Step aside wench." He said coldly.
"You will not so much lay one finger on this child! I swear I'll-" He sliced her throat with his claw. "Kill..... you...." she finished, but then fell to the floor dead.
"Keitawu!!!!" Yuhina cried then hugged the woman's dead body. She started to cry, Hiruiseki started falling everywhere.
"Your a Koorime! I think you'll be of some good use as a fighter. What is your name?" He asked peering down at the little girl in the pink kimono. She wiped her eyes and glared at him.
"My name is.... Yuhina...." She said sobbing.
"That's to soft for a fighter, Huyana, that will be your new name." He picked the child up and knocked her unconscious. Then he carried her out of the house wandering off into the distance.
Well Minna? Chapter 2! R&R!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please? PLEASE? PLEEEEEEEEEASE????? Review if you want to find out what happens next, I have many stories to tell!
My story, chapter 2
Keitaru, and Hiei
Normal P.O.V.
Yuhina fell from the sky crying. She was caught before she hit the ground though, she looked into the face of her savior, he looked like her! Well, all except for his hair. He had the same crimson eyes, the same color hair, and almost the same face.
"Where'd you come from?" His voice was high-pitched, he only looked about 8 or 9. Truth be known, he was 11. "My name is Hiei, were you abandoned to?" He asked and saw a string hanging out of the babies bondages, there were sutra bands surrounding her small fragile body.
He gave it a small tug and found that it was a Hiruiseki stone, just like his! He starred, then his ruby eyes locked with hers. No one else but himself and his sister Yukina had eyes like that. Could this girl, possibly be part of my family? He thought.
The baby smiled when she saw him she started giggling. Hiei smiled and hugged the baby close. He gave her back her Hiruiseki stone and sat on a rock with her in his arms.
"Did they abandon you to?" He asked the little girl who's face went from happy to a sad frown. "Oh! I didn't mean to upset you!" He said worriedly, he didn't want to make this little girl cry.
"You must be part of my family, you have the same eyes as me.... But what's your name?" He asked looking into her deep crimson eyes. Then a name came to him, Yuhina. "Is your name Yuhina?" he asked, the little baby grabbed his finger and giggled.
"It is, huh? Sounds like Yukina. You must be related to me...." The baby giggled once again when he said 'Yukina'. She grabbed the Pearl gem hanging from his neck and pulled on the string of hers.
"What are you doing?" He asked curiously as the baby looked like she was determined to do something with their Pearl gems. She put them together, they looked exactly the same! Identical, that proved they were born of the same mother. Hiei smiled warmly at the child and hugged her.
"I hate not being able to keep you, but I'll come back for you soon, Yuhina." He said as he carried her through the woods of Makai. He came upon a small house. He walked up to it and knocked lightly on the door, a young woman with rose red hair and crystal blue eyes answered, she looked human.
"Can I help you? Oh you poor things! What happened?" The woman asked curiously, half of shock, half of worry. "Please come inside." Hiei refused.
"I have a favor to ask of you miss...." He started.
"Keitaru, Keitaru Shizuka." She explained.
"Shizuka-san, will you take care of my little sister until I return? I would take her with me, but I-" He tried to explain.
"Of course! Say no more! I'll take care of her until you return." She said smiling.
"Promise you won't eat her?" Hiei asked holding Yuhina against his chest protectively. That was the last thing he wanted. He would only leave her here for a short while, and only to be safe.
"I don't eat meat, I'm a vegetarian...." She was so surprised at the children that she forgot to ask their names. She felt embarrassed. These poor helpless things must've been neglected by their family.
"My name is Hiei, and this is my little sister, Yuhina." Hiei told her.
"Alright, I'll take care of your little sister Hiei, don't worry. I promise she'll be safe." She said as he handed the bundle to her. She looked at the baby, she was sleeping.
"I'll be back as soon as I can, thanks again!" He disappeared off into the wilderness. Keitaru smiled and took the baby inside to her house. She took off the bondages and off and dressed her in a pink kimono that used to belong to her daughter.
"Its de ja vu all over again. Lucky for you I had a daughter, but she, was killed in a demon attack....." She started to explain her story to the infant. "Why am I telling you though? You can't understand me, can you?" she smiled warmly at the child.
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Two years later, Keitaru had grown quite attached to Yuhina. Hiei had not yet returned from where ever he was. She was starting to wonder if he would ever come back. Yuhina could now walk, not fully but almost. She could sort of talk, but not full words.
"Yuhina! Dinner time!" Keitaru shouted to Yuhina who was now in the other room playing. Then the door broke down, a man stood there, he had short dark hair, piercing black eyes, pale skin, an orange triangle on his forehead.
"Who are you?!" Keitaru gasped. Yuhina came in, the man looked at her, she had long black hair that was tied up in two buns, and big bright crimson eyes.
"Hmm.... What an interesting child.... I think I'll take her." The man said stepping toward Yuhina. Keitaru jumped in the way putting her hands up in defense to protect Yuhina. "Step aside wench." He said coldly.
"You will not so much lay one finger on this child! I swear I'll-" He sliced her throat with his claw. "Kill..... you...." she finished, but then fell to the floor dead.
"Keitawu!!!!" Yuhina cried then hugged the woman's dead body. She started to cry, Hiruiseki started falling everywhere.
"Your a Koorime! I think you'll be of some good use as a fighter. What is your name?" He asked peering down at the little girl in the pink kimono. She wiped her eyes and glared at him.
"My name is.... Yuhina...." She said sobbing.
"That's to soft for a fighter, Huyana, that will be your new name." He picked the child up and knocked her unconscious. Then he carried her out of the house wandering off into the distance.
Well Minna? Chapter 2! R&R!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please? PLEASE? PLEEEEEEEEEASE????? Review if you want to find out what happens next, I have many stories to tell!
